Chapa 4 (Now we can't even spell "chapter")
STOPE FLMAING KMY STORY! I KNOW ABOT THE SPELLING MISTKAE S K IM USING WORDPAD IT HAS NOT SPELL CHECK K! (That's no excuse, download one.) ANYWAY I HAD TO WRITE THEM REALLY FAST K SO THERE ARE BOND TO B SUM MISTAKES (Why are you writing really fast?) IM NOT ALWAYS PERFECT K! (*Gasp* but if you're not perfect then what hope is there for the rest of us?)
thankx to ma fans (?) for da gud rewiews (?) ill kep em cuming!
"FUCK OFF YOU PERV!" i screamed. (Whoa that was a sudden mood swing.)
"B but but" He stummerd. (Invented word alert: Stummered, dumbly stammering.)
But i had herd enuff. "You used to be men(well he is male) to me when bakc in plate town." I ran away cryin. I was so fuking depressed. ( Another mood swing. Are you PMSing?)But then I thought of Gary's sexah eyes and suddenly i wasnt mad anymore. "maybe he has changed sence trhen" i thought to myself. (While saying her thoughts aloud.)
Suddenly i herd a voice. "Hey Ruby whatsup gurl?" It was sAFFIRE (An: hey katie this is you!) (Ah the sweet bonds of friendship. Let us see if Saffire is ever emntioned again.) she was wearing a red trenchcoat with black jeans all ripped up the sides and blue eyeliner and a tight fitting boob tube that was blue and red and black. She had a blond hair with red steeks in it and clipped up in a kind of messy bun. She belted her jeans with a sparkled diamond belt like the on i had that i kept my pballs on. (NO ONE CARES WHAT SAFFIRE IS WEARING!)
"Oh nothing I said." sadly. (BEAWARE! ATTACK OF THE RANDOM QUOTATION MARKS!)
"is it Gary?" Saffire inquired. (Yay we used inquired correctly!)
"no... maybe..." i said all mysterious. (Dun dun dun!)
"OFFMG You should so go out with im!"
Suddenly a amazing dragonight appeARED wearing a red sadlle that fastened under the belly thagt was painted with a stuff like nail poilis execept it was for scales with a silvefr strap.(All I got was a Dragonite appeared and wearing a bunch of red crap…) Normally dragonnite is organe but this one was red with gold winges. (…) Then i heard a beautiful voice drift from behind draongite singing if i was your boyfriend by justin beeper. (Move aside Bieber, make way for BEEPER!) I was so shockde! it was Gray! (Who is Gray?) He got down one his knees and begged me to bew hos girlfried. (STOP FRYING GIRLS!) "Ruby I love you thats why i used to be mean to you back in plallet town. please be my girlfried ill die without you!?" he said hotly. (Hotly = Angry/defensive, not "sexily")
I was so flattered i said yes. I hopped behind him oon the dragonight and we flew somewhere over loooking (oooooooooo) the world bellow. (SHOUT!) We flew around then stopped. I got off. Gary aswell. We looke d deep into each odders eyes. (The suspense is killing me…) Then... we started to make out hot and heavy! (Oh my God! What a twist!) we took of each odderes clothes and did it FOR THE FIRST TIME (USE CAPS TO MAKE A POINT!) on the ground sexily. (*snigger* I'm thinking… VIRGIN WRITER…) Then... we fell aslep together. (… I'm waiting, oh they're asleep…)
An: c wos that stupid?(Yes.) an; isnt gary so sexy? (No, your version is gay.) anywaqy my fans till next time i chapa. cant wait!11 (If you are waiting for fans it might be a while.)
Gotta love a sex scene written by a 12yo. Believe it or not she writes a worse one later on. BUT that is why it is M-rated (said Ruby)
Thanks for the reviews guys
Lord Seavar out.