PART 7 QUEST (Yippe.)
Obsidian felt pains in her bely. She knew the kits were comeing and she waz far from camp. (Okay, you wouldn't have your kits that fast.) She layed down and had teh kits. They died except one. It was a dark brown tom. It looked nothing like lionbaze or her. Weird. (The kit doesn't have to look like the father or the mother. It could come from your grandparents. Or maybe you were just being a whore and fucked some other tom that you forgot about.) Obsidian new she couldn't go back to the clan so she stayed outside for a while. She buried he kitz like dirt, she hated them and there father. (Why?) She stared at the living kit.
Suddenly she relized he was differebt. (You already noticed that, like, six sentences ago.) Hiz eyes were amber and he already had a scar on his noz. Weird. (You already said weird once.)
She went back to camp with him and saw icewing. Icewing took him to the nursery. Jayfeather was shocked she kitted and still dint know she loved icewing. (*sigh*) Obsidian growled at him.
'I luv icewingnot u" she said.
Jayfeather ran away crying. (Poor Jaybae!) She dint care having kits had filed her with rage. (Wow, you're a terrible mother.)