A little scene that I forgot to add after day three, Night. I realize that I threw everyone off track, but I didn't see it added into the script I was following, so I went ahead and re watched the movie so I could add this scene. Again, I'm sorry for getting everyone confused. I suppose after I finish the story, I'll add it back in the order.

Chapter 4a:

Day 3 (Night):

We were all getting ready for bed when all of a sudden, we heard horses rushing into the area, I looked up to instantly seeing the Medjai coming in, all fires with their guns, and I sighed, I knew this wasn't going to go well. At all.

Rick told Evy to stay by the fire and handed her a gun.

"No, wait, wait! Wait for me. Wait." Evy went after him.

"Evy!" Jon exclaimed. "Excuse me, but didn't the man just say stay here?" He called after her.

"Evy!" He ran after her. I just sighed and stayed where I was, I was not about to get involved with this thing going on here.

The Medjai started shooting and throwing lilted torches on tents. I watched as an epic fight scene went on between the warriors of my people and my the others go on, and I couldn't help but sigh, even though I haven't been within my tribe in over a decade, I still couldn't bare see the warriors getting shot off their horses.

I eventually gave into my curiosity after my brother tackled one Medjai, whom appeared to be the leader of the group, and I walked over to them just enough to hear what they were saying during their scuffle.

I instantly knew who the leader was when his scarf fell off after being knocked from his horse, Ardeth Bay, the leader of the 12 Medjai tribes.

He just stared as my brother threatened him with a lit up firecracker. "Enough!" Ardeth said. "Stand down, stop fighting." He told his men in Arabic. He turned back to look at my brother, Evy and Jon, he noticed me for a moment, but he didn't make any other acknowledgement.

"We will shed no more blood, but you must leave. Leave this place, or die." He headed back to his horse. "You have one day." He mounted. "Let's go, back to home." He ordered as they all rode away.

I knew that it was a long shot, but I headed to the outside of this place anyway, seeing if I could catch him, and I did, Ardeth told his men to go ahead on that he would catch up with them in a moment.

"So it's true, you are Aaliyah Massari then?" He asked.

I nodded. "In the flesh." I said. "Long time no see Ardeth."

He just nods and looks at me for the longest time. "What are you doing here Aaliyah, you know what happened here, and what will happen if the creature arises again."

I nodded. "I know that, I'm only here because my brother asked me to come, and he knows that I want nothing to do with any of this." I told him. "My hands are clean Ardeth, I'm only here to keep my brother out of trouble, as if that's possible." I said with a sigh, shaking my head. "They don't know where I come from." I added. "I haven't told them anything, I fear it would raise too many questions."

Ardeth nodded. "It probably would. Do they know anything?" He asked.

I shook my head. "No, well, his sarcophagus kind of uh, fell down into the chamber, but it hasn't been opened."

"Okay, just, if you can, try to make sure they don't find too much out." He requested.

I nodded. "I'll try to do what I can without giving out too much information."

Ardeth nodded, "Well, it was good seeing you again, despite the situation." He said, and then he took off in the direction where his men went.

I went back to the campfire where Rick was trying to teach Evy how to fight. "And then mean it. Hit it right here."

She tried doing what she was told, but truth be told, she was so drunk that she fell right into him. I just shook my head and went to my sleeping bag, where I fell asleep.

Poll:

1. So, this wasn't too confusing was it? I mean the order that I had them in?

2. How did you like this little scene, especially their conversation?