Review Responding Time!

Piecesxoxo- Personal bias aside, I think axing Zoey was a good move since she's just so overexposed given that she appeared in every episode in both seasons she was in.

Me- Thanks! I can understand seeing the same character for nearly two seasons in an environment like Total Drama is not good

Fear the Darkness Inside- Eh not a fan of Zoey so i'm not upset that she left she gets way too much screentime in canon. LoL at the irony of Dave. Scarlett is starting to make moves i'm very interested in what she does next

Me- True. You'll have to see... :)

acl97gioia- Bye Zoey! Not gonna miss you!

What can I say? Another amazing chapter. Two of the three members of the Terrific Trio are now gone, which is always good news. Jo is still in and pretty much kicking ass, so that's like even good-er good news. I'm hyped!

Me- Thanks! I figured that they got so much screentime canon wise I'd try something different. :)


" Last time on Total Drama! We sent our contestants to the kitchen to make me a three course meal! Since Sugar was the only member of The Gophers that had any cooking experience. She lead the team into making some NASTY food. Not wanting by taste buds ruined, I made the contestants eat their own food. Even with Sugar'se fried possums and raccoon pie, the Gophers managed to pull out another win. Meanwhile with the Bass, Scarlett took charge of the team so her ally B could find out who had the idol, once they figured out it was Scott. The three strategized how to use it. Zoey found out about Scott's sabotage through Max and pushed a campaign to send him home, it would've worked too if he didn't had the idol. With three votes against her Zoey was sent home instead! Find out who goes today on TOTAL DRAMA ISLAND!" Chris said


CONFESSIONAL: SCOTT

" Don't get me wrong, I'm glad I didn't go home last night but now I don't have a plan B if we lose"

" And after sending Zoey home that's probably gonna raise some suspicion"

END CONFESSIONAL

~The Forest~

Scott, Max, Scarlett, and B are discussing game

" Since working together went so well last time, how bout my alliance and your alliance merge to make a mega alliance!" Scott said

" And why would we do that?" Scarlett asked

" Think about it. There's seven people on this team. If we control four votes that's the majority and" Scott said before being interrupted

" We control who goes home. I like it" Scarlett said

The four shaked hands and parted ways. Scott and Max stayed behind

" I don't know why you suggested we team up with those cretins. We were fine on our own" Max said

" No we weren't. And what was up with you spilling the beans to Zoey yesterday!" Scott asked

" That fool questioned our evilness so I put her in her place!" Max said

" No you basically told Zoey everything we did, we could've gotten voted off!" Scott said

CONFESSIONAL: SCOTT

" Max is an okay guy in my book but man is he gullible"

END CONFESSIONAL

~ Killer Bass Boys Cabin~

Scott and Max try to enter the cabin but it's locked

" What the?" Scott said

Mike then appeared through the window laughing at the two

" Why that little!" Scott said

CONFESSIONAL: SCOTT

" Ever since swapping teams, Mike's been a real pain in the keester"

" What I wouldn't give to get rid of the guy"

END CONFESSIONAL

CONFESSIONAL: MIKE

" I'm usually not one to be a jerk but man did it feel good to do that!"

END CONFESSIONAL

~ Mess Hall~

Everyone is eating breakfast

" Man I love me some bacon!" Scott said

Mike then takes some bacon off of Scott's plate and eats it

" What the hell?!" Scott said

" You deserved it after kicking off Zoey like that" Mike said

" Dude face the facts she was never even into you. She just wanted your vote." Scott said

"Also if you touch my bacon again I'm gonna kick your ass" Scott declared

Chris enters the Mess Hall

"Good morning victim- I mean contestants. Meet me at the Dock of Shame for today's challenge" Chris said

~ Dock of Shame~

" Listen up Gophers, last night at the Killer Bass elimination ceremony the immunity idol was used. So no use in trying to find it now" Chris said

CONFESSIONAL: JO

" Someone already used the immunity idol?!"

"Was supposed to be my immunity!"

END CONFESSIONAL

CONFESSIONAL: SHAWN

" Nice..."

" If I had to place a bet on who had it, I'd probably say Scarlett or B since their both smart and quiet"

END CONFESSIONAL

" Anyways, I've noticed there's been a lack of trust at this camp lately" Chris said

"For good reasons" Mike said glaring at Scott

" So today's challenge centers around trust. Ten campers will compete in five trust exercises. If the two complete it, they win a point for the team. Team with the most points win" Chris said

" So are we choosing partners?" Scarlett asked

"Nope! Partners have been randomly selected" Chris said

~ Rock Climbing Wall~

" What better way to start off trust exercises than rock climbing?" Chris said

" Two members from each teams will have their hands tied, they'll have to work together to reach it to the top of the wall. First team there wins a point!" Chris said

" Climbing for the Killer Bass is... Scott and Max! Climbing for the Gophers is... Dakota and Jo!" Chris said

CONFESSIONAL: JO

" Why couldn't I get paired with Jasmine or Brick?!"

" Dakota's probably just gonna be on her phone the whole time!"

END CONFESSIONAL

Chris then ties the four contestants hands

" Your challenge starts... NOW!" Chris said

Scott and Max started climbing, Jo tried to catch up but someone was busy...

" What the? Why aren't we moving!" Jo asked

" Updating my story on Instagram" Dakota said

" I don't give an Insta-damn! Start climbing!" Jo ordered

" Nuh uh, just got my nails done" Dakota said

Jo chucks Dakota's phone and carries her with one arm and climbs with the other

" Hey let me down!" Dakota said

" Not until we win this challenge" Jo said

Meanwhile Scott and Max are doing well until they reach an explosion

" Whoa what do we do?!" Scott asked

" Obviously go around it" Max said

" But what if there's explosives there too?!" Scott said

" Aren't you supposed to be EVIL?! Evil isn't afraid of mere explosives" Max said

CONFESSIONAL: MAX

" Scott is a valuable ally on my quest to be this show's greatest villain but..."

" What a wimp"

END CONFESSIONAL

Max takes charge and heads to the explosives. It explodes and the two fall down

" Nice thinking..." Scott said sarcastically

" Your welcome" Max said

With Jo and Dakota in the lead, they quickly headed to the top

" And that's a point for the Gophers!" Chris said

CONFESSIONAL: JO

" Pathetic. I carried her to victory"

" Each day Dakota becomes more and more useless. If we lose this challenge, I'm thinking about ditching her"

END CONFESSIONAL

~ Mess Hall~

Dave and Brick were on one side of the room, B and Scarlett were on the other side. Chris then entered the Mess Hall

" Welcome to Round 2! For this next mini challenge, one of you must prepare a traditional meal involving a deadly blowfish while the other eats it." Chris said

" If the person who eats it doesn't die your team gets a point!" Chris said

" Excuse me, I know the challenges so far have been... somewhat dangerous. But threatening our lives is in breach of our contract" Scarlett said

" The producers cleared it, so I think were in the clear" Chris said

CONFESSIONAL: SCARLETT

" I'm quite fortunate that B is my partner if it was anyone else I'd start writing my will"

END CONFESSIONAL

Chef brought out the blowfish and a cutting knife

B took the knife and cut the blowfish delicately while Dave tried poking it

CONFESSIONAL: DAVE

" Yeah cooking's not my forte"

" If this was a cleaning challenge, we would've already won"

END CONFESSIONAL

B and Dave finish their dishes and present them to their partners

" Are you sure you did this right?" Brick asked

" I guess... " Dave said unsure

Brick took a bite out of the blowfish

" Hey, I didn't die!" Brick said

Brick then hugged Dave and started jumping up and down

" I'm glad you didn't die too but could you let me down? You smell like sweat" Dave said

" Sorry my bad" Brick said

Brick's face then swells up and turns blue. He then falls down and starts vomiting

" BLRGHGHGH!" Brick vomited

" Wait I thought he was good?" Dave said

"Yeah takes about ten seconds for the poison to kick in" Chris said

" Chef! Clean up on aisle everywhere!" Chris said

Chef threw Brick out of the Mess Hall and started sweeping

" You can trust me, B" Scarlett said

B nodded his head and ate the blowfish, ten seconds passed and nothing happened to him

CONFESSIONAL: B

B gave a thumbs up

END CONFESSIONAL

" And that's a point for the Killer Bass! Onto the next challenge!" Chris said

The four contestants walked out of the Mess Hall, Chris had a quick chat with Chef

" After your done sweeping take General Barfington to the infirmary" Chris said

" I don't get paid enough for this" Chef said

"Silly Chef you don't get paid at all" Chris said

~ The Forest~

There's a trapeze all set up and below is a pool of jellyfish

" Welcome to our third challenge! For this one member will have to jump off their platform while the other catches them. If they do they win a point, if they don't their partner gets stinged multiple times by jellyfish!" Chris said

" Swinging for the Bass is Amy and for the Gophers is Ella! The people catching them are Sugar and Rodney!" Chris said

CONFESSIONAL: SUGAR

" Once again Sugar has to share the spotlight with that Ella"

" I've been trying to be nice but I just don't like that gurl!"

" Between her singing and nasty dress, I'm one moment away from beating the crud outta her!"

END CONFESSIONAL

" Rodney I swear if you don't catch me, I'll make your life a living hell!" Amy said

CONFESSIONAL: DAVE

" Doesn't she already do that?"

END CONFESSIONAL

" I promise I won't! You can trust me!" Rodney said

" Okay..." Amy said

Amy then jumped off her platform, Rodney swung and caught her

" Hey... you caught me!" Amy said

" Well yeah why wouldn't I?" Rodney asked

CONFESSIONAL: AMY

" Wow.. I'm impressed with how much that idiot trusts me"

END CONFESSIONAL

CONFESSIONAL: RODNEY

" Well after the guy saves the girl, he gets to kiss her, right?"

" yeah... that sounds about right"

END CONFESSIONAL

Rodney leans in for a kiss, Amy gags in disgust and slaps him

" Not happening!" Amy said

" Aw man.." Rodney said dissapointed

Rodney and Amy then got off the trapeze

" Okay Sugar, I'm about to fall, It would be swell if you catch me" Ella said

CONFESSIONAL: SUGAR

" Yeah dat ain't happenin!"

END CONFESSIONAL

Ella jumped off her platform, Sugar doesn't make any attempt to catch her. Ella falls into the jellyfish pool

" I'm being stung "shock" repeatedly, someone "shock" please help me!" Ella sang

" And that's two points for the Bass! Gophers better kick into overdrive if they wanna win!" Chris said

" Chef help Ella to the infirmary, while the rest of us move on to the next challenge!" Chris said

~ The Forest~

"For our fourth trust building challenge! One member will be blindfolded and have an apple on the top of their head. The other will have an bow and arrow. The one with the arrows have to try and shoot the apple without harming their partner" Chris said

" Those being blindfolded are Jasmine for the Gophers and Mike for the Bass!" Chris said

" Those shooting are Shawn for the Gophers and Max for the Bass!" Chris said

" Evil already did his challenge. Why must he do another?!" Max said

" Because there's not enough players, so some may have to repeat" Chris said

" Blasphemy!" Max said

Chef handed Max and Shawn bows and arrows. He then went over to Jasmine and Mike and blindfolded them

" You may now start shooting!" Chris said

Max not having any experience in archery just kept hitting Mike wherever, He the shoots an arrow at the kiwis

" My kiwis..." Mike said before falling over

"BWAHAHA! Evil strikes again!" Max said

" Hey Dr Evil , your supposed to hit the apple not the nuts!" Amy said

While the other team is arguing, Shawn concentrates and aims for the apple

CONFESSIONAL: SHAWN

" I didn't wanna ruin me and Jasmine's friendship by hitting her with apples"

" Hopefully it's not an apple zombie and she won't get infected"

END CONFESSIONAL

Shawn hits the apple

" And Shawn wins another point for the Gophers!" Chris said

Jasmine takes off her blindfold and hugs Shawn

" Congrats mate, ya did it!" Jasmine said

" Thanks..." Shawn said blushing

CONFESSIONAL: SHAWN

" Look I'm not one for all the mushy love crap"

" But man Jasmine is making me lose my mind, I can only think about her!"

" Is she a parasite infecting my brain?!"

END CONFESSIONAL

~ Mount Looming Tragedy~

Chris and all the campers watch from down below

" With the points tied, this challenge should determine who wins! One player will have to steer blindfolded while the other gives them directions, if they can successfully make it down the mountain, their team wins!" Chris said

" Dave is steering for the Gophers and Scott for the Bass, those giving directions are B for the Bass and Dakota for the Gophers!" Chris said

" Wait why is B giving directions?!, He can't even talk!" Amy said

" I know that's why I picked him... should be good for ratings though" Chris said

CONFESSIONAL: B

B shrugs his shoulders

END CONFESSIONAL

" Look B, I know you don't like talking and all. But if you don't well lose this challenge" Mike said

B got out his notebook and wrote down "What if I write down the directions?"

" Aren't you supposed to be a genius?! He can't see them if he's blindfolded!" Amy said

B once again shrugged his shoulders

CONFESSIONAL: SCOTT

" This is perfect!, With B the mime as my guide were sure to lose!"

END CONFESSIONAL

" Get to your positions" Chris said

We transition to the top of the mountain

" On your marks... get set... GO!" Chris said

All four race down the mountain

~ Screaming Gophers~

" Um Dakota, could use some directions" Dave said

" Don't worry I brought my GPS." Dakota said

" Go left!" Dakota said

Dave turned the sled left, avoiding a huge rock

" Okay now go right!" Dakota said

Dave turned the sled right, avoiding a bush

CONFESSIONAL: DAVE

" I think this is the first time where Dakota having her phone out is actually useful"

END CONFESSIONAL

~ Killer Bass~

" Hey B, how bout some directions?!" Scott said

B tried his best to muster words but nothing came out

" Well since your not gonna say anything, I'll do it my own way" Scott said

Scott turns left, the sled crashes into the same rock from before, Scott and B fall out of the sled and roll down the mountain

" Ow! Ow! Ow! Ow!" Scott said

~ Screaming Gophers~

" Were gonna make it!" Dakota said

B and Scott then fall into their sled

" Hey! Get your own.." Dakota said

While distracted all four run into a deer and stumble the rest of the way down

~ Mount Looming Tragedy~

" Ow..." Dakota/ Dave/ Scott said together

" Well that was unexpected. Funny but unexpected" Chris said

" Who won?!" Jo asked

" Well let's see... I'm giving it to the Killer Bass!" Chris said

The Killer Bass cheered

" Why?! They all got down at the same time!" Jo said

"True but Gophers get a penalty since Dakota used her phone for navigations" Chris said

The Screaming Gophers glare at Dakota

" Wait I thought I said you could use my phone?" Dakota asked

"No I said I couldn't eliminate you for it. But with how you bombed today's challenge looks like they'll be no need for that" Chris said

CONFESSIONAL: DAKOTA

" Stupid Chris and his stupid rules"

" I am not leaving this dumb show until I get my spin off series"

" So looks like I'll have to do the thing they call "strat giving"

" Did I say that right?"

END CONFESSIONAL

~ Screaming Gophers Girls Cabin~

" Look I know I messed up today's challenge but here me out-" Dakota said before being interrupted

" No you hear me out. You've done nothing to help this alliance and I'm not gonna let you float to the final three, your gonzo" Jo said

" But-" Dakota said

" I think it's for the best" Jasmine said

CONFESSIONAL: DAKOTA

" Great, now I can't rely on my gal pals to vote with me"

" Looks like I'll have to play nice with the boys"

END CONFESSIONAL

~ Screaming Gopher Boys Cabin~

Dakota knocks on the door

" What do you want?" Dave asked

" Would you let me in for a minute?" Dakota said

" Sure." Dave said

Dakota and Dave sat down

" Listen, I'm gonna tell you something that will blow your mind-" Dakota said before being interrupted

" We know you, Jo, and Jasmine are in an alliance" Dave said

"GASP" "But how?" Dakota asked

" Jasmine told Shawn a while back, I personally don't care that much to do anything about it" Dave said

CONFESSIONAL: DAKOTA

" Wow.."

"So I get thrown out of the alliance for "not helping"

" But Jasmine spills secrets and she gets to stay?!"

"So not cool.."

END CONFESSIONAL

" Crap that's all I had. Look if you and the boys vote with me tonight, I promise to never vote you guys off" Dakota said

" How do I know, I have your word?" Dave asked

Dakota took out her wallet

" Here's a little bribe" Dakota said

Dakota handed Dave a $100 bill

" Holy crap, where did you get this?" Dave said

" I'm rich, remember." Dakota said

"Yeah right... so who do you want us to vote for?" Dave asked

" That's the thing I don't really have a problem with any of the girls. Whoever you choose I'll vote for" Dakota said

CONFESSIONAL: DAVE

" Wow that's a lot of power in my hands.."

" But I think I have an idea of who to get rid of.."

END CONFESSIONAL

~ Campfire~

" Welcome Gophers, seeing you lost this challenge I guess you don't have a lot of trust in each other. For good reasons, Dakota failed in both challenges she was in, Dave poisoned Brick by not properly preparing the Japanese blowfish and Sugar intentionally let Ella fall" Chris said

" You would've too!" Sugar said

" But now it's time to vote one of you off! To the confessionals!" Chris said

One by one The Gophers go in to cast their votes

" If I call your name, means your safe and you get to stay for another day and eat a delicious marshmallow" Chris said

"Jo!"

"Jasmine!"

"Dave!"

"Brick!"

"Sugar"

"and Shawn!"

They all get up to get their marshmallows

" Dakota, Ella you're both on the chopping block. But only one person can go home and that person is..."

"..."

"..."

"..."

"..."

"..."

"... Ella" Chris said

" Yes!" Dakota said

Dakota ate her marshmallow

" May I ask why I was voted off?" Ella asked

" Well it only seemed fair since you were the reason I almost got kicked off a few episodes back" Dave said

" Oh I see... I'm sorry for almost getting you eliminated Dave" Ella said

" But it's okay I had lots of fun! But now I'm afraid I have to run!" Ella sang

" No No No No. First off It's a half hour show, second off You have a Boat of Losers to catch" Chris said

Chris shut Ella's mouth shut with duct tape

"She's all your's Chef" Chris said

Chef carries Ella across the Dock of Shame and throws her onto the Boat of Losers

GOODBYE ELLA

CONFESSIONAL: DAKOTA

" I didn't really mind voting for Ella"

" She was taking up too much of my screentime anyway"

END CONFESSIONAL

CONFESSIONAL: DAVE

" I feel like I made the right decision"

" Personally I feel like I did Ella a favor. She's way too nice for this show. A while longer and she could've gotten hurt"

END CONFESSIONAL

CONFESSIONAL: JO

" Crap! Once again the person I want to go home, stays!"

" That snake Dakota must've convinced the boys to vote with her"

" Next we lose, I'm making it my top priority she goes home"

END CONFESSIONAL

CONFESSIONAL: SHAWN

" Dave told me to vote for Ella but honestly... naw"

" Ella may not be good at much but at least she tries... unlike Dakota"

END CONFESSIONAL

The Screaming Gophers head back to their respective cabins

" That's all for now! Will B ever talk? How long will Dakota last before she gets the boot? Will Rodney ever get that kiss from Amy?" Chris said

" NO!" Amy said offscreen

" Find out all of this and more on TOTAL DRAMA ISLAND!" Chris said


That was Chapter Twelve! If you enjoyed it as always leave a review and favorite

Spoilers Below

Reason for Elimination: Ella, Ella's a nice character, but not the main focus. I didn't want to drag her and Dave's potential couple story for too long so.. yeah she's gone. Also I know I'm probably gonna get hate for this elimination because I've seen a lot of "have an Ella pairing in this story" reviews, if you can even call hem reviews. but if you want a story mainly focused on couples your barking up the wrong tree. There still will be relationships but there not gonna happen at the flick of a wrist.

Elimination Order: Leonard-26th, Sky-25th, Lightning-24th, Samey-23rd, Staci-22nd, Sam-21st, Anne Maria-20th, Beardo-19th, Dawn-18th, Cameron-17th, Zoey-16th, Ella-15th

Votes for Ella

Dave- Ella

Dakota- Ella

Brick- Ella

Sugar- Ella

Votes for Dakota

Jasmine- Dakota

Jo- Dakota

Shawn- Dakota