Review Responding Time!
ThorBringstheThunder- *Primal Scream*
Someone: What was that?
Someone else: Oh, Topher probably got his hair wet.
My mind tends to wander reading this :)
Other things:
Why would Scott reveal his alliance with Scarlett?
Why would Jasmine ditch her alliance?
And why would B HIDE IN A WALKING PATH?
Me- Topher needs to chill lmao.
Because Scott thought he could trust Topher but was proven wrong in the last chapter
Because she overall got along more with Zoey than she did with Jo
Sometimes even the smartest contestants can be a little dumb... lol
keyblademaster avenger- Lol, loved how everyone was excited to get Scarlett off the Island. And I got my answer about Scott and Amy thank you. Wonder who will leave. Maybe B. (He IS a threat) Maybe Zoey or Topher
Me- Yeah they REALLY wanted her out, but nope got em. Your welcome, we'll see...
MichaelFang9- Aw! I wanted to see Scarlett leave! I hated her! But I loved the song they sang at the end! Pure gold!
I asked Amazon Alexa if she knew de wae and she literally defined the term, "way". *click* I am glad you know de wae, my brudda! Where is de queen?
Me- Thanks! De queen is Uganda, we must travel there by boat my brudda!
Fear the Darkness Inside- Pretty good episode. Glad Scarlett's safe
Me- Thanks!
mattafat- I love that you made Scott and Amy a thing I don't believe I've ever seen that before also I knew Scarlett wouldn't leave since she is he main antagonist. Also B talking was golden.
Me- Well it's not a 100% confirmed yet, but I do have plans for those two in the future.. True the antagonist armor is strong here. Thanks!
" Last time on TOTAL DRAMA! We tested our contestant's knowledge with a trivia quiz on what's been happening in the game so far! Some people scored points while others couldn't even remember their former teammates names! "Shows clip of Jo having trouble remembering Leonard's name" But in the end we were all shocked by B and his newfound ability to talk! Even though he said he won't be doing it anymore he still brought in major ratings! Which is why I decided to give him immunity, At the elimination ceremony. Almost everyone voted for Scarlett, but thanks it to it being a non elimination challenge she got to live for another day! Find out what happens today on TOTAL DRAMA ISLAND!" Chris said
CONFESSIONAL: TOPHER
" Man we were THIS close to voting off Scarlett last night"
" As payback I convinced the boys to join me in egging Scarlett's cabin"
END CONFESSIONAL
~ Killer Bass Cabin~
The guys stand in front of the cabin with eggs in hand
" Um, I hate Scarlett too but are we sure this is a good idea?" Dave asked
" Of course it is, were just having a little fun" Topher said
The guys prepared their eggs and threw them at the cabin
The girls are awake now and go outside to see what's happening
" Huh?-" Jasmine said
Jasmine gets hit in the face with an egg
The guys stop throwing eggs
" He did it!" Topher said pointing at Max
All the boys except Max run away
Jasmine angrily marches towards Max
" Can't we take a moment to appreciate the fine work of evil?" Max asked
"I'll show ya EVIL mate" Jasmine said
~ Mess Hall~
Everyone walks to the Mess Hall to see Max at the top of the flagpole hanging by his underwear
" Would somebody care to help evil?" Max asked
Everyone ignores Max and walks into the Mess Hall
Chef serves rotten tomatoes
CONFESSIONAL: TOPHER
" Don't get me wrong, the way Chris tortures us is amazing.."
"But I NEED my nutrients, or else I'll start getting acne"
" And no show would accept a host with acne"
END CONFESSIONAL
Topher sneaks into the kitchen and tries opening the fridge, only for his hand to be grabbed by Chef
" What do ya think ya doing, boy?!" Chef asked
Chef tosses Topher out of the kitchen, Topher lands on the kitchen table
"Ugh..." Topher groaned
" HA!" Scott said
CONFESSIONAL: SCOTT
" After kicking me out of the alliance, I've changed my #1 target from Zoey to Topher"
" That kid is going down!"
END CONFESSIONAL
Chris turns on the loudspeaker
"ATTENTION CAMPERS, MEET ME AT ARTS AND CRAFTS" Chris said
~ Arts and Crafts Center~
The contestants arrive at the arts and crafts center
" Welcome to the arts and crafts center!" Chris said
" Pfft, More like arts and CRAP, am I right?" Scott asked
Awkward silence...
A cricket chirps
" Okay it wasn't that bad" Scott said
" Moving on to the challenge! You will be having a death defying bike race!" Chris said
Everyone cheers
" Sweet! So where's our bikes?" Zoey asked
" Oh, I didn't say you'd be getting your own bikes. For your first part of the challenge you must make your own bike!" Chris said
" Inside this rusty old shack is dismantled bike parts you can use to make your own bike. When you finish your bike meet me at the beach for your second part of the challenge!" Chris said
Chris walked away
The contestants go inside the Arts and Crafts Center
~ Bike Building~
All the guys except for Scott are building their bikes together
"Hey B, I figured since were all in a alliance if you could build our bikes for us?" Dave asked
B gave them a thumbs up
The boys cheered
CONFESSIONAL: TOPHER
" The fact that we know B can talk and he's a genius is definitely putting him into the threat category"
" But I'll keep him around a little longer before I dispose of him"
END CONFESSIONAL
Scarlett and Scott are building bikes
" So for sabotage, I was thinking you could build some sort of sharp object to slash their tires" Scott said
" Like a knife?" Scarlett said sarcastically
" Oh... that'll do too" Scott said
CONFESSIONAL: SCOTT
"Yep, the saboteur is back!"
" I'm gonna slash all of their tires and claim victory for myself!"
END CONFESSIONAL
Jo, Zoey, and Jasmine are building their bikes together
" So..." Jo said
" No I'm not re-joining your alliance" Jasmine said
" I didn't even get to finish!" Jo said
" Well then what were you going to say?" Jasmine asked
" Okay yeah basically the same thing! But no one wants to team up with me! The guys only listen to Topher and teaming up with Scarlett would just be dumb. I promise if you let me in, I'll NEVER vote against you" Jo said
Jasmine and Zoey looked at each other
" Fine, temporary alliance. But ONLY to get out Scarlett..." Zoey said
"YES!" Jo said
CONFESSIONAL: JO
" And that's how it's done!"
END CONFESSIONAL
CONFESSIONAL: JASMINE
" I'm hoping Jo doesn't get all bossy again and screw up the alliance..'
" But hey, a vote against Scarlett is a win in my book!"
END CONFESSIONAL
" CAMPERS TIME TO JUDGE YOUR BIKES! MEET ME AT THE BEACH!" Chris said on the loudspeaker
~ The Beach~
The contestants arrive with their bikes
" Okay, let's see what we got here.." Chris said
Chris started by inspecting the boys bikes
Dave, Topher, Max, and B's bikes have cup holders, gold plated wheels, and a nitro engine
" Wicked! But it's painfully obvious someone made the same bike for all of ya, that'll knock off some points for creativity" Chris said
Topher gets out a wig that looks exactly like his hair and puts it on his bike
" How's that for creativity?" Topher asked
" Still not good" Chris said
Topher frowned as Chris moved on to the next bikes
Scott's bike... wasn't even a bike at all it was a unicycle
" Um, you know I said BIKES, right?" Chris asked
" I forgot to add the extra wheel so... ta-da?" Scott said
" That's just lame dude" Chris said
Chris went to inspect the girls bikes
Scarlett's bike was a full on motorcycle
" WHOA! How did you build this?!" Chris asked
" I have my resources..." Scarlett said
~Flashback~
Chef park his motorcycle and prepares to head back into the kitchen until Scarlett stops her
" Greetings Chef, I would gladly exchange you a thousand dollars for your motorcycle" Scarlett said
Chef took the money out of Scarlett's hand
"R-Real money? I haven't had any since being on this damned show. Your a good kid!" Chef said
Chef left Scarlett with his motorcycle
" Little does he know I used his credit card to pay for it, but... that's a tale for another day" Scarlett said
Scarlett smirks and walks off with the motorcycle
~ End Flashback~
Chris went over to Jo's bike
Jo's bike was painted black, has a huge tire in the front and a small one in the back.
" I call it, the Destroyer!" Jo said
" For someone whose so good at insulting people, you sure are bad at naming things" Chris said
" Think again, Chris McLAME" Jo said
"Eh..." Chris said
"Whatever" Jo said
Chris walked over to Zoey and Jasmine's bikes
Jasmine's bike was huge to accommodate her being tall, Zoey's bike had wings attached to it and a picture of Mike at the front
" Wait- Is that a picture of Mike on your bike? Haha, That's so dumb!" Chris said
Zoey growled at Chris
" Kidding, But on the upside I'm liking Jasmine's bike" Chris said
"Thanks! I made it just like my bike back home" Jasmine said
" Alright now that the bikes have been judged... switch em!" Chris said
Everyone gasped
"That's right. For this challenge you must all switch your bikes. Whoever's bike makes it across the finish line moves onto Round 2 for a chance at immunity. But be warned in the second round the person who crosses the finish line last is automatically eliminated" Chris said
Everyone gasps once more
CONFESSIONAL: SCARLETT
" Okay now I'm intrigued..."
END CONFESSIONAL
~ Bikes~
B- Zoey's Bike
Dave- Topher's Bike
Jasmine- Scott's Bike
Jo- Scarlett's Bike
Max- Max's Bike "He got to keep his due to there being an odd number of people"
Scarlett- B's Bike
Scott- Dave's Bike
Topher- Jasmine's Bike
Zoey- Jo's Bike
~ Beach~
Everyone is lined up across the beach
" Are you guys ready for X-TREME MOTORCROSS CHALLENGE, DUDES?!" Chris said trying to mock a surfer dude's accent
" Not with that creepy voice.." Jo said
" Just Go.." Chris said
So everyone started pedaling, except for Jasmine
" Of course I get the freaking unicycle!" Jasmine said
Jasmine trips and breaks the unicycle
SCOTT OUT
Jo is in the lead with Scarlett's bike
CONFESSIONAL: JO
" Normally I'd be happy with me being in the lead"
"But if I cross the finish line with Scarlett's bike that means she wins!"
END CONFESSIONAL
Jo looks behind her to see Topher, she slows down and turns around and rams right into Topher
"WHAT. IS. WRONG. WITH YOU?!" Topher asked angrily
" Bet you wished you joined my alliance now, huh?" Jo asked
Topher shook his head no
SCARLETT AND JASMINE OUT
CONFESSIONAL: SCARLETT
" JO! That miscreant, now I can't win immunity"
" Well I think I deserve some payback"
END CONFESSIONAL
Scarlett turns around her bike and tries to ram into Zoey
" Ha! I'd like to see you try" Zoey said
While gloating Zoey ran into Scott and they both crashed
" Looks like I didn't even need to try" Scarlett said
Scarlett turned around and pedaled once more
JO AND DAVE OUT
Everyone else manages to cross the finish line
~ Still In~
B
TOPHER
MAX
ZOEY
~ The Beach~
Scott, Jo, Jasmine, Scarlett and Dave stood off to the side
Zoey, Topher, Max, and B with their own bikes stood at the starting line
"Welcome to Round 2! This will be much more deadlier than before!" Chris said
" I had Chef install landmines, oil slick, and a piranha pool. Which you will all have to cross before reaching the finish line!" Chris said
The remaining contenders gulped
CONFESSIONAL: ZOEY
" I'm glad Scarlett's not here to claim immunity for the zillionth time"
END CONFESSIONAL
CONFESSIONAL: TOPHER
" The stakes are heating up, instant elimination could either break or make me"
" Hopefully I win and a threat like Zoey or B goes home"
END CONFESSIONAL
" On your marks... get set... GO!" Chris said
The four starts pedaling
~ Landmines~
B arrives first at the landmines, he carefully maneuvers his vehicle to go around
Topher copies B's movements and goes around the landmines
CONFESSIONAL: ZOEY
" If I had any chance of winning this challenge, I knew I had to take some risks"
END CONFESSIONAL
Zoey goes ON the landmines, they explode and Zoey and her bike go flying
Zoey grabs onto her bike and moves on to the next course
Max saw this and tried it but he just got blown up, his bike disintegrated
"Rats..." Max said before falling over
MAX OUT
~Oil Slick~
B presses a button on his bike, it releases a freeze ray which freezes the ice
He then slides across the ice and onto the next course
Zoey still having some friction from her landmine attempt, goes fast enough on the ice to not slip
Topher on the other hand slips on the ice
"OOOOOOWWW! I think I have a bruise! Makeup, Makeup!" Topher cried
~ Piranha Pool~
B's the first one at the piranha pool, a piranha jumps out of the pool and bites his engine
B's bike stops working and falls into the pool, B quickly jumps out of the pool
With the piranhas harassing B, Zoey makes it across the piranha pool
~ Finish Line~
Zoey makes it across the finish line
"Woo-hoo! Yeah!" Zoey said
"And Zoey wins immunity!" Chris said
B not wanting to be last, pushes his dismantled bike towards the finish line
Once he reaches the finish line, Chris gives him a pat on the back
" Sorry dude, your out" Chris said
Everyone on the sidelines and Zoey gasps
" Why is B going?! Max and Topher didn't even cross the finish line!" Jasmine said
"True, but I said last person to CROSS the finish line loses. Topher and Max techinically didn't cross any lines" Chris said
B snaps his fingers in defeat
" It's Dock of Shame time, bro" Chris said
~ Dock of Shame~
B is walking with his luggage, everyone is lined up to say goodbye
Topher shakes his hand
" Were gonna miss ya.." Topher said
B gives a thumbs up
CONFESSIONAL: TOPHER
" Not really, just said that to be civil"
"Though it is crucial that a girl goes next week so us boys have the numbers"
END CONFESSIONAL
Jasmine fist bumps with B
"You were a real competitor mate" Jasmine said
B tips his hat
B offers a high five to Max
"EVIL doesn't high five..." Max said
B shrugged and boarded onto the Boat of Losers
GOODBYE B
The final eight head back to their respective cabins
" And with that another episode reaches it's end! How will Topher deal with losing one of his alliance members?, Will Max ever stop saying evil, and What crazy challenge do I have planned next time? You'll have to find out on... TOTAL DRAMA ISLAND!" Chris said
That was Chapter Twenty! If you liked it as always leave a favorite and review!
Spoilers Below
Reason for elimination: B, I had two separate ideas for this chapter, either B wins and Zoey goes home or Zoey wins and B goes home. Zoey winning and B going home made much more sense to me, sorry to any B fans out there!
Players Left: Dave, Jasmine, Jo, Max, Scarlett, Scott, Topher, Zoey
Elimination Order: Leonard-28th, Sky-27th, Lightning-26th, Samey-25th, Staci-24th, Sam-23rd, Anne Maria-22nd, Beardo-21st, Dawn-20th, Cameron-19th, Zoey-18th "RETURNED", Ella-17th, Brick-16th, Rodney-15th, Sugar-14th, Dakota-13th, Mike-12th, Shawn-11th, Amy-10th, B-9th