Author's Notes: Well, it seems like my story might go on for another 10 to 20 chapters…which for me is a good and bad thing. It's a good thing for me because it gives me something to do besides gaming(I am getting tired of people saying all I do is play video games or surf the web.(however, it will take me longer to update the next few chapters as I approach my finals week.) The bad thing about writing this story for me is well nothing LMAO Anyway I like to give shout out to everypony and I like to apologize to everypony who made a fanfic that I promise to read. Please give me a week or two to finish my finals and I promise I will take time and to read you ponies work(because I know some of you made very good stories!) I won't be on Xbox live as much because I have to prepare notes to use on my finals(I love it when teachers especially Junior College teachers let their student use notes on finals). I am forever nervous but I know I must fight through it and give you ponies updates. Thank you everypony for reading and reviewing my story up to this point.
AS ALWAYS EVERYPONY ENJOY THIS LONG PART OF CHAPTER 10 AND GET SOME SLEEP EVERYPONY PULLING ALL NIGHTERS ON TEAM DEATH MATCH IS NOT GOOD GOING INTO THE WORK WEEK! XD
…Apple Orchard, Sweet Apple Acres…
Applebloom, Twilight, and AppleJack had made their way into the apple orchard searching for the place Big Macintosh lead Jean and Spike to.
"Are you sure you think your brother would hurt him?" Twilight Sparkle asked with a worried look on her face.
"I'm not sure but Twi but by the sound of his voice it would seem like he would." AppleJack said
"Is Spike going ta be alright?" Applebloom asked
"Don't ya worry yer pretty little head Applebloom. I'm sure our big brother wouldn't hu-"
AppleJack stopped as soon as she saw Spike running towards them.
"Follow me quick!" Spike shouted almost out of breath. Without another word the group of mares followed Spike as he led them all the way to where Jean was lying unconscious on the ground.
"Dear Celestia! What happened?" Twilight shouted as she looked him over.
"Big Macintosh didn't like the jokes he was telling and kicked him…well first in his privates than the second time in his butt." Spike said. Applebloom ran over towards Spike and hugged him using her front two hooves.
"At least your fine, I was worried he might've killed you...Is that creature alright Twilight?" Applebloom asked still nuzzling her face on Spikes neck. AppleJack ran over to Jean and nuzzled his right shoulder. She began to cry when Jean didn't move.
"Don't worry AppleJack, he's fine…he is just unconscious. We need to get him to the hospital and fast." Twilight said wiping tears from her eyes.
…Jean's Dream…
"Sometimes, I wish I could just live in the world of video games. Forgetting about all the bad stuff that happened to me in reality…Maybe that's why I spend so many hours playing video games…my life has no meaning without them…I would be fine with becoming that one guy who stays a virgin practically his whole lifetime. As long as I have my 360…Loneliness would never find my heart…but…a twist in fate brought me here to a world of talking and magical ponies. I guess in a way I got my wish…to live in a fantasy…forever leaving behind my bad times back in reality…back home."
"Please don't ever leave my side big brother!" His little sister's voice echoed in his mind.
"Even still…after all the bad shit…I can't leave my sister behind…I promised my parents…I promised her…"
"Wake up Jean! It's time to get ready for school!" A voice called to him. Jean woke up sitting up straight in his bed rubbing his head.
"Wait, am I back home?" Jean asked as he slowly rolled out of bed. He could feel his feet touch the warm carpet of his room.
"Fucking EPIC!" Jean shouted as he ran towards his closet.
"I know we just met Jean…but I love you." Twilight's voice echoed in his mind. Jean stopped but quickly returned to rummaging through his closet. He pulled out a pair of pants and a shirt which read (FPS Frag the weak, hurdle the dead) on the front.
"Th-tha-that was great ridin there sugar cube." AppleJacks voice echoed in his mind.
"Nope fuck you conscious. I am back home in California where I belong. I don't have to worry about big stupid red neck horses that kicks the living shit out of people nor do I have to worry about fucking around with girl ponies wanting to be in a herd with me. I mean I am 15 years old for Pillar of Autumn's sake…I don't know anything about raising children. I can barely raise myself out of bed in the morning." Said to himself as he made his way to his bedroom door and slowly opened it.
The aroma of pancakes and bacon filled the air as Jean walked over to the bathroom. He took in a deep breath than exhaled happily.
"Bacon….meat..Oh it's going to be so nice to eat-"
"Jean can you hear me?" Twilight's voice echoed in his mind.
"Just ignore the pony voice in your mind Jean. It was just a dream…a cruel sick fucking dream that I'm no longer inside of." He said to himself running to the bathroom. He took a 30 minute shower before hopping out. He then toweled himself dry. He quickly put on his shirt and reached for his pants but stopped himself.
"Damnit I forgot my underwear." He said to himself
…Ponyville Hospital, Patient Room…
"Spike I need you to write a letter for me." Twilight said as she walked away from Jean's hospital bed.
"Ok, I am ready." Spike said. The other five ponies sat on the ground staring at Jean with tears in their eyes.
"Don't worry everypony, he is alright…I am positive he'll wake up soon." Twilight said trying to hide the sadness she felt in her heart. She turned to Spike.
"Dear Princess Celestia, there was a confrontation between Jean and Big Macintosh. As a result Jean is now in some sort of coma at the Ponyville hospital. I have an idea on how to bring him out of it but I need your help. Your faithful student Twilight Sparkle." It took her every ounce of her will power to stop herself from crying as Spike rolled up the parchment and flamed it with his fire.
"I hope she answers soon." Twilight said biting her bottom lip and staring at Jean who was peacefully lying down on the hospital bed.
"It's like he's sleeping." Spike said.
"Wait til I get my hands on Big Macintosh. I'll-"
"Whoa whoa there Rainbow Dash, Big Macintosh is my brother so I will deal with him." AppleJack said.
"This is just…awful." Fluttershy said slowly walking over to Jean's bed than looking him over.
Rainbow Dash sighed as the others stared blankly at the floor. Minutes later Spike burped out a letter Twilight used her magic to catch and open the rolled up parchment.
"Dear Twilight, Sparkle I am teleporting to the hospital now with Luna. Stand back." Twilight read. She did just as the letter told her. No sooner did she take a couple of steps back Princess Celestia and Luna appear from a flash of white light. The other 5 ponies saw this and bowed.
"No need to be so formal my little ponies." Celestia said. Luna ran over to Jean's bed and looked him over.
"OH MY! WHAT HAPPENED?" Luna yelled as tears began to fall from her eyes. Everypony except Luna and Celestia turned to Spike for the answer.
"Well, Big Macintosh asked Jean a question. Jean tried to lighten the mood by telling a joke but the big guy didn't find it funny so he ended up kicking him in his privates than his butt." Spike said.
"*Sigh* I know my brother was looken out fer me but that was going to far." AppleJack said walking towards the door. Luna sobbed as Celestia gently patted her on the back with her hoof.
"Twilight you said you had an idea on how to bring him out of this. It isn't what I think it is, is it?" Celestia asked. Twilight walked next her.
"Yes, but I know that-"
"Twilight, I know you love him so but forcing your way into his dream isn't going to make him come back. His body has to come out of it on its own." Celestia said still comforting Luna.
"Please Princess Celestia, if he doesn't come back to me…to us…" Twilight began to cry. Luna heard this and stopped crying herself.
"Yo-you love him to?" Luna asked using her hoof to wipe the tears from her eyes.
"Yes" She sobbed.
"Listen to me carefully my little ponies. Jean just came to Ponyville and already he was overwhelmed by everyponies love. You ponies should take time and get to know him before you decide you really love him." Celestia said. All the other ponies nodded in agreement.
"Where did AppleJack go?" Rainbow Dash asked.
"I think she went to talk to her big brother." Pinkie Pie said looking at the door.
"D-do you think we should go after her?" Fluttershy asked in a whisper like tone.
"No, it's best if we don't get involved in family matters." Twilight said turning towards Celestia.
"Please Princess, just allow me to talk with him…even if it's only for a second." Twilight pleaded. Princess Celestia sighed.
…Jean's Dream…
Jean was seated comfortably at the kitchen table quickly stuffing himself full of pancakes and bacon as if he hadn't eaten for days.
"Oh my, aren't you a hungry boy this morning?" Jean's mom said looking at her son quickly devouring the food in front of him. Jean stopped, looked up at his mom than swallowed.
"Yeah, you can say that." Jean said using a napkin to wipe the syrup off of his face.
"Don't linger around too long Jean, remember you need to leave here early to walk you sister to school today." Jean's dad said as he headed for the door. His sister was sitting next to him happily eating her pancakes.
"Are you going to have breakfast dear?" Jean's mother asked.
"I'll take a kiss and two pancakes to go." Jean's dad said turning around and kissing the mother on her lips.
"Ew!" Jean's sister shouted as her face twisted in disgust. Jean was too busy scarfing down his orange juice to notice the display of love. Jean's mom handed his father two pancakes on a paper plate with just the right amount of syrup before he head for the door.
"Have a good day everyone!" He shouted as he closed the door behind him.
"Jean you and your sister should get going or you'll both be late." Jean's mom said. Jean nodded as he stopped eating and excused himself from the table.
"This is how it was…Every day from the time I turned 13 on, I would wake up, eat breakfast, then take my little sister to school. Then I would walk two blocks to my school. The one day vacation seemed to disrupt that."
"Let's go sis." Jean said grabbing his coat off of the couch. His sister did the same and followed him outside.
"See ya mom and thanks for the awesome breakfast you made for us." Jean said as he and his sister waived goodbye and closed the door behind him. His mother sat at the kitchen table and smiled. She then checked the clock.
"Oh my, I should get ready to head off to work myself." She said standing up.
"All I had to do to go back home was to get my ass kicked by some heck pony? Well…that's better than having to put on some stupid glitter glue shoe and shout 'there is no place like home'...Maybe I should buy a gun and carry it with me just in case I am transported back to pony land. Next time I come face to face with that red pony version of Chuck Norris, I'll shoot him right in the face." Jean said to himself as he formed a gun with his hands.
"Pow!, Revenge!" Jean shouted. His sister stared at him.
"Big brother, what are you doing?" She asked
"Hehehe, nothing ." Jean lied scratching the back of his head.
…Apple Orchard, Sweet Apple Acers…
"What in the hay were you thinking? Or did ya think at all?" AppleJack shouted at the red pony. Big Macintosh didn't pay her any attention. He continued working bucking apple trees and watching them land in the basket.
"So now you ain't gonna answer me?" AppleJack shouted again.
"I was makin shore you weren't being taken advantage of." He said in a calm voice.
"Ok I can understand that but ya didn't need to go bucking crazy an kicking him in his apples! What if he's unable to…recover?" AppleJack asked
"He'll be alright." Big Macintosh said in a calm voice as he used his back to pick up the two baskets full of apples. He then slowly walked away from AppleJack. She sighed as she followed him back to the barn.
…Jean's Dream…
Jean waived his sister goodbye as she walked up the steps to her school. Jean checked the clock which sat on top of the School house.
"Seven forty five am that gives me forty five minutes of time to myself before class starts for me. Time for some Ratchet and Clank: Size Matters." Jean said as he took off his backpack.
"I hope I didn't forget to pack my PSP in my backpack." Jean said as he unzipped his bag.
"Jean? Is that you?" Twilight asked slowly trotting across the street towards him.
"Yeah, hey Twilight. Now if you excuse me I have a date with Ratchet and-WHAT THE FUCK? TWILIGHT? HOW IN THE HELL DID YOU GET HERE?" Jean shouted as he turned around.
"Well, first of all you're in a dream. Second of all I got here by Celestia transporting me here." Twilight said stopping in front of Jean. He looked down at her.
"Again with Celestia and her magi- wait if she has the power to transport you here why can't she send me back home?" Jean asked
"Transporting a pony from one dream to another is a lot less power consuming than transporting a being to another planet or place." Twilight said smiling at him.
"Oh how fucking convenient." Jean said throwing up both his arms in the air.
"This can't be a fucking dream…the pancakes, the bacon, and let's not forget the shower all felt real. No, Twilight is just a mirage here to make me go crazy." Jean thought. Twilight sighed.
"This isn't going to be easy." Twilight said to herself.
