Hey guys! Another chapter of Bleach in my world! Thanks for all of the support I've been getting on this fan fiction. It's truly amazing. I'm gonna put all the reviews on this fan fiction here and say my personal opinion on them.
Guest
Please keep writing. I absolutely love this story. Renji really needs to get the stones to confess to Naomi and to finally end that cutting she does, her personal demons might be her downfall. I want Renji and Naomi together./
Thanks random person! I agree with all my heart that Naomi and Renji should be together but it may be a while till they do. Hehehe I'm mean.
RedSnow4
I really love this story! I would more than likely freak out if i was in naomi's position. XD
Im excited to see Renjis and Naomi's relationship progress, I feel like if renji gets interrupted any more hes just gonna grab her and kiss her face off. :3 please update soon! /
Thanks Redsnow! It's pretty sad that Renji keeps on getting interrupted but that's just how it is. And I would love to see renji just kiss her face off XD
We have 5 reviews here from sanaa11
Poor Naomi :( i wish she wouldn't cut so much, it's hurting her
Aww you both just confess already! XD Naomi and Renji are so cute..
Awwww cuddling Renji!
Cool! They all could see Naomi! :D continue soon
Continue pls! I really like this
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Thanks sanaa! Your constant reviews are wonderful! I agree with you that Naomi shouldn't cut but don't worry, everything will get better. Also, Renji cuddles are the best aren't they XD
And finally we have 2 reviews from ScarlettBanshee!
I love this fanfic!
It's just sucked me into this little world. I hope you post more chapters soon.
-Scarlet
This fanfic makes me laugh soo hard lol
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Thanks Scarlett! Same here this fan fiction sucks me into a little world. Its basically just the things I think of in my long day dreaming sessions in the middle of my maths class XD Also I'm glad this fan fiction makes you laugh!
Thanks for all of your reviews guys! It's nice to no that people actually enjoy reading something that most people in my school think is stupid and dumb. I hope you enjoy today's chapter!
Byakuya pov
I led Naomi to the training area of squad 6. The things she said yesterday about me and my zanpakuto surprised me. No one apart from Rukia and my late wife hisana have ever said something like that to me.
Sometimes I think people are afraid to approach me.
Once we arrive at the training area I turn to her and say. "Lets start by having a sparring session, i will refrain from releasing my senbonzakura" She nods and get in position.
She makes the first move, running forward and clashing our swords together. I go in for an attack but she flashsteps to my side, cutting my Shihakusho just a bit.
I flashstep back and get ready for another attack. She suddenly disappeared from my site. My eyes widened.
Where did she go?
"What's wrong captain Kuchiki?" I hear a whisper behind me.
I jump back and see Naomi smirking behind me. She giggles "Was I to fast for you byakuya?" She smirks at my shocked expression.
She used my first name! I thought
She is really fast!
No one's pov
Byakuya and Naomi kept on clashing there swords until Naomi said
"This is boring, can you be nice and release senbonzakura so the fun can start?"
Byakuya looked at her as if she was insane. Why would she want me to realise my senbonzakura? Is she crazy!
"Are you trying to kill yourself!" A voice says from the entrance. It was Renji! "Byakuya go a bit easy on me when you release it though." Naomi smiles ignoring renjis words. Byakuya nods and holds his sword in front of him.
"Scatter Senbonzakura"
The petals scattered around the place and quickly started heading towards Naomi. She quickly flash stepped away from them before they could hit her and went towards byakuya for an attack. She got his arm I little, just enough to draw blood, before the petals came, sending her back a bit.
Then she ran in for a second attack.
{Timeskip}
Still no one pov
Naomi had lasted for about 10 minutes against byakuyas senbonzakura, only getting small cuts. But sadly one of the blades accidentally slashed Naomi's chest pretty badly and she was now bleeding a face was facing the floor. Just before byakuya and renji could go and help her she spoke. "You let your guard down queen." The voice was dark and sinister.
"Naomi are you ok?" Renji asks, slowing walking towards her.
Suddenly a burst if reiatsu came from Naomi, but this reiatsu was twisted. Both males eyes widened as she raised her head to face them. A hollow mask was slowly starting to form on her face. It had cat ears and red markings. There was purple markings coming from under the eyes, like it was crying.
Isn't this what happened with ichigo in our battle? Byakuya thought to himself.
"ALL OF THE YEARS, ALL THE PEOPLE WHO HURT US! THE DAMN BLOOD RAIN FLOWING DOWN FOR YEARS ON END! ALL THE ABUSE! WELL THAT ALL ABOUT TO END BECAUSE WHEN IM DONE WITH YOU YOUR GONNA BE 'finished' " Naomi started fighting back before it could hurt anyone. She grabbed the mask and pulled.
"STOP! DONT YOU GET IT? IF WE KILL THEM WE DONT GET HURT!"
'I don't want them hurt! Now LEAVE!'
An agonizing scream was heard and the mask broke off into tiny pieces.
Then Naomi fell to the floor. The last thing she heard was renji's worried voice screaming her name.
Hope you enjoyed this chapter. Thanks again for all your lovely reviews! I'm going Alton towers tomorrow with school... if you haven't heard most of the rides are closed due to crashes so if I die I'm sorry :(
But anyway I know byakuya was a bit OCC in this so sorry -_-
I love you all.
Until next time Bye - Jude xoxox
