PART 6 NO HOMO (Hm?)
Obsidanpaw felt comfortable next too icewing. (Well then.) She crled up against her az ice licked her afectinately. (Oh great, this story has lesbian cats too.) She kissed ice quickly and turned away. Instead of being shocked icewing kissed her bak on the lips. She kissed her hard and pressed against her. Obsidian shiverd. She luved a she-cat? (Yep. All I can say is at least you're not going insane like Starkit/paw/gleam/star did.)
"I cant be wif you I had an affair wif firestar, nd pregnant with lionblazes kits, nd jayfeather is my bf" obsidian said. (You're not even a slut anymore: you're a whore.)
"ill be ur mate instead of dumb jayfeather." Icewing said.
"ugh why does everybody luv me" obsidianpaw said. (Because being loved is a burden.)
Icewing ignored her and kissed her more. Obsidian didn't proteest. Suddenly jayfeather walked in. he didn't notice cuz he waz blind. (No duh.) He went ovr and kissed obsidian, her didn't know ice was kissing her to. (I'm sorry, but you would know if someone else was kissing your girlfriend if you tried to kiss her too.) Obsidian fekt awkward. (Well I should hope so.)
"I wil father da kitz" jayfeather said and walked away. (Be a good daddy.)
"that was close" icewing said.
Icewing walked away. (You just walk away after making out with someone you hardly even know?) what will I tell jayfeather? I want icewing too b the kits parent wif me not him. (You're kidding me. Make up your fucking mind, bitch.) Obsidian thought. She cried and ran out of the camp. (You're breaking a rule.)