authors note ~ hey guys anyways thanks to kinng and hannahkimxx for reviewing ! first thing i wanna say is if you read it please review even if it is to say that was okay or good even it wasnt great at all and give me advice on how to get better it will really help me improve my writing . oh and also ... DISCLAIMER !: i do not own kickin it or the characters !
_ jack pov_
"kim is something wrong" jack
"no why would yo-" kim
"there you are jack what took you so long man ?"jerry
"it wa-" jack
"there you are kimmers " jerry
chchThen all out of nowhere BAM ! jerry is on the floor in a second !
"what the f is wrong with you !?" jerry
"dont call me kimmers " kim says as if it were a logical enough explanation
"but you told me brett calls you kimmers !" jerry
I see kim tense up again ..(what is that about ?)
"thats brett your jerry " kim
"Nd im jack "i say like a complete idiot
Suddenly she gives me the i will flip you if i have to look so i put my hands up in show of surrender
Then i hear a girl yelling no more like screaming kims name
"oh shit " i hear kim say under her breath
"kim you left me alone "this girl says
"im sorry im sorry im sorry forgive me ?" kim
"yeah " the mystery girl says
meanwhile over here is checking her out .
" why dont you take a picture it lasts longer " the girl says while smirking
"oh a bit feisty there learned that from kim here did ya ' " jerry
"yeah wanna know what else i learned ?" the girl says
"sure " jerry says with a wink
within a second or two jerry hits the floor again while kim and her friend walk away leaving jerry dazed and me thinking ..." wow jerry sure must be fond of that concrete "
authors note ~ so wutcha think wait dont tell me put in a review ! kk so again thanks for the review you two i appreciate it 3 so yeah again i apologize for not making it longer :( i dont really hav time since im baking cupcackes and selling them tomorrow with my bestfriend :) so yeah if you review i will include you in my next chapter ok well i guess this is goodbyehope you enjoyed it :')