Here's chapter 4. by the way HOW COME I'M BARLEY GETTING ANY FRIGGIN REVIEWS?!
this is my first story and the only person who likes it is melknight. (thank you by the way.) still please review.
(like that's going to happen. T_T)
Jade sat down on the floor in the cell crying. "W-W-Why d-did this all h-h-happen to me?" she cried
then Rex walked back into her cell. this time he had a whip. "I saw you messaging your pathetic friends." he said
"do you really think they'll come and save you? you and Kitana couldn't stop me last time." he chukled
he then slaped her across in the face with the whip, leaving another cut there. Jade wished her evil would come out
but sadly it didn't. so she had know choice but to try to sound tough like ivy. "no that's not true my friends are coming
a-and y-y-you don't k-k-know a t-t-t-thing!" she yelled. but it only made him madder. "I saw this coming." she thought.
he punched her in the face and left. she began crying again. "oh god where is valley, I miss him so much."
she thought again.
kitana and her friends got to cookie country and beat whispy woods. "that wasn't hard at all." Kirby commented.
they then reached rasin ruins and kitana saw a scarfy. "hey what's that?" she asked. "uh be carful with that thing."
said Kirby. just then it attacked her. then she stabed it and went on. they got to the genie. when they beat him
Ivy asked, "wait if he was a genie how come we didn't get any wishes?" They ignored her instead. Suddenly Kitana sat down, covered her eyes and kept repeating "it's not fair." Then Valley walked over and said, "What's wrong Kitana?" Then she said, "no on excepts me and Jade for who we really are." "What do you mean?" Said blade which was the first thing he said.
after she explained it started raining so the went inside a cave. "I hope we can save Jade before it's to late." Kirby said.