AN: Hey guys, thank you for all your lovely reviews! A lot of you wanted them to have sex on the boat and quite a few wanted to develop their relationship, well...

APOV

My back slammed against the wall, as Christian pushed me up against it and kissed me fervently. Our lips pressed against each other. One of his hand was on my hip, and the other was tracing the curve of my breast. Our tongues mended together. His erection was against my abdomen.

"Ana..." he whispered as he breathed heavily. "Ana Please..."

I couldn't find the words in me to respond. I gave him a slight nod, before returning to kiss him like I was dying. I pushed against him, pushing towards the giant king sized bed. Pushing him down on the bed, I practically launched myself at him, straddling him, kissing him so hard.

He wrapped an arm around my waist and flipped us over, so I was on my back now. He pulled back. 'What was he doing? I needed those lips back now!'

He gazed into my eyes, while I search his stormy grey ones. They were so beautiful, so full of life. He leaned down and captured my lips once again, but unlike a few moments ago, this kiss was slow, passionate and everlasting. I never wanted to leave this moment. My hands grazed his bare abdomen underneath his white shirt. I grasped the hem and pulled it over his head, briefly breaking the kiss, with a desperate need to feel his skin against mine.

Soon after, my own tank top comes off leaving me in a white lace bra. Christian traces up my back and stops at my clasp. Pulling back from the kiss, he looks into my eyes, asking if I was ready. I give him a nod. It feels right. This feels right, but I can't help being scared because this is the second time I am going to do it and the first time I am going to be conscious in doing so. He unclasps my bra with expertise.

I have the sudden urge to cover myself. I try to bring my hands to my chest, but Christian stops them with his own.

"You are beautiful Ana. Please don't hide yourself from me." He whispers. I can't help the blush that trails up to my face. He leans down to give me another kiss, before he kisses down my jaw, nipping near my chin. He trails his kisses down my throat, sucking near the side hard enough for me to moan out, but not hard enough to bruise. I can't help but writhe on the bed when he leaves open mouthed kisses down my sternum. Finally, I gasp when his mouth captures my right nipple. He sucks and kisses the tender flesh, giving it a small bite before moving to my left to repeat the same motions. I could feel heat pooling between my legs, and I can't help the moans that escapes my mouth.

"Christian..."

Pulling away from my nipple, he started to make a trail of kissed down my torso and my abdomen, while his index finger lightly traced around my nipple. Reaching the button on my shorts, he undoes the button and pulls down the zipper with his mouth. He pulls down my shorts, throwing them somewhere in the room, leaving me in my white lace panties.

I could hear him breathing faster, and his eyes are dilated to the point you can even see the grey iris anymore.

"So beautiful" he murmurs. He trails kisses up from my ankle to my inner thigh. The pleasure is intense, bone crushingly intense. I need him to touch me there.

His fingers are about to reach the hem of my panties when there is a knock on the door.

"Mr. Grey, may I talk to you for a minute, it is urgent" Mac's voice sounds through the door. Christian groans. He gets up, smiles at me, and leaves me a lingering kiss.

"I'll be right back" With that he is gone.

I wait for him to come back, but when he doesn't come back after 5 minutes, I start to get worried. I quickly pull on my clothes. I look for Christian throughout the interior , but I am met with nothing. I finally see him when I go up the deck, where he is having from what is seems like an intense conversation with Mac.

"Is everything alright?" Christian turns around surprised to see me there.

"Yeah baby everything is fine" Did he just call me baby? Woah. For some reason I liked that term of endearment. It feels...nice. I give him a small smile, then go to the edge to look out over the water. I rest my hands on the railing and lean to look at the water. The view is stunning. The water rushing past the boat and the clear skies.

Suddenly, I feel string arms wrap around my waist and a kiss being placed on the back of my neck. An involuntary smile comes onto my face knowing that it is Christian. This Christian is so different from the one that I met on that dreadful morning. Whereas he was an arrogant asshole, this Christian that is with me right know is the sweetest and most thoughtful person I've met in my entire life. Of course Kate is my best friend, but there are times when she is a bit overbearing. I don't know what our relationship is, but in these three days, I've decided that he forever be with be in form or another.

I could feel the attraction still there. But, it is no where near as intense as couple minutes ago. I flush at how undressed I was before his eyes. I remind myself that I hadn't exactly had proper sex before, sex I could remember.

"You okay baby?" Christian whispers.

I turn around in his arms. Feeling bold, I press a small kiss to his lips before whispering a "Perfect"


We spend basically the entire day on The Grace, talking, laughing. We never stopped talking because any topic I brought up, he could talk about and vice versa. We could match each other in a conversation, and that was truly amazing because there was never an awkward moment the entire time. It was really sad when we had to leave. I couldn't help asking Christian if we can come back soon, which he replied with a smile and a yes.


This is a preview of a chapter that is going to come later in the story. I couldn't get this scene off my head, so here it is...a small piece of it

I flinch slightly when I think she is going to slap me across the face, but instead her hand caresses my cheek gently. A lone tear slips from her eyes and slides down her cheek. I have a desperate urge to wipe away her tear and hug her to myself, but I am frozen. Her hand moves up to my hair and then back down, softly grazing my cheek until it rests against my heart.

"I am sorry" she whispers. "I am sorry for all the pain I've caused you. I am sorry for all the grief I've given you. I am sorry." I don't know what to say. I want to shout out, apologize for what I had just done, that I didn't mean it, that I was wrong. But, I can't. For some reason at this moment I can't

"Ana-"

"It's ok Christian. I'll go. You don't have to see me again. But, please, know this, I am not sorry I fell in love with you. And know that I will always love you. You've been so kind, so thoughtful. You showed me that there is someone out there for everyone. You have given me a forever within these numbered days and I will forever be grateful." How can she say that after what I just did. After the words that had just left my mouth. How can she? I feel my heart crumble even more. The pain in my chest grows stronger to the point that it makes me gasp. I can feel my throat closing. She gazes into my eyes so deeply I feel like she is penetrating my soul. No! No! Don't GO! She leans up to kiss me, but stops and leaves a gentle kiss to my cheek.

"Ana please...Ana..No, I am sorr-"

"Goodbye Christian"

I PROMISE this is not how it ends. There is more to it. It will be a happily ever after! Sorry this is such a short chapter. What do you guys think about the moment that they had? Did you like it? This is the first term I am writing something like this so...And what do you guys think of Jamie Dornan ad Christian Grey...I've been kind of curious about what people think. Review please!