possibly the worst story ever written!

by serial blogger

There should be a law against stuff like this! So I have jumped on the My Immortal commentary bandwagon I know, hardly original but originality is overrated! . Want to see what I think of this terrible story? Then step right up and see the worst show on earth! Very bad language from both of us.

5. Chapter 5

Chapter 5.

AN: STOP flaming! if u flam it menz ur a prep or a posr! Ok I'm a prep! Da only reson Dumbledeor swor is coz he had a hedache Surely shouting would make it worse then? I've got some aspirin in my bag if you want? ok an on tup of dat he wuz mad at dem 4 having sexx! PS im nut updating umtil I get five good revoiws! Then you're not updating!

Dumbledore made and Draco and I follow him. He kept shouting at us angrily.

"You ludacris What the rapper? fools!" he shouted.

I started to cry tears of blood WHAT THE HELL? Girl you need to see a doctor! Like now down my pallid face. Draco comforted me. What he was fine with the whole crying-blood thing? When we went back to the castle Dumbledore took us to Professor Snape and Professor McGonagall who were both looking very angry. Why would they look angry? They don't know what you've done yet.

"They were having sexual intercourse in the Forbidden Forest!" he yelled in a furious voice.

"Why did you do such a thing, you mediocre dunces?" Well at least she only thinks you're slight dunces. asked Professor McGonagall.

"How dare you?" demanded Professor Snape.

And then Draco shrieked. "BECAUSE I LOVE HER!" No one asked you why you did it, they just said how dare you, there was no cue for you to say that. Do you normally just blurt out declarations of love at inconvenient times?

Everyone was quiet. What you're not going to thank him for his weird proclamation? Awkward! Dumbledore and Professor McGonagall still looked mad but Professor Snape said. "Fine. Very well. You may go up to your rooms."

Draco and I went upstairs while the teachers glared at us.

"Are you okay, Ebony?" Draco asked me gently.

"Yeah I guess." I lied. I went to the girl's dorm and brushed my teeth and my hair and changed into a low-cut black floor-length dress with red lace all around it and black high heels. Yeah because that's really appropriate to be sleeping in! When I came out….

Draco was standing in front of the bathroom, Because nothing says creepy like your boyfriend hanging round the girls toilets! and he started to sing 'I just wanna live' by Good Charlotte. I was so flattered, even though he wasn't supposed to be there. We hugged and kissed. After that, we said goodnight and he reluctantly went back into his room.