Hey guys Lolo here again so I am making another convos short. I got mad at MJ for continuing to correct me on Arty *pouts* not my fault I never read the books. So here you go same rules apply.
LG: I give up writing Arty you always fix me once I think it sounds good
MJ: Sorry
LG: It is fine just you write him from now on
MJ: K
{coming up with Akuma are hard I am giving Authors who do it all the time new respect-LG}
LG: I am sorry best name I could think of in short notice
MJ: No, it's a great name
LG: yay
MJ: K, so powers item
LG: Original lyrics for akumatized item, powers are wrapping people in lyrics and singing least fav song?
MJ: Um how about she is like a siren were anything she sings people instantly love
LG: Dont know about powers but definitely item sounds good I am bad at making villains on the spot as seen by obliviosa earlier
LG: Sounds good to me
{BTW Obliviosa in Chappie 1 was supposed to be a self insert of sorts - LG}
MJ: Where is the location of this event?
LG: Le Grand Paris hotel Plaza
MJ: Roof or lobby?
LG: The Plaza is the courtyard of any hotel {if my information is wrong do not hate that was just what I was told}
MJ: That doesn't help
LG: What do you mean it is the front courtyard
MJ: I don't know where the box of earplugs would be
LG: Actually that might be a lucky charm hotels don't usually give earplugs if they do then you have to ask front desk
MJ: It was for people with sensitive hearing
LG: They would be at home watching on the TV like Mari's parents
MJ: True but sometimes people bring earplugs
LG: They would ask front desk then
LG: Ok move to phone
MJ: Brb laptop is overheating and I can't see what I'm typing
LG: Wait Le Grand Paris is owned by the most selfish people in Paris why would they give anyone earplugs?
MJ: K back, and fine, if you want post hurry before I delete it
{They gave up on trying to get me not to post I don't think they really cared -LG}
LG: We have had people from Brazil, Australia, Spain, United Kingdom, China, Europe and of course United States reading our script so far. {Shout out to all you lovely readers}
LG: Text me when you get on because I am moving to phone because I am finished with school for today.
{They didn't text me till the next morning but honestly that was to be expected}
{So to make this sightly longer I am answering the one review [Nevermind they did two reviews *reads review and falls over laughing {Can't breathe!}*] that we have mostly because they do not allow for PMs from what I saw.}
{OK so for reviews I will post the review on these chapters then with answer sentences like I have been making comments throughout the chats, bolded and in the fancier parenthesis [don't know what they are actually called]}
Review:
Long but I think it's brilliant. {It was supposed to be long where is the fun in a short chappie-LG} Yes master Jarrus is a friend of mine and I'm glad they got you in contact with me. {That's good that I found the right person then-LG} Anyways this story is simply the best. {About this time I start cracking up, everyone in the room is looking at me weird, Master Jarrus is laughing as hard as I was-LG} Get it? Cause- oh never mind. {Don't worry I got it nice pun there-LG} Anyways I hope you continue to write these miraculous stories and that none of them turn out fowl. Ok I'll stop. {Puns are never to be stopped, just ask Chat-LG}
-Rebel Spectre 6
Review 2:
Oi! Ok, message to master Jarrus. Aka my bestie bestest friend ever (master Jarrus please don't kill me) {As you probably know they are out of town and can't read this but I am showing them this review now-LG} You have terrible grammar stuff {Yes they do drives me nuts-LG} and it's not my fault I am OCDish and obsess over every tiny little mistake you make. {Someone understands *looks at Master Jarrus pointedly*-LG}
You two sound exactly like *** and I when we talk. XD {Oh really how interesting I was never told that-LG}
-Rebel Spectre 6
{Rebel Spectre 6 we need to meet in person now, you sound like someone I would get along with-LG}