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"... in your summary, you say that this is sasuke from after the 4th shinobi war. To have him defeated in the first chapter by one of the weakest characters in kill la kill doesn't make any sense to me. Sasuke at that point in time would be powerful enough to steamroll everyone at the school." - Guest#1
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"I...i don't understand. Why does the summary 'after' the war when your using the setup of the 'five kage summit' susake. That makes no sense almost like click bait, but I know you'll look at this and say nah. (Please change your summary to reflect your story)" - Guest#2
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"Awesome! Though I wonder how strong Sasuke currently is...I thought he'd at least be able to hold his own...curious curious...On another note, keep it up, I'm loving this so far XD" - MadaraUchiha-Chan
...huh?
Madara..Uchiha-Chan?
I can't believe it... They didn't write a comment about something I had missed, they didn't comment about my obvious misconception!
"Cmon I need chapter three!" - Guest#3
"Does this mean sasuke already killed itachi? Also great story btw" - The big pickle
I... I understand now..! Hope... Hope is, by far, much greater than Despair! I can't give in, as long as I have Hope on my side, I refuse to give up!
Huh...? It looks like there's one more comment, one filled with Hope!
"THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH YOU PEOPLE YOU DO NOT EVER MAKE SAS-UKE CHAN THE MAIN CHARACTER YOU MAKE HIM LIKE HE REALY IS A POWER HUNGRY LITTLE SELF ABSORBED EMO BATSTERD THAT IS SO FAR IN THE CLOSET HE HAS TURNED IT INTO HIS OWN BATCAVE AND THAT CUT'S HIMSELF AT NIGHT WHILE CRANKING ONE OUT TO HIS OLDER BROTHER! THAT IS THE REAL SAS-UKE AND THE ONE EVERYBODY WITH HALF A BRAIN KNOWS TO PUT IN THEIR STORIES! FUCKING UCHIHA FANGIRL'S ARE ALMOST AS BAD AS YAOI FANGIRL'S!" - Guest#4
...I'm not sure whether that was Hopeful or full of Despair..
Hello, sorry about that! I just finished playing Danganronpa, a murder-mystery game! It's theme is Hope and Despair, so pay attention or something. Anyways, I want to apologize. As the top two comments state, I made a mistake that seems to get rid of the fun of reading my story for them. And while I know there are currently only two of these comments, if more-than-one person feels a certain way about something, there are bound to be others. I'm afraid I will have to do a bit of re-thinking and editing. I also realize that Satsuki seeing "Chidori" for the first time isn't her actual first time... Chapter 2, I believe, Sasuke unleashed it on Takaharu. While i am happy(and very excited) that there are some that enjoy my wiriting, because I used to write soooo bad(bad grammar, bad spelling, little use of any descriptive words, etc), that someone actually wrote in their chapter's beginning Author's Note that they hate me. I'm glad I rose from that, and I'm still improving today.
Also, English IS my first language, so I was a bit ashamed of myself at that point.
Anyways, while I'm glad that there are some who enjoy my works, there are some picky people(or something like that) and whatever problems they find can bother them extremely. It will ruin the experience for them, even if others didn't notice or was able to overlook the error. I will take time to plan this out, rewrite only what's necessary, while at the same time creating a new route for chapter's 3 and 4 to go down. I think Sasuke got his curse mark too early, and I don't want to make Sasuke too strong, but I admit that he is a little weak.
So here's what's gonna happen:
By the time most of the you see this A/N, a poll will be up on my profile. The contents of the poll will be about the time/arc of Shippuden Sasuke come's from. Whether it be from the 4th War, Taka, Beginning(White Robe), or otherwise. Of course, different times means different powers and benefits, right? I'm going to list the basic benefits here, so that when you go to the poll, you know what you're looking for instantly:
Sasuke(Orochimaru's Hideout/White Robe)
- Sharingan
- Instant Access To Curse Mark Stage 2
Sasuke(Black, Sleeveless Uchiha Robe)
- Sharingan
- Instant Access to Curse Mark Stage 2
- Kirin
Sasuke(Taka/Akatsuki)
- Mangekyou Sharingan
- Amaterasu
- Mangekyou Sharingan
- Inferno-Style: Flame Control Techniques
- Distant
Sasuke(Five Kage Summit)
- Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan
- Inferno-Style: Flame Control Techniques
- Incomplete Susanoo
Sasuke(Fourth Great Ninja War)
- Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan
- Rinne-Sharingan
- Inferno-Style: Flame Control Techniques
- Full-Body Susanoo
Then again, these might not even appear in the story. These are just the benefits I see of these Sasukes. Anyways, see ya in the next chapter!
Oh yeah, all full-chapter author's notes are deleted after a chapter is ready, and I will be revising this story, so make sure to re-read it if you have the time(it might be an "IF you want to follow what's going on")
