An: Okay I know it took me forever to get this chapter out but if you read my update then you know why that is, Now I have a bit of information before you all read this chapter I'm not real good with explaining appearances, I used to have A really good beta who could do them but now that I'm on my own well I'll try my best to explain how the people look in my story but I fear I will fail, Since I only explain how people look if it fits the perfect timing to explain it like when a character is looking in a mirror or before they get ready for an epic battle or something like that, However most Naruto characters will look how they usually look like in the show the exception being Naruto and a few others.

Also I will be using the one piece way of bountys since I dont really understand how money works in naruto so berries will be money in my story.

Okay with that load off my chest enjoy the story Sorry for any bad grammer.

Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto Just a Fan making a story.

"Demon Talking"

'Demon thinking'

"'Demons talking to each other using mind Jutsu'"

"Human talking"

'Human thinking'

(Flashbacks)

Jutsu being used

_ time skip

Chapter 11 More Then Meets The Eye

"Okay guys... I think that's all of them." Naruto said trying to catch his breath as he sat on the ground until a rustle of bushes started to move again.

all the kits and one clearly tired Naruto sighed the kits because they were getting annoyed with killing bandits inside their favorite training ground while Naruto sighed because all he wanted to do was rest, He had trained all day for about two weeks straight and he needed to rest sighing once more he stood up and got into his other fighting stance, Putting both his hands inside his pockets he waited for the bandits to show themselves but when Naruto sniffed the air he smelled something familiar and before he could warn his three friends it was too late.

Fu appeared from behind the bushes and was greeted with three kits fist about to punch him in the face however Fu simply held his hand in front of the three kits fist watching in amusement as all three of the kits faces turned to one of horror. "Ninja Art Relentless Wind." Fu said watching as the wind from all three of the boys fist went into different directions smashing into each other they all crashed onto the floor in front of him.

Naruto didn't want to laugh because he knew he would get into trouble with Fu but man was he dyeing on the inside and a certain demon along with him.

"Priceless." Fu said as the kits groan and growl trying to stand up on their feet.

While Fu had begun lashing out at the three kits who had finally gotten to their feet, Naruto couldn't help but feel someone watching him he looked around but he didn't see anything out of the ordinary, When he thought he heard a stick snaping behind him he was about to head off in the direction of the sound, Until he found himself stopped by the sharp angry voice that called out to him.

"Naruto get over here." Fu said and Naruto forgot all about his feeling of being watched being on Fu's bad side was not the way you wanted to end the day, Kyuubi however stayed on alert just in case.

Behind a tree not far away from where Naruto was the girl with red hair hid behind another tree getting closer to Naruto and his group, When she was close enough that she was sure she wouldn't get caught she released the breath she didn't know she was holding, Still she looked at the stick on the ground snapped in two and at how far she was away from Naruto no human could hear her from that far away she figured it was just a coincidence, Pushing the thought aside she listened trying to hear what the five were talking about.

"Anyways it's getting late we should go Lela should have dinner ready by now we can deal with the body's later." Fu said and with out another word he took off back into the bushes towards their hideout Naruto and the others were just laughing at Jack as they followed Fu, Yet as they were laughing Naruto had that feeling again of being watched yet shrugged it off as him being a bit paranoid.

Once The Red haired Girl was sure that the group from earlier wouldn't come back she walked into the clearing looking at the broken and bloody body's of the bandits from earlier she shrugged her shoulders at the bodys they got what they deserved, She looked at the injuries of the ones the blonde hair boy had killed and was impressed that they were all hand kills not a single weapon was used on any of his targets nor were there signs of any Jutsu being used, He had literally killed them with only his hands she remembered his other companions using jutsu but none that she could recall knowing that she cursed her bad memory when it came to jutsu knowing them was important especially the ones that could be used against you one day.

She sighed calling down her left eye from above its hiding spot as it landed inside her left hand she crushed it, As it turned into sand she waited for a moment before opening her left eye happy that it had returned without any problems she then looked at the dead bandits body's again looking for the leader she eventually found him a giant gash where his right arm should have been, She looked at the man face then pulled out a little black book from her back pocket flipping through the pages she found the mans name and his price, She had to read it out loud to make sure she was reading it right. "Boulder breaker Ronald D Nick Wanted for multiple Murders and Destruction of a mining facility in the village hidden in the clouds bounty of 10 thousand berries." She held back the shriek of joy she wanted to let out while she normally didn't steal bounty's one this high could not be ignored at least to her it was high, She unstrapped her sand gourd from her back siting it on the ground she uncorked it watching as the sand from inside came out and wrapped around the mans corpse once the man was fully covered the sand returned back into her gourd.

"What are you doing Kiara." A voice said simply from behind her and she sighed at the sound of it turning around seeing A boy appear from out of the shadows with red hair walking into the clearing towards her.

"If you must know I'm collecting a bounty." She said lifting the gourd onto her back as if it was light as a feather.

"Well since your done stealing other Peoples handy work can we move on to the task at hand were already late as it is." The boy said stomping on the ground sand appeared and enveloped the rest of the body's disappearing them from sight.

"Looky here Garra just because you live in a wealthy family never having to work for your meals doesnt mean I'm so lucky." Kiara said pointing at Garra.

Garra ignoring Kiara walked past her toward the lake removing the gourd he carried on his back he placed a tag on it before tossing it into the lake, He looked at Kiara irritated that she was taking so long she walked toward him and doing the same as he had she put a tag on her gourd before tossing it into the lake.

Taking a deep breath they both Jumped into the lake the both of them swam to the bottom where they both saw their sand gourds perfectly fine searching around the bottom of the surface Kiara eventually found a small light poking out from a small crack in the ground, Waving her hands at Garra getting his attention he grabbed their gourds wrapping them around his arms and swam toward her once he was close enough Kiara placed both her hands over the light, A small shift could be felt in the lake and the ground where the light was coming from opened up the two swam inside the opening both coming up for air, When they saw a light leading up from the inside of the entrance.

Taking a much-needed breath of air the two of them climbed out of the lake's water they each took their respective gourds then went toward the small fire waiting for them in the tunnel there were three other figures sitting by the fire, Two of them were two years older than Garra while the other was an adult clearly their teacher there was also two empty spaces with huge towels on both seats near the fire, Kiara rushing past Garra grabbed all the towels where she was supposed to sit at before heading down into a different tunnel way ignoring all in her path, Garra simply took the towels from where he was sitting and wrapped them around his entire body sitting his gourd down beside him.

"You two just couldn't be bothered with taking off your clothes next to each other could you." the older man with a scar on his left eye in what was clearly sand jonin ninja gear said looking at garra who simply didn't reply.

"Dont tell me that's what all that commotion was above us we thought you guys would bring the damn cave down fighting like that." A boy who was wearing all black sand ninja gear said.

"Then all are hard work would have been for nothing." The girl finished using a towel she had on her shoulder to dry some of the water from her blond hair.

Garra looked questionable at them for a second that little fight with those bandits couldn't have been enough to shake their underground tunnel, So what where they talking about no sooner was Garra about to ask did Kiara come back taking the words right out his mouth.

"What are you talking about we didn't fight though there was these groups of bandits who took on these four boys to bad they got there asses kicked but they didn't do anything big enough to shake this place up." Kiara said taking her seat.

"Boys what boys where they from the leaf village?" The boy wearing all black asked.

"I don't know Kankuro by the time I was getting close to the spot I could smell blood thinking something was going on I used my eye to check things out, That's when I saw those four boys beating up those bandits they were really good to they didn't get a scratch on them and one of them even beat up all of his opponents with his bare hands no jutsu or anything, Although now that I think about it the place around them did look pretty trashed before they started fighting." Kiara said looking at Garra who simply nodded.

"Was there anyone else with them and were they wearing a headband?" The girl asked and Kiara thought about it for a second before remembering about the other older one.

"No Temari they weren't wearing any headbands but there was an older man there to he probably was their teacher or father who knows, He was defiantly strong though for some reason I could sense his chakra from my hiding spot but he didn't have a headband on either though he knew ninjutsu." Kiara finished reaching for a fish that was cooking near the fire.

Their leader seemed to be in deep thought it was no easy task shaking up a place to the degree they had done and there were reports of it happening more and more around the tunnels from others.

"Okay listen up we maybe compromised this isn't the first time we've had tunnel disturbances most were simply thought to be nature adapting to a tunnel that wasn't normally there but now with this information this leader of there's maybe using these kids to try to find are location, However they maybe innocent civilians who grew up around here they could even be runaway ninja either way headquarters will need to know before we can move on to stage two." Kiara wanted to do something scream anything but she knew it wouldn't stop the order that was coming.

So Garra, Kiara, I'll need you two to go back to the village and tell the Kazakage what we discovered understood." The leader asked finishing his fish as he got up to tell the other groups about the change in plans.

Garra simply nodded his head while Kiara sighed heavily before doing the same their leader satisfied with their answer left to attend his duties, While Kankuro and Temari both got up and left to get some much-needed sleep it was late and they had not been allowed sleep until their entire group had arrived, Garra and Kiara were the only two left and both had moved so that they were sitting on opposite sides of each other they both sat in silence each keeping to themselves, Neither one noticing the shadows above them moving around the tunnels.

Kiara stretched her arms high above her head in the sunlight smiling happily at the news she had received earlier about how they should simply stop by the nearest village and drop off the message with a messenger instead of walk all the way to the sand village, Since there was also some important reports that had to go back as well they could simply leave their message with the reports.

"Kiara keep up will ya." Garra said looking behind him at how far back kiara was.

Kiara simply stuck her tounge out at garra who simply turned his head and ignored her she didn't care they were getting close to the village anyways she could smell People cooking lunch and could hear the chatter of the village people from where she was, The smell of food making her hungry made her walk closer to Garra even though she didn't want to.

They had finally arrived at the small village Kiara stopped to read the sign out loud while Garra went on ahead to deliver the messages He said something about a meeting place but Kiara wasn't listening to remember what He said, For some strange reason the sign was disturbing her but she had no idea why.

"The Riverside Flow hmmm." Shrugging her shoulders and finally away from Garra she went to explore the village she could smell all kinds of sea food and it was something rare for her to eat, She also had a bounty to get off her chest and since it would start to smell if left for one more day inside her gourd she looked for the nearest collection booth.

After searching for an hour she finally found the booth collecting her bounty she skipped happily toward the nearest sweets stand, The village wasn't that crowed and she probably looked like a little kid celebrating her birthday or something but to be fair she was only eight so she probably fit that description perfectly, The expressions on the bounty hunters faces when they saw a little girl turn in a ten thousand berry bounty was priceless.

Finally finding a sweet store she was getting ready to head in until she heard a familiar voice slowing down her pace she looked for the familiar voice it was moving towards the sweet store, She looked across the street and saw one of the boys from yesterday his jet-black hair was easy to spot it was out of control spiking out at odd angles, He wore a dark violet shirt that matched his unique eye color and the person beside him was clearly pissed off she was someone who she had not seen before she had chestnut hair that flowed gently down the small of her back, shimmering prettily in the rising sun. She was wearing a short, sleeveless kimono over black tights. The black kimono was held together by a silky red belt. and something was on the back but Kiara couldn't see it.

Wondering why she was even hiding she decided to come out of her hiding spot and continue toward her original goal, If she wanted to find out if they were working for a village what better way then to get close, Walking inside the sweet store right behind the two she listened in on their conversation since she was seated right behind them it made it all the easier she could enjoy her sweets and gain information at the same time, Judging by how they were talking so far she wondered if they were boyfriend and girlfriend they defiantly seemed like a good couple.

"You owe me for that stunt you pulled so I don't want to hear a single complant Jax." Lela said staring daggers at Jax.

"I don't see what the big deal is Lela it was just one." Jax didn't get any further as he was found caught in a head lock Kiara had to turn her head to see what was going on and she didn't look weird doing it since everyone in the store seemed to be doing the same thing.

"Lela everyone's watching us and I-I c-c-can't Breath." Jax pleaded and Lela sighed letting him go she then crossed her arms looking around at everyone who was still staring eventually everyone went back to their sweets Kiara could even here some girls gossiping about the two, She tried her hardest not to laugh at the curse words that were being mumbled by Lela since she was sure if she were put in the same situation she'd be doing the same to.

'Okay so there not a couple that's good that boy is defiantly cute hmm that aside how will I know whether or not there ninja.' Kiara thought about it before the answer litterly came flying past her, She looked to her left where part of her booth should have been was gone not only that her sweets were two and in place of them were Jack wearing her sweet dumplings as a hood ornament.

'Okay someones paying for that but strength that regular people can't possible have means ninja or at the very least a very strong girl.'

"Excuse me but I'm afraid I'll have to ask you two to leave after you pay for the damages of course." Kiara looked toward the Lela girl and she looked toward her counterpart Jack who seemed to either be in a daze or knocked out the girl reached into her pockets but then she got nervous patting all her pockets it was clear she either left her money or she lost it.

Lela jumped over the small whole patting Jax pockets but there was nothing there either.

"You Idiot How Come you Dont have any money I told you that you were taking me out today!" Lela yelled pulling on the collar of Jax shirt yanking him back and forward.

"Y-ou -said ou-t not buy-ing stu-ff as w-ell." Jax tried to say though it was very unclear what he ment Lela seemed to be out of luck.

"Umm if you need help I could pay it for you and your boyfriend." Kiara said though in her mind she was still fumming mad she had only gotten to each one of her delicious sweet dumplings and saying boyfriend was just one way of getting payback.

Kiara heard another Punch and the sound of something else breaking when the dust cleared Jax had to have been up to his ankles in dirt.

'Great there goes my ten thousand berries.' Kiara thought as she pulled out her small money purse giving it to the woman manager in charge.

"He's not my boyfriend." Lela said to kiara

'Right because Thank you isn't the first thing you say to someone who's bailed you out of a mess of trouble bitch.' Kiara thought before putting back on her fake face expression just because this girl had supernatural strength didn't mean she was a ninja though after that second hit it was kind of hard to argue.

"I'm sorry I just assumed please forgive me." Kiara said bowing to Lela.

Lela feeling bad now waved her hands in front of her "No I should apologize we ruined your meal and then you even paid for all this destruction I'm sorry and thank you umm sorry I don't think I got your name my name is Lela." Lela said as she took Kiara by the hand leading her outside the sweet shop leaving Jax behind.

"Oh my names Kiara sorry I probably should have introduced myself sooner umm Lela right is it okay if we leave your friend behind back there I'd feel kind of bad if he got into more trouble." Kiara asked though the being polite thing was already really getting on her nerves.

"You don't have to worry about that idiot he'll be fine he's lucky I didn't kill him.

"Oh okay if you say so." At that moment Kiara stomach growled louder than it should have faking a blush she pulled out her money purse to see how much money she had seeing that she had none she sighed.

Lela after a year of spending time with Naruto was sure he had done something to her because the old her wouldn't give two cares if this human starved to death but she found herself feeling mostly to blame and she had to keep up apperances as Fu said, Especially since it was her who caused all the damage and didn't bring any money relying to much on that idiot of a kitsune, She wonder how much trouble she would get into if she brung her home however knowing she had a dept to repay she might not have a choice.

"Ummm if you want you could come eat dinner at my place I mean I do owe you for paying for that mess we made.

"Are you sure I don't want to be a bother I mean beside I couldn't stand by while someone needed help you don't owe me anything." Kiara said although her stomach growled a bit louder than last time disagreeing with her.

"You know I don't think your stomach agrees." Lela said laughing.

"Lela laughing It's got to be the end of the world." Another voice familiar to Kiara said from behind the two Lela walking past Kiara to greet the person.

"Naruto done shopping already?" Lela asked ignoring the smart mouth comment she didn't want to break anything else today.

"Yeah I got everything on the list who's that?" Naruto asked walking with Lela toward Kiara.

Kiara turned around and as soon as she did she felt her heart skip a beat she looked at Naruto in the eyes and he looked at her's they stayed like that for a moment and it seemed like time froze, Until Kiara felt her skull heat up like it was on fire she could see something hear something roaring inside her mind she grabbed her skull with her left hand near where her tattoo was not wanting to ruin her moment nor her cover, She quickly made an excuse before dashing off never noticing Naruto doing the same thing only his hand was clutching his seal and he didn't have the strength to run away.

Kiara thinking she had gotten far enough away rested her back on a nearby wall "Just what the heck was that feeling."

Kiara looked at the ground only to see it become sand the sand was moving behind her and for some reason Kiara had a feeling she would regret the day she decided to look behind her, As she turned her head she could see a Metal cage and A small piece of paper in the middle of it and all around the cage looked to be a sandstorm caught around a tornado two eyes could be seen inside the Dark cage and a voice began to boom from all around Kiara.

"Well Now What Have We Here." The voice asked as kiara passed out the only thing she could Hear was An insane laughter as she fell into Darkness.


Alright this chapter I really wanted to do more but with my computer acting stupid me over my friend house typing this and me getting stuck watching the entire second season of A certain magical index it was SO AWSOME.

By the way I just felt that I should stop it here so hope you all enjoy it don't know when the next chapter will be up if my computer comply it will be up as soon as I can make it if my computer denies then well I'll bring the chapter out the second my computer acts right, Also I will give a better detail of how Kiara looks next chapter because I'm sure I did a bad job with that in this chapter.

Okay Special thanks To
dayfox96,GrimJowx and Darthjester13 thanks for your reviews

thanks to everyone else who read, reviewed and all the other things you can do on here.

Okay only one jutsu to explain to those who got confused.

Relentless Wind: a move where the user changes the direction of a person or persons body to move in a random direction a master of this jutsu can control where the person attacks by using the wind this only works for physical attacks and they have to be very close and it can be used once if used against three people and three times if used against one person in fu's case he used it to make the kits hit each other in the face.

Okay with all that out the way See you all later.