Authors Notes: Well next chapter will be the end of the first part of A Twist in Fate but don't fret next part will be posted here. Thank you fellow readers for reading and enjoying my story. If you have any questions please feel free to pm me..if it's about A Twist in Fate 2 I will answer any questions except for things like what's going to happen? XD

As always everypony ENJOY THIS CHAPTER!

PS: sorry for the lag whole bunch of shit have been happening. Chapter 52 will be a long read though so prepare.

PSS: RockingDoubleK please don't be mad at me for posting this before you were done editing…and thanks for your help. XD

UPDATE!(7/17/12): I will be re-writing A Twist in Fate. I have however opened a poll to see how many ppl will be okay with this. The poll will stay open for one day. If i feel that enough ppl are not okay with this, I will leave the story as is. But if ppl favor the re-write Idea I will start right away so I can update every three days

...Outside of the ballroom...

"I need you to take her to my guest table and make sure Jean doesn't see her... I don't know what will happen if they see each other." Celestia said. Luna chuckled nervously as she moved herself nearer Celestia.
"Be careful... she cried herself to sleep. I didn't use an enchantment, but... if she wakes up... don't hesitate to use it." Celestia said as she magically lifted the sleeping child and gently lay her on Luna's back.
"Who will watch her?" Luna asked.
"I will, sister." Celestia said with a smile. Luna raised an eyebrow at her.
"But, won't yo-"
"Do not worry about it Luna, just do as I ask, please." Celestia demanded. Luna nodded her head before turning to enter the ballroom.
"Wait! Don't go through there, Luna, use my entrance around the back." Celestia said.
"Okay." Luna said.

...inside the ballroom...

"Oh my fucking gawd... this asshole is lagging!" Jean said. Rainbow Dash giggled as Jean impatiently tapped his hoof on the floor.
"LAG! Dude! Get out of the fucking lobby with your stupid Walmart-ass connection!" Jean yelled. Rainbow Dash laughed hard.
"I'll have you know that-"
"-You're a noob. Yeah, I pretty much figured that while you were staring at the cherry pie like you just got an AC-130 by care-package-luck, asswipe. How about I make it easier on you..." Jean said before pushing the earth stallion's plate down the white clothed table. The earth stallion snorted angrily as he trotted after his plate.
"Fucking noobs," Jean whispered to Rainbow Dash.
"Yeah, I hate fucking noobs too!" Pinkie said before eating the cherry pie in one gulp. Jean and Rainbow Dash both laughed at her.
"Please... try not to make too much of a fool of yourself. We're supposed to be mature." Twilight said to Jean mentally. Jean looked around for her, but couldn't see her among the crowd.
"I am right behind Rainbow Dash, Jean. Just keep the line moving and no more being rude, ok?" Twilight demanded.
"Sorry, how about I make it up to you by us finding a nice quite place t-"
"No, Jean, not now." Twilight interrupted. The lights suddenly dimmed Jean and Twilight looked towards the stage.
"What a buzzkill." Jean whispered.
Princess Celestia stood on stage and smiled at the crowd. When her eyes met Jean's she frowned for a second before quickly turning them away.
"I hope my hiding his sister won't upset him too much." Celestia thought before she drew in a deep breath.
"Fillies and Gentlecolts welcome to the 49th annual herd marriage ceremony. I am so glad to see this tradition being carried on here in Ponyville. Tonight we get to witness many young stallions and mares announce who they are planning on marrying. As all of you young ponies know, this is only the first step, but luckily for you this will be the easiest. Tonight will be a special night because not only will the young couples announce their engagement but as requested by many mares, the stallions will show their special talent. I hope everypony enjoys the show." Celestia said before bowing and exiting the stage. As she did everypony within the ballroom stomp and cheered. Jean was among them cheering just as loud as the other stallions and mares. Pinkie Pie snuggled near Jean causing him to stop and smile at her.
"How about that creampie?" She whispered. Jean looked around and saw that the rest of his herd was too busy listening to Mayor Mare's speech to noticed them talking.
"Where can we do it?" Jean whispered back. Pinkie smiled.
"Well w-"
"Hey Jean." Luna whispered. Jean jumped a little in surprise before turning around to face Luna.
"Sorry I didn't mean to scare you." Luna said.
"Hey Princess did you want to make a creampie with us?" Pinkie asked.
"A creampie? We already had bakers make a lot already. Why would we need to make more?" Luna asked Pinkie laughed but was quickly shushed by Rarity.
"Um, she didn't mean it in that way Luna." Jean said before chuckling quietly.

...Applebloom's room, Apple Families House...

Applebloom, Scootaloo, Sweetie Belle and Spike all sat in a circle quietly staring at each other. Every Time Spike's eyes meet with Scootaloo's, she'd quickly look away. Sweetie Bell and Applebloom however stared at Spike lovingly. Every second or so Applebloom and Sweetie Belle would attempt move closer to him but right before they could touch him Scootaloo would stare at them in anger.
"This is so stupid." Scootaloo said suddenly, breaking the silence which seemed to have lasted for years.
"What's wrong Scootaloo?" Sweetie asked with a worried look on her face. Scootaloo sat on her hind legs folding her front hooves across her chest.
"I just don't...feel comfortable with him being here." Scootaloo huffed. Sweetie Belle and Applebloom stared at each other than at Spike.
"Oh, I can leave if you want m-"
"No Spike, it's okay." Sweetie said.
"No it's n-"
"Come on Scootaloo, he ain't hurtin nopony." Applebloom said.
"I think you two should just kiss so you won't be so nervous around him." Sweetie suggested. Scootaloo shot her a dirty look before turning her back to her. Spike looked down to the ground hiding his blush. Applebloom tapped her front left hoof under her chin before hoping to her hooves smiling.
"Ah know how ta get Scootaloo ta get along with Spike. We could play a game like spin the bottle." Applebloom exclaimed. Scootaloo snorted.
"Forget it. I am not playing spin the bottle." Scootaloo grumbled.
"What's the matter Scootaloo? Are you chicken? Should I do my chicken call? Scootaloo! Scoot Scoot Scootaloo!" Sweetie teased. Scootaloo narrowed her eyes at her.
"Fine, I'll play the stupid game." Scootaloo said. Applebloom rushed out of the room and returned quickly with a bottle in her mouth.

...45 minutes later Celestia's Table, Cantorlot Ballroom...
Celestia's table sat near the back facing the main stage. Her table was big compared to the others but only she and Rena occupied it. The table like the others was covered in white cloth. On it sat a couple of trays of fruits, vegetables, desserts, and a pot of tea with two small pink cups.
"I wonder what would happen if I wake her." Celestia thought. She looked towards the stage and saw that the red stallion was singing his last verse.
"Looks like Jean will be on next...I did promise to let her see her brother." Celestia thought as she closed her eyes. Her horn glowed blue and so did Rena's body. Rena slowly opened her eyes.
"Br-brother?" she moaned as she sat up in her chair. Her head turned slowly to the left than the right. "Where am I..." Rena asked rubbing the sleep out of her eyes.
"The Cantorlot Ballroom sweetie." Celestia said with a smile.
"Why the heck are we here? And don't call me sweetie only my mom calls me that, horse." Rena hissed.
"Ok, Rena. I brought you here to see your brother as promised." The princess said pointing to the stage. Rena stared at the red stallion singing on stage.
"That's BS! My brother would never never ever in his life sing. Everytime he played Rockband 2 he would be on on guita-"
"That's not him Rena, I was just showing you the stage where he'll be performing." Celestia said before magically pouring herself a cup of tea.
"Where is my bro-"
"Shhh, Red Flair is almost done. Jean will be up next." Celestia assured before taking a sip of tea.

... Ballroom...

"Thank you everypony!" one of the red stallions said before taking a bow. Everypony stomp their hooves and cheered as he trotted off stage.

"Oh my fucking god it's like watching American Idol minus the asshole judge who always vote off the good singer. This shit is fucking boring. Playing Wii sports would be more entertaining than this bullshit." Jean thought.

"Jean be nice." Twilight mentally commanded.
"Sorry." Jean whispered.
"Last on the list we have a special stallion from...California? Jean Moore!" Mayor Mare announced. Twilight and Rarity looked back at Jean and motioned him to go to the stage. Jean drew in a deep breath and trotted up on stage. Everypony stomped their hooves as he trotted up to the mic.

"Hi...uh..."
"Everypony." Twilight said to Jean mentally.
"Hi, everypony. My name is Jean Moore and my gamertag on Xbox Live is InYoFace22. I al-"
"Jean they don't need to know that." Twilight mentally reminded him.
"Oh um...nevermind that last thing i just said. Um My name is Jean. I was the human who appeared here in Equestria a little over four weeks ago. Now I am a pony...Princess Celestia made me into one so...yeah. I am a pegasus here to announce that I plan to marry seven beautiful...um..."
"Mares"
"Mares because they're fucking epic and I love them. Their names are Twilight Sparkle, AppleJack, Pinkie Pie, Fluttershy, Rarity, Rainbow Dash, and Luna..." At the mention of the princess's name everypony gasped.
"Yo-you're marrying one of the princesses?" One stallion questioned. Luna smiled and nodded her head as she made her way up stage. Everypony stared in awe as Luna stood amongst the group of mares

...Princess Celestia's Table...

"Je-Jean?" Rena gasped. She stood up but Celestia quickly used her magic to sit her down.
"Hey what are you doing you stupi-"
"Remember that promise Rena? I have brought you to him but I can't allow you to interfer. Let Jean finish his speach." Celestia explained. Rena kicked one of the legs of the chair she sat in with her heel.
"Don't worry after this...and alittle private time. You'll get to talk to Jean." Celestia assured. Rena snatched one of the plates which had a piece of cake on it.
"What do you mean private time?" Rena asked as she searched the table for a fork.
"Well...um you see...I can't tell you ab-"
"No one horse. After Jean is done talking, I want to talk with him." Rena said. She pounded her right fist on the table.
"Where the hec-" Celestia quickly enchanted Rena's mouth closed before she could finish her sentence.
"It would be rude to interrupt your brother wouldn't?" Celestia questioned in an almost whisper. Rena grumbled while staring angrily at the Princess.
"Now I am going to remove my enchantment. If you yell again I will have no other choice but to silence you until it is time for you and Jean to talk. Rena folded her arms across her chest and grumbled again. Princess Celestia turned her head to see Jean had finished introducing his herd and reciting the names of the two rulers of Equestria.
"After the parties done you can talk to Jean." Princess Celestia said as her enchantment faded from Rena's lips.
"Thank you stupid horse. Now can I please get a fork?" Rena asked in an agitated tone. Princess Celesita smiled as she magically levitate a fork to Rena. Rena snatched out of the air. Just as she was about to stick the fork into the cake, Celestia used her magic to stop her arm.
"Sorry little one but first you must eat your fruits and vegetables." Princess Celestia said as she magically moved the plate of vegetables towards her.
"What the f-" Rena stopped herself once she saw Celestia frown at her
"Fine. Stupid horse." Rena grumbled as she hesitantly stuck her fork into a piece of steamed chopped carrot and brought it to her mouth.

...Applebloom's room, Apple Families House...

Sweetie Belle placed her hoof on the tip of the bottle and spun the bottle as hard as she could. After seconds of spinning the tip of the bottle slowed down before stopping at Scootaloo. Sweetie Belle smiled mischievously at Scootaloo.
"Well since you choose truth the last couple times, I think it's only fair that you do a dare now." Sweetie said. Scootaloo's heart began to race.
"F-fine, go ahead make a dare. I'm not sc-"
"I dare you and Spike to kiss for one minute." Sweetie interrupted. Scootaloo stared at her in shock. Spike looked at Applebloom
"Don't worry Spike, Ah won't be mad. Besides...we're in a herd now." Applebloom assured the nervous purple dragon. Spike turned to Scootaloo who was still staring at Sweetie in shock.
"Go on." Sweetie Belle urged. Scootaloo slowly turned to Spike biting her bottom lip. Spike smiled at her causing her to blush.
"I don't think I can do this...Not in front of them...but his smile...his...eyes." Scootaloo thought as she turned her head to Sweetie Belle than at Applebloom. They both smiled.
"Well go on Scoots." they both urged.
Scootaloo stood up and slowly took a few steps towards Spike. Spike stood up and slowly moved his face towards hers. Scootaloo did the same. As the space between their faces slowly became smaller,the two closed their eyes.

...Gilda's House, 22 miles from Rainbow Dash's home...

Gilda paced back and forth staring blankly at the ground. On her living room floor were piles of empty crates which once held apples and other fruits, skeletons of fish, and empty ice cream containers.
"I-it can't be." Gilda thought. She stopped suddenly and stood up on her hind legs examining her stomach. The bulge in her stomach was small but noticeable but her curves still remained.
"Th-theres no one that dweeb could'v-" gilda stopped and thought for a minute. She slowly returned her claws to the ground.
"No...I'm j-I just gained some...pounds. All I need to do is go out for some exercises all this week...and next week and this stupid fat will disappear." Gilda resolved as she made her way into the kitchen. She then opened the refrigerator and began eating all the fruits and fish that was in sight.
"Wait what am I doing?" She thought throwing the half eaten fish back into the refrigerator than slamming the door shut.
"Dang it, why am I eating so much?" Gilda questioned out loud before standing up on her hind legs again. She gently ran her claws over her bloated stomach.
"AHHH! THERE'S NO WAY HE COULD'VE GOTTEN ME PREGNANT!" Gilda screamed at the top of her lungs before slamming her back against the refrigerator door.
"This is so...so...*SIGH*...tomorrow I'll go to the doctor. Maybe those dweebs will no what's going on." Gilda resolved in her mind before pushing herself off the refrigerator door.
"If the doctor says I'm pregnant...I'll pound him into the ground." Gilda thought as she opened the refrigerator door and began pulling out food.