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AnonReviewer:Jo threw the challenge just to get rid of Brick? What a sneaky b***! It definitely seems more and more likely at this point that she's the main antagonist of the fic. Figured she'd probably do that to axe Dakota if anyone, though this was apparently part of a plan to boot her later on as well. I hoped he would make the merge here. She better watch out for Jo! Before her confessional about how she was just trying to trick him, I thought for a moment we'd get some Jock (Jo x Brick). Shawn, you definitely have more than just the "slightest" crush on Jasmine, as you even admitted in the previous episode! Believe it of not, I was thinking Rodney would be the last contestant he should ask about love right before he told Shawn that. As expected, Amy was rather harsh when rejecting him. Perhaps he'll fall for someone else soon. When the merge does take place, I had a feeling Topher would debut as a contestant and maybe a previously eliminated and would return (I'd personally pick Sam or Zoey to come back). While Mike turning into Svetlana was definitely amusing, I figured that would more likely happen during the obstacle course, where such a personality switch would be much more useful. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Me- Yep, well I wouldn't really say there's a main antagonist at the moment, just that there's a lot of them. I won't reveal whose coming back, but good guesses!
acl97gioia- Anywaaaay, Brick's a cool guy, you pretty much said so. I ship him with Jo, I used to root for him in TDRI, I think he should've been in All-Stars... but overall, he's just too much of a hero to make it far. I don't really have the words to explain it, but I'm not extremely sad to see him go.
Me- You make some good points, I heard originally Brick, Owen, Cody, and Anne Maria were supposed to be in All Stars but got cut at the last minute, wonder what it would be like with them in the cast?
mattafat- Brick is gone and now people will see Jo as a new evil in the game. I wonder who will be eliminated next time all in all great chapter!
Me- Thanks!, You'll see... :)
FeartheDarknessInside- Again i'm not sad to see Brick go. Never was much of a fan of him anyway. So happy Dakota didn't get eliminated again. I'm also happy Sugar didn't get eliminated either. Jo is just asshole even though I like her i'm looking forward to her elimination lol
Me- Thanks! Yeah Jo is definitely out for blood this time :)
" Last time on Total Drama Island! Rodney got a bitter rejection from his crush Amy, Shawn tried asking Rodney for love advice and got no response. Thanks to Chef poisoning me I was out for yesterday's challenge so he got to supervise. He put the contestants through a hard time at boot camp, some gave up, others failed, the point I'm trying to make is.. they all suck! But in the end the Killer Bass sucked a little less than the Screaming Gophers and ended up winning! Jo spread around fake news that her and Brick were dating, which put a target on Brick. At the elimination ceremony, Brick was voted off. Wanna see who goes this time? Find out here on TOTAL DRAMA ISLAND!" Chris said
~ Screaming Gophers Girls Cabin~
Shawn holding a bouquet of flowers in one hand, uses his other hand to knock on the door
" Shawn? What do ya want?" Jasmine asked
" Look Jasmine, I can't really explain how I feel, I just know I like you a lot, okay?" Shawn said
CONFESSIONAL: SHAWN
" Can you blame me? Jasmine is the package deal!"
" She has looks and can could probably defend herself from a zombie horde"
" Yeah she's definitely a keeper"
END CONFESSIONAL
CONFESSIONAL: JASMINE
" I'll admit I think he's cute but.."
" I gotta keep focused on the game!"
END CONFESSIONAL
Jasmine kisses Shawn on the cheek
" I like you too, but couples are a huge threat in this game. So could we save all the mushy stuff until I win?" Jasmine asked
" Don't you mean when I win?" Shawn asks playfully
While this ordeal goes on, Scarlett watches
CONFESSIONAL: SHAWN
" Wow that went better than I expected"
" Sucks we can't kiss and stuff until the finale"
"But that just gives me more drive to win this thing!"
END CONFESSIONAL
CONFESSIONAL: SCARLETT
" Well that was some interesting information"
"According to my calculations, this is the last challenge before merge. So it may be in my interest to break up this potential couple."
END CONFESSIONAL
~ The Forest~
Scarlett, B, Max, and Scott are having an alliance meeting
" Shawn and Jasmine? Wow didn't know the kid had it in him" Scott said
" Why are we discussing this? Love is irrelevant in the twisted game of Total Drama" Max said
" Don't you guys get it? Couples are a huge threat in this game, we have to take them out" Scarlett said
" So throw the challenge?" Scott asked
" No don't throw the challenge, we need them to lose!" Scarlett said
CONFESSIONAL: SCARLETT
" I know it's for the game, but Max and Scott are really getting on my last nerve"
" Luckily before Dawn left she taught me some meditation poses"
"Hmmmm"
Max knocks on the door
"Hurry up! Evil needs to tinkle!"
END CONFESSIONAL
Chris turns on the loudspeaker
"ATTENTION ALL CONTESTANTS MEET ME AT THE DOCK OF SHAME FOR TODAY'S CHALLENGE!" Chris said
~ Dock of Shame~
" Today's challenges are all about being EXTREME!" Chris said
" Two members from each team will participate in death defying stunts, in which they succeed. Earn a point for their team, the team with the most points win!" Chris said
" Are the people participating being randomly chosen again?" Scarlett asked
" Funny that you asked Scarlett, because you and Dave are out first victims!" Chris said
~ Plane~
Scarlett and Dave are shoved into a plane, Chef flies the plane upwards
" You want us to WHAT?!" Dave said
"You heard me chicken, Chris said you gotta jump off this plane" Chef said
" Nuh uh, I'd have to be delusional to jump off this plane!" Dave said
"Calm yourself, I've done the calculations and it's only 60% chance well die from jumping." Scarlett said
"60%?!" Dave said
~ The Beach~
Meanwhile the two teams are trying to move their couches to the designated spot
~Killer Bass~
"Move it! If we lose this challenge, I will literally tear your faces off!" Amy said
"How about less yapping and more pushing?!" Scott asked
" You don't tell me what to do, farm boy!" Amy said
" Well neither do you!" Scott said
CONFESSIONAL: MIKE
" Man they're both so irritating.."
"GASP"
"I'll put those whippersnappers in their place"
END CONFESSIONAL
" Why don't you two make out already?" Chester asked
Scott, Amy, and Rodney gasped
" Amy? We just broke up and your already on another man! How could you?!" Rodney asked
" First off we were never together to begin with Rodney! And second off... Scott?! Ew times ten!" Amy said
" Well right back at ya. Spoiled princesses like you are nothing compared to the gals back at the farm" Scott said
" Psst. All talk, I'm old enough to know when two people like each other and you two definitely got something going on.." Chester said pointing to Scott and Amy
" Shut up Mike!" Scott/ Amy said
CONFESSIONAL: RODNEY
" I can't believe Amy moved on so fast..."
"Maybe I should do the same, but the only other girl on our team is Scarlett and she kinda scares me"
END CONFESISONAL
" LOOOK OUUUT BELLOOOW!" Scarlett screamed as she was falling down from the sky
The Bass hurry and push the couch to the designated spot, Scarlett lands on the couch
" Phew" Scarlett said
"And that's a point for the Bass! Will Dave jump for the Gophers?" Chris said
"He better!" Jo said
~ The Plane~
" I'm not doing it! Anyone with common sense would agree with me" Dave said
" Wow what a wimp" Chef said
" At least my cooking doesn't suck" Dave said
Chef steers the plane upside down, Dave stumbles out of the plane
"NOTCOOOOOOOLL!" Dave screamed as he fell
~ Screaming Gophers~
" Hurry it up! Dave could get seriously hurt if we don't move!" Jasmine said
" Were moving as fast as we can Jasmine!" Dakota said
" No your texting someone on your phone!" Jasmine said
Dakota then looked at her right hand who was texting while she was having the conversation
"You can't blame for that! My texting hand has a mind of it's own!" Dakota said
" IIIIMM ABBBOOOUTT TOOOO DIIIEE!" Dave screamed
Dave landed on the ground, bones broken
" Man that's gonna leave a mark" Shawn said
Authors Note: Can I get a lol for that Aftermath reference?
" Medic!" Chris said
An ambulance appears and two interns come out and drag Dave in there
" Well on to the next challenge!" Chris said
Score: Bass-1 Gophers-0
~ Moose Riding Pen~
" What's more extreme than moose riding? Nothing! For a point, you must stay on the moose for ten seconds!" Chris said
"Riding for the Gophers is Sugar and riding for the Bass is Max!" Chris said
" Lemme go first! I used to ride critters all the time back on ma farm!" Sugar said
"Knock yourself out" Chris said
Sugar hopped on the moose
"Giddyup!" Sugar said
The moose broke down the riding pen and started charging towards Chris' trailer
" Not my trailer! Chef stop that moose!" Chris demanded
Chef tried to tackle the moose but the moose knocked him down.
CONFESSIONAL: SUGAR
" That moose was angrier than my granny when she had to go to the dentist!"
" I figure all he needs is a little snack!"
END CONFESSIONAL
Sugar stuffed something into the moose's mouth... it stopped moving
" And Sugar tamed the beast! One point for the gophers!" Chris said
Score: Bass-1 Gophers-1
" How did you make it stop?" Shawn asked
"I fed it one of my granny's secret recipes" Sugar said
"Say no more" Shawn said
"Max your up" Chris said
CONFESSIONAL: MAX
" Luckily I have just the device for the occasion"
Max pulls out a helmet
" An Evil Helmet! It took a while but thanks to Scarlett I finally got it working!"
END CONFESSIONAL
Max hops on the other moose and puts the helmet on it
The moose goes insane and knocks Chris down with its antlers
"Ow! Not the face!" Chris said
It then ran even faster towards the contestants
"ZZZOOOMBIIEE MOOOSE!" Shawn screamed as he ran
" IT'S JUST A NORMAL MOOSE!" Jasmine screamed back
" Fear me! BWAHAHA!" Max said
The moose stopped which sent Max flying, it then ran into the forest
CONFESSIONAL: SHAWN
" I dunno what that Max guy did but he just created a demon moose!"
END CONFESSIONAL
" Well since Max couldn't last on the moose that results in no points for the Bass!" Chris said
Score: Gophers-1 Bass-1
"The score is tied, let's see if we can fix that with this last challenge!" Chris said
~ Forest: Mudslide Trails~
An entire path of the forest is covered with mud
" For this last challenge! One member will be driving a jetski while trying to stop their competitor from collecting six flags. Then all they have to do is cross the finish line and they win." Chris said
"Driving for the Bass is Scott and driving for the Gophers is Dakota! Skiing for the Bass is Rodney and skiing for the Gophers is Shawn!" Chris said
" Since Gophers won last time, they'll be skiing first" Chris said
~ Screaming Gophers turn~
Scott starts driving the jetski, making sure to head to all the areas the flags are
" Wow this is easier than I thought!" Shawn said
CONFESSIONAL: SHAWN
" Okay either the challenge was just too easy or Scott was helping me win."
" But why?"
END CONFESSIONAL
" And Shawn collects five out of six flags!" Chris said
"Woo-hoo! You can do it Shawn!" Jasmine said
"Thanks Jas- oof!" Shawn said
While distracted Shawn crashed into a rock
" So close, Gopher you better hope the Bass collect less flags than you or it's another elimination ceremony" Chris said
~ Killer Bass Turn~
" Prepare to lose, Rodney!" Dakota said
" No way! I'm doing this for Amy and when love is involved. I can never lose!" Rodney said
CONFESSIONAL: AMY
" Oh my gag, that loser still likes me?"
" How dense could he be!?"
END CONFESSIONAL
Dakota starts her jetski, she tries driving to a rock so Rodney could get hurt but he dodges it
" Ha! You have to wake up pretty early to trick me!" Rodney said
Dakota then turned around
"Well Rodney, I'm afraid I'm going to have to cut you lose!" Dakota said
Dakota pulled out a pocket knife and prepared to cut the rope attaching Rodney to the jetski
Unexpectedly a tree branch rips Dakota's top off
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!" Dakota screamed
"GASP" Boobies?!" Rodney said
Distracted Rodney slips and face plants into the mud
" Ow..." Rodney said
Dakota then stopped the jetski
" I need a top, NOW." Dakota said
An intern handed Dakota his shirt
"Thank you" Dakota said
~ The Forest~
" I don't know what Dakota did to distract Rodney like that, But the Screaming Gophers win!" Chris said
The Screaming Gophers cheer while the Killer Bass groan in defeat
CONFESSIONAL: MIKE
" I wonder what happened that threw him off his guard like that"
END CONFESSIONAL
CONFESSIONAL: RODNEY
"Boobies..."
END CONFESSIONAL
CONFESSIONAL: SCARLETT
" I think it's time to put my plan into action"
END CONFESSIONAL
~ Screaming Gophers Girls Cabin~
Scarlett places a note outside of the cabin, she then knocks on the door and runs away
"Hello? Another note, Oh I bet it's from Shawn" Jasmine said
Jasmine picks it up and reads it
" Wow..." Jasmine said
CONFESSIONAL: JASMINE
" It's just another letter from Rodney"
" But this time he went way over the top with the inappropriate language"
" I don't even think I can say half of this stuff on TV"
END CONFESSIONAL
~ Screaming Gophers Guys Cabin~
Jasmine shows Shawn the letter "Rodney" wrote"
" He really said that?!" Shawn asked
"Yep" Jasmine said
CONFESSIONAL: SHAWN
" I mean it's bad enough the dude is hitting on my girlfriend"
" But this letter is just sick, man!"
END CONFESSIONAL
~ Killer Bass Boys Cabin~
Shawn knocks down the door
" Hey Shawn-" Mike said before being interrupted
" WHERE. IS. RODNEY?" Shawn asks angrily
" Um he's in the mess hall, is everything alright?" Mike asked
Shawn left the cabin
" Okay..." Mike said
~ Mess Hall~
Most of the Killer Bass are discussing who to eliminate until someone breaks down the door
" DUDE, STAY AWAY FROM MY GIRL!" Shawn yelled
" Wait you like Amy too?" Shawn asked
" No! Jasmine, you idiot!" Shawn said
" Jasmine? I don't even like her anymore!" Rodney said
" Wha- She just got this letter, how could you be over her like that?!" Shawn said
Shawn hops on top of Rodney and starts hitting him in the head
" Leave my girl alone!" Shawn yelled
" Dude get off!" Rodney said
Rodney grabbed Shawn off of him and tossed him out the window
Rodney turns to his teammates, and he's met with glares and shocked faces
" I may be an asshole, but that's messed up" Scott said
" Guess we know who to vote for" Scarlett said with a smirk
CONFESSIONAL: SCARLETT
" Copying Rodney's handwriting and placing that letter in Jasmine's cabin was mere child's play"
" It's a win-win deal. Rodney goes home and Jasmine and Shawn's relationship is cracked"
"If I were to guess, Shawn is gonna start getting paranoid, which will ultimately lead to his downfall"
END CONFESSIONAL
~ Campfire~
" Welcome Bass! Six of you will make it to the merge while one of you will have to walk the Dock of Shame. Scarlett completed her part of the challenge, good reason she should stay. Max couldn't ride a moose for ten seconds, good reason he shouldn't stay. Rodney blew his challenge and hit on another man's girl, good reason he should get punched in the face!" Chris said
" Aw come on..." Rodney said
CONFESSIONAL: RODNEY
" I honestly don't know what everyone's talking about"
" I mean I did sent that one note to Jasmine but that was before her and Shawn were even together!"
END CONFESSIONAL
" If I call your name that means your safe!" Chris said
"Scarlett!"
"Mike!"
"Scott!"
"Amy!"
"and B!"
They all go up to get their marshmallows
" Max, Rodney you've both received votes against you but only one person can go home and that person is..."
"..."
"..."
"..."
"..."
"..."
"... Rodney!" Chris said
Max went up and got his marshmallow
" Evil lives on!" Max said
" Wait but- How and why? And with the fighting and the girl. The note, the pen, the paper all jumbled into one!" Rodney said
" Ugh, he's mumbling again! Can someone get him out of here!" Amy said
Chef picked up Rodney
" Goodbye Total Girl Island!" Rodney said
Chef walked across the Dock of Shame and threw Rodney into the Boat of Losers
GOODBYE RODNEY
The Killer Bass head back to their respective cabins
" Can't say that was the most shocking campfire ceremony ever! But I still get paid! Will Jasmine and Shawn stay strong? What new alliances will form? And with the merge on the horizon we have a whole new bunch of twists waiting for ya on TOTAL DRAMA ISLAND!" Chris said
That was Chapter Fourteen! As always if you enjoyed slap a favorite and leave me some reviews!
Spoilers Below
Authors Note: Due to me bringing back two characters I'm starting the merge an episode early, so there will be an elimination, even though in canon it's a reward challenge.
Another Author's Note: As I've said many times one of them will be Topher, but if you have any guesses on who the other one is gonna be let me know!
Reason for Elimination: Rodney, I tried giving Rodney a purpose in this fic and I feel like I succeeded in that, But his love shtick was getting old and I honestly didn't want him to make merge so now was the perfect episode to give him the boot.
Elimination Order: Leonard-26th, Sky-25th, Lightning-24th, Samey-23rd, Staci-22nd, Sam-21st, Anne Maria-20th, Beardo-19th, Dawn-18th, Cameron-17th, Zoey-16th, Ella-15th, Brick-14th, Rodney-13th
Votes for Rodney
Mike- Rodney
Max-Rodney
Scarlett- Rodney
Amy- Rodney
Scott-Rodney
B- Rodney
Votes for Max
Rodney- Max