Review Responding Time!
MichaelFang9- Three guesses one who the other returner is
1. Beardo
2. Ella
3. *cringe noise* Sky
Me- Good guesses!
mattafat- Ok first here's your lol for that reference. Also RIP Dave. Lastly
Here's my guess for the returner:
Lightning
I wonder who'll be the first out in merge. I'm not to sad to see Rodney go. You made him likable for me and I hate him props for to you. Hopefully Dave will make it far and good luck on merge!
Me- Good guess! Yeah I feel like the characters that everyone hates had potential, but the writers just never tapped into it
keyblademasteravenger- Guesses for who will return: Sam, Sky, or Brick. Enjoying this story. Plan on writing action and world tour as well?
Me- Good guesses! Thanks, I'm glad your enjoying it. Yeah I plan on doing Total What If Action and World Tour but that's for later :).
Fear the Darkness Inside- Again not sad to see Rodney go. I never liked him all that much anyways. I'm looking forward to the first episode of the merge. That first elimination is always crucial to setting up the remainder of the game
Me- Thanks!, True, I hope the merge doesn't disappoint. :)
AnonReviewer- Thank you for finally getting rid of Rodney! This was long overdue. I was hoping either he or Amy would be eliminated as his delusional view on love (even crazier than Dave's obsession with Sky in canon, which is saying quite a lot) was definitely dragging on for much more than it should have. The guy's also not very useful in challenges unless physical strength is needed and certainly doesn't have what it takes to feasibly make the merge. That letter Scarlett fabricated for Jasmine was quite devious, though I have a feeling Rodney would've been eliminated for costing his team the challenge even if she hadn't written it.
I love how you recreated the scene with Heather trying to cut Harold's rope and accidentally losing her top in the process, distracting him with the sight of her boobs enough to make him lose the challenge (which is probably why he got voted off in TDI). Maybe Rodney seeing Dakota's bare chest will make him start liking her now (or already has) instead of Amy. Speaking of Dakota, I'd love to know who she was texting. I could be wrong, but some part of my instinct says it's Sam and that there's secretly some Samkota (Sam x Dakota) going on.
In any case, I'm quite glad we now know that Jasmine returns Shawn's feelings even if she doesn't want him to throw her off the game, which is understandable and reminds me of how Sky resisted Dave in TDPI despite clearly liking him. Imagine if she had the chance to tell Dave sooner about that and how she was technically still with Keith but not into that relationship anymore. Oh well (shrugs shoulders)... hooray for Shasmine!
Me- Your welcome, Didn't really have anything left for him anyway. True, True.
Yeah when I was thinking on who should do the challenges Rodney being the love obsessed farm boy he is, just seemed fit for him to be in that situation.
Not gonna lie, didn't think anyone was gonna guess that so early on but wow, good job!
Shasmine goals XD
" Last time on Total Drama! We went full on extreme in our totally radical challenges! Jumping out of a plane proved difficult for Dave, seeing how he shattered most of his bones. In our moose riding challenge, Max's weird helmet thingy turned the difficulty to ten.. thousand. We still haven't found that moose. In our final challenge, Shawn scored big for his team while Rodney saw something big "boobies". Which caused him to lose his focus and crash, if that wasn't enough incentive to vote him out. Scarlett placed a fake love letter with Rodney's signature in Jasmine's cabin. This caused Shawn to attack Rodney after the challenge was over. In an obvious vote Rodney was sent home. But don't worry things are about to get a lot more exciting on TOTAL DRAMA ISLAND!" Chris said
~ Mess Hall~
The final twelve contestants are enjoying a merger breakfast by Chef
" Is this like some sort of prize for making the merge?" Dave asked
" Yeah you could say that" Chef said
CONFESSIONAL: CHEF
" Hehehee.."
" Those suckas have no idea what's bout to happen"
END CONFESSIONAL
CONFESSIONAL: DAVE
" I'm not the most athletic, academic, or social guy"
" Quite frankly I'm kinda normal, didn't think I'd make the merge that's for sure"
" But with no distractions I might as well win a million dollars"
END CONFESSIONAL
CONFESSIONAL: SHAWN
" Even though Rodney's gone, I'm not ready to trust the other guys with Jasmine yet"
" As far as I know, everyone could have a crush on Jasmine!"
END CONFESSIONAL
CONFESSIONAL: JO
" The merge.."
"Finally all that team crap was giving me the creeps"
" But it may be best to expand my horizon over to the Killer Bass if I'm going to get Dakota out"
END CONFESSIONAL
CONFESSIONAL: MAX
" Of course I was going to make the merge"
" Reality tv show villains ALWAYS go far!"
" But I will be known as the greatest reality tv show villain!"
"BWAHAHAHAHAH!"
END CONFESSIONAL
CONFESSIONAL: AMY
" Ha! I'm in the merge and Samey isn't!"
" Just proves who the better twin is"
END CONFESSIONAL
CONFESSIONAL: SUGAR
" What's da merge?"
"Everyone keeps on making up words, like I'm the only one with sense around here"
END CONFESSIONAL
CONFESSIONAL: MIKE
" The merge is cool and all but I wish Zoey were here..."
" Also why is Scott still here? He's a jerk with a capital J who should've been voted off day one!"
END CONFESSIONAL
CONFESSIONAL: SCOTT
" With the merge, my sabotage strategy is completely out the window"
" From now on the Scottmeister is in it to win it!"
END CONFESSIONAL
CONFESSIONAL: B
B gives a thumbs up
END CONFESSIONAL
CONFESSIONAL: DAKOTA
" Merge means more screentime!"
" I'm hoping I could convince all the boys to vote with me, then we can pick off the girls one by one!"
"And when I'm the only girl left, all the attention will be mine!"
END CONFESSIONAL
CONFESSIONAL: JASMINE
" Me and Shawn made the merge!"
" We still gotta keep our relationship status secret till I win"
"But with our athletic abilities it shouldn't be too long"
END CONFESSIONAL
CONFESSIONAL: SCARLETT
" I still have a trick or two up my sleeve"
"So whatever you got Chris, bring it"
END CONFESSIONAL
"Chris told me he wants yall to meet him at the Dock of Shame for some special announcement" Chef said
" Did he say specifically?" Jasmine asked
"JUST MOVE YA BUTTS!" Chef yelled
Everyone ran out of the Mess Hall
~ Dock of Shame~
The contestants arrive at the Dock of Shame
"What was so important we had to stop breakfast?" Dave asked
" Well first off quick congratulations for making the merge. But don't get cocky things only get harder from here" Chris said
" You really think we didn't know that?" Jo said
" Well did you know about this new twist?" Chris asked
"What twist?" Mike asked
"I'm ..."
"..."
"..."
"... bringing two people back into the game!" Chris said
Everyone gasped
" Wait a minute, you've gone at least a thousand times about" Jo said
~Flashback: Chris~
" Once you leave and"
"walk across the Dock of Shame"
"and head onto the Boat of Losers"
"You can"
"never"
"never"
"never"
"EVER"
"come back"
END FLASHBACK
" Yeah what gives?!" Jasmine said
" I'm not a man of my word. So word of advice, don't trust anything I say" Chris said
" Anyways give a big welcome to our first returnee... TOPHER!" Chris said
" Who?" Shawn said
"What?" Dakota said
" Where?" Max said
~ The Yacht~
" Get ready for the Topher Experience!" Topher said
Topher then walked off the yacht and faceplanted onto the dock
~ Dock of Shame~
" What the? He wasn't even in the game!" Jo said
"True but he paid a handsome amount of money to be on the show, so I'll allow it" Chris said
" Don't worry guys as long as you give me all the camera time everything will be okay" Topher said
"EXCUSE ME?!" Dakota said
"You heard me sweetheart, your old news" Topher said
Dakota tries walking over to Topher but is restrained by Shawn and Dave
CONFESSIONAL: DAKOTA
" First impressions are key in a game show like this"
" And I gotta say I DON'T like that Topher kid"
END CONFESSIONAL
CONFESSIONAL: TOPHER
" My first confessional as a contestant!"
" I mean sure I got to talk to Chris as an intern but that was just him ordering me around"
" Now I can have a conversation with him, man to man"
END CONFESSIONAL
" So-" Topher said before being interrupted
" Shut it Topher. I still have to introduce our next returnee. Who I guarantee was actually in the game, It's..." Chris said
"..."
"..."
"..."
"... ZOEY!"
~ The Yacht~
Zoey silently stands on the dock but she looks... different. She has a bandana on and war paint on her face.
Authors Note: In case you don't get it she's Commando Zoey now :)
She walked off the Yacht and headed onto the Dock of Shame.
~ Dock of Shame~
CONFESSIONAL: MIKE
" Woo-hoo!"
" The one person besides Cameron I wanted to come back, came back!"
" Miracles really do happen!"
END CONFESSIONAL
CONFESSIONAL: SCOTT
" Great..."
"Of course Chris brings back someone whose elimination I caused"
" The only way this could get worse if Dawn showed up"
END CONFESSIONAL
" Hey Zoey! You look... different" Mike said
" You!" Zoey said ignoring Mike but pointing at Scarlett
" Me?" Scarlett asked
" Don't play dumb. I rewatched the episode I was eliminated in. You and Scott had an alliance!" Zoey said
The Killer bass gasped
" Scarlett with Scott?" Mike said
" Not only that they've been doing all sorts of messed up stuff. Scott framed Sky, sabotaged and framed Dawn, fed Cameron to a bear, disqualified Staci, and got me eliminated! And she's just as worse, she was even-" Zoey said before being interrupted
" That's enough Zoey. We don't want you spoiling too much" Chris said
" Whatever Chris Mcdouche" Zoey said
CONFESSIONAL: SCARLETT
" Having Zoey back definitely isn't the best for my game"
"I'm just glad Chris stopped her before she revealed what I did"
END CONFESSIONAL
" Now that you've all been re-introduced let's move onto the challenge! Today's challenge will revolve one of the oldest clichés... battle of the sexes! So Scarlett, Zoey, and Amy move your stuff and head over to the Screaming Gopher cabin. Dave, Topher, and Shawn move your stuff and head to the Killer Bass cabin. After your done with that meet me in the Mess Hall" Chris said
~ Screaming Gopher Cabin~
Zoey, Amy, and Scarlett enter the cabin
" I call top bunk!" Amy said
" But all the top bunks are taken" Jasmine said
"Well then move it!" Amy said
"Are we gonna have a problem?" Jasmine asked
Jo steps between the two
"There's no need to argue, Amy you can have my bunk" Jo said faking a smile
"Finally someone with some class" Amy said
CONFESSIONAL: JO
" Pretending to be nice is the worst! But if I want allies I gotta do it"
END CONFESSIONAL
~ Killer Bass Cabin~
The dudes are having a party. B is spinning his record player, while the others dance and drink soda
" Burp contest! Whoever burps the loudest is our leader" Scott said
" Wait let me try!" Mike said
Mike took a sip of his soda
... He hiccupped
" Weak" Scott said
" I got this!" Shawn said
Shawn shook the bottle and drank it
"BRHRHHGHGHGHGHGGHGHG!" Shawn burped
CONFESSIONAL: BEAR?
The Bear is taking a piss
The burp blows the confessional down
The bear walks away with his newspaper
~Mess Hall~
The burp shatters the windows
" Oh man that's nasty!" Chef said
~ Screaming Gopher Cabin~
" Ew! Who was that!" Amy said
"Probably one of the boys" Zoey said
" It was probably Scott, he's sooooo gross!" Amy said
~ Killer Bass Cabin~
"Speech!" Scott said
The guys picked Shawn up
" Well as your leader I declare... ALL OF YOU STAY AWAY FROM JASMINE!" Shawn said
Awkward silence
"..."
"..."
" Okay..." Mike said
CONFESSIONAL: DAVE
" Ever since the whole love letter thing with Rodney, Shawn's been acting weird"
"Well he already was weird, let's just say he got weirder"
END CONFESSIONAL
~ Mess Hall~
The contestants all gather at the Mess Hall
" For this challenge you'll be competing against your opposite genders in a eating competition! I've asked Chef to make the nastiest, sickest meals and let's just say he delivered. In order to win the round, your whole team has to eat the food." Chris said
"We'll be doing four rounds! Team with the most points win a trip to our all deluxe spa! While the losers will be voting someone off" Chris said
CONFESSIONAL: SCARLETT
" Eating challenges are my Achilles heel"
END CONFESSIONAL
" Here comes Round One!" Chris said
Chef exits the kitchen with two silver platters he sets one at each table
" Bon appetite" Chef said
" Why do you keep saying that? your not French..." Scarlett said
"Just eat the damn food" Chef said
The two teams lifted their platters to reveal...
~ Girls Side~
"Beef testicles?!" Scarlett said
"Local delicacy" Chris said
CONFESSIONAL: AMY
" No way I was gonna eat that!"
" Samey should be the one eating gross food"
END CONFESSIONAL
" YUMMY!" Sugar said
Sugar immediately ate her plate of beef testicles
" Seconds, please!" Sugar said
"Um... that was our only batch" Chris said
"Fine! I'll just eat the others" Sugar said
The girls handed Sugar their plates
" Did I forget to mention, that everyone has to eat their own food or it doesn't count?" Chris said
The girls groan and get their plates back
~Boys Side~
Scott finishes his plate
" Man that was good! Doesn't beat ma-ma's cooking but still" Scott said
"GASP" "Hey yo where da meat at?" Vito asked
" It's right in front of you" Scott said sarcastically
Vito chomps down on the testicles... pause. And finishes his plate
B holds his nose and consumes the testicles
Shawn copies B's movements and consumes his
" Evil doesn't consume filth" Max said
"I'm with Max, I'll at least have to get my stomach pumped three times to survive this" Dave said
" Enough with the yapping" Scott said
Scott shoved the testicles into Max and Dave's mouth
" EW!" Dave said before spitting them out
"BLEH!" Max said before spitting them out
~Girls Side~
The girls all finished their testicles
" And that's one point for the girls!" Chris said
Score: Girls-1 Boys-0
" Question, does anyone like pizza?" Chris said
" I do!" Mike said
"Then you'll love grasshopper, jellyfish, and anchovies pizza!" Chris said
Chef walks out the kitchen with the pizzas and places them on each table
" Um... it's still alive" Jasmine said
" Duh. HAHA!" Chef said
Scarlett gets on the table, closes her eyes and meditates
" Now's not the time for a Dawn impression, start eating!" Jo said
" That's what I'm getting to" Scarlett calmly said
Scarlett picked up the pizza took a deep breath and ate it
" Weak. Just eat it!" Jo said before swallowing her pizza
" I'm with Jo." Zoey said before eating her pizza
" The testicles was one thing. But these are like moving!" Dakota said
Zoey then stared at Dakota
"Eat it." Zoey said
"But-" Dakota said
"Eat it" Zoey said
"Okay..." Dakota said
Dakota took a bite out of her pizza
Amy, Jasmine, and Sugar ate their pizzas
" Another point for the girls! If the guys don't get a point next round they will lose!" Chris said
Score: Girls-2 Boys-1
~ Boys Side~
" Since Shawn's been... busy as of late. I think I should be our new leader" Dave said
" Why should you get to be the new leader? You couldn't even eat the damn food!" Scott said
" Your one to talk, Mr. Sabotage" Dave said
" Innocent until proven guilty!" Scott said
"So your saying when one of us gets kicked off and goes home to rematch the show. We WON'T see you sabotaging challenges?" Dave asked
"..."
" That's what I thought" Dave said
" Were men! Let's just suck it up and eat the food! Cuz gosh darn it, I really want that spa day!" Dave said
The dudes cheered for Dave
"Dave for new leader!" Mike said
CONFESSIONAL: DAVE
" Well I mean... I had to do something"
END CONFESSIONAL
" Alright, I think their ready for their next dish" Chris said
Chef brings out what appears to be hot dogs
" Hot dogs? How is this disgusting?" Shawn asked
" Close, dolphin dogs!" Chris said
"..."
Shawn took a bite out of the dolphin dog
"Still tastes like a hot dog" Shawn said
The guys devour down the hot dogs
" And that's a point for the guys! For our last round you get to pick two members from each of your team to compete! Be careful, this is for the win so you might wanna pick someone with a strong stomach" Chris said
~ Girls Side~
" Sugar" The girls said in unison
Sugar shrugged her shoulders
" More food for me!" Sugar said
~Boys Side~
CONFESSIONAL: SCOTT
" Thanks to Zoey the snitch, none of the guys except for Max trust me."
"So I figured if I win the challenge, that'll get this giant target off my back"
END CONFESSIONAL
" I'll do it!" Scott said
" Knock yourself out" Dave said
~ Mess Hall~
Scott and Sugar walk to opposite sides of the dining table
"Get ready to lose, ginger" Sugar said
"Right back at ya, fatty" Scott said
" WHAT WAS THAT?!" Sugar said
" Distance..." Chef said stepping in between the two
"Thanks Chef, now on to the final course!" Chris said
Chef brings out the roach smoothies
" Why not wash down all the food with blended cockroaches?" Chris said
CONFESSIONAL: SCOTT
" Cockroaches are like potato chips to me"
"I got this one in the bag"
END CONFESSIONAL
CONFESSIONAL: SUGAR
" What's a cockroach?"
"Whatever, I can still probably eat it"
END CONFESSIONAL
" Get ready... steady... GO!" Chris said
Scott and Sugar start gulping down the cockroach smoothies
After a while, the two now feeling queasy are each down to one cup
" Ugh..." Scott said
" Eh- BHG!" Sugar said
Sugar turned around and vomited all over the cast
"..."
"EWW!" Amy said
" Hand sanitizer! I need-" Dave said
"BLRHGGHG!" Dave vomited
"BRHGHGHG!" Amy vomited
" BRHGHG!" Shawn vomited
"BRHGLGHGJH!" Jo vomited
"BRLGHJHJGH!" Topher vomited
"BJJHJFGJITJT!" Jasmine vomited
"EVIL VOMIT! BLRHGGHGGGGG!" Max vomited
" You might wanna get a mop" Chris said
"HGHGHGHGHRBLRRHRHRH!" Chef vomited
"Well the winner is obvious! Boys go pack your bags cuz your heading to our exclusive spa! Girls your voting someone off tonight" Chris said
CONFESSIONAL: ZOEY
" I think we all have a pretty good idea on who to vote for"
END CONFESSIONAL
~ Dock of Shame~
The boys with luggage at hand, get ready to enjoy their spa day
" Scott you may not be trustworthy, But thanks for pulling off that win today, we needed it" Dave said
"Thanks... I guess." Scott said
The yacht arrives
CONFESSIONAL: SCOTT
" I'm not one to get into girly things but look at my elbows!"
" It's like I got them from an alligator!"
END CONFESSIONAL
The boys head onto the yacht
~ Campfire~
" Welcome ladies! Looks like boys really are better at girls... at eating that is. But still you all majorly failed! So get to voting!" Chris said
One by one the girls go in to cast their votes
" Hmm... interesting. If I call your name you can come and get a marshmallow" Chris said
" Zoey!"
"Jo!"
"and surprisingly Amy!"
They all go up to get their marshmallows
"Sugar, Jasmine Scarlett, and Dakota. You've all received votes against you, but the next person that is safe is... Scarlett and Jasmine!" Chris said
Scarlett and Jasmine both claim their marshmallows
CONFESSIONAL: ZOEY
" Are the girls blind?!"
"Scarlett is the clear threat and they won't even listen to me!"
" But you'll get yours one day Scarlett, that I promise"
END CONFESSIONAL
" Dakota your on the chopping block for excessive texting and Sugar your on the chopping block for barfing on your team. The person going home is..."
"..."
"..."
"..."
"..."
"... The both of ya!" Chris said
The two girls gasped
" But how?!" Dakota said frantically
" Yeah the votes were tied but we don't have enough time for a tie breaker challenge that and your both incredibly annoying. So your both going home!" Chris said
" Aw, fiddlesticks" Sugar said
Scarlett raises her hand
" Yes, Scarlett?" Chris said
" Before she leaves may I ask Dakota who she's been texting?" Scarlett asked
" No need, I already know from her previous phones. Yeah she's been having tons of conversations with that gamer boy" Chris said
"Sam?!" The girls said in unison
" Yes, I paid one of daddy's lawyers to find out his phone number. I mean it's not like I wanna like him but... he's like so funny and stuff." Dakota said
"So yeah... I like Sam! And anyone who has a problem with it can kiss my butt!" Dakota said
"..."
"BLRHGHGGH!" Jo vomited
CONFESSIONAL: JO
" Well Dakota just topped the food in disgustingness"
END CONFESSIONAL
" Enough chit-chat ladies. Dakota, Sugar you two have a boat to catch" Chris said
~ Dock of Shame~
"Bye guys I'll like totally miss you all... well except for Jo" Dakota said
" I think million dollar competition should be based on general awesomeness not likability. Which means I shouldn't even be here!" Sugar said
"Yeah, yeah that's what they all say" Chris said
Chris pushes Dakota and Sugar onto the Boat of Losers
GOODBYE SUGAR AND DAKOTA
The girls headed back to their cabin
CONFESSIONAL: JO
" Getting rid of Dakota was like squashing a cockroach"
" Takes a while, but soooo satisfying when you do it"
END CONFESSIONAL
" Hope you enjoyed our first merge episode! With Jo's main target gone, who will she gun for next? Will Zoey ever convince the others to vote off Scarlett? And will Scott earn the trust of his fellow competitors? Find out all of this and more on TOTAL DRAMA ISLAND!" Chris said
That was Chapter Fifteen! If you enjoyed it as always leave a favorite and review!
Spoilers Below
Reason for elimination: Dakota and Sugar, I like both of them, but with the merge on the horizon I kinda had to get rid of characters that didn't really have a lot of plot going on.
Reason for bringing them back: Zoey, When deciding on who to bring back I was torn between bringing back Sky or Zoey. But... I didn't really know what to do with Sky if I brought her back. Plus I figured it'd be a good time to whip out Commando Zoey so... yeah.
Authors Note: Oh yeah almost forgot, This is the last double elimination of the season. :)
Merged: Zoey, Mike, Scott, B, Jo, Dave, Shawn, Topher, Max, Scarlett, Jasmine, Amy
Elimination Order: Leonard-28th, Sky-27th, Lightning-26th, Samey-25th, Staci-24th, Sam-23rd, Anne Maria-22nd, Beardo-21st, Dawn-20th, Cameron-19th
Zoey-18th "RETURNED", Ella-17th, Brick-16th, Rodney-15th, Sugar-14th, Dakota-13th
Votes for Sugar
Scarlett- Sugar
Dakota- Sugar
Votes for Dakota
Jo- Dakota
Jasmine- Dakota
Votes for Jasmine
Amy- Jasmine
Votes for Scarlett
Zoey- Scarlett