Hey guys, I got really bored so I decided to do an update!
YAY! THREE UPDATES IN ONE DAY!
Anyways Shout out to Rayray1368 for the great idea! I used part of your idea and shout out to Fremionelife99 I'll be sure to use your idea sometime in the future.
To respond to DivergentObsessor, Yes somebody has mention it before and oh well, I go back and fix it thanks for letting me know.
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Ugh, I'm rambling
Sorry, enjoy the chapter
Tris POV
We rode in silence but not an awkward silence just a nice comfortable silence. I stole glances at him here and there and he is just so gorgeous! Ugh, I miss the warmth of his lips on mine.
We pull up into the school and he parks in his usually spot. He gets out and before I could even reach for the door handle the door fly's open and he is on the other side.
"You know you didn't have to do that." I say while stepping out with our stuff, he shrugs his shoulders. I laugh a little and we walk into the school hand in hand.
"Besides once we step through those double doors of the training room, your dealing with Four: The Dauntless prodigy, the instructor, no going easy on you Tris." He whisper into my ear while he hugs me from behind in what I presume is his instructor voice. It's really a turn on, so far whatever he does is a turn on. God Tris get a grip! If he becomes Four become the Dauntless prodigy you became.
I see the training room in sight, before we got any closer I turn on my heels and crash my lips with his. His grip around my waist get's tighter and I snake my arms around his neck. I deepen the kiss with or without his permission but he doesn't seem mind it too much, he picks me up and presses me against the wall. A moan escapes my mouth and he smirks. We kiss till we break for air and he makes his way towards my neck and nibbles at it. Another moan comes, ugh this boy really knows what he's doing. I move my neck to the side so he can do it easier and I know soon enough that there will be a lot of hickeys there.
When he's done playing with my neck I kiss him again but this one a slow and passionate kiss that calms us both down and he gently lets' me down.
"What was that for?" He says trying to catch his breath and I get a smirk on my face.
"Well, you're becoming Four as soon as we step through those doors so I thought this will be a perfect time to be Tris and Tobias. Besides I'm becoming... Six once we step through those doors." He raises an eyebrow when I call myself Six and I shrug my shoulders. He gives me a peck on the lips before we walk through the doors.
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Wow what in intense work out. Fucking Four made me run twenty laps forward and backwards a hundred push ups and sit up, work on the punching bag, lift weights, I had to freaking wrestle him and win, then run more laps luckily only forward, and finally pull ups. Ugh Four is really did mean not going easy on me.
I'm now in the girls locker room taking a nice hot shower to relax my tense and worn out muscle. I stand there enjoying the nice feeling of the hot water rushing down my back. I turn off the water and start to dry off. I decided to wear a black t-shirt with dark jeans and my combat boots. Once I get dress I head outside to see Tobias leaning against the wall waiting for me.
"Hey, you finally came out." He says and I roll my eyes
"What's up with you?"
"Oh you know, my instructor gave me a hard time in training so I'm basically tired and want this day to be over already." I say and give him a death glare.
"You look cute when your angry." He says and I roll my eyes and walk towards the library with him on my heels.
"Tris, come on your not going to talk to me, at least talk to Tobias." He says and I turn on my heels.
"Tobias, just give me a sec okay I kinda got a headache, I just need some peace and quiet." I say and he nods. I give him a kiss on the lips and we go our separate ways. I go to my locker and put my clothes in there and grab my books I need for morning class.
"Hey cutie, can you help me with finding my classes?" A voice says and it sounds really annoying I close my locker to come face to face with a kid who has pricing on his lip and his eyebrow. He has blonde hair and has a slick back Mohawk with buzz cut sides. The definition of Fugly.
"I'm pretty sure you can find your way around." I say in a not so nice tone and try to walk past him but he blocks my way with both his arms.
"Now that wasn't nice, how about I try a different approach, I'm Eric the Dauntless leader and you must be Tris I've heard about." His breath reeks of alcohol and makes me want to tear up.
"Then if you heard of me then you must know what I'm capable of then." I say he gets a smug smile on his face. Ew,
"Don't be like that Trissy, me and you can get along quite well, how about me and you ditch this place and we head back to my place and I show you some manners." He says getting way to close for comfort.
"I would but I have a boyfriend and I don't do freaks." I say pushing him out my way, I try to walk away but he grabs my arm and slams me into the locker. A pain way to familiar, fear comes over me and I shut down it's like all the training of MMA has washed away and I forget everything but what happened with Peter.
"I try to do it Amity way, but now it's time for Eric's way." He says and forcefully kisses me, I squirm trying to get free but he has both my arms pinned against the locker, he makes his way down to my neck and I take the opportunity
"HELP SOMEBODY HELP-" Eric slaps me, Hard.
"Shut up bitch! It just me and you nobody can hear you... now shut the fuck up or I will cut your vocal cords out." He pulls out a pocket knife and places it to my neck. Hot tears come rushing down my face. No, No, Not again please not again I kept repeating this in my head Eric was about to grab my boob until I see nothing but black tackle the shit out of him. I slowly back up and saw it was Tobias. They both got up and Tobias took his fighting stance.
"Not being a good leader are you Eric." Tobias spat out and Eric glares at him
"Get lost Four, this has nothing to do with you."
"Oh, but it does because you are trying to rape my girlfriend." Eric looks stunned and Tobias take the advantage and punches him hard in the face, Eric stumbles back and before he could recover Tobias kicks him in the stomach which makes him double over in pain and Tobias slams his head right into the locker knocking him out cold. Tobias gives him a good kick in the ribs before turning to face me. He hugs me tightly and I hug him back and more tears come down my face, I cry into his shirt and that makes him only hold me tighter. I feel him pick me up and start to walk. I never looked up to see where we going but I know I can trust him to take me some where were it will just be us and nobody else.
I hear a door close he gently puts me down. I look around and notices we're in the janitor's closet but it's big and roomy.
"You alright? He didn't cut you or anything?" Tobias says with worried in his eyes I shake my head not trusting my voice not to squeak and make me break down and cry. He hugs me again and I hug him back, we stand there, in comfortable silence just us two enjoying our presence.
I let out a sigh before I pull back and wipe the tears away. I give him a smile and he returns it.
"Thank you for doing that back there Tobias." He leans in close by my ear
"Don't thank me for something I would do in a heartbeat."
Awww that's sweet will guys I think I'll stop here for tonight my arm hurts (don't know why) and It's pretty late where I am and I have school tomorrow so...
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