PART 5 REGRET (Well it's your fault anyways.)
Obsidianpaw felt pain in her belly. She immediately went too jayfeathers den…at leest it was an excuse to see him again. (Slut.) She still hadn't tooled firestar about them and it had ben a week! She went to his den and acted sexy, she culd tell it gave him pleasure. (God, this story should be rated M.) "my belly hurts." She said az she ran her tale acros his cheek. (Because everyone tries to act sexy when vising the doctor.) Jayfeather let ot a cole breath.
"ill check it out four u" he said. Obsidian ruled over on her bak. Jayfeather brushed his paw a long her belly. Befor he could start to do somthing she wuld have liked,, he gasepd. (Okay, ew, I don't even think I should be reading this story.)
"OBSIDIANPAW U R PREGNANT!" he gasped. (You just kissed, you idiots.)
Obsidianpaw felt sick. "are…are…they urs or firestars."
"idk" jay said. (How helpful of you. *clap clap*)
Obsidian cried on hiz shulder "i…i….hope dey r urs…but they culd be firestars….or…" obsidian gasped, remembering back to when she was first apprenticed and liked lionblzae "THEY ARE LIONBLAZES!" (You're fucking kidding me.)
Jayfeather sobbed. "my own brother…." He cried. Obsidianpaw felt bad but she new they wer lionblazes. (If you fucked three different toms you wouldn't know who the father is, okay?!) She rushed to the leader s den an told firestar. Firestar gave her a gash on her face. (He just attacked the bitch?!) "DEY SHULD HAVE BEEN MINE" he yowled. Obsidian was hurt mentally and outsidely. (It's called physically, not oustidely you retard.) She sobbed in the apprentice den…a cat came into comfort her. She luked up and it was…icewing?! (Who the fuck is Icewing?!)
(2 b continued pls stop hating. Are you team firestar, jay, lion, or ice? XD) (Hm... I'ma go with Team IhateyouandyourstorythatshouldberatedM.)