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The Hotel
Loren: This is amazing.
Eddie: Yeah it is.
Loren: So what do you want to do?
Eddie: Sleep then take you to dinner.
Loren: Sounds good.
(They go to sleep)
(2 hours later)
Eddie: Making the reservations at Il Convivio di Troianai.
Loren: Ok. (Loren puts on a red mini dress and black strappy heels)
Eddie: You ready. (Eddie puts on a black suit)
Loren: Yes Mr. Duran.
Eddie: Good.
At the Restaurant
Person: How may I help you?
Eddie: I have reservations for Duran.
Person: Right this way.
(They sit down at their table.)
Loren: This is an amazing restaurant.
Eddie: Well I have a surprise for you.
(He gets up someone hands him a guitar and I mic)
Eddie: This is for you Loren the love of my life.
Ain't another woman that can take your spot my-
If I wrote you a symphony,
Just to say how much you mean to me (what would you do?)
If I told you you were beautiful
Would you date me on the regular (tell me, would you?)
Well, baby I've been around the world
But I ain't seen myself another girl (like you)
This ring here represents my heart
But there's just one thing I need from you (say "I do")
Yeah, because
I can see us holding hands
Walking on the beach, our toes in the sand
I can see us on the countryside
Sitting on the grass, laying side by side
You could be my baby, let me make you my lady
Girl, you amaze me
Ain't gotta do nothing crazy
See, all I want you to do is be my love
(So don't give away) My love
(So don't give away) My love
(So don't give away) Ain't another woman that can take your spot, my love
(So don't give away) My love
(So don't give away) My love
(So don't give away) Ain't another woman that can take your spot, my love
Ooooh, girl
My love
My love
Now, if I wrote you a love note
And made you smile with every word I wrote (what would you do?)
Would that make you want to change your scene
And wanna be the one on my team (tell me, would you?)
See, what's the point of waiting anymore?
Cause girl I've never been more sure (that baby, it's you)
This ring here represents my heart
And everything that you've been waiting for (just say "I do")
Yeah, because
I can see us holding hands
Walking on the beach, our toes in the sand
I can see us on the countryside
Sitting on the grass, laying side by side
You could be my baby, let me make you my lady
Girl, you amaze me
Ain't gotta do nothing crazy
See, all I want you to do is be my love
(So don't give away) My love
(So don't give away) My love
(So don't give away) Ain't another woman that can take your spot, my love
(So don't give away) My love
(So don't give away) My love
(So don't give away) Ain't another woman that can take your spot, my love
Ooooh, girl
My love
My love
(Everyone starts clapping)
(Eddie get down on one knee and pulls out a box.)
Eddie: Loren the first time I met you I knew you were the one. When I got into that car accident and you were there to help me through everything. When your grandmother died and when we went on tour we were there for each other. I knew that one day I would want to marry you. So Loren Tate will you marry me?
Loren: Yes. (She says crying)
(Eddie picks her spins her around and kisses her)
Loren: Oh my god the ring is beautiful. (Eddie puts the ring on her finger)
Eddie: I wanted it to be perfect.
Loren: I love you so much. How long have you been planning this?
Eddie: After graduation.
Loren: Aw, and the song was amazing I loved it so much.
Eddie: Well the perfect song for the perfect girl.
Loren: Eddie I love you so much.
Eddie: I love you too.
Back at the hotel
Loren: The most amazing night ever.
Eddie: Oh really?
Loren: Really. (She kisses him wraps her arms around his neck. He picks her up and she wraps her legs around his waist. He pulls against her bottom lip she allows him entrance. As there their tongues fight for dominance. He unzips Loren dress she unbuttons his shirt. You guys know what happens next)
Eddie: I love you.
Loren: I love you too.
Thanks for reading everyone hope you liked it. The song is my love by Justin Timberlake. You can see the pic of the dress and the ring on my profile. Review Please!