Akatsuki vs. The New Organization
Hey to all those faithful enough to have stuck around since the beginning I want to thank you. Even though I havent gotten a review since like chapter 15, I appreciate that you actually read this. I would really like it if at least one person could review to tell me if my writing has improve since I started this at 12 though. Ive noticed a difference in everything Ive wrote from before chapter 15. I just dont exactly know if it would be considered better. Either way thank you all for your readership.
You notice how I ended the last chapter. I did that to kind of add some comedy to the story. Its rated to because I like putting in little funny innuendos. Honestly if there were more females in akatsuki they'd probably fuck like rabbits.
Also, Itachi is obviously my favorite akatsuki member so the story has mainly revolved around him. I think its about time to change that though so some of the future chapters will also revolve around other Akatsuki members. You know, giving everyone a little spotlight time. Besides I dont think Ive gone into much detail about how the members get along with each other, besides the ones that dont like each other.
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Tobi opened his eyes and yawned. He noticed he was alone in bed so he quickly got up and got dressed. He walked down the hall of the new base looking out the occasional window, seeing nothing but a perpetual storm. That was going to take some getting used too but it was doable. He walked until he found his way to the dining hall, where most of his fellow akatsuki members were. As he walked in he looked around. Itachi was sitting with Nolena and Kisame. As he walked by he managed to pick up a small amount of the conversation. "Were they seriously bigger than mine, I never would have known" he heard Nolena say. "Was Tobi bigger than you" he saw Kisame ask with a toothy grin. "I couldn't really see and if I could I certainly wouldn't have looked" he said rubbing his eyes again. Tobi smiled and walked ahead.
At the next table he saw Konan, Katrina, Shinkay, and Itoshi. "You seriously haven't lived till you've had more than one partner, I'm proud of you Katrina" Konan said to her. "I don't need more than one, he's more than enough and how would you know Konan" Shinkay said pointing at Itoshi, who spit out his coffee, then looking to Konan. Itoshi coughed a little before whispering with a slight blush "no one needs to know our business woman, and don't ask personal questions." "Its perfectly fine" Konan said with a laugh "Pein has six other bodies, I know you've seen them." Shinakay nodded and looked back at Itoshi who refused to make eye contact with anyone. She laughed and continued her conversation.
Tobi laughed at Itoshi as he walked away. At another table he saw Hidan, Kakuzu, and Kinamora. "So neither of you can die" she asked with interest. "Nope" Hidan said. "Nuh uh" Kakuzu said counting some money. Shinakay smiled and quickly stabbed Hidan in the forehead. He crossed his eyes to look look at the knife. "Damn bitch, what if I had been fucking bluffing" he said. "Sometimes they are" she said with a smirk. Kakuzu started to laugh. Tobi smiled and looked at the last table.
At the final table was Hanato, Deidara, Casana, and Pein. Deidara and Casana were chatting about nothing in particular while Pein and Hanato stared at the rest of akatsuki, drinking mugs of coffee. They simply nodded at Tobi as he walked into the kitchen. His jaw dropped as three chefs walked to him and asked what he wanted for breakfast. "Tobi wants pancakes" he yelled. "Right away" one of the chefs replied. Tobi waited for his food to get done then walked out of the kitchen. As soon as he walked out Pein grabbed his plate of pancakes and threw them away. "Meeting, now" he said walking away. Tobi looked into the trashcan sniffled. "It's not fair," he said with his shoulders slumped.
He looked around as he stepped into the new meeting room. He sat down next to Katrina and his stomach growled. He sighed remembering those pancakes. He shook his head as Pein stepped out of the door at the head of the room. "Your all 20 minutes late" he said annoyed. "You just said meeting now without telling any fucking body where the hell to go" Hidan yelled. Pein looked at him for a moment with his eyebrow raised, and Hidan sat back down. "Ok" Pein said "we have a lot to discuss. First of all we need to figure out what butoski is up too. We haven't heard from them since they attacked this village. It could be possible that their laying low, but there is no way that they haven't noticed any of the recent events. They stood by while we assassinated the fifth hokage. While the nine tails took out our base. They haven't even tried a counter attack while we're vulnerable. This isn't a coincidence. They're planning something and it isn't going to be good."
Hidan had stopped paying attention as Pein rambled on about how they could find out where their base was. He looked at the tv hanging from the ceiling in the corner. The news played softly but something caught his eye. "Sir" he said "I think I know what they've been up too, turn up the tv." Pein looked confused for a moment but quickly replaced it with his uncaring look. He walked over to the tv, and reached up to the volume knob. As he turned it a feminine voice filled the room.
"Today" said the female new reporter "marks a day that no one will soon forget. The village hidden in the sound, led by the one of the two remaining legendary sannin, lord Orochimaru, has waged war on the Village hidden in the mist. This morning several squads of ninja marched throughout the outskirts of the land of water, slaughtering all they found. When captured, one of the ninja was convinced to give us some intelligence on the situation, before his execution. Switching now to Kazuya Hakiyama with the prisoner in custody."
"Hello I'm Kazuya Hakiyama and I'm with one of the captured sound ninja" said the newscaster. "Can you tell us what has caused this." "Yes replied the ninja, in a burly voice, "Lord Orochimaru has given up orders to march, not on the village hidden in the mist, but through the land of water, to the village hidden in the rain. We have been ordered to kill everyone in our path, which was to take us through the majority of the western edge of the land of water. The death that has transpired today was caused by the leader of akatsuki who is currently hiding in the rain village. He conspired with Lord Orochimaru, to march to the rain village, in an attempt to weaken the village hidden in the mist on its western border so that they could attack and wipe them out." "Well that was quite a story" Kazuya stated "and now it seems that another war i about to break out as the hidden mist village has stated its retaliation within the next few days, back to you Nemu."
Pein muted the tv. "Those sneaky bastards teamed up with the snake" he said. "They threw us into a war" Konan said standing up from her chair "Damn it, the village of the mist is one of the most powerful. Do you know what would happen if they managed a full frontal assault, our troops can;t handle that. If we have any chance I think we'll have to play the bad guy they set us up for, and invade." "That's foolish Konan," Pein replied "it's common knowledge that the leader of rain is the leader of akatsuki. None of the villagers will lose faith, because they know I wouldn't declare war without send them warning of the coming struggles. Im sure that the leaders of the leaf and sand realise the set up as well. But if we blindly go marching in and make this out to be true then they'll certainly step in. Our best bet is to strengthen our defences and hold them at bay."
"As a former mist ninja, I have to warn you that they are ruthless" Kisame piped up. "I must go inform the villagers" Pein said "you all be prepared for whenever the attack comes. After we stop them we'll take an army north to the sound village. I'll bet that's where we'll get info about butoski." As Pein said this he walked out of the room. The others slowly dispersed after he was gone.
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