Review Responding Time!
Anon Reviewer- Nice twist with the fake-out elimination ceremony! Seeing more reward challenges you come up with sounds fun should you decide on that. Of course everyone except Scott took the chance to vote for Scarlett when B won the reward challenge (before learning nobody would go home). Speaking of B, I'm even more shocked that you actually had him speak any words at all! It did however seem more fitting for him when he clearly noted it was a rare instance only out of desperation. The allusion to the episode "Truth or Laser Shark" from season 4 with Chris saying "I would've preferred a verbal response" and shocking him for giving a correct answer without speaking also amused me. Will you perhaps reveal his name to the others as "Beverly" and see how they react? I can easily picture Scott making fun of him for it like in canon.
As for Scott, he eats dirt here because... he's so upset over Amy getting voted off!? I'd be shocked if this was actually because he deep down liked her as more than an ally/friend, especially when it seemed so far fetched before (unless one asks Mike's "Chester" personality :P). Part of me senses it's that while another portion of my instinct says it's just because he once again failed to get rid of Zoey. Regardless, Amy seems too shallow and self-absorbed to like any Total Drama characters romantically/sexually except for perhaps Justin or Alejandro, and it was funny seeing Dave repulsed by his consumption.
When you get to "That's Off The Chain!", I can picture Scarlett not winning the race, but still surviving again when another contestant crosses the finish line last (assuming she isn't disqualified in the first round which ironically saved competitors from elimination then). That challenge is really anybody's game. Who will go next?
P.S. I'm not at all surprised that Rodney ended up liking Dakota before he left (looks like I was right that seeing her bare chest would attract him). Very in character for him given how ridiculously easily he often falls for girls from simple interactions with them. It's easy to imagine him being upset with Samkota going on unless someone else has since gained his affections.
Me- Thanks! I actually have one more reward challenge planned later on...:).
Yeah, I wanted B to talk ONCE. Because I Felt if I had him talk multiple times that would be out of character for him. Maybe in future seasons...
We'll see. But if Amy were to hook up with Justin or Alejandro it would probably happen WAY later on in the story
Yeah she didn't win because I didn't want Scarlett to become All-Stars Zoey when it came to challenges,. Well I already posted the chapter if u wanna see who goes..
Yeah I have something planned for Rodney later on :)
Fear the Darkness Inside-eh i'm not sad to see B go I don't even consider him a character really. So glad Scarlett and Jo are still in the game. Hopefully Topher goes soon
Me- Okay, I get everyone may not like the same characters I do. But I actually found B cool, though I do wish we got to hear him talk in canon.
We'll see..
" Last time on TOTAL DRAMA ISLAND!, We sent our remaining campers to the Arts and Crafts Center for their next challenge! Their they had to build their own bike, little did they know they'd have to switch them! As part of the guys alliance, B helped build everyone's bike except for Scott's. Which ended up screwing him in the end because he didn't even make a bike "shows a clip of Scott's unicycle" so pathetic. In the end the last four player standing, B, Zoey, Topher, and Max. Moved onto Round 2, where one of them would win immunity and the other could risk getting voted off. In the end Zoey won immunity and Silent Treatment B was sent packing! What spooky challenge do we have planned for our campers today?, You'll have to find out on TOTAL DRAMA ISLAND!" Chris said
~ Campfire~
The final eight are gathered around the campfire watching a scary movie Chris prepared for them.
Scarlett is uninterested and is reading her book, Max is loving every minute of this movie.
Scott is eating dirt while watching the movie, and everyone else is enjoying the movie
" Okay, why would the couple choose the spooky dark forest of all places to make out?" Dave asked
" Relationships make you a Neanderthal or what you call "stupid" Scarlett said not looking up from her book
"Why not ask the Neanderthals, Zoey and Jasmine?" Scarlett asked
" All because me and Zoey found guys who like us doesn't make us stupid" Jasmine said
" And I doubt any guy watching this show would wanna hook up with you" Topher said
"I'm what's known as "Asexual" so I have no purpose of pursuing romantic interests" Scarlett said
" And I'm EVILSEXUAL" Max said
Scarlett threw her book at Max, Max fell off of his log
CONFESSIONAL: SCARLETT
" There's one question that even I cannot seem to answer..."
" How did MAX make it this far?"
END CONFESSIONAL
The movie ends with the psycho killer murdering all the teenagers
" Well... that was morbid" Dave said
" It's a horror movie, what did you expect?" Scott asked
" Something a little less gory, all that blood and guts is seriously unclean.." Dave said
" Wimp" Scott said
CONFESSIONAL: DAVE
" For those who are watching, I am not a wimp no matter what Scott says"
"But if the serial killer was going to murder all those teenagers, he could've at least cleaned the crime scene"
"Ugh... just thinking about it is making me nauseous"
END CONFESSIONAL
" Does anyone know what the challenge is? I'd like to claim immunity so I can continue my reading.." Scarlett said
" Who says you'll be the one winning immunity?" Jasmine asked
" I doubt any of you could beat me" Scarlett said
" Guys! First things first. We need to figure out where Chris and Chef are" Zoey said
~ Dock of Shame~
The contestants arrive at the Dock of Shame only to see Chris and Chef packing their bags
" Hey Chris what's the challenge?" Scott asked
Chris gasped, He quickly threw his bags onto the Boat of Losers, dropping something before driving off with Chef
GOODBYE CHRIS AND CHEF?
" What, so no challenge?" Scott asked
Zoey noticed something and picked up two things Chris left behind, one being a newspaper the other being a bottle of Chris' cologne
" Um.. guys you might wanna read this" Zoey said
The contestants gather around Zoey as she reads the newspaper
" Says here, that an escaped psycho killer with a hook just escaped from jail. The jail wasn't too far from here and that anyone on an island should be careful" Zoey said
"Wait a minute... "GASP" Were on an island!" Max said
"No duh, Sherlock" Dave said
" We gotta get out of here!" Jasmine said
" But Chris just took our only means of transportation" Jo said
" Okay this is the plan. Me and Jasmine will check out Chris' trailer to see if he left anything useful behind. Everyone else I want you to start building a raft" Zoey ordered
"Wow you guys actually believe this nonsense?" Scarlett asked
Everyone's attention turned to Scarlett
" This is obviously a challenge. First we watch a horror movie then a serial killer escapes from a jail close to the island we've never heard of. I'm betting the only way to win this challenge is to not be captured by the killer" Scarlett said
"So I'll be at the cabin, reading my book" Scarlett said
"Wait!... nevermind" Zoey said
CONFESSIONAL: ZOEY
" In situations like this, the person who doesn't believe in the monster always dies first"
" Hey, better her than me. Survival of the Fittest"
END CONFESSIONAL
" Alright everyone else, stick to the plan!" Zoey said
~ The Beach~
Jo, Topher, Dave, Scott and Max are talking strategy
" Okay... how are we going to build a raft?" Dave asked
" I know! We could take a chainsaw and cut down the trees!" Topher said
"That'd take too long, Prissy Pants" Jo said
" Okay seriously Jo could you stop with the nicknames? There not even accurate" Topher said clearly annoyed
" I'll stop when you make me" Jo said
" All in favor of kicking Jo out of the project?" Topher asked
Everyone except for Jo raises their hand
"You can't be serious?! What am I supposed to do?!" Jo said
" I don't know go wait in the Mess Hall or something" Topher said
Jo muttered "Bitch" under her breath and stomped to the Mess Hall
" Now that the ogre is gone, we can get to work" Topher said
" Actually EVIL has to take a potty break" Max said
" Fine, you have 5 minutes. Dave can you go with him so he doesn't get killed by the psycho killer?" Topher asked
"Sure whatever" Dave said
Dave and Max walked away to the communal bathrooms
" Yeah, I'm gonna go get some chow" Scott said
Scott walked off to the Mess Hall
CONFESSIONAL: SCOTT
" I wasn't really that hungry"
"But anything's better than hanging out with Topher"
END CONFESSIONAL
Topher is now by himself
" I know it's against the rule BUT technically Chris isn't here" Topher said to himself
Topher pulled out his phone
"Damn, no bars" Topher said
Topher then heard heavy breathing and turned around and saw nothing
He then continued to fidget with his phone...
" Hey I got a new message!" Topher said
Topher opened up messages and got a message from an unknown person... all it said was "turn around"
" Turn around? I just did.." Topher said
Topher turned around once more and didn't see anything
When he turned his head forward he was face to face with the psycho killer
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!" Topher screamed in a high pitched voice
~ Chris' Tent~
The Psycho Killer dragged Topher into the tent
Inside the tent was Chris and a bunch of monitors
" Chris?... Wait but I thought... and the killer... Max having to go potty... Wah?" Topher mumbled
" Relax kid. It's all a prank! Me and Chef set up this shindig to see if you could survive in a horror movie challenge" Chris said
"Oh... So did I win?" Topher asked
"Not even close. But you do get to watch everyone else get scared by the escaped pyscho killer otherwise known as Chef" Chris said
The Killer takes off his mask revealing Chef
" You really couldn't of paid an intern to be the killer?" Topher asked
" We were, but then we realized interns aren't all that scary" Chris said
" Fair point" Topher said
" Well Chef looks like Zoey and Jasmine have an appointment with you" Chris said
Chef put his mask back on and walked out of the tent
~ Chris' Trailer~
Jasmine and Zoey are searching Chris' trailer but stop when they hear a high pitched voice
" Was that Topher?" Zoey asked
" Do you know any other guys that screams like a girl?" Jasmine asked
Jasmine and Zoey open the door to walk out of Chris' trailer but is met with The Psycho Killer
" AH! It's the psycho killer!" Jasmine said
Zoey then looked around for things to throw, she then saw Chris' gemmy collection
Zoey grabbed them and started throwing them at Chef
~ Chris' Tent~
" My Gemmys!" Chris said
~ The Forest~
Zoey and Jasmine are running away from the psycho killer
While frantically running, Jasmine trips
" Zoey, help!" Jasmine asked
Zoey looks back, she then turns around and continues running
Jasmine gasps
CONFESSIONAL: JASMINE
" I thought we were friends?.."
"How could she leave me to die!"
END CONFESSIONAL
The psycho killer captures Jasmine
~ Chris' Tent~
Chef tosses Jasmine into the tent
" Chris?... Topher?" Jasmine said
" Long story short. You got pranked bro it was just a challenge" Chris said
" This is pretty twisted, even by your standards" Jasmine said
" I know, this is gonna bring in some major ratings!" Topher said
"Thank you, Topher" Chris said
~ Mess Hall~
Scott walks into the Mess Hall to see Jo stuffing her face with brownies
" Jo?... Are you sad eating?" Scott asked
" How did you know?" Jo asked
"I do the same thing with dirt. I don't really care but... why are you doing that?" Scott asked
" Oh you know why. Scarlett's probably gonna win immunity and I'll be the next one on the chopping block because I'm "mean" and "bossy" Jo said
" Meh, Who cares if everyone doesn't like you? What happened to the Jo that was ruthless, cunning, and didn't give a shit what anybody had to say?!" Scott asked
" Hey... your right!" Jo said
CONFESSIONAL: JO
" What the hell happened to me?!"
" Ugh, I can't believe I let the thought of having friends affect my game"
"The only friendship I want to have is with that million dollars!"
END CONFESSIONAL
Jo tossed the brownie tray aside
" C'mon Dirt Boy were going psycho hunting" Jo said
"What?..." Scott asked
"Don't question it" Jo said
Jo dragged Scott out of the Mess Hall
~ Chef's Shack~
Jo and Scott stand outside Chef's Shack
"What are we doing here?" Scott asked
" Were gonna fight fire with fire. You stand guard while I go inside and grab me some weapons. Afterwards were gonna take that psycho down!" Jo said
Jo walks into the shack
"Well what do we have here?" Jo said
Jo looked at a bunch of weapons set off to the side
" Hmm... Chainsaw or Machete? I'm digging the chainsaw" Jo said tossing the machete to the side
Jo walked outside of the shack
But Scott wasn't there
" Scott? Very funny now come out!" Jo said
" Er.. uh... I'm over here!" ? said that sounded exactly like Scott's
Jo shrugged and walked over to where she heard the voice
She then saw the psycho killer
" I'm not afraid of you!" Jo said
Jo swung her chainsaw at the psycho killer but he stopped it with his hand
" Okay, not gonna lie that was pretty badass" Jo said
"But can you deflect this!" Jo said
With her other hand she picked up some dirt off the ground and threw it at the psycho killer
" Ah! I just got my hair done you are so going to pay" Psycho Killer said
The Psycho Killer lunged at Jo and tied her up
~ Communal Bathroom~
Dave is waiting for Max to finish up in the bathroom
" Max... you almost done?" Dave asked
Dave walked into the restroom
He tiptoed across the floor and slowly opened the stall
In there he saw
"OH MY GOD!" Dave screamed
It was nastiest shit to ever be taken
"AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!" Dave screamed
Dave ran out of the bathroom
Max walked out of the other stall
"What's all the commotion?" Max asked
The Psycho Killer popped behind Max
" Oh! The Psycho Killer, big fan of your work, Can I have your EVIL autograph?" Max asked
The Psycho Killer facepalmed then captured Max
~ Chris' Tent~
Dave ran screaming into the tent
"IT WAS GREEN AND EVERYWHERE! I NEED CHLOROX, NOW!" Dave said
Jasmine went up to Dave and slapped his several times
"Good?" Jasmine asked
"Yeah..." Dave said
Chef then walked into the tent and dropped Max
" Evil demands to know what's going on" Max said
" It's just a challenge" Jasmine said
" Evil is hungry, is there any food here?" Max asked
"No but Chef is about to go scare the crud out of Scott" Chris said
~ The Mess Hall~
Scott is back at the Mess Hall eating the brownies Jo left on the ground
CONFESSIONAL: SCOTT
"Buttering up Jo was all part of my strategy"
"She can go fight the killer while I enjoy me some brownies"
END CONFESSIONAL
" Scott... Scott... Scott... Coward... Coward... Coward" ? whispered
" Okay whose the wise guy?" Scott said
Scott looked around to see who said that but nobody was there
He went back to eating the brownies
" Brownies... Brownies... Brownies... Diabetes... Diabetes... Diabetes" ? whispered
"It's one thing to diss me, but the brownies?! Come out and fight me!" Scott said
The Psycho Killer appeared from the shadows
" Um... Can I retract that last statement?" Scott asked
~ Chris' Trailer~
Chef threw Scott into the trailer
" I mean it was pretty obvious that the killer was there but I'll give you a pass for snagging these brownies." Chris said
" What?..." Scott said
" It was a challenge" Topher said
"Oh..." Scott said
~ Killer Bass Cabin~
Zoey ran into the trailer
Scarlett was in her bed, quietly reading her book
" Scarlett! We need to get out of here, NOW." Zoey said
"But-" Scarlett said
"Your the only person I can find and I'm not about to be alone" Zoey said
"What's wrong with being alone?" Scarlett asked
"Nothing just... let's go!" Zoey said
Zoey and Scarlett ran out of the cabin
~ The Forest~
" Back at his trailer, I was able to grab Chris' walkie talkie" Zoey said
Zoey turns on the walkie talkie
"Chris? Are you there we need help!" Zoey said
The psycho killer is right in front of them, they both stop
They turn around to run but another psycho killer is there as well
" Two Psycho Killers?" Zoey asked
The one behind took off their mask, revealing to be Chef
" I was just here to capture ya, you know as part of the challenge" Chef said
"Not to sound bratty but..." I told you so" Scarlett said
" Shut it!... Okay so whose that guy?" Zoey said pointing to the guy in front
The killer in front turned on chainsaw and swung it near the girls
Chef, Zoey, and Scarlett screamed for their lives
~ Chris' Tent~
Chris and the captured contestants are watching closely
" Wait I thought you said the whole psycho killer thing was fake?!" Jasmine asked
" Well there is an actual killer on the loose... But I didn't think he'd turn up here?!" Chris said
"We gotta go save them!" Jasmine said
All the contestants ran off to save them
Chris stayed behind
"Well aren't you coming?" Jasmine asked
" Wouldn't wanna risk my face being damaged" Chris said
Jasmine sighed and dragged Chris out of the tent
~ The Cliff~
The Psycho Killer has Zoey, Jo and Scarlett tied up and attached to the hook
" I thought Chris' choice of sharks were too tacky. So I've left mines in the water, that'll explode once you touch the water" The Psycho Killer said
The other contestants and Chris arrived at the Cliff
" IT"S THE REAL ESCAPED PSYCHO KILLER WITH A CHAINSAW AND A HOOK!" Everyone said
" Wait so it's not Chef?... Then that means I don't have to go easy on him" Jo said
Jo took out a pocket knife and stabbed the killers hand
" OW! That really hurt!" The Psycho Killer said
" Jasmine, imagine the killer's Scarlett" Jo said
" What?" Jasmine asked
"Just do it!" Jo said
Jasmine growled and shoved the killer off the cliff
She then quickly helped the three girls up before they fell
The killer grabbed onto Jo's legs
"Not so fast, The Psycho Killer never dies!" Psycho Killer said
"Says you" Jo said
Jo then used her other leg to kick the killer off of her,
The killer fell off the cliff and triggered the landmines... explosion
The contestants stand there silently watching the explosion
" So... who won?" Topher asked
" Well... seeing as Jo took out the real psycho killer, immunity goes to her!" Chris said
CONFESSIONAL: JO
" Well if I can take down a serial killer then taking down Scarlett should be no problem"
END CONFESSIONAL
~ Campfire~
The final eight sat at their respective logs
Chris stood at his podium, holding a tray with seven marshmallows on it
" Why is the elimination ceremony now? We haven't even had a chance to strategize" Topher said
" Tonight's vote isn't up to you guys... it's up to me." Chris said
"And since someone was scared without the actual psycho killer or Chef even being there" Chris said
"The person going home is..." Chris said
"..."
"..."
"..."
"..."
"... Dave"
"What? Why me?!" Dave asked
" Dude you got scared by an uncleaned toilet... that's just sad." Chris said
Chris handed marshmallows to everyone except Dave
" Dock of Shame is that a way" Chris said pointing to his right
" Yeah, yeah I get it. I would say good luck but I don't really care who wins at this point" Dave said
Dave walked across the Dock of Shame and headed onto the Boat of Losers
GOODBYE DAVE
The final seven headed back to their cabins
" And with that we say goodbye to the germaphobe known as Dave! Will Jasmine forgive Zoey for leaving her to be captured by the Psycho Killer? Will Jo make a comeback and start winning challenges again? And how long before Scarlett gets the boot! Find out all of this and more next time on TOTAL DRAMA ISLAND!" Chris said
That was Chapter Twenty One! If you enjoyed reading this, then make sure to slap some favorites and leave a review!
Spoilers Below
Reason for elimination: Dave's main role in this story was just kind of to be the straight man in this cast of weirdos. But I did not want him to float to the end so I figured now would be a good time for him to go
Elimination Order: Leonard-28th, Sky-27th, Lightning-26th, Samey-25th, Staci-24th, Sam-23rd, Anne Maria-22nd, Beardo-21st, Dawn-20th, Cameron-19th, Zoey-18th "RETURNED", Ella-17th, Brick-16th, Rodney-15th, Sugar-14th, Dakota-13th, Mike-12th, Shawn-11th, Amy-10th, B-9th, Dave-8th
Players Left- Jasmine, Jo, Max, Scarlett, Scott, Topher, Zoey