Review Responding Time!
acl97gioia- Aw, Dakota and Sugar *cries*
JO YOU CAN WIN THIS.
Me- We'll see.
Brayden- Are you going to do tdroti and tdpi
Me- You mean like the original cast in revenge and pahkitew? I've thought about it but I'm mainly focused on Total Drama What If Action after I'm done with this
Fear the Darkness Inside- I am so happy that Mike is gone. I can't stand him. That was genius of Scott and Scarlett how they exposed and eliminated him. I'm rooting for Scarlett
Me- Yeah I realized Mike had a lot of fans but simultaneously a lot of haters. #TeamScarlett
mattafat- I'm not gonna lie this fic is one of my favorites now at first I was a little unsure but now I love it! Also Scott and Zoey's conversations are amazing and on top of all that you kept Dave amazing! Dave was really good in the first half of TDPI and you expanded on that part of him I really love this, keep writing, and keeping up the good no great work.
Me- Thanks! I'm glad your enjoying it. I do feel they did Dave dirty in post merge TDPI, and I just didn't want that happen here
MichaelFang69- This kind of reminds me of how Mike was eliminated in the Canon show. But even so, I see why you had to eliminate him. Personal bias can't get in the way. Also I have a question: would you ever do an SYOC?
Me- Yeah it all makes sense eventually, I'm still considering it, maybe as like a side season to the main story, but I wanna focus all my attention on this. So I'll decide after this is done
" Last time on Total Drama! The boys returned from their spa day rested and relaxed. We couldn't have that so we dove straight into a challenge! To win immunity our players had to spin the wheel of misfortune. Whatever thing they landed on they had to do or they were out! The snapping turtles took a bite out of Scott's... nuts, Topher swam with the eels and Zoey proved to be a competitor when she won immunity! To avoid going home Scarlett and Scott concocted a plan to send Multiple Mike home. By spreading word around through camp in an almost unanimous vote, Mike was sent home. Find out who goes today on TOTAL DRAMA ISLAND!" Chris said
~ Trailer~
Zoey is sitting on a lawn chair outside of her trailer
" Ah, I could get used to this" Zoey said
"FIIIRREEE!" Chris screamed
Zoey turned around to see who said that but she only sees her trailer explode
" What the?! Aw come on!" Zoey said
" That was epic!" Chris said
Zoey grabbed Chris by his collar
"Do that again, and I'll make sure you never see another bottle of hair gel!" Zoey said
Zoey dropped Chris and walked away
"Geez, uptight much?" Chris said
~ The Forest~
Jasmine and Shawn are enjoying breakfast burritos by the campfire
" How did you snag these?" Jasmine asked
" Easy, just hid em in my hat" Shawn said
CONFESSIONAL: JASMINE
" Shawn's a great guy and all.."
" But he'd be perfect if he lost the whole zombie thing"
END CONFESSIONAL
CONFESSIONAL: SHAWN
" Jasmine's totally a great gal"
" Once she starts developing a fear of the undead, she'll be perfect!"
END CONFESSIONAL
Jasmine and Shawn lean in for a kiss
...
...
...
" CHALLENGE TIME!" Chris said on the loudspeaker
CONFESSIONAL: SHAWN
" I was THIS close to kissing Jasmine for real"
Shawn takes out a notebook and starts writing
"Note to self, break loudspeaker"
END CONFESSIONAL
~ Amphitheater~
" Welcome ladies, are ye ready for a fun filled adventure?" Chris asked the contestants
" Ditch the pirate accent, you sound like a creep" Jo said
" Okay... Anyways today's challenge is good old fashioned treasure hunt!" Chris said
" You'll be searching for keys to open your treasure chests" Chris said
"But be careful about what chest you use, because one of them has immunity while the other has a penalty" Chris said
" Where do we find these keys?" Zoey asked
Chris takes out a garbage bag filled with paper
" What you pick is what you pick" Chris said
So one by one the contestants pick their papers
" Now read em and weep!" Chris said
" Mine is attached to a bear?!" Scott said
"Yeah, I was hoping you would get that one" Chris said
"Me too" Zoey said
CONFESSIONAL: SCOTT
" Pfft. I was playing it up for the cameras"
" All I have to do is set a trap for the bear and immunity is mine"
END CONFESSIONAL
" Now go and find your treasures!" Chris said
~ Mess Hall~
Chris is talking through the loudspeaker
" In order to get his key Topher has to search through Chef's kitchen" Chris said
Topher slowly walks into the kitchen, he then opens the fridge only to find an angry Chef Hatchet with a knife. He quickly runs out of the kitchen
CONFESSIONAL: TOPHER
" I mean, I'm glad I didn't get the bear but is Chef really any better?"
END CONFESSIONAL
~ The Forest~
" For Max's challenge he has to get his key from a beehive" Chris said
" Bees! I demand you give me my key at once!" Max said
The bees came out of the beehive. Scared, Max ran away with the bees chasing him
~ Lake Wawanakwa~
Jasmine is trying to tiptoe her way to her key by her platform without falling into the lake and being eaten by the alligators
Max screams and jumps into the lake the Bees sting the alligators
"Now's my chance" Jasmine said
Jasmine tiptoes faster and grabs her key
" Yes!" Jasmine said
"And Jasmine is first to get her key!" Chris said
~ The Forest~
Jasmine checks up on Shawn
" Skunks, terrific" Shawn said sarcastically
" Don't worry I know a trick back from a friend. But we'll need some water" Jasmine said
A couple minutes later, Jasmine and Shawn come back with buckets of water
" Now all we need to do is flush them out" Jasmine said
Shawn and Jasmine pour the water down the skunk hole, the skunks run away
Shawn grabs his key
" Thanks, Jasmine" Shawn said blushing
"Your... welcome" Jasmine said also blushing
Shawn and Jasmine leans towards each other once more
CONFESSIONAL: SHAWN
" I mean we both completed our challenges, so... why not?"
"And this time I made sure to break that damn loudspeaker"
END CONFESSIONAL
~ Chris' Trailer~
" What the? Who broke my loudspeaker!" Chris said
"Stupid teenagers..." Chris said
~ The Forest~
Jasmine and Shawn kiss each other passionately
Scarlett and Scott watch this while hiding in a bush
" This is what was so important?" Scott asked
" Yes, we need to break up that couple immediately" Scarlett said
" Okay... But why were you watching them making out? Are you into that sorta thing or- " Scott said before being interrupted
" Please stop using your vocal chords" Scarlett said
"Huh?" Scott said
"Shut up" Scarlett ordered
~ The Woods~
Scarlett and Scott walk away with their knowledge
" So what are we gonna do now?" Scott said
"Your going to help me complete my challenge" Scarlett said
"Which is?" Scott asked
Scarlett stops pointing to a bunny with a key around it's neck
" Really?! You get a bunny and I get a freaking bear! This is bullcrap!" Scott said
" Shh... You'll scare it" Scarlett said
The bunny turns around and roars at them
"Um... since when do bunnies do that?" Scott said
" I can only assume it's a rare species. I must take it back for experimentation" Scarlett said
Scarlett grabs the bunny by the ears and takes the key. She then puts it into a garbage bag
" What are you gonna do with the bunny?" Scott asked
" It will all make sense eventually" Scarlett said
~ Bear Cave~
Scarlett and Scott arrive at the bear cave
" So you got any bright ideas?" Scott asked
"Yes. I'm going to go claim my treasure chest" Scarlett said
" How is that fair?! I helped you with the bunny!" Scott said
" No, you merely watched. Plus our alliance only counts for votes and strategies. When it comes to challenges, your on your own." Scarlett said
Scarlett walked away
CONFESSIONAL: SCOTT
" It's probably not gonna happen today, but I feel like I should ditch Scarlett soon"
" One, she doesn't help AT ALL, Two, there's only room for one strategist at this here island!"
END CONFESSIONAL
Scott walked into the bear cave, he saw the bear with the key and tiptoed over there. He then tried to squat down and grab the key but the bear had in a headlock
" Crap!" Scott yelled
Scott's yelling caused all the bears to wake up
" Crap times infinity..." Scott said quieter
~ Dock of Shame~
Jo's key is being guarded by three sharks
"Well time to work my brain muscles" Jo said
Jo stands in place and starts thinking, a lightbulb goes off
"That's it!" Jo said
~ Mess Hall~
Topher sits outside of the Mess Hall, depressed
"What's wrong with you, newbie?" Jo asked
" Newbie? Isn't this the first time any of you have been on a reality show?" Topher said
"Touché..." Jo said
" But yeah, I'm never gonna get my key with Psycho Chef in there" Topher said
" I'll make a deal with ya, If you get me some chum from the kitchen. I'll go in and steal your key" Jo said
"Really?" Topher said
"Yep, but hurry up. I want that immunity" Jo said
Topher runs inside the Mess Hall and into the kitchen where he meets Chef with scissors taped to his hands
" Is this supposed to be a reference to Edward Scissorhands?" Topher said
" I don't know, why don't you ask... my knife!" Chef said
" Um... what?" Topher said
" I was practicing my comedy routine, don't judge me" Chef said
Chef ran towards Topher, Topher ducked and Chef's knives got stuck to the fridge
Topher ran inside the freezer, he saw the key so he grabbed it and some chum
Topher then ran out the Mess Hall
" Whoa, you got the key and the chum?" Jo said
CONFESSIONAL: JO
" I've been looking for a new alliance member since Dakota left"
" Topher may be a noob, but I can use that to my advantage"
END CONFESSIONAL
Topher handed Jo the chum and was about to go get his key until Jo stopped him
" Look, I know your a noob and all. But I'm in serious need of an alliance member. Keep in mind if you do join my alliance you won't be the next one going home" Jo said
CONFESSIONAL: TOPHER
" Even though I just got on the show bout two episodes ago"
" I was an intern, I watched them through the cameras so I know all there moves"
" The main three to watch out for is Jo, Scott, and Scarlett."
" So of course I was going to say no"
END CONFESSIONAL
Topher ran off with his key
"Sorry not interested!" Topher said
CONFESSIONAL: JO
" That kid just made a big mistake..."
" If it wasn't for Scarlett the brainiac maniac, he'd be at the top of my hit list"
" So count yourself luck for now... Topher"
END CONFESSIONAL
~ Communal Washrooms~
Dave is holding is piece of paper
" Oh boy..." Dave said
CONFESSIONAL: DAVE
" I have to grab my key... out of the toilet?!"
" That bear is sounding pretty nice right about now"
END CONFESSIONAL
" Nuh uh, not doing it." Dave said
Dave prepared to walk out of the restroom until a tentacle from the toilet grabbed Dave and tried to drag him
" NO NO NOOOOOOOO!" Dave screamed
The tentacle successfully dragged Dave into the toilet
~ Campfire~
B's key is attached to a flaming hoop
B pulls out a fire extinguisher and puts out the fire
Then he simply grabs the key
~ The Forest~
Zoey's key is on a tree branch
"Too easy..." Zoey said
Zoey does some acrobatics and lands on the tree branch. She grabs her key and backflips off
Meanwhile Amy is trying to get her key from a snake
"Little help here?!" Amy said
" I thought you were the "better twin" Do it yourself" Zoey said
"Ugh... Forget it!" Amy said
~ Amphitheater~
Everyone except for Amy comes back with your keys
" I see all off ye, came back with ye keys. Except for the lass called Amy" Chris said
"Whatever, Pirates are soo outdated" Amy said
" You may now open the chests!" Chris said
The contestants open their chests
" Potato Chips?" Zoey said
" Bug Spray?" Jasmine said
" A tennis racket?" Jo said
" Shampoo, yess..." Topher said
" Hand sanitizer? Weak!" Scott said
" Could I trade you for some marshmallows?" Dave asked
Scott shrugged and handed Dave the hand sanitizer in exchange for some marshmallows
" An EVIL blow dryer" Max said
B's chest revealed a pokemon trading card, he shrugged and put it in his pocket
" Well, well, well." Scarlett said
Scarlett took out an envelope which said immunity on it
" And Scarlett wins immunity and since Shawn was the only one to not open his box" Chris said
Shawn took out an envelope which said penalty on it
" Shawn, your penalty is you'll have one vote added to you in tonight's elimination ceremony" Chris said
" Well that bites." Shawn said
CONFESSIONAL: SHAWN
" Okay, Not trying to go all conspiracy theorist here"
" But am I the only who thinks it rigged that Scarlett of all people won immunity and I got the penalty!"
"The Illuminati is out to get man!"
END CONFESSIONAL
CONFESSIONAL: SCARLETT
" Shawn got the penalty?... perfect"
" This just makes my job even easier"
END CONFESSIONAL
~ Screaming Gopher Cabin~
Scarlett places a letter outside of the cabin and then knocks on the door
She runs away, Jasmine opens the door
"Hello?" Jasmine said
Jasmine looked down and saw the letter
" This better not be another love letter" Jasmine said
Jasmine picked it up and read it
~ Letter~
" Dear Jasmine,
Meet me at Dock of Shame in an hour. I got a surprise for you
From yours truly, Shawn
~ End Letter~
" Aw how romantic." Jasmine said
~ Dock of Shame~
Scott and Scarlett are discussing game
"Whoa... your gonna kiss Shawn?!" Scott said
" Yes but only when Jasmine shows up. I'll keep him pre-occupied, you give me the signal when she comes" Scarlett said
"I can do that" Scott said
"Good" Scarlett said
Couple minutes later, Scott brings Shawn down to the dock
" I don't know man, she's been crying since the challenge ended" Scott said
" You mean the challenge where she won immunity?" Shawn said
"Yeah... You better go talk to her" Scott said
Shawn approaches Scarlett
" Hey. Is everything okay?" Shawn asked
" No... I've been trying to hold in something. But I just can't any longer" Scarlett said
"And that something is?" Shawn said
"Me and Jasmine had a little chat after the challenge ended. She went on about how you were a weirdo and she was just using you for your vote" Scarlett said
" What? Me and Jasmine's love is real. Besides I doubt she'd be the type of person to do something like that" Shawn said
" But you don't understand. Look at this letter she wanted me to give to you" Scarlett said
Scarlett handed Shawn a letter
~ Letter~
" Dear Shawn,
I want you to know, I hate you with a burning passion and when I get the chance I'll convince the others to vote you off."
Not only that but I hate your personality and your clothes look like you borrowed them from a homeless man"
From your FAKE girlfriend, Jasmine"
~ End Letter~
"Wow..." Shawn said
" I know it's a lot to take in" Scarlett said
"You really thought I would fall for this crap? I mean this isn't even close to Jasmine's handwriting" Shawn said
" Now that I think about it, were you behind that whole incident with Rodney" Shawn said
Scarlett gulped
CONFESSIONAL: SCARLETT
" I may... have underestimated my opponent"
" I'll make sure to correct that error"
END CONFESSIONAL
CONFESSIONAL: SHAWN
" So this is the Scarlett, Zoey's been talking about."
" Never thought I'd say this but I think she's more dangerous than a zombie"
END CONFESSIONAL
Jasmine was walking towards the Dock of Shame
Scott made bird noises to signal Scarlett
Scarlett turned around and saw Jasmine
"Well no need, your done for anyway" Scarlett said
Scarlett grabbed Shawn and forcefully kissed him
Jasmine arrived, she saw the kiss and tears ran down her face
" S-Shawn?..." Jasmine said
Shawn tried to break free but Scarlett had a strong grip on him
Jasmine ran off crying
Scarlett released Shawn, she then spat on the ground
"Bleh! When was the last time you brushed your teeth?!" Scarlett said
" YOUR PURE EVIL, WOMAN!" Shawn said
Max appeared
"Did someone say, EVIL?" Max asked
" Not now Max" Shawn said
Shawn ran after Jasmine
" What's with him?" Max asked
" Don't worry Max. If my calculations are correct he's going home tonight" Scarlett said
~ Screaming Gopher Cabin~
Zoey finds Jasmine crying on her bed
"What's wrong?" Zoey asked
Jasmine whispered in Zoey's ear
Zoey kicks down the door and runs off
~ The Forest~
"SCARLETT IS SO OFF THIS ISLAND,... dammit she has immunity." Zoey said
"SHAWN IS SO OFF THIS ISLAND." Zoey said
~ Girls Restroom~
Zoey explains what happened to Amy and Jo
" I mean I get why he wanted to cheat on that goliath. But with Scarlett?... That's just gross" Amy said
" Can I count on your votes?" Zoey asked
" Definitely" Jo said
~ Killer Bass Cabin~
Zoey explains what happened to the guys
" I mean me and Shawn were on the same team. He didn't really seem like the cheating sort of guy" Dave said
Zoey grabbed Dave by the collar
" If you don't vote for Shawn, I will shove Scott's dirty laundry down your pie-hole!" Zoey said
" Shawn it is.." Dave said
CONFESSIONAL: DAVE
" I like the guy but.. I was dragged into a toilet!"
" I've had my fair share of nasty for today"
END CONFESSIONAL
CONFESSIONAL: SHAWN
" Sucks we can't vote off that witch, Scarlett"
" Hopefully I can convince the guys to vote off Jo"
END CONFESSIONAL
Zoey leaves the boys cabin,
Shawn enters the boys cabin
"Hey-" Shawn said before being interrupted
All the guys silently walked out of the cabin
" Wow... wonder what got into them?" Shawn said
CONFESSIONAL: SHAWN
" Man I hope Jasmine didn't tell everyone about the kiss"
" I mean she had to of known it was an accident, right?"
END CONFESSIONAL
~ Campfire~
" Welcome! As you all know Scarlett won immunity so she cannot be voted for tonight. Start voting so we can send one of you scallywags home!" Chris said
One by one the contestants go in to cast their votes
" Let's see..." Chris said
" Jasmine!"
"Jo!"
"B!"
"Zoey!"
"Topher!"
"Max!"
"Dave!"
"Scott!"
"Scarlett!"
Shawn gulps and starts sweating
" and Amy!"
" Marshmallows for the lot of ya"
Shawn fearfully looked around and saw everyone had a marshmallow except for him
" Sorry dude, your out" Chris said
" Bout time someone who DESERVED to go home, got the hell outta here" Zoey said
"Why do I deserve to go home?" Shawn asked
"Don't play dumb, Jasmine told us all about your two timing ways!" Zoey said
" But I thought I was getting along with mostly everyone minus the annoying people" Shawn said
" Maybe you should re-evaluate your opinions" Scarlett said
" Y-You don't even care do you!" Jasmine said
" No" Scarlett said in a monotone fashion
" Why do you care? Doesn't everyone think I'm some two-timing jerk" Shawn said
" Ya know after all this, I still didn't vote for you" Jasmine said
"Then how'd I get the boot?" Shawn asked
" Yeah that one's all on me. I got so pissed off at what I heard I let my emotions cloud my judgement" Zoey said
"It's okay... I guess. Sucks that I'm going home" Shawn said
" Do you think you have time for a goodbye kiss?" Jasmine asked
"Absolutely!" Shawn said
Shawn and Jasmine leaned towards each other, getting ready to embrace for a kiss
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...
" Not sorry to ruin the moment, But Shawn has a boat to catch" Chris said
Chris snaps his fingers and Shawn is carried off by Chef
Chef carries across the Dock of Shame and throws him into the Boat of Losers
~ Dock of Shame~
" I'll miss ya Shawn!" Jasmine said
" I'll miss you too!" Shawn yelled from the Boat of Losers
"Here have this!" Shawn yelled
Shawn threw Jasmine a wooden zombie head
"Aw... it's a wooden zombie head with my name carved into it. Odd but I love it!" Jasmine said
" Thanks! Also kick Scarlett ass for me!" Shawn yelled
Shawn's voice shrunk as he faded off into the distance
GOODBYE SHAWN
" I will" Jasmine said
Zoey then approached Jasmine
"Then I'll think you'll like this idea" Zoey said
~ Communal Washroom~
Scarlett is taking a shower
Jasmine and Zoey cut the shower pipe and replace with a sewage pipe
" Nice try! This raw sewage will be used in my experiments!" Scarlett yelled
A rat then crawled out of the shower drain and bit Scarlett's leg
"OOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWW!" Scarlett screamed
Jasmine and Zoey could be heard laughing off screen
~ Dock of Shame~
" And that concludes another episode. Will anyone stop the raw force known as Scarlett? How will Jasmine cope without Shawn? Will Scott break off his alliance with Scarlett? Find out all of this and more on TOTAL DRAMA ISLAND!" Chris said
That was Chapter Seventeen! If you enjoyed reading this then as always favorite it and leave me some reviews
Spoilers Below
Reason for Elimination: Shawn, I like Shawn his elimination was purely based on plot. Plus as always he was a canon winner, which I always find people letting the canon people win a bit tacky but it's alright if done good.
Elimination Order: Leonard-28th, Sky-27th, Lightning-26th, Samey-25th, Staci-24th, Sam-23rd, Anne Maria-22nd, Beardo-21st, Dawn-20th, Cameron-19th, Zoey-18th "RETURNED", Ella-17th, Brick-16th, Rodney-15th, Sugar-14th, Dakota-13th, Mike-12th, Shawn-11th
Votes for Shawn
Scarlett- Shawn
Jo- Shawn
Amy- Shawn
Zoey- Shawn
Max- Shawn
Scott- Shawn
Dave- Shawn
Topher- Shawn
B- Shawn
Max- Shawn
Votes for Jo
Shawn- Jo
Jasmine-Jo