I decided to be nice and write another chapter today, and i wanted to tell everyone.
I know that my grammar's not great, i misspell things, and my writing can be confusing at times, but. I'M A SENSITIVE PERSON AND PEOPLE SEEM TO ENJOY MAKING ME CRY. so I'm warning everyone, if the reviews aren't nice, DON'T SEND THEM. last night I spent an hour crying because a guy on another fan-fiction-site, sent me a message as long as most of my chapters, telling me every little thing he thought I did wrong or what I should change because 'it would be so much better'. so I'll ask you all a question, SHOULD I CONTINUE WRITING?
Ann's POV
before I could even make a move to catch Conner, Superman has used his super-speed and had Conner in his arms. superman sifted Conner's position in his arms until he was being held in one one hand, and then used his now free hand to grab a hold of Batman, then he used his speed to run the three of them to the hospital wing.
I looked at the people that were still sitting at the table, they weren't moving and I could tell they were horrified by what just happened. not being able to deal with them right now, and knowing that if I stayed I would have a mental breakdown. I quickly ran to the garage and hopped on Conner's motorcycle. before speeding out of the cave and to the secret meadow Conner had taken me to for a date.
the meadow was beautifully, the only way to get in is if you know the secret paths. the meadow is surrounded by trees, and there are flowers and rose and berry bushes growing around the trunks of the trees. right in the middle of the meadow is a beautiful lake, and in the middle of that lake, is a little island with a beautiful weeping willow tree in its center. Conner had found this place on accident a couple months after he was freed from Cadmus, and had never told anyone about it, until me. he brought me here on a date and I had fallen in love with it as well. we had decided to continue to keep it a secret for now, but unknown to Conner or myself, my father knew of this place.
I was about to sit beneith on of the trees, when I saw a little wooden box hanging from a string tied to the tree to my left. taking the box down I saw that my name was ingraved in the lid. and opening the lid I found a single letter, with my name on it. I opened it and let the tears fall as I read the words my husband had wrote.
My beloved Ann:
you can not imagine how difficult it is for me to write this, or how hard it was to keep this from you for as long as I did. when we went to the future, Ola told me that there was a problem with my blood, that it was killing me, and that on November 17th I would collapse and go into a coma, from which no one could wake me. I wish I could have told you Ann, but I didn't want to ruin our time together.
I love you so much Ann. never forget that and never forget me, I'll be watching over you:
Conner.
I seemed to be in a daze as I mounted the bike and raced back to the cave, where everyone was waiting in the living room, I ignored them and instead opened the hidden safe behind one of the pictures, and took out my father time machine.
"Ann, what are you doing?" my father demanded, and I turned to him and the others as I finished typing in the year I wanted to go to.
"Conner knew he was going to collapse, he has known since we went to the future. I'm going back to the future and I'm going to get Ola to tell me how to wake Conner from his coma." I told them, than before any of them could stop me, I stepped through the portal and opening my eyes, I found myself in the Watchtower with CK, Ola and a bunch of other league members staring at me in confusion. turning to Ola, I let the anger I felt towards him show, and I made my voice a growl as I gave him a glare that rivaled my dad.
"we need to talk." I growled, and he flinched as I stepped towards him.
I need an answer, SHOULD I KEEP WRITING?
I'm not only talking about this story, but the other one I'm writing, and the ones that I'm just starting.
people used to say they loved my works, but now I feel like no ones even reading, and I'm starting to give up.
so PLEASE! ANSWER MY QUESTION!
