Attention i just got my first flame and i thought it would be amusing to see what you guys thought of it. here it is be a guy that said his name was hello.
waht the hell do you think your doing this story is a peice of shit who gives a shit about robrae bbrae and robstar are forever thats how the producers wrote it and thats how it should stay you should respect it bitch. you must be a whore if your writing this shit. why dont you do me a favor and jump down a whole and die no one would give a shit anyway. go to hell and who gives a shit about ur friends feelings christy or christa whatever who cares about your bitch of a friend. hope you die a very painful death and u convert to the right side and DELETE you goddamn robrae stories.
Well Mr. Hello i got news for you call me a bitch all you want and wish for me to die. I dont care if your such a bbrae fan and robstar fan and seem to hate robrae fics then what the hell are you doing reading robrae stories. if your looking for a satisfaction of seeing me give up. well i got news for you that i wont give up on wat i believe in. and when your trying to insult my friends at least have enough respect to spell their name correctly on a review other than that i have one last thing to say and that is ROBRAE FOREVER! AND thanks for the s'mores anyone want some?
well now that my rant is over this song is called 'Smile' by Avril Lavigne
Lyrics
Pov
flashback
Ravens POV
You know that I'm a crazy bitch
I do what I want when I feel like it
All I wanna do is lose control
oh-oh
I walked outside with a shirt saying what the hell and regular torn up jeans. As I walked I saw a broken up glass heart. I knew immediately Richard, my boyfriend, left it there. He knew I was a crazy chick, and I do whatever I want. He knows I loose control a lot and yet at the same time so does he.
But you dont really give a shit
You go with it
Go with it
Go with it
As long as we don't flirt with anyone else our relationship is fine, perfect, whatever you want to call it. He only gives his attention to me and vice-versa. I kept walking and found another piece of the heart on a couples table. As soon as it was gone they started smiling.
Cause you're fucking crazy
Rock & Roll
You said hey whats your name
It took one look and now I'm not the same
He's crazy and I thats why I love him. I remembered how we met.
Flashback
I was walking around the park while listening to my Ipod. I was listening to Smile by Avril Lavigne. Suddenly I bumped into someone and went from my own little world to reality. I looked into who I bumped into and looked him over. He had messy jet black hair, peircing stormy blue eyes and perfect teeth. He wore a black and red shirt and black jeans with a chain attached. Nice a punk.
"Hey. What's your name?" He asked me his voice like honey to me. I was shocked with myself for not answering immediately and scaring him off. It took one look and it seemed that I changed that's great just great.
"Raven, yours?"
"Richard"
I nodded and gave him a piece of paper, with my number on it. Then I walked away.
"What am I supposed to do with this?" He asked calling out to me.
I turned around before answering "To call me."
Then I left.
End of Flashback
Yeah you said hey and since that day
You stole my heart
And your the one to blame
Yeah and thats why I smile
He stole my heart and he's the one to blame. He's the only reason I smile anymore. I found another piece by a girls food stand. She looked upset so I took the piece and left. I looked back to find her smiling and a boy talking to her. I laughed slightly and wished her the best of luck.
Its been a while
Since everyday and everything has felt this right.
And now you turn it all around & suddenly your all I need
The reason why I smile
Nothing had ever felt right after my parents died, and Richard he pointed me in the right irection. Now I had friends who could make me smile, though not as much as Richard. Everything felt so right and perfect now. He turned it all around and made life better for me. Without even realizing it.
Last night I blacked out I think
What did you
What did you put in my drink
I remember making out and then
Oh-Oh
I kept walking finding more shards on the way. I suddenly saw one in a mans hat. This one was different from the others though it said 'You almost there Rae.' I laughed to myself when I read the pet name he gave me. I loved it, and hated it at the same time. I kept following his little broken pieces of the hearts til I came to the park.
I woke up with a new tattoo
Your name was on me and my name was on you
I would do it all over again
You said hey whats your name
I saw him sitting on a bench, watching me. I smiled and walked over to him. I felt him wrap his arms around my waist as I wrapped them around his neck.
It took one look and now I'm not the same
Yeah you said hey and since that day
You stole my heart
And your the one to blame
"Enjoy the search Rae?" He asked me already knowing my answer.
"Besides having to do a scavenger hunt. I liked it." I responded nomally.
Yeah and thats why I smile
Its been a while
Since everyday and everything has felt this right.
And now you turn it all around & suddenly your all I need
He smiled at my responce, yeah this felt so right. He's all I'll ever need, that's for sure. He dragged me out of the park and to his motorcycle. I hopped on behind him. He started it up and started to drive. We drove around the city. Not giving a care in the world.
The reason why I smile
The reason why I smile
You know that Im a crazy bitch
I do what I want when I feel like it
I told him I wanted to go home, to which he complied. He was going to leave, but before he could I dragged him in. We watched some movies and fell asleep.
All I wanna do is lose control
You know that Im a crazy bitch
I do what I want when I feel like it
All I wanna do is lose control
When we woke up, I felt the urge to kiss him so I did. He woke up a minute later smiling goofily at me. I gave him the shards of the heart he made me find and I watched him put it together.
And that why I smile its been a while
Since everyday and everything has felt this right.
And now you turn it all around & suddenly your all I need
The heart was big and red, it total it was cute. I watched him walk out of the room with the shard in hand. The come back and give me the heart. On it ir read 'Richard and Raven forever together.' I smiled at him.
The reason why I smile
The reason the reason why I smile
The reason why I smile
I kissed him. He took the heart form me and put it behind me then kissed me. When we broke apart, I smiled a very special smile that was only meant for him.
I've been obsessed with this song for i bit love it :) review oh and flame he again I dare you! besides I love s'mores :) and IM HUNGRY! 1 new story for bakugan if people are interested look at my profile to read it. and 2 updates in 2 days im on a roll. bet it off chapters are almost done 2 people ill be updating it soon so watch out for it. Im starting to write for different show i used to watch like code lyoko, bakugan, teen titans maybe harry potter...you get the point
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