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For the last ten minutes I've been debating with myself on whether or not I should submit a review. You see my problem is; I'm having trouble making it through the first chapter of your Wolf series. The story idea you've come up with sounds very intriguing, and I really want to be able to throw myself into your fictitious world, but there are so many spelling and grammar errors in the first two pages alone, that every time I come across one, I feel less and less like a reader being absorbed into a wonderful story, and more like a high school English teacher correcting a student's paper.
The only reason I'm writing this is because I think that if you found yourself a good beta reader to look over your story and help you out with your spelling and grammar, I think you could go from being a good story teller, to a great story teller.
I hope I haven't offended you. I really do think you have a talent for story telling; you just need a little help in getting it on the page.
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No i totally agree with you, i do have many grammar wrongs, i hope that you at least could enjoy the story even if my grammar sucks. SO last night i rewrote a little in the first chpt. I am pretty much self taught in english by only watching tv, that can only take me that far. If you could like perhaps tell me what my mayor problem is. Like if you could perhaps take a scentence from the story write whats wrong with it, and how it is suppouse to be, that would be great, that would like be a great help!
You could do that by like only write a review on this. That would be awsome!
Ladyhump