Review Responding Time!
Fear the Darkness Inside- So glad Shawn is gone. Honestly i'm just not a fan of him plus he's a canon winner. #Team Scarlett
Me- Cool. I get people may not like every character whose left
ThorBringstheThunder- Someone: - blah blah blah, evil, blah -
Max: Did somebody say *Camera Zooms In* EVIL?
Idk, that was just the big thing I gathered from this chapter. Speaking of, why did Shasmine vote for Jo and not Max?
Me- Yeah I just kinda added that in there, surprised that's the thing people drew from that chapter...lol.
Shawsmine voted for Jo because she's a threat, while Max... is Max.
mattafat- I like Shawn don't get me wrong but like you said you're doing this for people who didn't necessarily get a lot of screen time or was derailed. Max was golden in this episode also when he appeared when Shawn said EVIL that was hilarious
Me- Yeah, gotta share that screentime. Yeah I didn't think people would find it that funny but I'll take it
MichaelFang9- What? Shawn?! My favorite idiot? That sucks. Shawn was the kind of contestant that you would swear was that one crazy guy at your high school. Also another question: do you know de wae?
Me- Who knows you might see Shawn again in a future season... :).
Yes I do know da wae my brudda, the real question is can you show me da wae?
" Last time on Total Drama! In our pirate themed challenge we sent our contestants digging for booty! The treasure kind of course, Some succeeded "Shows clip of Jasmine getting her key" while others sucked majorly "shows clip of Scott getting stuck in the bear cave" Everyone except Amy came back with their keys, when they opened their chests it revealed Scarlett won immunity. Scarlett forged a note and sent it to Jasmine, while waiting at the dock she kisses Shawn for Jasmine to see! That's just cold, but since Scarlett had immunity. Zombie Boy Shawn was the next to go. Find out what happens right now on TOTAL DRAMA ISLAND!" Chris said
~ Communal Washroom~
Topher just got done taking a shower
He dries off and puts his clothes back on
He opens the door only to find Jo there
"AH!- Jo, what do you want?" Topher asked
" Look kid, I realized you may have been delirious since I asked during the middle of a challenge" Jo said
"But not joining my alliance is a big mistake" Jo said
" Look Jo, your a threat and all. But the only person still on your side is Jasmine and she's been hanging out with Zoey lately" Topher said
" Your social game has gone down the toilet" Topher said
Topher walked away
CONFESSIONAL: JO
" How dare he!"
" But at the same time he does make a solid point"
"With Jasmine being all friendly with Zoey lately, I have no allies!"
" But that's about to change"
END CONFESSIONAL
~ The Forest~
Jo called Amy, Dave, Max, and B to the forest
"..."
" Okay why are here? The five of us have nothing in common" Dave said
" True, but we gotta band together if we wanna take out the pairs!" Jo said
"What pairs? With Shawn gone, all the couples are split up" Dave said
" I mean Jasmine and Zoey, and, Scarlett and Scott." Jo said
"If we don't make the next move were going to be picked off one by one..." Jo said
"Okay... then why isn't Topher here?" Dave asked
" I already asked him to join but he declined." Jo said
"So what do ya say?... Alliance?" Jo said
Awkward silence
"..."
"..."
B gave a thumbs down
" No!" Amy said
" Nah" Dave said
"Never! "camera zooms in" EVIL, works alone" Max said
They all got up and walked away
"Fine your all idiots anyway! I can win this whole thing by myself!" Jo said
CONFESSIONAL: JO
"Pfft. Who needs them"
" I made it to the final ten with my strength not friendship"
END CONFESSIONAL
" ATTENTION CAMPERS MEET ME AT THE DOCK OF SHAME!" Chris said on the loudspeaker
~ Dock of Shame~
The final ten contestants gather at the Dock of Shame
"Today's challenge is a simple game I like to call... Hide and Seek. You guys will be the hiders, the seeker? None other than Chef Hatchet!" Chris said
Chef appears with a water gun
" Um... why does he have a water gun?" Jasmine asked
" Chef, care to explain?" Chris asked
Chef aims his water gun at Scott, he tries to run but he gets blasted off the Dock
" That is what will happen if Chef finds you. If you do get caught the only chance you have of getting immunity is if you find someone yourself and bring them back to Chef" Chris said
" If you manage to outlast everyone you win immunity, You all have a ten minute head start... which starts... NOW!" Chris said
Chris blew his airhorn and the contestants scattered
~ Screaming Gopher Cabin~
Max is hiding under his bed
"No one will ever find me here" Max said
"BWAHAHA!" Max laughed
Chris walked into the cabin
" Two things. One, hiding under your bed is REALLY predictable. Two, when hiding it's probably not wise to do a loud cartoonish type of laugh" Chris said
" EVIL, doesn't need your advice" Max said
Chef broke through the door with his head
" HEERRREEEE"SS CHEFF!" Chef screamed
Authors Note: Did anyone get that The Shining reference... lol
Max screamed and jumped out the window
" You might wanna go after him" Chris said
"Don't you think I know that?!" Chef said
~ Dock of Shame~
Scarlett changed into her bathing suit and dives into the water, she then takes some straws and makes a tube to breath out of
CONFESSIONAL: SCARLETT
" I doubt Chef would expect me to hide at the place we all started"
" Immunity is MINE"
END CONFESSIONAL
~ Tree~
Jasmine and Zoey are hiding up a tree
" You sure this is a good hiding spot?" Zoey asked
"Of course! Even if Chef finds us he still has to get us with his water gun. And were both pretty fast runners" Jasmine said
~ Cave~
Scott is hiding in the cave
CONFESSIONAL: SCOTT
" After having to get that key from the bear, I know this cave in and out"
" No way Chef is gonna find me"
END CONFESSIONAL
Scott hears footsteps and hides behind a rock, Amy walks into the cave and hides
"What are you doing here?!" Scott asked
" I couldn't think of a good hiding spot, so I just followed you" Amy said
" No! Two people is way too much will get caught for sure" Scott said
" Well too bad I'm staying here!" Amy said
" Ugh, fine. At least hide behind me so I make sure you don't get caught" Scott said
Amy walks over and hides behind Scott
" You know you smell like manure, right?" Amy said
" I've said I live on a farm, multiple times" Scott said
"... What's it like?" Amy asked
" It's not as bad people make it out to be, my sister Albertha is the county hog caller champ" Scott said
" Thanks to that we got a lifetime supply of pigs. So if you ever need any bacon, you know who to call" Scott said
Amy chuckles
CONFESSIONAL:AMY
" I mean it was no question, I was going to make the final ten"
" But I can't count on my insanely good looks forever."
" Teaming up with Scott is looking pretty good right about now"
END CONFESSIONAL
" Hey...um... would you want to be in an... let's say, alliance?" Amy said
CONFESSIONAL: SCOTT
" First Scarlett and now Amy?!"
"What's up with the chicks wanting to team up?"
"I mean I'm not complaining... but still curious"
END CONFESSIONAL
" Sure but... I'm kinda in an alliance with Scarlett so I'll have to run it by her" Scott said
Chef entered the cave
" It's time to die, lovebirds!" Chef yelled
Amy stood up from her hiding spot
" WE. ARE. NOT. IN. LOVE" Amy said in a monotone fashion
While off guard, Chef shoots Amy with his water gun
"GASP" "My clothes?!, Your paying for my dry cleaning!" Amy said
"Sure, right after I take care of Farm Boy" Chef said
Scott tried to run but Chef already had him in his sights, he shot him without hesitation
" You stink boy, I did you a favor" Chef said
" A favor? I'm out of the game!" Scott said
"Quit ya whining and help me find the rest of the brats" Chef said
CAUGHT-2, LEFT-8
~ The Forest~
Scott, Amy, and Chef are looking for the rest of the contestants
Amy trips over something
"Ow... what was that?" Amy asked
Scott walked over to help her up
"I think it's some type of dirt clod" Scott said
Scott kicks it and hears a grunt
"Wait a minute.." Scott said
Scott pulled on it ripping apart what seemed to be a sheet. Which revealed B's hiding spot
" GOT YA!" Chef said
Chef blasted B with his water gun
B snaps his fingers in defeat
CAUGHT-3, LEFT-7
~ Campfire~
Topher is hiding in a nearby bush by the campfire
Some skunks walk over to where he was hiding
" No..." Topher said
CONFESSIONAL: TOPHER
" Not only will the skunks give away my location but also... my hair!"
END CONFESSIONAL
Topher takes off his shoe and prepares to throw it at the skunks
"I'm giving you to the count of three to go away. One... Two..." Topher said before being interrupted
The skunks turned around and sprayed Topher
" AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!" Topher screamed
~ The Forest~
Topher's scream was heard throughout the island
"That's Topher, hurry up maggots!" Chef said
Chef, B, Scott, and Amy ran towards the scream
~ The Campfire~
Topher is sitting on the ground, crying
Chef and the others arrive, they smell him and take a few steps back
"Oof, boy you stink" Chef said covering his nose
"Yeah, even I don't smell that bad." Scott said
" Just spray me already!" Topher said
Chef pumps his water gun and sprays it at Topher
" Is the smell gone?!" Topher asked frantically
" Nope you still smell like dirty buttcheeks" Chef said
CAUGHT-4, LEFT-6
" How are we gonna like find the others?" Amy asked
" I don't know about the others but I know how to find Max" Scott said
"How's that?" Chef said
" Man that sure was... EVIL." Scott said
Max magically appeared
" Did somebody say... EVIL?! BWAHAHA!" Max said
While distracted Chef fires his water gun at Max
" How dare you use evil against me!" Max said
" But if you really think about it, isn't saying Evil just... EVIL?" Scott asked
"... Touché" Max said
CAUGHT-5, LEFT-5
~ The Forest~
Dave and Jo are walking together in the forest
" You see any good hiding spots yet, Germ Boy?" Jo asked
" I'm not Germ Boy and we could see if Jasmine and Zoey are willing to share their hiding spot" Dave said
"We don't even know where their hiding" Jo said
Dave pointed upward
Jasmine and Zoey waved down from the tree they were hiding in
" Sorry but we gotta look out for ourselves" Zoey said
" Jasmine you can't be okay with this?! Were in an alliance" Jo said
" Yeah.. um... I'm kind of leaving the alliance" Jasmine said
"What?! And after all I've done for you" Jo said
" Hey, I know Jo sucks but can I hide with you?" Dave asked
Jo shoved Dave to the ground
" Don't listen to Normal Norman, take me!" Jo said
" Um.. I think were gonna go" Jasmine said
Zoey and Jasmine jumped out of their tree and started running
"Hey they left! Finders keepers..." Jo said
"Um... you might wanna turn around" Dave said
Chef and the other contestants were behind them
" Aqua la vista.." Chef said
Chef pumped his water gun and sprayed them both
" Hurry up! I'm not letting those two beat me at my own game!" Chef said
So Chef and the other contestants chased after Jasmine and Zoey
~ Dock of Shame~
" Were almost there!" Jasmine said
"Immunity is ours!" Zoey said
The both arrived at the Dock of Shame, where they saw Scarlett standing there with a smirk on her face
"Don't you mean, my immunity?" Scarlett asked
"No, but how?!" Jasmine asked
" Simple strategy. Anyone with a high IQ could've figured it out... oh wait" Scarlett said
" Your really full of yourself, huh?" Zoey asked
"If you mean confident in my skills then yes" Scarlett said
Chef and the others arrive
" WHAT. THREE PEOPLE ESCAPED MY WRATH?! THIS JUST AIN"T RIGHT!" Chef screamed
He then started breathing and muttering to himself
" Okay... I'm good now. Scarlett wins immunity" Chef said
Everyone except Scarlett groaned
" But I still have some water left so..." Chef said
Chef blasted the three girls with his water gun
" Ah, that's better" Chef said
~ Screaming Gopher Cabin~
Topher and the guys are discussing strategy
" Look, I can take all of us to the final five. IF you do what I say" Topher said
" Hold up, were the veterans and your a newbie. Why should we listen to him?" Scott asked
"Trust me Scott, I'm anything but a newb. As Chris' intern who do you think watches the episodes on tape and edits them?" Topher asked
"Who do you think sees all the fucked up things you and Scarlett have done in this game?" Topher asked
"..." Scott said nothing
" Now I want you all to tell me the current alliances your in" Topher said
" EVIL WORKS ALONE" Max said
" I have an alliance with Scarlett and I'm considering letting Amy join our alliance" Scott said
" Hmm... interesting" Topher said
CONFESSIONAL:TOPHER
"Scott and Amy?"
"That's an unexpected pair that's for sure..."
" I don't trust Scott in the slightest, so the less allies he has the better"
END CONFESSIONAL
" Well we have five boys and five girls. If we keep on voting off the girls our final five will be set in stone. Now who should we vote for?" Topher asked
" Zoey, duh" Scott said
" I mean sure she's a threat but I personally think we should take out Amy" Topher said
Scott looked at him like he was insane
" I mean think about it. Out of all the girls Amy is the wild card, she has no allies. So if we vote her out no blood on our hands." Topher said
" But Zoey's the bigger threat we should vote for her!" Scott said
CONFESSIONAL: DAVE
" Tough choice. Do we vote off Amy who nobody would have a problem if she left or Zoey, whose nice but a threat"
END CONFESSIONAL
CONFESSIONAL:SCOTT
" This guys alliance deal was sounding pretty sweet until he said to vote off Amy"
" I don't get why no one sees that Zoey needs to go, and people say I'm an idiot"
END CONFESSIONAL
~ Killer Bass Cabin~
Zoey, Jo, and Jasmine are talking game
"So we all vote for Scott?" Jo asked
" Well yeah, he's a jerk" Zoey said
" True" Jo said
The three girls shook hands
CONFESSIONAL:ZOEY
"And after Scott's gone, your next Scarlett!"
END CONFESSIONAL
~Campfire~
"Welcome campers, hope you enjoyed your little game of hide and seek. I know us at the editing room did you guys suck!" Chris said
"Ugh can we just start the voting already?!" Amy asked annoyed
"Whatever floats your boat" Chris said
One by one the contestants went in to cast their votes
" If I call your name that means your safe" Chris said
"Jasmine!"
"Jo!"
"Scarlett!"
"B!"
"Dave!"
"Max!"
" and Topher!"
They all went up to get their marshmallows
"Scott, Amy, and Zoey you've all received votes against you but the next person safe is...Zoey!" Chris said
Zoey went up to get her marshmallow and blew a raspberry at Scott
"Scott, Amy this is the final marshmallow and it goes to... " Chris said
"..."
"..."
"..."
"..."
"..."
"... Scott"
Scott sighed in relief and got his marshmallow
Amy on the other hand was furious
" HOW THE "BLEEP" COULD YOU VOTE ME OFF?! YOU GUYS ARE ALL "BLEEP"ING IDIOTS FOR VOTING OFF THE PRETTIEST GIRL IN THE SHOW! I WILL SUE THIS MOTHER"BLEEP" FOR ALL THE MONEY YOU HAVE!" Amy snapped
"Geez she's cursing up a storm, Chef could you get her out of here before we have to change our rating from PG to PG-13?" Chris asked
Chef dragged Amy who was kicking and screaming down the Dock of Shame and threw her into the Boat of Losers
GOODBYE AMY
CONFESSIONAL:ZOEY
" I would've preferred Scott going home..."
" But the camp will probably be a lot less bitchier with Amy gone"
END CONFESSIONAL
CONFESSIONAL:SCOTT
" Seeing Amy go sucks..."
"Hopefully this guys alliance works out in my favor"
END CONFESSIONAL
The contestants went back to their respective cabins
" That's all for now! What dangerous challenge do we have for next time? Will Max ever stop saying evil? Will Jo every make any allies? And will Topher's guys alliance come out on top? Find out next time on TOTAL DRAMA ISLAND!" Chris said
That was Chapter Eighteen! If you've enjoyed reading this fic leave a review and slap some favorites on here
Spoilers Below
Reason for elimination: Amy, In Pahkitew Island I feel like so much could've been done with Amy's character. But they kinda just let it go to waste. Didn't want that happen so I tried to develop her to the best of my abilities. But there's only so much I could do so I decided to eliminate her here
Elimination Order: Leonard-28th, Sky-27th, Lightning-26th, Samey-25th, Staci-24th, Sam-23rd, Anne Maria-22nd, Beardo-21st, Dawn-20th, Cameron-19th, Zoey-18th "RETURNED", Ella-17th, Brick-16th, Rodney-15th, Sugar-14th, Dakota-13th, Mike-12th, Shawn-11th, Amy-10th
Authors Note: As some have been guessing next chapter will have an original challenge. Get hyped :)... Since it's an original chapter it might take longer than normal chapters
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