HEY PEEPS, so I found the original rough draft, did a little tinkering, and came up with this little beauty. TBH, I think this one is better than the original. Mostly because I've gotten better at writing, but other reasons as well. I hope you enjoy it.


"Wow, what a mission!" Kid Flash said as he and the rest of the team headed for the zeta tubes to take them back to Mount Justice.

"Yes, it was indeed a great mission." added Aqualad right before he stept into the zeta tube. Following him was Miss Martian, Artemis, Superboy, Rocket and Zatanna.

" I don't know about you. But Bane is definitely feeling the aster." Robin said to Kid Flash just before he stept into the tube himself. Suddenly three men came out of the shadows.

"You're coming with us twerps." One of the men said.

"Says who?" Robin replied with a grin. The boys start to run down the alley, only to find a dead end and three more men. They were surrounded.


Back at Mount Justice, the rest of the team were waiting on Robin and Kid Flash.

"They said they would be through in five minutes! I'm gonna go check on them." Artemis said kinda irritated.

"Artemis, there's no need to get mad. Just let them know we're ordering a pizza in ten minutes." M'gann told her firmly.

"Alright. Be back in a few," she stated as she stepped into the zeta tube. When she got to the alley, she stepped out. "Hey, what's taking so long? We're about to order….." she stopped as she realized they weren't there and walked up the alley a little ways. Her eyes got huge when they met the ground. She quickly radioed the team. "Um, guys….We have a problem."

When she got back to the cave the rest of the team was waiting for her.

"What's the problem?" Connor Cent asked as Artemis came back through the zeta tube. "Were they fighting over what kind of pizza to get again?" He started to laugh. Artemis looked annoyed as she replied.

"No they weren't fighting over what pizza to get, because they weren't even there." Everyone suddenly looked up from what they were doing.

"What do you mean they weren't there?" Zatanna asked.

"I think something happened to them," Artemis said worriedly, "I mean do you really think they would leave these in an alley?" She held up the objects she found in the alley. Everyone then got real quiet. There was something wrong.


Batman and Flash were the last ones to leave the meeting hall, when the phone rang.

"I got it!" Flash called and sped to it, "Justice League, Flash speaking. Ok, whoa Artemis! Slow down some ok, you're starting to sound like me. Start over now. Well that's good…. Wait what?!...Ok, I'll tell him. Don't worry Artemis." He turned around to find Batman right behind him.

"Gah! Don't do that! You're gonna give me a heart attack!"

"Tell who, what?"

"You, actually. Apparently Wally and Dick never showed up to the mountain after their mission. Artemis said she went to go get them and they were nowhere to be seen. All she found was Wally's goggles and Robin's utility belt and some pieces of their costumes. That's why they called."

"They were right to. They know something is wrong if they find Robin's belt. We'll start search now."


"Ugh, where am I?" The teen looked around and saw that it was just an empty room. All that there was was a very dim light hanging from the ceiling. He walked over to the door and found it to be locked. "My belt's gone, so more likely my lock picks are gone too. Where am I?"

"That doesn't matter boy. You won't be leaving anytime soon anyway," The voice was on the other side of the door. "This room is made of reinforced material. You won't be able to break free."

"Who are you?!"

"That doesn't matter either. Now shut up before I go in there and make you!"

"Who ever you are, you won't get away with this."

"It's funny that you think that." Then footsteps moved away from the door. The young teen sat in the corner thinking of a way to contact people on the outside.

"I wonder if they got KF to." Just then there was yelling on the other side of the wall and you could make it out plain as day.

"If you hurt him I will find you and end you! You hear me?! And trust me, when I get out of here, you'll be in for a world of pain!"

"Shut up before both of you get an electric shock from the inhibitor collars around your necks." Robin hadn't even noticed that earlier.

"I won't be quiet until I know that he's ok!" Just then the pain of be electrocuted went through his body.

"Aaaahhhhgggg!" It was painful enough that he passed out again.


"You're telling me, Batman, The World's Greatest Detective, can't find two teenage boys?!"

"I didn't say that. I said Robin's trackers were broken or disarmed."

"That's pretty much exactly what you said! They could be anywhere and we have no idea where!"

"I'll find another way to trace them Barry."

"Well make it fast!"

"Do me a favor, shut up so I can focus."

"Bruce, Barry, you guys have some mail. I'll just leave it here on the table."
"Thanks Diana. Hey, what's for lunch? All this worrying has made me hungry."

"Chicken. I'll bring you some."

"Thanks Diana!" He went and picked up the envelope with his name on it. He opened it and pulled a few pictures out. He immediately went limp. "Bruce, I think you should open your letter..."

"Why would I do that n-" He saw the panic on his teammate's face. He grabbed the letter and opened it to find more pictures. Each one was a picture of their proteges. Both were beat bad and had inhibitor collars on. Pieces of their costumes were missing and they were bruising in multiple spots. It looked like there were fresh stab wounds on their arms and legs. There was a letter with them.

'Surrender in no more than 96 hours, or you won't see them alive again.'

"Here's your chicken Bar- What's wrong?"

"N-nothing Diana. J-just leave it on the table."

"Ok, let me know if you need anything else." She had that look on her face, the one where she knows something's wrong but won't push any further.

"Bruce, we need to find them. Now."

"I know Barry, and I'm working on it." He set out to find where the letters came from.


Wally sat up off the floor. That was twice now that he had been knocked unconscious.

"Me and my big mouth," He saw small portion of bread and a small cup of water. There was a note next to it.

'Don't need you dead….yet. You'll be given food every six hours. We don't want you to be too energetic.'

"Figures. Hopefully Rob is doing better than I am."


Robin sat up and pushed himself to a corner. He began thinking of ways he could break out and find KF. If anything, Flash and Batman already know they're missing and were looking for them. There was nothing but silence. Maybe it was dark outside. It was hard to tell without windows. Then the silence broke. There was a noise on the other side of the wall that seemed to be angry.

"God dammit! Kill them now! I knew the Justice league would find out where I was! I said kill em!" Some men threw open the door and ran in. They some held him down as another punched him till he passed out again. Then they dragged him out of the room.


The Batwing flew over the island. Flood lights started to fill the air.

"They know we're here. We'll have to split up to find where they have Robin and Kid Flash."

"Split up? You crazy?! You do remember whose fingerprints you found right?!"

"Yes, and that's exactly why I said we're splitting up."

"I can't believe you're serious!"

"We can cover more ground if we split up and if we run into him of find the boys, we contact each other."

"That sounds better than what you said before." Bats landed the Batwing just of the coast of the island and they headed over. They split up once they got into the wood and they hoped that they weren't too late.


When Robin woke up again, he was in a different room this time his wrists were cuffed to the wall above him and he couldn't move. He turned his head and saw Kid Flash next to him in a similar position. He moved his foot and kicked the speedster, who in turn jerked his head up.

"W-where am I?" He turned his head and saw the Dark Knight's protege. "Dude, that really you? Or am I dead already?"

"It's really me. So, I take it you don't know where we are?"

"Yup. Why are our arms like this?"

"I don't know. I have the slightest clue to why we're here anyways."

"It's so they can kill you and you won't run away." It was the same voice that had been yelling at them earlier.

"Come out where we can see you!"

"If that's what you want," The figure stepped into the light and KF immediately wished he hadn't said anything. Out of the shadows stepped Vandal Savage. "My original plan was to release you if your mentors had cooperated with my instructions, but they found my base, so the only other choice is to kill you."

"Let us go! We have no use to you!" Robin said.

"That's exactly why I'm killing you. You get five minutes to say goodbye to each other." then he turned and left the room. The two teens then started to struggle against their bonds.

"I can't-can't get my hands out!"

"Neither can I. Do you have any picks on you?"

"I checked earlier. They took them all."

"Dang it." Just then there was the sound of the door opening. In hurried the Dark Knight. He grabbed a key and unlocked the cuffs. The teens stood up and got ready to run out the door, but they were stopped. They heard Vandal coming back and they knew they were about to be killed. Batman shot a grapple up to the rafters above them just as the door opened. Two men, along with Vandal walked in and started to fire. The next thing they knew, KF fell to the ground clutching his stomach. Robin then fell with a sharp pain to his chest.


Robin woke up. He almost thought he was dead. Then he saw people that he knew. Artemis and M'gann were talking at the his feet and Zatanna was falling asleep in a chair. He went to sit up, but groaned from the pain as he tried. Everyone looked his direction. Conner, Zatanna and Kaldur stood up from their chairs and Artemis and M'gann turned around.

"I hope you're feeling ok, Robin."

"I'm fine. Where's KF?"

"He's on the other side of the curtain. He hasn't woke up yet."

"I want to-ugh-see him. Now." M'gann moved the curtain aside and KF was lying in a bed. He was breathing which was good, but he was still asleep.

"Batman and Flash were here all night while you were in surgery. They seemed more worried then any of us." Just then there was a groan from KF. They turned to him and saw he was waking up.

"A-am I dead?"

"You're not dead yet Baewatch." He smiled and turned his head.

"What happened?" The door opened and closed behind the group. Batman and Flash stepped in. The other teens said good-bye and left.

"After you were shot, I ran in and beat the shit out of Vandal."

"After that we rushed you here as fast as we could. Luckily Dr. Tompkins hadn't left yet."

"How long have we been out?"

"About a day and a half. You'll be here for another day." There was a knock on the door and Dr. Leslie Tompkins entered the room.

"How are my favorite patients doing?"

"I'm fine, but I'm hungry."

"We'll get you some food as soon as possible. Well, everything seems to be ok. You should be able to leave first thing in the morning."

"Thank you Dr. Tompkins."

"My pleasure. I'm always ready to help you heroes." She left to go get KF his food.

"We'll be back in the morning. Rest up."

The next morning the two teens went back to their homes. When they went to school the next day, people kept bringing up what they heard happened to Kid Flash and Robin over the weekend. Hiding their injuries was the hardest part. Especially for Dick, who went to school with Artemis. But, other than that, it was the same as always

The end?


So here ya go. Please tell me what you think. In my opinion, this one is better than the original one. Peace out peeps!