When Sesshomaru efforts to wake me up had succeeded I begged him not to take me back to my palace In exchange for us going back to my palace Sesshomaru said I had to explain why I didn't want to go. I agreed. We left the inn and went into a clearing in the forest. He nodded his head and cued me to start telling him the story.
"Why are you crying princess?" a voice asked. "Because everyone keeps on expecting me to do great thing and I always end up failing or ruining things!" I say crying even louder. "Adults are pathetic, ehh?" the voice answered back. I stopped my crying for a second and looked up. "Maggie!" I cried happily. "You came back to visit me!" "Yes I did young flower…" Maggie said smiling slightly. "Are you still going to keep your promise?" I asked shyly. "Of course." Maggie responded while her slight smile turned to a dark and evil smile. "Yay! Maggie and Rin are going to destroy the world!" I said happily. "Now Rin…" Maggie began as she bent down to say something to me. "Don't tell anyone about this unless they are kids…" "Why Maggie are the kids going to help us?" I asked curiously. "Yes… they sure are…" she said he smile getting more twisted and dark. "Princess Rin! Princess Rin where are you?" guards from afar called. "Hmm… I'm going to have to leave Rin, but I'll be back and ready to fulfill my promise." Maggie said jumping over a concrete wall and running into the shrouded forest. "Bye!" I shouted. "Princess Rin! Who were you talking to?" one of the three guards asked. "That is a secret!" I say skipping past them while me red frilly dress blew in the wind.
Just so you aren't confused or anything this is her flash back and I divided it into three parts, so I don't just cramp it all into on chapter.
This flash back is around the time Rin is 7 years old and Maggie is around 16.
May I at least have three or four comments please!