Author's Note: Wow I never knew how much work it is to keep writing these things. This one I have worked on all day yesterday and completed it around midnight. 2,806 words I wrote for you guys(not including the A.N. I was about to make this chapter 6 but decided that I better keep this in chapter 5 the last part. Chapter 6 will be where all the fun begins yeah I know I promised that before XD but I mean it this time.) I have somewhat of an idea with who I want Jean to have his first time with…not going to say because that will ruin everything. I am getting some ideas from reviews. Any way I want to once again thank all readers old and new for reading it and writing reviews and stuff. I will probably use Doomlord1234's idea(if I can make time in between my studies.) Anyway I shrugged off my homework long enough so I must now return to it.
As always everypony, ENJOY THIS CHAPTER/PART…oh ps, I wasn't going to stop the story at chapter 5 sorry for the mix up. *Yawn* I need some sleep first than homework…Goodnite everypony Chapter 6 coming soon!
…2 hours later Rarity's Boutique…
Jean forced a smile as he looked at his new clothes which were a full tuxedo. Jean saw how hard Rarity worked to make the pants for him. Rarity wiped a single drop of sweat from her forehead.
"Well don't you look just charming?" Rarity asked eyeing her work but stopping at the zipper of the pants. Jean was about to move away but thought that would be rude.
"Well she did make me a suite. Might as well let her enjoy the view." Jean thought to himself. Twilight cleared her throat loud enough for Rarity to hear.
"Right sorry. Soooo Twilight how about we show him the rest of the town." Rarity asked Twilight. Twilight nodded
"Did you introduce him to Fluttershy yet?" Rarity asked as she made her way to the door?
"I don't think so, do you think she would want to meet him?" Twilight asked
"Let's find out." Rarity said.
…Sugar Cube Corner…
Pinkie Pie had just helped finish the last batch of cupcakes as she slowly trotted over to the punch bowl and smiled devilishly. She turned slowly watching Mrs. Cake about to leave the room.
"Ok dear, I am going to take a break. I know you can get everything else ready on your own…Oh and try not to make a mess again dearie." Mrs. Cake said as she walked out of the kitchen.
"Ok Mrs. Cake you can count on me." Pinkie Pie said.
"Tonight will be the night I get to have my first naughty ride….and it's going to be with a cutie." Pinkie said as she grabbed the bottle of apple flavored alcohol. Just she was about to mix it in with the punch she stopped herself.
"Wait if I pour this into the punch it will get everypony happy as well….hmmmmmmm. I know I will mark one of these cups with the letter J and only pour this happy juice in his cup." Pinkie said as she grabbed a paper cup and searched for a crayon.
…Outside Fluttershy's house…
Jean admired the animals that surrounded the cottage in front of him.
"Nice place." Jean thought to himself.
"Where are we and whose house is this?" Jean asked
"It's one of our friends house. Her name is Fluttershy, but be warned she's kinda…-"
"Let me guess shy?" Jean interrupted Twilight.
"Yeah, how did you know?" Twilight asked staring at Jean
"Her name pretty much gives it away." Jean said. Twilight giggled a little realizing that the last three letters of her friends name spell shy. Rarity knocked on the door.
"Hey darling it's me and Twilight here." Rarity called through the door. "And we have someone we would like you to meet." She continued. Seconds later the door slowly creaked open. Fluttershy slowly popped her head out from behind the door and stared immediately at Jean. She was about to slam the door shut but then she noticed Jean was smiling at her.
"Hi." Jean said Fluttershy epped as she slammed the door shut.
"Ooooook, I take it that she doesn't like to meet strangers." Jean said to Twilight who was rubbing her face on his leg.
"Twilight?" Jean asked snapping Twilight out of her fantasy.
"Huh…oh yes she is." Twilight said. Jean rolled his eyes. Rarity turned around
"Give me a minute guys I need to talk to Fluttershy about our new stud I mean friend." Rarity said as she slowly opened the door closed it behind her. Jean squatted down so that his eyes met Twilights. She blushed a little and closed her eyes expecting a kiss. Jean sighed again.
"Listen Twilight you're a nice…pony or mare thing but don't you think we should take time to get to know each other?" Jean asked. Twilight opened her eyes.
"We could do that after you and I…you know."
"We shouldn't rush into anything here Twiligh-"
"You don't like me?" Twilight asked looking as though she was about to cry
"Nonononono, it's not that I don't like you it's just-"
"But you were so willing to mate me in the shower." Twilight said taking another step towards Jean. Jean swallowed hard remembering what he was about to do in Rarity's shower.
"Yeah true bu-" Twilight interrupted Jean with a kiss then she broke it seconds later.
"I think I read somewhere in my science class or was it the discovery channel that female's act very aggressive during the mating season. But what season does that take place?" Jean thought to himself. Before Twilight could say another word Fluttershy's door opened. Both Twilight and Jean turned their attention to the yellow Pegasus as she slowly made her way outside than towards them with Rarity following.
"He-hello Je-Jean, my name i-is Fluttershy." Fluttershy said in almost a whisper as she stared at the ground.
"She reminds me of me when I first started high school. Maybe I should apporoach her like nurse Joy….nah I'll just be nice in my own way." Jean said to himself
"Nice to meet you Fluttershy, my name is Jean." He said sticking out his hand. Fluttershy flinched alittle.
"Sorry about that, I just wanted to shake your hand." Jean said Fluttershy slowly looked up at him. Their eyes met and for the first time Fluttershy was at ease. She couldn't help but star deep into Jean's eyes. Fluttershy smiled and slowly stuck her hoof out. Jean gently grabbed it and slowly shook it up and down. Fluttershy was still staring deeply at Jean's eyes as he smiled back. Fluttershy was about to lean in for a kiss but stopped herself.
"This isn't like me. I was about to kiss a strange creature…a strange but cute creature…I can't be in heat can I?" Fluttershy said to herself as she turned from Jean to Rarity who smiled
"Should we get going to Pinkie's party?" Fluttershy asked. Twilight sighed
"Yeah, but it was supposed to be kept secret from Jean." Twilight said
"Party?" Jean asked
"Why of coarse stud I mean Jean but it was supposed to be a surprise as it said in the invitations Pinkie sent out. Pinkie Pie is throwing you a Welcome party so you can meet everypony." Rarity said walking towards him
"Is that's why I am wearing this tux?" Jean asked.
"Yes it is." Rarity said.
"Great a Welcome party, welcome as an welcome to the rest of my fucking life here in nice nice land…Which also means that these ponies want me to stay here…No I can't stay here without my Game Info Magazines and my energy drinks and soda and my video games. I didn't get a chance to play MW3 yet….I drank 3 12packs of mtn dew just for the 1 hour and 30 minutes of extra xp time. They will go unused…" Jean looked at the three smiling ponies that stood in front of him.
"But it would probably hurt them to know that I want to leave this place…and since there is no other way to get back home…I might as well make the best of my existence's here-ooooooooooh please gawd if you could hear me. Just kill me now…I don't care how just kill me nooooooooowwww." Jean cried to himself.
"Well that's…so nice of her to welcome me to hel-….such a wonderful place such as this. Don't worry you guy's…ponies. I will act surprise when we get there. Now where is she having this party?" Jean asked trying to keep himself from showing sadness.
"It's at Sugar Cube Corner. Follow me." Twilight said as she began to walk. The group followed
…Sweet Apple Acres in the apple orchard…
"We don't have ta get Jean drunk just ta get him to buck us. And I don't really care that you want his virginity first. As long as you remember that we have ta share our bucking time. Especially when spring comes around." AppleJack said stopping in front of Rainbow Dash.
"I know that, but-"
"But nothing Rainbow Dash. We are not going to get Jean drunk. We are going to use our…sweet apple pies to get him." AppleJack said
"Apple pies?"
"You know what I mean."
"Food?"
"Nope, our marehoods remember when I sat down on top of Jean's tree trunk. He didn't resist me." AppleJack said
"Ooooohhh. I get it" Rainbow Dash said. She then jumped up.
"I have just the game that would allow us a chance alone with him tonight…spin the bottle." Rainbow Dash said with a smile.
…3 hours later Ponyville Square …
"Well it looks like it's almost time." Twilight said watching the crowd of ponies mostly mares trotting towards Sugar Cube Corner. Some of the mares notice Jean and began to walk towards him.
"Uh oh." Rarity said as she jumped in front of Jean.
"Sorry girls but you're going to have to-"
"Awwwwww, isn't he just the cutest thing ever." One mare said.
"Hay stud are you going to stay her with us? If so could I be part of your herd?" another mare asked. Jean smiled nervously. Pinkie Pie tapped Twilight on the shoulders. Twilight yelped in fear and turned around. Jean, Rarity, and Fluttershy were also shocked seeing Pinkie Pie had suddenly appeared behind them.
"Well this is just bad…since there are too many ponies coming to the party we can't surprise Jean." Pinkie Pie pouted as Rarity turned around trying to back the crowd of ponies closing in on Jean who didn't seem to notice the commotion that was happening behind him.
"Well…he….kinda already knows-be-because of me." Fluttershy said Pinkie glared at her than smiled.
"Well that's ok we will just have the party out here now than." Pinkie said hopping over Fluttershy and walking past Twilight then stopped in front of Jean.
"Welcome to Ponyville Jean," She said lustfully to him as she pushed him backwards towards the crowd of ponies.
"OK EVERYPONY! LET'S GET THIS WELCOME PARTY STARTED!" Pinkie yelled at the top of her lungs. The crowd of mares roared as they charged forward towards Jean. Celestia and Luna jumped in front of them causing all the ponies to stop in their tracks and bow.
*gasp* "Princess Luna? Princess Celestia?" said Rarity, Fluttershy, Twilight, and Pinkie Pie said in unison then bowed. Jean looked around confused as the two princesses turned and walked toward him. Jean bowed like all the other ponies had done.
"They must be like rulers or something…is both of them together? Are they lesbians?" Jean thought to himself.
"No we're not. Luna is my sister." Celestia said raising an eyebrow. Jean fell to the ground shocked that Celestia response. He then looked up and saw that his face was close enough to her face for a kiss. He slowly backed away from her.
"Holy shit biscuits did she just read my mind…what is she?...so much for my Princess Peach theory of all princesses." Jean thought to himself
"Yes I read your mind and who is this Princess Peach?" Celestia asked walking close to Jean. Princess Luna smiled at him Jean smiled back nervously than turned his attention back to Princess Celestia.
"Uhhh, no one." Jean said
"Princess Celestia what brings you here?" Twilight asked trying to mask her jealousy.
"I sensed an energy blast earlier and some rumors found their way to me about a cute creature in Ponyville. I and Luna just had to see him for ourselves…And I see they weren't lying." Celestia said as she smiled at Jean.
The crowd of girl ponies stood up as they watched Jean with a hint of lust. The stallions stood off to the side mumbling under their breath.
AppleJack and Rainbow Dash pushed through the crowd but stopped as they saw both Princess Luna and Princess Celestia standing in front of Jean. Rainbow Dash noticed that Luna was staring dreamily at Jean.
"Great now we have to compete against the two Princesses." Rainbow Dash whispered to AppleJack.
"Who are you guys?" Jeans asked
"Oh my, pardon my rudeness human. I am Princess Celestia, I am the one who brings daylight and rules Equestria alongside my little sister Luna who brings night time."
"We are happy to meet you…human" Luna said walking from behind Celestia and toward Jean.
"Ok, quick question…I-" Jean stopped himself as he stared at Twilight who smiled at him. He then remembered her sad life style.
"I want to leave here but then…she will be- ohhhh shut up Jean, these goddesses ponies is your ticket to reuniting with your beloved MW3 game and soda and cheeseburgers with fries and cussing out stupid fucks who uses RPG's with danger close…Not to mention the new Halo games." Jean looked around and saw AppleJack and Rainbow Dash smiling at him. He then looked back to see Rarity, Pinkie Pie, and Fluttershy who were also smiling at him. He then looked at Twilight who was now lustfully smiling at him.
"Oh for fucks sake, I haven't been here for more than 6 hours at the most and I am already falling for these ponies. I wish I can be as cold blooded as Wolverine…speaking of cold blooded where the hell did Spyro go? Some hero he turned out to be…he's probably trying to free another dragon or getting his rocks off kissing fairies."
Celestia started to giggle a little.
"Oh shit I forgot she could read minds." Jean said to himself
"You're quite the funny human aren't you?" Celestia asked smiling. Luna licked her lips as she took another step towards Jean.
"We never heard of a human before like my sister has but we are willing to…open thy self-up to knew creatures." Luna said. Twilight jumped in between them.
"How about we start this party and let Jean relax and enjoy himself." Twilight said. Both Luna and Celestia nodded but as soon as they were about to say something one of the guard stallions whispered into Celestia's ear.
"Oh my, well I guess I have to start right away. Luna we have something that needs our attention in Manehattan." Celestia said Luna sighed. She walked up closer to Jean and motioned him to bend over. Jean complied and bent over.
"We shall come back soon to…talk more with you in private cutie." Luna whispered into Jean's ear and turned around and walked to Celestia.
"Well see everypony later me and my sister have important matters to attend to down in Manehattan. " Celestia said aloud. She turn towards Jean and winked as she and Luna flew off.
"Great more ponies that like me…will somebody please just fucking kill me already? And if somebody planning on trying kill me…make sure I don't see it coming….like a plasma grenade out of nowhere or some shit like that" Jean said to himself.
"WELL WHAT ARE WE WAITING FOR EVERYPONY? LET'S PAAAAAAARRRRRRTY." Pinkie said aloud and everypony rushed towards Jean asking him questions.
"How do we go about our plan we can't play spin the bottle with all these other mares here." AppleJack asked.
"Don't worry, this party is during a work night. It won't be long before everypony has to return home to get ready for work tomorrow but just to make things go faster I have another plan." Rainbow Dash said
"I have to get Jean alone somehow...Oh pony I wished Rarity would've never interrupted. If it wasn't for her… *sigh* I have to be patient and follow the plan she laid out." Twilight said as she turned to Jean who was trying to answer every one of the other ponies' questions.
AppleJack and Rainbow Dash made their way through the crowd and joined up with Rarity, Pinkie Pie, and Fluttershy.
"Listen up every pony I know that every girl here wants a piece of Jean. We can only get him by getting rid of the competition." Rainbow Dash said to the four ponies. Rainbow Dash realized they were missing somepony.
"Hold on." Rainbow Dash said. She flew up and searched for Twilight. She spotted the purple pony as she tried to get Jean's attention. Rainbow Dash whistled and called out to her. Twilight looked at Rainbow Dash as she waved her to come here. Twilight teleported over to where there was a clearing from the crowd. The six ponies formed a circle.
"Ok we are going to work together to get all these other mares away from Jean. After that, it's everypony for her selves. Got that?" Rainbow said. The five ponies nodded in unison.
…Somewhere outside of Sweet Apple Acres…
"Hey, um Spike." Applebloom called out to him. Spike turned around quickly meeting face to face with Applebloom.
"Applebloom? What are you doing here?" Spike asked quickly wiping a tear from his right eye.
"I want to talk ta ya for a sec. Is that alright?" Applebloom asked
"Yes it is. What do you want to talk about?" Spike asked. Applebloom smiled devilishly at him but since the sun had disappeared from over the horizon Spike couldn't really see the Applebloom's face. The only thing that stood out was her larger red bowtie.
Ps. I promise to never make another boring chapter like this one was and feel free to point out any mistakes I made.
