*groan you make when waking up* welp, I'm awake, and now time to put all my free time (except for times when I'm watching netflix, playing Splatoon, or just helping out before the move), into this story.
And I answer some reviews in the authors notes, so I'll be answering some of reviews that I read just now.
(Btw, since I'm fairly new, I was confused by guests putting names before their comments, example: Name: Comment, I don't know exactly what it means, but I'm assuming it's just guests putting a name in without having an account, if I'm wrong, mind if someone tells me?)
4, or Kelly, is definitely broken, just not from our point of view when playing as her, and not as broken as Agent 3, since 3 has more experience.
As for how broken 3, or Sam, is, she's as broken as she was in the (regular story) boss fight, but without the constant and multiple specials, remember during the fight, there's a conversation between Pearl and Marina about it:
Pearl: How many specials do they have!?
Marina: they must have taken off the limiter!
I'm assuming 3 normally keeps this "limiter" on, but she's still got her massively op gun and the skill to dodge roll without Dualies.
Ahh, in all honesty I hoped nobody noticed were and we're, it's not my computer, currently my computer, which is a Surface computer, has a broken keyboard, it's detachable of course, so I just need a new one, but I don't right now, I'm actually typing on the mobile app on my phone, and autocorrect keeps screwing around with me on certain things like "we're" and "were", and I don't want to take it off because other times, it actually helps a lot, it's a love-hate relationship ya know?
As for the names, I just happen to really like those names, like Sara.
Anyways, that's enough of the Authors notes for now, let's super jump right into the next chapter!
Sam sighed, all of the worry she had stored up finally released, while 8 took a shower she got up and put some clothing outside the door to the bathroom, she looked at the door for a while, silent.
"No that's too much" she said to herself, leaving the area and going to the living room, she realized she should probably let everyone know Sara was awake.
~Marina's Chat Room~
Agent 3 joined the chatroom
Agent 3: hey guys guess what!
Agent 1 joined the chatroom
Agent 2 joined the chatroom
The best agent joined the chatroom
Agent 2: wait what?
DJ_Hyperfresh joined the chatroom
MC.Princess joined the chatroom
CraigCuttlefish joined the chatroom
Agent 3: oh wow that was fast
The best agent: that's what she said
Agent 1: I'm this close to kicking you from the chatroom Kelly
Agent 1: *picture of Callie putting her fingers close together*
Agent 1: also what's with the name?
The best agent: you said I could change it!
Agent 2: when!?
The best agent: like a month ago when I first joined the room!
Agent 1: you remember that!?
The best agent: I remember everything Callie
CraigCuttlefish: but didn't you lose to Agent 3 in a turf war?
The best agent: what? No!
Agent 3: yeah no I kicked your ass
Agent 3: anyways, we're getting off topic! Sara is awake!
DJ_Hyperfresh: OMG really! I was so worried ;-;
MC.Princess: yeah! I was already getting her coffin ready!
Agent 3: haha
MC.Princess: IM SERIOUS!! I have it here and everything!
MC.Princess: *picture of a fancy looking coffin with a note on it saying, "in case 8 dies"*
CraigCuttlefish: do I have a coffin too?
Agent 2: you thought she was gonna die!?
MC.Princess: I think everyone is gonna die! I have coffins for everyone in case someone dies earlier than expected!
CraigCuttlefish: so I do have a coffin
The best agent: Well we don't need a coffin, is 8 alright?
Agent 3: Oh yeah she's fine, she's coming out of the shower now, look!
Agent 3: *picture of Sara wearing a towel bending over to pick up the clothes left out for her, blushing and attempting to use her free hand to get Sam to stop*
Agent 2: well that's good news
DJ_Hyperfresh: are you sure you should have taken that picture?
Agent 3: ...now that I think about it, probably not, I'll delete it
MC.Princess: leave it on the chatroom though, I'm keeping it
DJ_Hyperfresh: PEARL!!
MC.Princess: What? It's just for memories!
Agent 8 has joined the chatroom
Agent 8: Haha very funny Sam
Agent 3: are you texting me from the bathroom?
Agent 8: yes, and shut up
Agent 3: IVE BEEN EMOTIONALLY WOUNDED *ded*
Agent 8: yeah yeah...
MC.Princess: what was it like to faint?
DJ_Hyperfresh: PEARL!!
MC.Princess: what! It's a serious question!! I wanna know!!
DJ_Hyperfresh: DO NOT ANSWER, she will do everything in her power to experience the same sensation!
MC.Princess: NO I WONT
DJ_Hyperfresh: Pearl...
MC.Princess: ...
MC.Princess: k fine I would..:
DJ_Hyperfresh: glad to see you can admit it!
MC.Princess: =(
CraigCuttlefish: what does =( mean?
Agent 2: look at it sideways gramps
CraigCuttlefish: still confused
Agent 2: the other way
CraigCuttlefish: ohhhhh I get it now
Agent 1: /
Agent 3: anyways, ima go now, byeeeee
Agent 3 has left the chatroom
The best agent: I'm gonna go as well, gonna do some ranked matches
Agent 1: change your name first
The best agent: why!?
Agent 2: because your lying to yourself
Agent 4: you guys suck!
Agent 4 has left the chatroom
Agent 8: I'm gonna go as well, cya!
Agent 8 has left the chatroom
CraigCuttlefish has left the chatroom
Agent 1: wow gramps just left without a word lol
Agent 2: welp, cya!
Agent 1 has left the chatroom
Agent 2 has left the chatroom
DJ_Hyperfresh: Pearl, we're gonna have a chat about those coffins
MC.Princess: :(
DJ_Hyperfresh has left the chatroom
MC.Princess has left the chatroom
Weapon_Master101 has joined the chatroom
Weapon_Master101: hey guys, Sheldon here, what were you guys talking about?
Weapon_Master101: Guys?
Weapon_Master101: oh, I'm late
Weapon_Master101 has left the chatroom
Sam smiled as she put away her phone, it was nice to have these friends.
"Sam!" Sara yelled from the bathroom, "Can we talk?" She yelled again, "uhh yeah sure!" Sam said walking towards the bathroom, "what do you need to talk abou-" she said as she opened the door, however was cut off by a yell of, "WAIT IM NOT DECE-" which was cut off by the door opening.
A moment of silence was had as the inkling ended up getting an eyeful of Agent 8 in only a loose towel, "Ah... ah... ah..." started 8 as blood rushed to both of their faces as they yelled at the same time.
"GET OUT!!"
"IM SORRY!!"
8 felt like she was about to faint again and this time, she wouldn't wake up, and Sam ran to the kitchen where there were tissues because a nosebleed was definitely coming.
I ended up with a writers block after the chatroom segment, I really wanted to do some fluff but I couldn't bring up any ideas, so I watched multiple episodes of different cheesy anime's that have an incredibly dense MC, incredibly unfortunate incidents, and violent females.
I think it did the trick?
I mean I'm pleased so yay!
Now I'm just gonna read through my own story to look for mistakes, and submerge myself in my own fluff.
Thank you for reading! And see you next time!
Oh and before I forget, perhaps PM me any specific advice you would like to give, support/criticism can be in the reviews, and questions can either be PM'ed or reviewed, doesn't matter
But it's your choice, I'm just saying it before I forget.