To be honest I never really cared much for Audrey, she was amusing yes but that's about it. No I haven't watched the episode recently, what season was it? I remember her being mugged and then the guy who robbed her being hit and dying of his injuries. Joey told his daughter her father died saving her and that he was a hero instead of the truth. Thank God, if you killed off Joey I would have been furious...I would have still read the story but I would have done so angrily. Your spelling and grammar doesn't bother me, it's mostly minor things Yana. I'm more interested in how you weave each of your stories together chapter by chapter which you seem to do effortlessly and beautifully. No body is perfect, I have spoken, read and written with English as my native language my entire life and I make errors and mistakes everyday still...I blame my keyboard and cell phone though technology ruins everything! My boyfriend is actually applying for a teaching position in South Korea, we'll be apart an entire year which I'm not looking forward to one bit but he promises we'll see one another during our vacation breaks. I'm going to try reading the update you sent me tonight, if I don't finish it all in one sitting please bear with me, I'm getting sleepy and updating a story of mine currently which no one is even reading. I gave up writing for others, I love writing too much to stop over lack of reviews. Forget that lol