Helooo! Yeah, I know, I haven't updated in forever! I've had loads of tests and I fractured my wrist and it was my birthday (my Mum got me limited edition water) I came down with a serious case of writers block, my brother started Primary school, and I've got alot more to say so i'm really sorry about that.
Anonymous9388,
I guess I kinda get your point, but the majority of the reviewers enjoy this story so I will continue. I don't think it's really necessary to say that those who think it's funny are jacked up though, some people have different opinions to others. I'm trying to steer clear of bad language and such anyway, but thanks for being honest and reviewing. xx
-Kyanna
Molleh,
Awww, you loved it! I actually thought it might have been bad for some reason, I don't know why ... but I just did! And I was going for a Mal sorta temper, Sophia is pretty adorable, I, personally, just wanna hug her! My sex. Ed classes were together also, but everyone was really immature, the boys were just laughing, and the girls were just goin 'eew'. So yeah. And, I had to have Pheobe give Kelly a bitch slap! I couldn't resist! xx
-Kyanna
Missmaltara1051,
Yes, Kelly is really annoying, like that girl when you were little and you hung out with her once and she suddenly thought you were best friends and followed you around everywhere, or is that just me? Probably. It would be pretty awesome to have rich grandparents like Pheobe, and by the sounds of it, she's got 'Grandpappy Raj' wrapped around her finger. And, your gonna find out what they're gonna do right now! HA! And yeah, I must admit, i'm actually a huge Sims 3 fan, like, even before I came across CoD, so thats how I know. *Feels like a nerd* xx
-Kyanna
Composition Mills,
Hee-hee! Aww, thanks! And yeah, Pheobe is just an amazing character, if I do say so myself! And, I thought I didn't portray Kai properly, I thought I didn't make him funny enough! Oh yeah, the Spanish word, I've been taking Spanish since Year 7/7th grade aswell, so, yeah. Hee-hee! xx
-Kyanna
MissMaltara1051,
I'm really sorry about taking so long, I had an immense case of Writers block, And this review sorta drove me to hurry up. So, thank you! I'm chuffed you love it so much! xx
-Kyanna
Jacey,
Aww, I've noticed a few of your reviews on my other story too, they made me feel all mushy and warm. Like a roasted marshmellow. And i've also got 5 things to say:
1. It's nice to know one of my OC's isn't a Mary-Sue. And that she's relatable.
2. Pheobe is hilarious? I never really thought about it, but if you say so!
3. Yes she is. She's that mean side to every girl combined into one b*tch. Pardan my swedish. Yet she's still not your stereotypical popular blondie. I hope anyways.
4. 10 points for me! YAY!
5. I agree. Kai is the best! He's the ultimate Nerd!
So, yeah, now it's pretty much the sleepover, some typical girly sleepover stuff, some not so typical girly sleepover stuff, so yeah. Lets'a Go!
Sophia flicks through all the channels, trying to find something good to watch.
"Glee?" she asks.
"No."
"American Idol?"
"Nah."
"What should we watch, then?"
"Well, what do you wanna watch, we got Netflix."
"Well, if it's not too much trouble, can we watch a disney movie?" Sophia asks me quietly, trying to avoid my gaze. I raise an eyebrow.
"Uhh, sure, if you want ..." I begin, akwardly.
"Lets watch the Little Mermaid! No, Snow White and the Seven dwarfs!" She immedeatly insists. I let out a loud groan, rolling my eyes.
"Anything but those! They have to be two of the dumbest Disney girls ever! I mean, The little Mermaid? She sold her voice for plastic surgery, so she could meet some good looking dude she hardely knows, same with Snow White! Oh, Snow White, she's just ..." I babbled, before being interupted by the usually quiet, but now suddenly excited girl.
"What's wrong with Snow White?" She inquires, agitated.
I begin to intimidate the Albino Princess' extremely chipmunk-ish voice, which I must admit, is really hard, and it murders your throat.
"Ooh, I talk to Animals and live with seven men! Now, the Dwarfs told me not to speak to strangers, but to the heck with it! It's not like my step-mothers gonna try and kill me!" I manage to squeak before my throat gets the better of me and I erupt into a fit of coughs. Sophia giggles, and I carry on with our conversation.
"I was thinking something more along the lines of The hunchback of Notre Dame or Tarzan?" I suggest.
The blonde girl widens her eyes at me as if I just mentioned he who shall remain nameless (Voldemort :D).
"Hunchback of Notre Dame is so creepy! When Frollo was singing Hellfire and those guys in the red capes were saying foreign stuff, it gave me nightmares! And Tarzan is depressing!" She responds. I sigh.
"If your that desperate to watch a girly Disney Princess movie or whatever, lets watch Mulan! At least she can fight." I mutter, getting slightly annoyed at the adorable blonde.
Sophia shakes her head.
"Fa Mulan isn't a Disney Princess, I mean sure, she's one of the actual line-up, but she's actually royalty, she comes from a middle class family. I still don't see why Eilonwy isnt one."
"Boy, you sure know your Disney. Well then, is Beauty and the Beast okay? I haven't seen it since I was seven, so lets watch that, kay?"
Sophia responds with a nod.
"Hah! That huge dude on steroids' got a butt chin!"
"Them blonde fangirls so remind me of Kelly! I'm gonna sing this to Will whenever she's near him."
"okay, I've never understood to this day how they tie their hair up with a ribbon, I've tried and it does not work!"
"98% of that's gotta be from the Mother."
"Oh Angela Lansbury, you legend."
"You know the guy who's the voice of the candlestick is Baby's Dad in dirty dancing?"
"No way! Cleavage in a Disney movie!"
"You think there's any subliminal messages in this one?"
"Woah! Was that a skull in his eyes?"
And
"He was much cuter as a Beast."
Were just some of the things I came out with during the movie. Of course, Sophia cried when the Beast died, (Remind me to never let her watch The lion King, can you imagine the tears?) and surprisingly, I loved it. I even remembered some of the lyrics from when I was little, hah. Me and Fifi attempted to do a duet of that song they sung when they were playing in the snow, me being the beast of course. I'm just so weird.
So, right now, it's two am, Sophia's hyped up on energy drinks, and were watching the only movie on TV. Wait for it ... Titanic.
Why the heck are they putting this movie on at this time? It makes most girls sob really loudly, but not me. It's a stupid love story, apart from, well, when the ship sinks, you know? Like, the two old people on the bed and the little kids going to sleep, that's sad. But thats not what makes people cry, it's when Jack dies. What? ...
... Okay, I do cry a little when he dies. But, he's so good looking, and he's eyes are almost as awesome as Dad's.
We all saw it coming anyway, and I still don't see how there 'wasn't enough room for him on the door.' Rose is such a moron.
Sophia's hysterical whimpers are interupted by a knock and opening of a door. Mom.
"You girls are decent right? Good and ... Pheobe, what did you do?" She asks, annoyed yet confused at the scene in front of her at the same time.
"Titanic."
"Ah, don't worry hun, it got to me, too."
It's then I notice the paper bag in her hands. Chinese! With a 'Yay' I run and grab the bag from her hands, accidently slamming the door shut in mom's face, and running back to Sophia, hyperactivness taken over.
"Oh my gosh, oh my gosh, oh my gosh, I haven't had Chinese in forever! Don't you just love Chinese food, Sophie?" I squeal
"Uh, I wouldn't know, I've never had Chines-"
"What? Are you for real? Oh, Sophie. You poor little munchkin."
The blonde munchkin raises an eyebrow at me, silently mouthing the word 'Munchkin' in question. I let a few snickers loose.
Once Sophie finally sorts herself out with the tears, we start on the Chinese. Whilst Sophie eats a Samosa casually, I just scoff my face with egg fried rice and ribs. Yummeeh.
We talk. Movies. People in our classes. Teachers. What we wanna do when we're older. Funny moments. Boys (quietly, of course, my Dad's next door, and he would fuh-reak).
After talking we decide to finally get into our pajamas. After all, it is 2AM. Sophia lets out a yawn.
"You tired, Sophie?" I ask, yawning aswell in the process. How cliche. Well, at least, I think cliche is the word, I don't 100% know what cliche even means. Sophia nods.
We both climb into my bed, one of us at each end, and eventually allow oursleves to be captured by visions of darkness. Heh, i love being overly poetic.
Holy Poop. That was a terrible chapter, and you don't deserve something this bad after waiting FOUR BLOODY MONTHS. And six days. I'm a terrible, terrible person. I deserve to be mauled by a bunch of beliebers and directioners and twihards. I'm sorry! And I promise I will update very very very very soon, I swear!
-Kyanna
