I decided to be nice and write another chapter today, and i wanted to tell everyone.

I know that my grammar's not great, i misspell things, and my writing can be confusing at times, but. I'M A SENSITIVE PERSON AND PEOPLE SEEM TO ENJOY MAKING ME CRY. so I'm warning everyone, if the reviews aren't nice, DON'T SEND THEM. last night I spent an hour crying because a guy on another fan-fiction-site, sent me a message as long as most of my chapters, telling me every little thing he thought I did wrong or what I should change because 'it would be so much better'. so I'll ask you all a question, SHOULD I CONTINUE WRITING?

Dick's P_O_V

three days ago I got a letter from Mrs. Alyss, telling me.

Dear NightWing:

I know you wish to see me, so meet me at the old fair grounds, and come alone.

if I see anyone with you I will leave, and you will never get your brother back from the inserausteil (in-ser-aus-teil), and your father will never wake up from his coma.

Shadow.

I had been worried about my father since he slipped into the coma, and knowing it would only keeps part of my mind off of my current activity, Conner had pulled me aside, and promised that no further harm would come to my father. and that I should just focus on bringing Will home.I had agreed and with out having to worry about my father, I had relaxed and was now on my way to the old fair grounds to meet with this 'Shadow'.

when I did meet her, she wasn't what I was expecting.

she had long black hair that went to her waist. long eyelashes framed her piercing grey eyes, that I instantly knew would freeze any man to the spot. she had perfectly tanned skin and I knew without having to look that her teeth were perfectly white. she didn't have any earrings on, but I could see that she had the holes for them. in all, this girl was beautiful, and I knew that if it wasn't for Jay, I probably would have been attracted to her.

"you Alyss?" I demanded, I wasn't really in the mood to play anygames with anyone, and I'm sure my voice told her that. but she just smiled at me.

"that is my name, but you call me Shadow." she said, and there was something in her voice that I couldn't place, an emotion that I wasn't familiar with. but I could tell that it wasn't directed at me, it was directed at herself. something I didn't quit understand.

"Shadow than, can you help me?" I asked her, and she smiled, a smiled that chilled me more than Batman's glare ever had.

"I'm not here to help you NightWing, I'm here to capture you." and as she finished speaking, I felt a Sharp pain in my stomach, and the next thing I knew. everything went black.

ALYSS'S POV:

(A/N I just went back and realised that I haven't told you what most of the characters look like, I can't believe I was so clumsy, I've told you how everyone looks but Will, and if I have and I just missed it, than I'm sorry.)

I couldn't help but feel sad as I picked up - the now unconscious - NightWing. but I had no chose but to betray him.

my name is Alyss Emaria Saimera, when I was only a couple of days old, I was kidnapped from my home by the inserausteil. I was allowed to call him nothing, but Father. but I was more like a slave than a daughter. he punished me if I misbehaved, rewarded me if I did as he instructed. but I wasn't his daughter, I was his slave and no matter how hard he tried making me believe that I wasn't, I would always know that I was nothing more than a slave.

I had a gift, I could transport anyone or anything to anywhere. that is why 'Father' took me in the first place. he had made me use my gift many times. he made me use it on Nigthwings little brother. 'father' hadn't let me see who I transported, he just had me transport him to his prison cells. which is where I now carried NightWing. the boy hadn't woken up, and neither him, nor NightWing would wake up until I told them two, neither would Batman, thanks to another of my gifts.

when I walked into the prison cell, I stopted short, the boy was laying on one of the beds. it was the first time I had ever seen him, and I couldn't help but notice just how beautiful he was. his black hair was a little too long, and fell into his eyes, which were closed. and I suddenly found myself with an undying thirst to see his eyes. his lips were full and perfectly shaped. his body was well shaped and looked like it should belong to a god. and looking at him now, I could only think that he was a god, he was perfect.

"something wrong daughter?" I jumped, I hadn't heard him come up behind me. but I put a smile on my face and turned to look at him.

"nothing is wrong father, I was just thinking." I told him, and placing a hand behind my back, I slipped the knife I had hidden in my pants free, and continued to smile at him.

"what were you thinking bout, child?" he asked, and I smiled at him and moved closer to him, like I was going to hug him. which he made me do every time he called me child.

"about what my life was going to be once I killed you." I said sweatly, and as I said it I took the knife from behind my back and sliced 'father's' head off.

turning back to NightWing and his little brother, I let out a sad sigh, then channeled my gifts and transported the three of us to the hospital wing at the Justice Leagues Watchtower, right into the room with Batman. Batman was lying on the bed and I made sure to make NightWing and the boy on the bed on either side of him. and then I turned to the League members that were in the room and staring at me in mistrust. one of them took a step towards me and I turned to him.

"if you want these three to ever wake up, I advise you to stay where you are."

as I spoke, he stopped moving towards me. turning slowly and looking everyone in the eyes. I turned back to the three comatose people on the bed. I closed my eyes and took all remains of my gifts from the three of them, them I grabbed the cup of water that Flash had been drinking and threw it onto Dick. who jumped up and glared at me.

"you" he growled. and I smiled at him innocently. then he looked around and seemed to notice not only where we were, but who were on the bed behind him. and he looked at me confused. "how?"

"I brought you here, and woke you up. the two of them will wake up in a moment or two. so I will be leaving." I said. and the I turned my back on him, and with a shake of my nose, I transported. leaving NightWing to be confused.

I transported to the apartments I shared with my adopted family. and as soon as I got there, I found my adopted Dad pacing and waiting for someone. and I could only hope it wasn't me he was waiting for. unfortionaly for me, I was the one he was waiting for.

"young lady, where have you been?" he demanded, and I looked down at the floor to avoid looking at him, and him being my Dad, he insantly knew that what ever had happened wasn't good. "what happened? did HE make you do something?"

let me explain really quickly. my "father" had made me go to earth and grab people so many times, that I made a friend. he was older than me, and an old member of the Justice League. he had been known as Kid Flash. he and his wife Artemis had apparently fallen in love with me, so they adopted me and made me their daughter. that was three years ago, since then I've told them all about my "father" and made them swear never to go up against him. they of course agreed. and since they never see the Justice League, the League doesn't knew anything about me. which is great. I loved them, and I almost never called them anything but Dad and Mom.

they also have had another three children in the last three years. they have two twin sons, named -James and Allen, who are both two. and they now have a three month old daughter named Iris...over the past three years I've met Dad's aunt and uncle, and they have met me. which is why I'm surprised that Uncle Barry didn't yell at me right there in the Watch Tower when I returned the Bat family.

"he made me kidnap NightWing and his little brother Will. he had me put Batman in a coma, and then he tried to make me kill NightWing and his Brother. I refused Dad, and, and" I started to stammer as I started to cry, and my Dad wrapped his arms around me and started rubbing my back. "I killed him Dad."

"its okay, you did it to protect someone." he told me "and you did it to protect yourself."

"I have no where else to go" I told him, even though I've been their adopted daughter for three years, I still lived with "father" and I had never thought I would move in with Dad and Mom, and now that I've killed "Father" I didn't think I was ever going to get to move in with them. but I could be wrong.

"you are moving in with us, we aready adopted you, so now you can live with us, and we can send you to school." he said, and I looked at him in Wonder.

"you would let me live with you?" I asked, and when he nodded I asked another "why?"

"because your already family, and we love you." the person that answered wasn't Dad, it was Mom. and she now came and rapped her arms around me as well."the boys will agree with us, you're there older sister. we could never turn you away."

"I love you both so much." I hugged them both.

"and we love you." they both said together.

Dick's POV

"Dick?" I spun around as soon as I heard Will's voice. and then seeing him awake I ran to his side and pulled him into a hug.

"are you alright, did they hurt you?" I asked him, aware of the eyes of the team on us.

"I'm fine Dick, but what's wrong with B?" he asked worried. and I couldn't help but smile.

"I'm fine," and then before we could say a thing, we were both being hugged by Batman. the man that was supposed to be cold and uncaring about anyone or anything. and he was hugging us in front of people that he wanted to think he was cold. "but what happened?"

"I found a girl and she helped me find Will, then she brought us back here and woke the two of you up." I told them and just as I said that Flash was there.

"you mean, the girl betrayed you, took you to the home of the inserausteil, then she put you into a coma with the same powers she used to put Batman in one, then she brought you both back here and woke you all up. and Alyss did it all in time to be home before her Dad worried to death." he said, and everyone looked at him as if he was insane.

"you know her?" he demanded.

"of course I know her, and if you and Wally didn't hate each other, you would know her too." he said. "she is Wally and Artemis's adopted daughter. and she killed her "father" today to save you and your brother. she just went against everything she believed to protect the two of you."

"she's Wally's daughter?" I asked and he nodded.

"and now, since the three of you are alright, I will be leaving to see if my niece is alright." and with that, Flash left. leaving me with a lot of questions. and looking at Conner, I could tell he was just as confused as I was, and that we would be finding answers together.

I need an answer, SHOULD I KEEP WRITING?

I'm not only talking about this story, but the other one I'm writing, and the ones that I'm just starting.

people used to say they loved my works, but now I feel like no ones even reading, and I'm starting to give up.

so PLEASE! ANSWER MY QUESTION!