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sorry I haven't update but I fell asleep yesterday and I got lazy! And yes this happen often...
Anyways lets' all be Abnegation for a sec and forgive me! Okay now to the story!
When we hear the door open I see a man wearing a black suit with a red stripe tie. He wears a Rolex (It's a fancy type of watch people) all gold on his wrist. Before I can stop myself or even think about what I'm doing I get up from my spot in the circle and run to the man I thought I wouldn't see in a while.
"Dad!" I yell while basically tackling him with a tight hug.
"Bea-Tris, How I missed you soo much!" He says and hugs me back as tightly as I hug him. We stand their in comfortable silence and I feel a tear run down my face but there isn't much more after that one.
"Tris." He whispers into my ear.
"Hmmm?"
"Who are these people in our living room?" I pull away to see everybody with a small smile on their faces.
"Umm, dad these are my friends," I walk over by Christina.
"This is Christina,Will, Marlene, Uriah, Shauna, Zeke, Lynn, Lauren, and Four. Guys this is my dad Andrew, he works for the government." I say and they all wave and say hey.
"Well, quite the interesting group you have here... But enough about that, Tris me and you mother, brother Caleb, and you and your friends if they want too are going to Canada for two weeks for something about Caleb about being on a brainiac team and It so happens that I have business there and your mother is working with somebody in Canada about morning TV or something I don't know."
"Umm, I think me and my friends would like to stay here, can they stay over? You know since I'll be staying here by myself?" I say biting my lip and he puts a finger to his chin.
"Hmm, I suppose it will be okay, Just try not to burn the house down and stay out of my and your mother's room. I call your mother and let her know that we will be leaving tonight. Your friends can stay and keep you company. Love you Beatrice." He says and kisses my forehead and head up stairs and I hear his door close.
"Yay! Extended sleep over at Tris amazing house!" Uriah says and everybody including me cheers. I said goodbye to everybody as they leave to go pack two weeks worth of cloths, I run up stairs to change into sweat pants and a light white t-shirt. About an hour or so later my mom and Caleb came, pack, and left heading to the Airport. I go to sit on the couch and turn on the TV waiting for everybody to start showing up.
Four POV (After everybody left to go home and pack)
This is great! I get to spend two whole weeks with Tris and the gang! This week might not turn out so horrible. I know it's only been a day but I think I might be in love with Tris, She so beautiful and smart and fun! She is amazing and no girl ever made me feel this way before. She makes me feel like... Tobias sweet and caring who will do anything for that one person and not Four, the Dauntless prodigy who scares the living shit out of people with one glare. When we kissed today, ugh it made me feel like I was on cloud 9 and wanted to stay there with her in my arms forever.
I pull up into my driveway to see lights on and Lexus 2012 in the driveway... Marcus is home. I swallow spit as I turn off my truck and step out of the car.
Marcus is my father, Me and him use to be close like any proud father of his athletic son, but when my mother died something in him snap and he wasn't the same. One night he came home drunk and yelled at me saying it was my fault my that my mother died when really she died giving birth to my little sister, she didn't survive ether. It started off with a simple slap then turn into a leather belt and punches. He would do everything and anything to put me in pain. I hate my sorry excuse of a father.
I unlock the door and when I open the door, the smell of beer and vodka sucker punches me in the nose and makes me tear up a little.
"TOBIAS! Your late!" I hear Marcus scream and before I can answer I'm hit with a beer bottle in the head that makes me stumble back and hold a palm to my head. I look at my palm and see slight blood on it.
"Tobias, you didn't come home and make me dinner... you know what this mean." He says as he starts to unhook his belt.
"This is for your own good." He says and before I know whats happening he uses the metal part of the belt and smacks me across the face which makes me fall to my knees. He stands over me and starts to whip me.
I scream out in pain as he whips me harder and faster than the last. I scream more and more as he makes new scars and re-opens some. He starts to yell at me like he always do,
"THIS IS FOR YOUR OWN GOOD! YOU ARE A WEAKLING TOBIAS! YOU WILL NEVER BE GOOD OR A WORTHY SON! YOUR MOTHER WOULD BE ASHAMED OF YOU!"
He says and the beatings stop and I'm about to fall to my side until he wraps the belt around his knuckles and punches me in the back with all his might. I scream more and fall to my side, he starts to kick me in my stomach and punches me in the face. After another ten minutes of this he picks me up and throws me into the small storage closet. He locked me in here before because of all the blood and scratch marks on the wall and the floor. He is the reason I also have a claustrophobic fear.
He slams the door and locks it, I try to make an effort to stand but the pain too much before I fall back to down. I'm sorry Tris but I'll have to stay tomorrow night and hopefully for the rest of my life away from that monster. These are the only things I could think about, I scoot into a corner and black out because of the amount of pain.
Tris POV
I hear a knocks at the door and run to go get it. I see Marlene, Christina, Lauren, Will, Zeke, Shauna, and Uriah. Lynn and Four aren't here and I fill sad when Four isn't here.
I debated about it while I was alone and it's clear that I actually like Four, even though he can be quite scary and mysterious he's seems nice and he is absolute gorgeous, but he wouldn't go for somebody like me when he can have any girl in the school, they throw themselves at him.
"Hey guys!" I say nonchalantly "hey, where's Lynn and Four?" I say sounding like I don't really care.
"I don't know I called his phone be he didn't answer, I snapchatted, Kik, Facetime, all of that and he didn't reply." Zeke says
"And Lynn said and I quote 'I don't want to stay here with a bunch of pansycakes who are probably going to be painting their nails and telling each other scary stories' and with that she drove off." (A/N That is my way of saying we will not be seeing much of Lynn in this story for a while) Marlene says and I smile to myself knowing that she won't be here because to be honest she creeps me out on how tough she acts for a girl.
"Oh, well come on in guys, there is pizza and , , Sprite, and Pepsi in the kitchen." I say and all the guys charge in and drop their stuff by the door and race their way towards the kitchen.
We all laugh and follow behind, When we get there I see the guys already digging into the pizza having about four or five slices on their plates, good thing I bought like six boxes.
We grab our food and head into the living room to watch a movie called I Am Legend starring Will Smith. When the movie was over it was 11:30 at night. I showed them the rooms they would be sleeping in and thankfully that this house is a three-story there are plenty of guest rooms on the third floor.
When I go into my room I crash on the bed and start thinking about Four and how he didn't come today. He seemed excited when my dad said we could all stay but why didn't he show up? I think about this till I fall asleep, I'll just ask him tomorrow when we are at school.
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