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Recording Studio
Jake: Let's get started and Loren why are you in you pj's?
Loren: Because its 8 am.
Ryan: I have mine on to.
Jake: Well let's get to recording.
Eddie: I am doing simply amazing first.
Ryan: Great because I saw the lyrics and put together a great music piece for the song.
Eddie: Ok.
(He walks into the booth and starts singing.)
I can't really explain what it is she does
But um, whatever it is
It's um, simply, simply amazing
Her head is on my chest, sun comes rolling in
We're lost in these covers, and all I feel is skin
I slowly kiss your face, beautiful in every way, you are (you are)
See I'm a man that don't believe in much
But I'll be damned, if I don't believe in us
And how we play a fight up in the bathroom
Next thing you know I'm making love to you
Girl, promise me you'll never change
She ain't perfect, but she's worth it
Every breath I breathe, for the life of me
And I know I might not deserve it
But she loves me, and it's simply amazing (you are),
Simply amazing (you are), simply amazing (you are)
And she loves me, and it's simply amazing, amaze-amazing
The girl's a work of art, and I can't help but stare
With a smile like the sunset, and the ocean is her hair
Ooohhh what she do ain't fair ooooohhh
She know me better, than I know myself, mhmmm
See I'm a man, that don't believe in much
But I'll be damned if I don't believe in us
Like when I said I loved you for the first time
And the tears dropped from your eyes
Girl, don't you ever change
Cause she ain't perfect, but she's worth it
Every breath I breathe for the life of me
And I know I might not deserve it
But she loves me, and it's simply amazing (you are)
Simply amazing (you are), simply amazing (you are)
And she loves me
There is nothing, in this world
That can keep me away from you
And there's nobody who could ever compare to you
Ooohhhhh
She ain't perfect (no she ain't), but she's worth it (I'm telling you she is)
Every breath I breathe, for the life of me
And I know I might not deserve it
But she loves me and it's simply amazing (you are)
Simply amazing (you are), simply amazing (you are)
And she loves me, and it's simply amazing
Eddie: So what do you guys think?
Loren: I loved it . (She runs up and kisses him passionately)
Jake: Loved it, this album is going to be awesome.
Ryan: Ok, next song.
Eddie: I'm in love with a girl I want it to have guitar like a rock type of sound.
Loren: Yay I can't wait to hear this.
Eddie: (Eddie whispers to her: The song is about you.)
Loren: I know.
So many people gonna say that they want you,
To try to get you thinking they really care,
But there's nothing like the warmth of the one
who has put in the time and you know is gonna be there,
Back your border when she knows someone crossed it,
Don't let nobody put you down, who your with
Take the pain of protecting your name,
from the crutch to the cane to the highwire
I'm in love with a girl who knows me better,
Fell for the woman just when I met her,
Took my sweet time when I was bitter,
Someone understands,
And she knows how to treat a fella right,
Give me that feeling every night,
Wants to make love when I wanna fight,
Now someone understand me,
I'm in love with a girl (I'm in love with) [x2]
After many broken backdoors and windows,
Through the valley of the love of the lost,
Is a hole that is cut through the souls falling down
from the thrones without any innuendos,
But you drown in a piece for the moment,
The moment was over in time,
Then its gone the hit and run the guiltless one has a short life
I'm in love with a girl who knows me better,
Fell for the woman just when I met her,
Took my sweet time when I was bitter,
Someone understands,
And she knows how to treat a fella right,
Give me that feeling every night,
Wants to make love when I wanna fight,
Now someone understand me,
I'm in love with a girl (I'm in love with) [x2]
Gonna tell you what you do to think you practice what you preach,
Now I know there's nothing we can't reach,
'cause the heart can't erase once it finds a place to be warm and welcome,
To be held in shelter
I'm in love with a girl who knows me better,
Fell for the woman just when I met her
Took my sweet time when I was bitter
Someone understands,
And she knows how to treat a fella right
Give me that feeling every night
Wants to make love when I wanna fight
Now someone understands me
I'm in love with a girl (I'm in love with) [x3]
Who knows me better
Wants to make love when I wanna fight
now someone understand me
Jake: That was good man.
Loren: It was really awesome and cool.
Eddie: Now are we free to go?
Jake: Yeah.
Loren: I am going to change, where is the bathroom Ryan?
Ryan: Over there.
Loren: Thanks.
(Loren changes in to a short sundress and her bikini, pink flip-flops, her hair in a pony tail.)
Eddie: You ready?
Loren: Yeah let's go to the beach. (Her phone rings and California Girls start playing) Hello
Mel: Hey what's up?
Loren: About to go to the beach you?
Mel: Going to the beach too.
Loren: I guess I will see you there is Ian coming?
Mel: Yeah.
Loren: Ok see you guys there.
Mel: Bye.
(She hangs up)
Eddie: Was that Mel?
Loren: Yeah she is coming to the beach too.
Eddie: Is Ian coming?
Loren: Yeah he is.
Eddie: Great because he said he can surf, so we are going to have a competition.
Loren: Sounds like fun.
Eddie: I can't wait to kick his ass.
At the beach
Loren: Hey bitch.
Mel: Hey. (She hugs her)
(They go put their stuff down)
Ian: Why do they say that?
Eddie: Say what?
Ian: Hey bitch.
Eddie: They always say that, Allison always says that.
Ian: Oh ok.
Eddie: I brought my board.
Ian: Me too.
Eddie: I am going to kick your ass.
Ian: No you are not.
(The both run to the water)
Mel: What are they doing?
Loren: Surfing completion. (She takes off her dress)
Mel: Oh ok. (She takes off hers too)
Loren: Want to tan?
Mel: Hell yea.
(Eddie and Ian are surfing)
Ian: I am beating you.
Eddie: Please watch this. (Eddie does a trick on his board)
Ian: How did you do that?
Eddie: I am from LA bro we surf here.
Ian: You had surfing lessons.
Eddie: No I am just a natural.
Ian: Fine I give up you is just too good. (Eddie does another trick)
(Back on the Sand)
Ian: Eddie won.
Loren: Goo job babe, now can you rub this sunscreen on my back I am done tanning.
Eddie: Sure.
Mel: So Eddie did his famous trick.
Ian: What you knew I was going to lose?
Mel: Eddie is like the best surfer in high school.
Eddie: Yeah I was going to be a surfer before the music thing.
Loren: You never told me that.
Eddie: I didn't think it was going to be permanent.
Loren: Oh, come on Mel want to go for a swim. (She kisses Eddie and gets up)
Mel: Yeah.
Eddie: Don't drown.
Loren: Whatever.
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