Goodness gracious THAT TOOK ME SO SHITTING LONG TO FUCKING UPDATE. I am very sorry, I think that might've been the longest I've ever taken to update; even "I Would Take a Fall" never too me that long, even that one chapter I was at camp. But anyways, YOU ALL CAN THANK YOUR LUCKY ASSES CUZ THERE WERE SO MANY PEOPLE THAT WERE THE FUCKING SHIT AND SAVED ALL OF YOU BITCHES:
Livy:So I wanted to be your one needed review so here I go. First off I really really like this fic. It just years my heart out and makes me happy at the same time. Secondly I was wondering when you would update and I saw that you
did and I about squealed. All in all please update more often I will defiantly read it :)
(LIVY YOU ARE THE FUCKING SHIT, LIKE SRSSLY, I FUCKING LOVE YOU *kisses both your cheeks* THANK YOU SO MAUCH FOR THE REVIEW *showers you with llamas and cookies*)
From: Guest
:Hey, baby jus wanted to say that this fic is really FUCKING magifiacant and
you MUST write more like within the next few days, youve got me hooked, and i
love reading writing like yours. By the way i absoutly love your personality
XD its got me dying inside. Love ya! -cockslut
(I really wanna thank you, this might be my favorite review for this fic so far 3 AND SHANKS FOR BEING HOOKED :D sowwy the chapter took so long and this one is really shitty, like seriously the whole time I was writing it, I was just like "what the fuck am I doing?")
guest (Guest)
guest:Ah! Poor Hiccup! I want to kill the Richard guy so much! Anyways, please
update
(Belive me, I want to kill Richard too, I based him off of someone in RL, anyone wanna know the story just ask AND THANKSIES SO MUCH FOR THE REVIEW! :D)
From: Guest
:OMG NO! I was hoping Jack would come in time to save him but :'( Richard
needs to die now. Jack needs to come save him! ((Please continue!))
(And don't you worry, guest #2, it will get so much better for our little Hiccup! And I think your review might have made me laugh the most, not cuz it's stupid or anything, but it reminds me of what's gonna happen :3 no more shall be disclosed at this time
From: Guest
:Stumbled across this story accidentally. It is actually quite good. The
writing is done very well, and I like that fact that there is a deeper story
line and it isn't just about abuse and/or sex.
I'll definitely stay tuned.
Never considered myself a "cock slut", but I suppose if I enjoy this story, I
am :-).
Oh my gosh thank you so much! I'm sorry if the name makes you uncomfortable :P it was something from my first multiple chapter stories and it's just stuck, and I tried really hard to have a plot for this, Jack and Hiccup aren't really my sex ship (that's Johnlock) but I do think that they would care for each other immensely.
SO ALL YOU BITCHES CAN ALL THANK THEM FOR THIS NEW CHAPTER, AND THINK ABOUT THE HORRIBLE THING YOU'VE DONE! Akieseki thanks for te other review! (Hehehe, "Cunt-tinue" :3) Thanks to justheree for favoriting, and for following! But I know it took me super super long to write this! So let's just move onto the chapter!
And the only reason I put the actual reviews is cause there was a lot of guests
DISCLAIMER: NOT. MINE.
"You ok, Hiccup?" Jack asked, concerned at his boyfriends lack of eating. Dinner was even his favorite tonight; eel. Hiccup snapped back to reality and looked up at Jack. "Huh? Oh, yeah…I-I'm ok, I'm just tired…" "Really? Because you've been like this for the past few days, I feel like I've done something wrong…" "No!" Hiccup shouted, paranoid that Jack might leave him, "No, Jack, I just… I just haven't had a good nights sleep since you left, especially the night of…" "Oh? What happened?"
"I…I couldn't get comfortable…" It wasn't a lie, but he still didn't feel good. "I'm sorry, babe, I should've known that me spending the night away at such a delicate time was a bad idea…" Jack said slipping Hiccups hand into his grip and smiling at him. This was a bit odd, Jack loved him, Hiccup knew that, but he always was so loose and relaxed, never serious. So seeing him like this was a rare and pleasant surprise. Hiccup smiled back at his lover; a real smile, something he hadn't done in a few days. Then an idea struck. "Hey, Jack, come with me," he said, a mischievous grin playing on his face. Jack got up and curiously followed the younger male. Hiccup led Jack to their room and asked him to close his eyes; the older male complied. "Come on, Hiccup, what's going on?" Jack asked laughing, and peeking through his fingers (for those of you who haven't caught on, Jack is an immature little shit). "I-I made you something, Jack," Hiccup said, turning around and carrying a long, slender, wrapped object in his hands. Jack grabbed it eagerly, very curious. He ripped open the nicely wrapped paper (which was impressive, considering wrapping papers a bitch) and opened the box slowly to find a long wooden Shepard's staff. Upon closer inspection the long piece of craftsmanship was covered in intricate white and blue… frost designs. "H-Hiccup did you actually… make this?" Jack asked, the staff trembling in his fingers. "Yeah," the boy replied sheepishly, "It's just, well you like the snow so much, and since your last name is 'Frost' I just thought that you'd like it…" Jack beamed down at the boy. "Hiccup Haddock, you just stand there cause I'm gonna hug you!"** The older male practically shouted pulling the boy into a bone-crushing hug and kept thanking him. "It's no problem, Jack, really." "Like hell it wasn't a problem," he responded ludicrously. "J-Jack… There's something that I actually…" he stopped and recollected himself, breathing deeply, "I wanted to ask you something, Jack…" "Sure, Hic, anything." "I-… I wanted to know if… if you would be willing to… to… to have sex with me!" Hiccup blurted out, and covered his mouth quickly. Jack froze. "But… Hiccup, I thought you weren't ready for anything like that," Jack said, crouching down a little to look the boy exactly in the eye. "I wasn't, but… in light of recent events I just… I just want to be with you, please…" Hiccup pleaded, his eyes going glassy. "I just don't want to rush you into anything you don't want to do Hiccup. Not to mention…" he trailed off rubbing the back of his neck, embarrassed, "Well, I could get in a lot of trouble if anyone found out…" Jack looked a little bit deeper into Hiccups eyes, they seemed slightly… clouded, like he was drunk or something, but that was ridiculous… Wasn't it? The white haired male grabbed Hiccups shoulders and shook him slightly. "Hiccup, are you drunk?" He asked seriously. A smile broke out on the brown haired males face. "You always know everything, Jack…" he mumbled, pushing the other onto his bed. "Hiccup, what are you doing?" Hiccup didn't answer he just started kissing Jack, running his hands up the others sides. "Well, lets see how this pans out…" Jack mumbled, hesitantly responding the kiss, trying to discreetly get Hiccups hands off him. The boy just kept on kissing him and started gripping Jack through his pants. "Hold up there, ghost rider, not ready for that yet." Hiccup pouted withdrawing his hand, when he forgot all about it as Jack warm tongue was sliding across his neck. "J-Jack…" he moaned softly. The older male bit down softly on his neck making Hiccup whimper with want. Jack stole another kiss; a very long kiss. Hiccup was breathing a little heavier than normal when his eyelids started to droop. Jack just kept kissing his face, shushing the boy into sleep. Eventually Hiccup fell into a deep slumber and Jack stood up rubbing his face. "He's going to be horrified when he wakes up…" he mumbled to himself, putting his staff away and going to go get some work done.
Hiccup slept till the morning, having nightmares again when he abruptly woke up. "Jack?" He asked stupidly, rubbing his head. "Ooh, my head… What happened?" He asked, when everything came crashing back. The alcohol, the almost sex, the fear, hurt, anger, anguish; all of it. He laid back down and said quietly, "Jack?" The male took of his headphones and replied, "Yeah, Hic?" "Did I try to… s-sleep with you…?" Jack closed his laptop and sat on Hiccups bed, "Look, Hic. It's ok, I really didn't mind it, the only reason I stopped you is because I *know* that you're not ready for that level of intimacy. I've just been trying to keep you to what I know you need," Jack replied, putting a hand on his boyfriends shoulder. Hiccup hugged him, nearly knocking him over and kept apologizing, over and over again. "Hey, Hiccup, don't worry about it, I was just concerned for you, that's all…" Jack hushed, petting the boys head, and rubbing his back. Hiccup sniffed slightly, "Sorry I'm being such a baby Jack, but things have happened that have dug up bad memories…" "Oh? Like what?" He asked curiously. Hiccup froze. Should he tell him? Even now Richards warning still rung clear in his ears 'Wouldn't want to do something worse…' Hiccup cleared his throat before answering carefully. "It's… it's just some of the nightmares have gotten even more vivid…" Jack smiled sadly. "You can sleep in my bed tonight if you want." "I'd like that," Hiccup replied, giving him a small smile. Jack returned the expression and pulled him up. "So, how about we go for some breakfast?"
** = DOCTOR WHO REFERENCE :D
I AM SO FUCKIG SORRY FOR THE SHITTY LENGTH, QUALITY, PLOT, AND OVERALL SUCKINESS OF THIS CHAPTER. I KNOW WHAT YOURE THINKING. "HOW THE FUCK DID THIS PEICE OF SHIT TAKE SO LONG TO WRITE?" WELL I HAD A BAD FUCKING CASE OF WRITERS BLOCK AND I COULDN'T STRING WORDS AND THIS SHIT WAS BORN. I WAS GONNA ADD MORE, BUT I'LL JUST DO IT NEXT CHAPTER, PLEASE DONT HATE ME! And since I am a terrible fucking person, I'll tell you guys a little secret. I don't know if you'll care but I've never really told anyone on this site; I'm a girl (well, I've already said that, but it was in case you hadn't noticed) and I am currently thirteen years of age. Please don't go creeper on my guys! Anyways, I'll try to update soon! And sorry for things getting so bad, bus as they say "Things will always get worse, before they get better" that's also a hint for times to come ;) and there is probably only going to be about 2 more chapters, unless I come up with more stuff to do with this story, and then I can focus on some other things, LOVE YOU ALL MY COCKSLUTS AND SEE YOU NEXT CHAPTAH! :D