Review Responding Time!

ThorBringsTheThunder-So, the final 6, huh? Well, here's what I'm thinking.
MAX: Max hasn't done a lot, which is kinda OOC for someone as evil as he. But flying under the radar might do well. I predict him to be paired up with Scarlett in the next challenge.
JASMINE: My winner prediction, which wouldn't be that bad a thing, although a little predictable.
SCARLETT: Either she places 3rd or 4th, I'll call it right now. Now that Jo's gone, will she form an alliance between Max, Scott, and Topher? It'd make sense, but hey, I ain't you.
ZOEY: Oh, sweet, horribly gullible and naive Zoey. If she isn't voted out fifth on the Playa de Losers eppy I'll be surprised indeed.
SCOTT: Smarter than in canon, which could turn out to be a good thing. I think he'll probably either go home fourth or be the runner-up to Jasmine.
TOPHER: Can't imagine him staying much longer since characters brought onto the show like he was tend not to make it super far.
Placings Predictions:
1st- Jasmine
2nd- Scott or Max
3rd- Scarlett
4th- Scott or Topher
5th- Zoey
6th- Topher or Max

Keep up the good stuff!

Me- MAX: True but unlike in Pahkitew Island with all the robots, I couldn't imagine Max doing any serious damage here. We'll see.. :)

JASMINE: Good prediction! Personally I don't think you have to be unpredictable all the time, But that's just me.

SCARLETT: Yeah don't wanna spoil but that's probably going to happen since she's the main antagonist, #predictable.

ZOEY: We'll see indeed...

SCOTT: Yeah while I do think Scott's development was one of the better things of All Stars, I just didn't like how they dumbed him down to be likable.

TOPHER: True...

I won't say anything specific about the predictions but good guesses!

Fear the Darkness Inside- Aww sad to see Jo go I enjoyed her

Me- They all gotta go sometimes.

Attackin-I just started to read this and man I love it. I'm expecting the finalists will be Jasmine vs Scott/Max.

Me- Thanks! Good predictions!

AnonReviewer- I had a bad feeling Zoey would get voted off here instead of Jo, but thankfully was wrong. Saw her conflict with Jasmine coming from a mile away, though didn't think she'd forgive her as soon as she did. Scarlett was obviously going to win the animal hunt if she were to stay in the game at this point. With Jo out, I sense Jasmine will feel accomplished for being the last remaining Gopher even if she doesn't make the finals. I also understand if school must come first. The next chapter is bound to be worth waiting for!

Me- Had to throw that curveball.. :). Yeah I don't want Scarlett to be too op when it comes to challenges, but then if she doesn't win she's most likely gonna get voted off. Thanks for understanding!

Derick Lindsey-Damn did not expect JO to leave here I expected her to get 4th because I can see Chef not liking her and eliminating her due to that. So the final six consists of Jasmine, Zoey, Topher, Scott, Scarlett, and Max who I'm surprised is still here but I think he'll get the Owen role where you didn't expect him to make it far but he ends up winning plus I can see him giving up a hundred thousand dollars to go for a million dollars thus causing season 2 to happen if you want it to. I'm guessing Jasmine will go next because the others will probably want to vote for her because she gets along well with everyone and being a physical threat if I were Scott, Scarlett, and Topher I would vote for her while I still can.

Me- I never really planned for Jo to got THAT far, I feel like 7th is a good placement for her. Might happen...


" Last time on TOTAL DRAMA ISLAND! We put our final seven contestants against nature and had them each capture a specific animal. Jasmine ditched Zoey to hunt with Jo. So Zoey formed a truce with Scarlett to catch their animals. Meanwhile Topher struggled with the pig pen, not wanting to get his clothes dirty. Max accidentally shot Scott with his tranquilizer gun and brought him claiming he was "an animal". I allowed it because seeing Scott in pain just made me smile. In the end Scarlett once again won immunity, Scarlett convinced Scott and Zoey to vote for Jo. And Jo convinced Max and Topher to vote for Zoey. Jasmine was the final vote to decide who would be the next person eliminated, and she chose Jo. With our athletic lady jock gone, this challenge could be anyone's game! Find out who's going home on TOTAL DRAMA ISLAND!" Chris said


~ Max's Dream~

Max is forcing all the contestants plus Chris and Chef to build a monument of his face while he watches from his evil throne

" Servant! More water!" Max ordered

Scott brought him a pitcher of water

"H-He you are, your evilness..." Scott said

Max drunk the water and spat it out

" EW! I asked for mineral water not this trash!" Max said

Max threw the pitcher at Scott

" Minions take him to the dungeon!" Max ordered

Zoey and Jasmine dragged Scott to the dungeon

"NOOO!" Scott screamed

" BWAHAHAHAAA!" Max laughed

~END DREAM~

~ Screaming Gopher Cabin~

Max is woken up by some noise and runs out of the cabin

~ The Cabin Area~

The contestants stand outside of their cabins in their pajamas trying to figure out where that noise is coming from

" Servant?! I thought I threw you in the dungeon!" Max said

" What?..." Scott asked

They then look upwards and see Chris in a helicopter

" CHRIS! Not that I'm one to argue with your genius but I really need my beauty sleep" Topher said

Chris in his helicopter took out his megaphone

"Welcome back to Total Drama Island! Over the past six weeks, we've watched twenty two campers push themselves to the limit, Only to get their butts kicked off by their fellow competitors" Chris said on his megaphone

"Sucks to be you..." Chris said

"Leonard!"

"Shows a clip of Leonard chanting spells"

"Sky!"

"Shows a clip of Sky doing a somersault off the cliff"

"Lightning!"

" Shows a clip of Lightning flexing his muscles!"

"Samey!"

"Shows a clip of Samey being abused by Amy"

"Staci!"

" Shows a clip of Staci pulling out her cellphone!"

"Sam!"

"Shows a clip of Sam playing on his gameguy!"

"Anne Maria!"

"Shows a clip of Anne Maria making out with Vito"

" Beardo!"

" Shows a clip of Beardo beatboxing"

"Dawn!"

"Shows a clip of Dawn glaring at Scott"

"Cameron!"

"Shows a clip of Cameron being mauled by a bear"

"Zoey!... Not really because she's still here!"

" Shows a clip of Zoey crying"

"Ella!"

"Shows a clip of Ella singing!"

"Brick!"

" Shows a clip of Brick saluting at his fellow teammates"

"Rodney!"

"Shows a clip of Rodney trying to kiss Amy"

"Sugar!"

"Shows a clip of Sugar jugging down the cockroach smoothies"

"Dakota!"

"Shows a clip of Dakota texting Sam"

"Mike!"

"Shows a clip of Mike getting kissed on the cheek by Zoey at the Dock of Shame"

"Shawn!"

"Shows a clip of Scarlett forcefully kissing Shawn"

"Amy!"

"Shows a clip of Amy throwing a temper tantrum over being eliminated"

"B!"

" Shows a clip of B giving his signature thumbs up"

"Dave!"

"Shows a clip of Dave vomiting"

"and the most recent loser... Jo!"

" Shows a clip of Jo fighting the Psycho Killer"

" Only six campers remain and after six weeks of bugs, crappy camp food, and even grosser bathrooms. Our six finalists are about THIS close to losing it" Chris said

" We were going to give you guys a break this week but that wouldn't bring in any ratings. So I figured, why not handcuff them together?" Chris said

" If anyone needs to be handcuffed... it's her" Zoey said pointing to Scarlett

Scarlett scoffed, Zoey and Jasmine high fived

" You'll all be handcuffed in the event known as the Tri-Armed Triathlon" Chris said

" 3 challenges, 3 arms, 3 teams of two." Chris said

" And which ever team wins, both of them get invincibility" Chris said

CONFESSIONAL: SCARLETT

" Even though I'm the most hated person at camp for the moment"

" I'm sure I can persuade them to look past that"

" But if I get paired with that imbecile Max,... I'm going to "lose it" as millennials say"

END CONFESSIONAL

CONFESSIONAL: MAX

" A-douy! Of course I was going to make the final six!"

"Reality show villains always make it far, and who was more EVIL than me?"

"NO ONE!... BWHAHAHAA!"

END CONFESSIONAL

CONFESSIONAL: ZOEY

" I plan on honoring my deal with Jasmine and taking her to the final two with me"

"The only thing that stands in our way now is that witch, Scarlett"

END CONFESSIONAL

CONFESSIONAL: TOPHER

" Even though I came into the game late, that didn't stop me from making the final six!"

" Once I win the money, I'll pitch a spin off series to the Network"

" I'm thinking of calling it, Total Topher Territory."

" Basically this show... but better!"

END CONFESSIONAL

CONFESSIONAL: JASMINE

" Just five more to go!, Woo-hoo!"

" Shawn if your watching this, I promise to split the money with you"

END CONFESSIONAL

CONFESSIONAL: SCOTT

" See? Shows that a strategy, even a crappy one can get you far"

" But it's not over yet, so I'm not gonna get too over my head"

END CONFESSIONAL

~Mess Hall~

" Everyone enjoying their groups?" Chris asked

Scarlett was handcuffed to Max, Scott was handcuffed to Zoey, Topher was handcuffed to Jasmine

" Enjoy is an understatement" Scarlett said sarcastically

"Good! For your first challenge one partner will have to spoon feed the other partner this three course meal" Chris said

Chef brought out the three course meal consisting of roasted duck, cheesecake, and stuffed peppers

" But if your not up to the task, you can always give up your chance of winning immunity and take the wimp key!" Chris said

Chris showed everyone the wimp key

" No takers? Good, Now start eating!" Chris ordered

Group 1- Scarlett and Max

Group 2- Scott and Zoey

Group 3- Topher and Jasmine

~ Group 1~

Scarlett is shoving the food into Max's mouth

"Helper, slow down! I don't want to get a tummy wonky!" Max said

" The more you talk, more time is wasted. SO EAT." Scarlett demanded

~ Group 2~

Zoey is trying to go fast, but Scott is taking his time with the food

"Mhm, Zoey you have to try the duck" Scott said

"Can't were in the middle of a challenge, dirt for brains" Zoey said

" And here I thought mean nicknames were Jo's shtick" Scott said

"... Just shut up and eat!" Zoey demanded

~ Group 3~

" Okay.. 1,2,3 and open!" Jasmine said

Topher opened his mouth and ate the food

" Your doing great!" Jasmine said

CONFESSIONAL: TOPHER

" When your on live tv, it's essential you have good table manners"

"As the only guy left who doesn't smell like rotting garbage"

" I'd say I'm a perfect pick for fan favorite"

END CONFESSIONAL

~Group 2~

" Let's just play to your strengths.." Zoey said

Zoey took the tray and poured it down Scott's mouth

Scott ate it all in an instant, then belched

"Gross..." Zoey said

" Scott and Zoey win the first round!" Chris said

Scott and Zoey cheer while the others groan

~ Outside of the Mess Hall~

" For your second challenge, you'll have to row your canoes... handcuffed to Boney Island. Once there you'll receive a package that is waiting for you... GO!" Chris said

The final six run off

~ Beach~

Max jumps into the canoe

" Now start paddling, minion!" Max ordered

" Excuse me?! Could you repeat that?" Scarlett asked

"Do you need a hearing aid! I said-" Max said

Before he could finish his sentence Scarlett takes an oar and smacks him right in the head

"YOU, start paddling or there's more where that came from" Scarlett said

"Ouchie..." Max whined

Scarlett and Max went off with their canoe

The other four quickly jumped in theirs

~ Group 1~

" EVIL... needs to go tinkie" Max said

"Well EVIL should've used the restroom before we left" Scarlett said

"EVIL didn't have to go then" Max said

Scarlett once again takes her oar and smacks Max in the head

~Group 2~

" Come on Scott! We gotta move it if we wanna win!" Zoey said

"Sure..." Scott said

CONFESSIONAL: SCOTT

"As much as I'd love immunity"

" If I win then so does Zoey, which means I can't vote her off"

" So I'll take us right into last place"

END CONFESSIONAL

" Wait a goddamn minute... Are you intentionally slowing us down?!" Zoey asked

"Crud..." Scott said

CONFESSIONAL: ZOEY

"Scott... he's been a thorn in my side ever since I came back"

"But if I want a chance at winning, I have to cooperate with him"

END CONFESSIONAL

" Look Scott, I REALLY need this immunity. So whatever we have against each other, let's just drop it for now. Okay?" Zoey asked

" Let me think about it... NO!" Scott said

" If Scarlett wins immunity, who do you think people are gonna gun after?" Zoey asked

"You?.." Scott asked

"No!, It's you Scott!" Zoey said

" Pfft..." Scott said

" Jo was the third biggest threat in this game and she's gone so if Scarlett wins immunity. Their going to go after the second biggest threat which is YOU." Zoey said

"..." Scott said nothing

CONFESSIONAL: SCOTT

" I hate it when she makes a good point"

END CONFESSIONAL

~Group 3~

Topher is looking at himself in the mirror

" You can have time to look at yourself once the challenge is over!" Jasmine said

" Well I can't have my hair messed up... that would be a travesty" Topher said

"Man up and start rowing!" Jasmine ordered

"Fine..." Topher said

Topher put away his mirror and started rowing

~ Boney Island~

All three groups arrive at Boney Island

Each group grabs a backpack, they look inside and take out some immunity idols

" Wait I thought there was only one immunity idol?" Topher asked

Chris arrives in his helicopter

" Naw these are just some knockoffs Scott made!" Chris said through his megaphone

Everyone shot glares at Scott

" Hehe..." Scott said

" To complete this part of the challenge, one partner must piggyback the other as they try to find their destination where they will drop off these fake idols!" Chris said

"Each backpack also contains a map" Chris said

Everyone digs in the backpack and grabs a map

"Go!" Chris said

~ Boney Island: Group 1~

Scarlett is piggybacking Max

" I see the cave, move peasant!" Max ordered

" You know I can drop you at any time" Scarlett said

"I'd like to see you t-" Max said before interrupted

Scarlett drops Max and runs into the cave

She drops off the idol and runs out of the cave

" Hurry! If we want to sustain our lead." Scarlett said

Max hops onto Scarlett and they run off

~ Boney Island: Group 2~

Zoey is piggybacking Scott

"Don't you think YOU should be doing the piggybacking?" Zoey asked

" Eh, Were almost there anyways" Scott said

Zoey dropped Scott and threw the idol onto the beach

"There, done! Let's go!" Zoey said

Zoey picked Scott back up and ran off

~ Boney Island: Group 3~

Jasmine is piggybacking Topher

"Hey Jazz, do I have anything in my teeth?" Topher asked

" NO. And don't call me Jazz, it's Jasmine" Jasmine said

"Yeesh, no wonder the only people who like you are weirdos" Topher said

Jasmine drops Topher

" Are we gonna have a problem?!" Jasmine asked angrily

" Calm down, yelling can cause wrinkles" Topher said

"Unbelievable. You can carry yourself" Jasmine said

Jasmine dropped the idol and ran off

" Wait!- I don't wanna get mud on my shoes!" Topher said

~ Boney Island: Forest~

The three groups arrive,

Chris stands there waiting, with three tables covered by a pink cloth behind him

" Well with all three teams tied, it all comes down to this last challenge" Chris said

"Today's final challenge..." Chris said

Chris pulls the pink cloth from the tables revealing carved wooden heads of everyone who was eliminated

"Whoa..." Scott said

" Mike..." Zoey said

"Shawn..." Jasmine said

"Amy..." Scott said

"Enough with the touchy feelings. You must stack each head according to the order they were booted off in. The team to successfully complete this wins immunity" Chris said

" And... GO!" Chris said

~ Group 3~

" You weren't here half the time so I better take care of this" Jasmine said

" I was an intern. I watched everything that happened, so I'LL take care of this" Topher said

Jasmine growls as Topher starts stacking

~ Group 2~

" Um.. who went after me again?" Zoey asked

" I don't know... Brick" Scott said

"And who went after him?" Zoey asked

" I'm gonna take a wild guess and say... Dave?" Scott said

"Dave?! He was recently kicked off! You don't know what your talking about!" Zoey said

"Well no duh! Only total drama fan geeks pay attention to this crap" Scott said

Chris ran over a put his finger on Scott's mouth

"Shhh... Don't upset the fanbase" Chris said

~ Group 1~

Scarlett is quickly stacking the heads

"Simple" Scarlett said

CONFESSIONAL: SCARLETT

" I have an excellent memory so this challenge was of no issue"

END CONFESSIONAL

"Done!" Topher and Scarlett said

"Welll then... If both Topher and Scarlett get it right then that means either Scott or Zoey is going home" Chris said

Chris walks over to inspect the totem poles

"Scarlett's totem pole is... Correct!" Chris said

Max celebrates while Scarlett merely smiles

" Topher's totem pole is... Incorrect!" Chris said

"What?! That's impossible, I know the elimination order like the back of my hand!" Topher said

"Funny story, You had everything else right but you had Amy and Samey switched." Chris said

Topher checked his totem pole and Samey was in Amy's spot and Samey was in Amy's spot

"No...No...NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" Topher screamed

" Elimination order like the back of your hand, huh?" Jasmine said

" So only Scarlett and Max win immunity. Everyone else is on the chopping block" Chris said

CONFESSIONAL: TOPHER

" Hehe... We all make mistakes, right?"

END CONFESSIONAL

~ Killer Bass Cabin~

Everyone except Topher is discussing who to vote

" So we FINALLY get to vote him out?" Scott asked

"Yes, Scott" Scarlett said

"Yipee!" Scott said

"Your just lucky you won immunity again" Jasmine said

"Luck had nothing to do with it, now if you excuse me. I have a book I'd like to read" Scarlett said

Topher enters the cabin

"Hey!...You guys are having a meeting?... Wait are you planning to vote me off!" Topher said angrily

" Since Scarlett has immunity... yeah pretty much" Zoey said

"But... what about Scott?!" Topher asked

" Me and the ladies made a truce, Better luck next time buddy" Scott said

Everyone except Scarlett and Topher left the cabin

" Scarlett! You gotta help me!" Topher said

"I won't do anything of the sort" Scarlett said

CONFESSIONAL: TOPHER

" Crap... it's times like these where you wish you had an idol"

END CONFESSIONAL

~Campfire~

The final six gather at the campfire

"Welcome, here well decide who will be the next to go. But remember none of you can vote for Scarlett or Max" Chris said

"We know" Scott said

"Then start voting!" Chris said

One by one the final six goes in to cast their votes

" And the votes are in! When I call your name, come and get a marshmallow" Chris said

"Max!"

"Scarlett!"

"Zoey!"

"and... Jasmine!"

They all went up to receive their marshmallows

"Topher and Scott. You've both received votes against you, but only one of you can go home. And that person is..."Chris said

"..."

"..."

"..."

"..."

"..."

"... Topher"

Scott got up and ate his marshmallow

" Wow, you guys really are dumb. Scott was clearly the bigger threat but you chose to get me off instead" Topher said

"But I won't pout and whine, like I said that causes wrinkles. However I will have you all know this show just got 85% less handsome" Topher said

Topher walked across the Dock of Shame and headed onto the Boat of Losers

GOODBYE TOPHER

CONFESSIONAL: SCOTT

" Looks like things are finally going my way"

"You better watch out Zoey, because your next"

" But I'll play buddy buddy and bam! Hit her with the grand slam of sabotage!"

END CONFESSIONAL

CONFESSIONAL: JASMINE

" I mean yes, Scott was the bigger threat"

"But honestly Topher was a jackass. And I'm glad I don't have to hear him talk about how "handsome" he is anymore"

END CONFESSIONAL

The final five head to their respective cabins

"That's all for now folks! With Topher gone that leaves Zoey as the only person left who rejoined at the merge! Will Scott's plan succeed and will Zoey go home? What challenge do I have planned next time? Find out on TOTAL DRAMA ISLAND!" Chris said


That was Chapter Twenty Three! If you enjoyed reading then as always leave a review and slap some favorites

Spoilers Below

Reason for Elimination: Topher- I had several different plans for this episode on terms of who was going home. But I felt like it was Topher's time to go.. And by reading the reviews I know none of the viewers are gonna miss him

Authors Note: Wanted to let you all know, that the next chapter I'm writing "the Playa de Losers one" will be a two parter. But that's all I'll say for now

Elimination Order: Leonard-28th, Sky-27th, Lightning-26th, Samey-25th, Staci-24th, Sam-23rd, Anne Maria-22nd, Beardo-21st, Dawn-20th, Cameron-19th, Zoey-18th "RETURNED", Ella-17th, Brick-16th, Rodney-15th, Sugar-14th, Dakota-13th, Mike-12th, Shawn-11th, Amy-10th, B-9th, Dave-8th, Jo-7th, Topher-6th

Votes for Topher

Jasmine-Topher

Scott-Topher

Zoey-Topher

Max- Topher

Scarlett- Topher

Votes for Scott

Topher- Scott