So sorry it took so long to get this chapter out. I know it probably won't satisfy your paler after the long wait, but I just had a lot of school work and not a lot of time for the chapter. Anyways, I hope you guys like it, enjoy!

Earth 38: Unknown Location

Zoom entered the cave that was not dissimilar to his own lair back on Earth 2. He took off his mask and smiled. Sure, the plan hadn't gone well, but what was to come could be... interesting. Barry had so much anger and pain built up inside him, and now he had a filter. An outlet. Maybe he would kill Kara or someone else, and the realization of his actions could drive him to create Savitar.

"What did you do?" Jay whipped around and saw Savitar in the shadows. Jay grinned.

"I created a monster, not unlike Barry will do himself when he creates you." Jay answered.

"You didn't stick to the plan, and you didn't tell me of your past plans!" Savitar boomed. Jay grimaced.

"I didn't even know it would work. I didn't account for the possibility that he was actually faster." Jay confessed. "Besides, this situation leaves me curious as to what will happen."

"Regardless, you didn't follow through with the plan. You weren't able to follow my orders, and that makes you useless to me." Savitar said. Zoom saw the conversation going south and tried one last thing.

"Wait, wait. I can convince Kara that the only way to stop Barry is to kill him." Jay said, distress raising in his voice.

"But she won't listen to you. She now hates you, despises you for making her life take a horrible turn. That's why I wanted to inject Kara with Bivilo's synthesized blood!" Savitar exclaimed. "Barry already had that anger for you, he would at least here you out. Kara would just punch you until you either give her an antidote or succumb to death."

"Oh please, Barry's too good for that. You should especially know that. He would try to find another way to stop Kara."

"I know his inner self. The darkness inside of him. He would've killed her!" Savitar yelled. He was sooo close to killing Zoom right where he was standing. "When Barry escaped his prison, and he will, you tell him that he should kill Kara. Tell him whatever you want, just make him angry at her."

"How will I know when he's loose?"

"Trust me, you'll know. You're going to feel it coming at you like a locomotive." Savitar warned. He flashed off and Jay was left by himself, still curious of what was going to happen in the near future.

A white flash engulfed the cave and Jay covered his eyes. He knew that Savitar was back. Jay was getting tired of Him being do disrespectful to him.

"Oh yeah, and stick to the plan this time." Savitar said. Jay rolled his eyes as Savitar disappeared once more.

Earth 38: DEO Headquarters

"Jesus Christ, what happened to him?" Alex asked as Kara carried Barry in to the DEO.

"I knocked him out." Kara said simply. "We need to get him to a cell."

"Why? We've done that before, and it didn't exactly work out." Alex said.

"He was injected with something that is going to make him really, really angry. You could say that he got whammied." Kara said.

"So basically like Red Kryptonite." Alex answered as they started to walk towards a cell.

"Sure, But I don't think that has an effect on him." Kara answered.

"Yeah, got it. So what do we do with him?"

Alex asked.

"I don't know. But he saved my life, so we can't give up on him no matter what he does. You didn't when the Red Kryptonite infected me." Kara said.

"Agreed, and your welcome for that."

"Sure, thanks." Kara said as they arrived at an empty cell. Ironically, it was the same cell that Barry had been locked up in when he had arrived. Kara threw Barry into the cell and sadly sealed the door shut. She should've been the one who got injected with the strange substance, not Barry. She should've been the one who was feeling pain, not Barry. Barry deserved to be happy and get back home while everything Kara did was wrong.

"Oh yeah, what did you do with Harry and Jesse?" Kara asked.

"they're both in the med bay. They're a little dehydrated and Harry has a concussion." Alex replied. Kara nodded. She didn't know who they were, but they were friends of Barry, so they were her friends too.

Kara walked out with Alex toward the main room and saw J'onn leaning against the round table and staring at the data filled monitors.

"Where were you?" Kara asked. She wasn't bitter, just genuinely curious.

"A man has to use the bathroom at some point in the day." J'onn answered. "Or in my case, a martian."

"Do you know what happened?" Kara questioned.

"We could hear and see what was going on." J'onn answered.

"Then you know that when Barry wakes up, he's probably going to be pissed off at anything and everything." Kara said. J'onn fingered his ring.

"We should take a sample of what was injected into him and see if we can make a cure."

"I'll get right on it before he can wake up. A blood sample of where he was injected should do the trick." Alex said. She ran off, leaving J'onn and Kara alone at the main table. Well, there were still agents scattered across the giant room, but they were all actually doing something.

J'onn saw Kara's face and found a look of distraught.

"You seem like your in despair." J'onn commented. "Why?"

"You're psychic. I think you can figure it out."

"I want to hear you say what you're thinking. It's a trick I've learned over the years. Let others tell me what I already know." J'onn said. Kara sighed.

"I just feel as if everything is going wrong for me. I let down Nation City and I let down Barry. I feel as if down is up and right is left." Kara confessed. "I just want to help someone with something. However small it is. When Barry got here, I felt as if I was a little healed. A wound had started to close. I had someone I could actually help. But now I've let him down and he could lay waste to the entire city."

"It's not your fault." J'onn said.

"But it is! If I had been able to get out of the way or fight back Zoom, Barry wouldn't have needed to get in front of Zoom and take the needle for me." Kara said.

"Don't blame yourself. Barry wouldn't. Just calm down and make sure that you're level-headed just in case Barry somehow gets loose." J'onn said.

"I know. I just…" Kara paused. "I could be doing a lot more good for this city if they actually wanted me to."

"Well, maybe you need to stop trying so hard and let the people do it themselves." J'onn suggested. Kara bit her lip.

"Or maybe they just can't forgive me." Kara said. J'onn scrunched up his eyebrows. "Think about it. It's been more than a few weeks and I haven't made any progress. Just last week, I helped a grandma pass the street."

J'onn smiled at Kara's flustering around the room. He had grown to slowly become a father for her and Alex, and they both kind of reminded him of his actual daughters. The smile slowly faded from J'onn's face.

"J'onn, are you okay?" Kara asked. Her face had changed from frustration to concern.

"Yeah, yeah I'm fine." J'onn said. Kara sighed and quickly spun around in a blur of red and blue, her citizen's clothes seeming to magically appear on her, replacing the superhero outfit.

"Maybe it's time that I get a change of scenery to get away from everything for a bit." Kara suggested. J'onn shrugged and stared at Kara.

"Kara, you have grown to become a strong and independent woman. This would be a choice that you and you alone should make. If you want to, I won't stop you. We can keep the city safe while you're gone." J'onn consoled. Kara nodded and turned around to walk out but stopped and turned back around.

"Call me when you get a status update on Barry, please?" Kara asked.

"Of course." J'onn answered. And with that said, Kara walked off while J'onn was left staring at the screens and wondering what was to come for Kara.

Earth 1: Mercury Labs

"So, how do we do this?" Thea asked. She, Oliver. Mick, and Snart had come to Mercury Labs to steal a few parts for the tachyon accelerator. They were currently crouching on the edge of a roof that overlooked a warehouse that belonged to Mercury Labs. They didn't need that many people or a lot of firepower for the mission, so they didn't take a whole lot of people. Stealth over strength.

"We should-" Oliver started to say something when Snart held up a finger.

"Remember, we do this my way. Sure, you can lead archery practice or an ambush. But when we're doing a heist or something… not legal, we do it my way." Snart said. Oliver but his lip in hesitation.

"Fine, But if something goes wrong, I'm in charge." Oliver said.

"Have it your way, Ollie" Snart said.

"Don't call me that. Especially in the field." Oliver answered.

"Less talking, more stealing." Mick said.

"Agreed." Snart said. Oliver had to resist punching Snart while Thea was on the verge of falling off of the edge due to laughter.

"Leonard, what's the plan. Tell me I get to roast some pigs." Mick said. Snart nodded.

"We go on the ground, you guys..." Snart pointed at Thea and Oliver. "You guys are the firepower in case there are any guards there. The regular schedule usually has one or two people at this hour, but it's President's weekend. Who knows what their boss lets them do."

"So we go in there and steal some stuff, that sounds… simple." Thea said.

"Not quite. There are multiple laser trip-wires within the warehouse. I'll freeze the lasers and after they break, we'll have 52 seconds." Snart explained.

"52, that's oddly specific. But what for?" Thea asked.

"Sirens."

"Great. But shouldn't we help you get the supplies if we have to go fast?" Oliver asked.

"Nope, once the lights flash red, we'll have no more than 30 seconds before emsecurity arrives. You can hold them off." Snart answered.

"I want to roast some pigs." Mick stated. Snart shook his head. His partners desire to burn people really got them into some tight situations.

"Fine. You go with Little Red Riding Hood over here and Ollie will come with me." Snart said.

"Yes! Let's go, it's time we got some action around here." Mick said.

"Agreed." Snart said. He motioned with his hand and Oliver shook his head, putting his hand to his chest com.

"Overwatch, did you get the cameras?" Oliver asked Felicity.

"Yup. No heat signatures in the building so far." Felicity said. "Although, I do spot an ice cream truck across the street. It has 100 flavors, including a bacon flavor. Either really good or really disgusting."

"Is it empty?" Oliver asked.

"Nope, but the guy who owns it is taking a nap." Felicity said. She had used a traffic cam to peek into the window of the parked ice cream truck. It was a little stalkerish, but it was what she did for a living. That sounded weird, but it was honest.

"Great, now do your little zipline thing." Snart said. He whipped out his bow and shot a zipline arrow across the street and it landed on top of a window that was placed below the roof.

"Ahhh, we're going with the cliché approach. Just jump right through the window and into the building. Too bad there aren't any 'bad guys' to beat up as we crash through." Snart made air quotes with his hands.

"Too bad there isn't any thing in there that you two wouldn't steal for yourselves." Oliver said sarcastically. Probably the first thing he's ever sarcastically said in his life. Everything was either the truth or not the truth with him.

"Oh there is. There's some stuff that could make our guns way better, but for our own self preservation, we'll won't steal anything… unnecessary."

"We won't?" Mick asked.

"No, we won't." Snart amswered. Oliver nodded and put his bow on the zipline, getting ready for anything.

"What are we looking for again?" Mick asked.

"That's a good question. Felicity?" Thea asked through her chest com.

"Ahem." Oliver grunted.

"Jesus, you're so paranoid." Thea teased. Oliver didn't stop glaring at her. "Fine. Overwatch?"

"Yeah Oliver, you're so paranoid."Felicity squad. She wasn't that worried of the possibility that the public could hear her name being spoken by a vigilante. "I'll tell you guys when you spot them."

"What?" Mick asked. Even he understood that she didn't share the eyes of anyone there.

"I installed chest cams into everyone's suits when Pliver announces that we would all band together to form a league." Felicity said.

"Is that why you made me wear this stupid thing?" Mick asked, referring to the metal vest he was wearing. Snart looked down at his almost identical vest.

"Yup. But they're also for protection. A winter coat isn't going to stop bullets from penetrating your skin. Neither is a shirt stained with beer." Felicity said.

"Okay, we've been delayed enough. Time to go." Snart said. He moved forward and pushed Oliver from the zipline. He pulled out his Cold Gun and used it to go down the zipline. Oliver followed him with Thea and Mick trailing behind.

"This better not damage my flamethrower!" Mick yelled.

"Agreed!" Snart yelled. "If it does, I might just steal those parts!"

Snart braces himself as he crashed through the window and fell to his feet. Oliver followed and landed on Snart.

"Godammit, I'm not gay. Get off of me." Snart grunted. Oliver almost stayed there out of annoyance but got up just in intime for Thea and Mick to land next to the disgruntled Captain Cold. Snart got up and picked up his gun.

"If this is broken, you pay for it." Snart said, glancing toward Oliver. He turned his attention toward the dozens of lasers in their path. "Thea and Mick, go toward the door in case security gets here. We have the art of surprise."

"No killing." Oliver warned. Thea nodded and started to walk to the door while Mick grunted and followed Thea.

"Mick, no killing." Snart said.

"Fine." Mick said as he walked away.

"Your welcome." Snart said.

"For what?"

"In case you got spotted, we wouldn't want the public to know that you're working with murderers now, do we?" Snart said. "Firestorm could always have been here, but if someone's dead, probably not him."

"Actually good thinking." Oliver said. "But we've got to hurry up. Time is of the essence."

Snart nodded and charged up his Cold Gun. He fired a stream of fire white ice and the lasers in front of them began to frost, the ice spreading until not a red dot could be seen.

"Good job, now what?" Oliver asked. Snart smirked and walked through the frozen lasers, shards of ice falling to the floor with a satisfying clink. he strolled to the area of shelves like it was a walk in the park.

"Okay, so on the duffel bag you have, there is one strap. That strap has a blue button on it that will shrink the bag courtesy of a design from Ray Palmer." Felicity said. Oliver took out the bag and set it down on the ground. "Hurry."

"No kidding." Snart said as he went to search the shelves. Oliver followed Snart's actions and started to search everything he could see. A lot of parts were just lying around. Things all shapes, sizes and textures. "I'm guessing the things we need are in the bin that's labeled 'tachyon enhancer prototype'?"

"Yup, that would be the one." Felicity answered as she glanced at Snart's chest camera. "Just grab the bin and empty its contents into the duffel bag. There should be a button on the strap to shrink it. Ray lent me some dwarf star for this nifty trick."

"Got it." Snart said. He put his gun on his belt and lifted the bin towards Oliver and the duffel bag.

"So just dump everything in the bag, right?" Snart asked.

"Yeah, and you have to hurry. You have around 15 seconds before the alarms go off." Felicity reassured. Snart gently but rapidly started to unload the bin alongside Oliver.

"This is fun, we should do more of these heists." Snart said.

"Please, no more heists." Oliver prayed. He put in the last object and closed the bag. While Snart closed the bin and put it back on its original shelf, Oliver pressed the strap button and it shrunk down. Oliver squinted and picked it up off of the floor, putting it in his pocket.

"So are we good?" Oliver asked Felicity.

"I don't get it. The alarms should be going off by now." Felicity said, confused. All of a sudden, the lights turned red and a loud siren filled their ears.

"I assume that's what you were looking for?" Snart asked sarcastically.

"Yeah, go ahead and start leaving the warehouse." Felicity said. Oliver ran toward the door and Snart followed right behind him, putting his goggles on and charging up his Cold Gun.

They arrived at the door and opened it, seeing mick covering the street with fire and Thea firing arrows left and right.

"What took you guys so long?" Thea asked, sensing Oliver and Snart.

"Traffic was terrible." Snart replied. "What are we shooting at?"

"Nothing except some vans full of security. Mick started spraying a fire wall so they wouldn't see us.

"They haven't done anything but wait, too bad for me. I don't think I got any of them!" Mick yelled.

"Okay, Thea, you have a grapple arrow?" Oliver asked.

"Yeah, I think so." Thea said, whipping an arrow out of her quiver. The arrow had a large point with three sharp tendrils.

"Okay, you grab Mick and I'll grab Snart." Oliver said.

"Hold up, we're being carried off to another rooftop? Do you even know if the grapple can hold our combined weights?" Snart asked.

"It should be able to carry us off to a rooftop." Oliver said.

"Should. That's not very reassuring." Snart said.

"Agreed." Mick said.

"We don't have much time. We can go away and you guys stay here, but you have to make a decision and fast." Oliver said. Snart looked at the fading fire and Mick unleashed another load of red hot flames.

"Fine, but don't drop me." Snart said.

"Wouldn't think of it." Oliver said. "Don't shoot me in the back."

"What, and commit suicide? Or do you expect me to make a little ice bridge. Yeah, I don't think that would support my idea of self-preservation." Snart said.

"Okay then." Oliver said. Sure, he and Mick were Legends and everything like that, but they were also former criminals.

"Let's go!" Mick announced bluntly. Oliver nodded and shot a grapple arrow to the roof they were previously crouched on. Thea repeated the action and shot a grapple almost in the exact same place as Oliver's arrow. Snart approaches Oliver while Mick grunted and reluctantly walked over to Thea.

"How are we supposed to do this?" Snart asked.

"Umm, grab onto the legs?" Oliver said.

"Great, How is Pretty here gonna hold my weight?" Mick asked.

"I don't know. Maybe you can hold onto the now while she is on your legs." Oliver suggested.

"What fun. So how do you… go up?" Mick asked.

"There's a reflex on the rope attached to the arrow. Just pull the bow towards you and you should start going up." Oliver explained, hoping Mick could at least understand that.

"Cool." Mick said as he switched places with a reluctant Thea.

"Don't break it. I'll kill you if you do." Thea warned. Mick grunted and nodded. He gripped the bow tightly and Thea hesitated before gripping his calves. Snart followed suit and locked his arms around Oliver's lower half.

"Let's go." Oliver commanded. He yanked on his bow and Snart braced himself as they began to rise into the air. Mick saw Oliver going up and aggressively pulled on the red bow. He flew into the air alongside Oliver and Snart with Thea tightly gripping Mick's legs.

"If we die I'm going to kill you!" Snart yelled at Oliver.

"Same here!" Thea yelled.

"Why are there so many death threats?!" Felicity yelled. Surprising everyone in the field and the people at STAR Labs. "That's right, I'm still here. Just don't die."

"Good advice." Oliver said through gritted teeth as he neared the roof.

"What do we do now?" Snart asked.

"I hadn't thought this far." Oliver replied honestly.

"So you expected us to fall and die? Way to be positive." Snart said. He climbed up onto Oliver's shoulders. "I'm gonna jump when we get closer so you can climb up without my weight holding you down."

"Sure." Oliver replied as they approached the ledge of the roof.

"Hold up, I'm not going to get enough momentum or power to jump if I jump from your shoulders." Snart said. Then he spotted a window just below the two grapples. "Release the grapple early. We can jump through the window!"

"Are you joking? If I release just a bit too early or a second too late, we're as good as dead when we smack against the side of the building." Oliver yelled.

"I trust you! Just do it!" Snart yelled over the roaring wind. Oliver bit his lip and shook his head.

"Screw it."

Barry woke up, his head fuzzy and ringing. He was laying down on the floor and was in a dark room. He reached up for something to support him and found a cold and metal surface. He blinked several times before his eyes cleared and he saw many people before him.

"What the hell…" Barry muttered. He was in a cell, the same one he was locked up in last time. The same situation too. A misunderstanding. "Guys, I'm fine."

"Just in case you aren't, you'll have to stay there." J'onn said. He stood beside Alex, Kara, and Cisco. Agents were scattered along the walls of the bigger room.

"I'm fine. I'm not suddenly evil or anything." Barry said. His patience was slowly sweeping out of him. He didn't like the cell and he didn't like the way he was being treated.

"We want you to understand that the effects aren't necessarily immediate. We're working on a cure right now." J'onn said.

"Cure? I'm not sick. I'm not dying. Whatever Zoom injected me with didn't do anything!" Barry said. He punched his cell wall and turned around, looking at his arm. He rolled up his sleeve and found that where he had been injected was fine. No wound or scar. He must've been out for a while for the mark to have healed so fast.

"Just in case, we injected you with some nanites that Cisco made. That way, you can't hurt anyone." J'onn said. Barry whipped around and glared at Cisco.

"You injected me with something without my consent?! You're just as bad as Zoom." Barry said, turning his attention to J'onn. "And Cisco, you really think nanites will stop me?! You should've just just built a pair of meta-cuffs. Or maybe a replica of The Boot."

"That's actually a good idea. I'm gonna work on that right after we're done." Cisco said, making a mental note to himself.

"Oh, it's too late for that." Barry said. He shook his head. "You were my best friend. But you did something that's equivalent to stabbing someone in the back."

"That's a little overexaggerated. It was for your protection." Cisco said.

"My protection? Are you sure about that?" Barry asked. "I personally think it's for your protection. I think, no, I know that you are afraid of me."

"Barry, we're trying to help you." Kara said.

"Help? I don't need your help. Or your protection." Barry sneered. He was a whole different person at this point. One with a quick temper and a hot head. "I'm not a pet that you need to take care of or a tiger you need to put in a cage."

"You're not either of those, Barry. You're our friend and friends help each other." Kara said.

"And you would know all about that, wouldn't you." Barry said, referring to James. Kara bit back a response. This wasn't Barry, not the cheerful and funny one. This was the worst bits of him from his past and present, all surfacing at the same time. "Cisco, I thought you of all people would know that nanites won't stop me. If the Reverse Flash could do it, I can do it."

Cisco's eyes widened as Barry smiled and vibrated in place. Shiny particles started to shed off of him and and float into the air, disappearing into nonexistence. Barry stopped vibrating and looked at his arms.

"You know, I couldn't vibrate myself through this before, but maybe I can now." Barry said, putting his hand to the door. He slowly phased through the door and smiled.

"Don't do this, Barry." Kara said. "Don't make me hurt you." He shook his head and grinned maniacally.

"Don't worry, I'll save the best for last. It's time to have some fun." Barry said. He zoomed off at an unimaginable speed and Everyone in the room flew back and hit the multiple walls.

"Dammit." Cisco stated. He quickly got up and looked at the trail of Barry. "How is he so fast now?"

"Does his emotional state effect his speed?" Alex asked curiously as she struggled onto her feet.

"Not that I know of. Maybe the mixture of tachyons and Bivilo's synthesized DNA are giving him an extra boost, but that wouldn't really make sense unless Zoom used some odd ingredients in the DNA." Cisco said.

"What would he use?" Alex asked. Cisco's eyes widened and a light bulb went off in his head.

"I think the tachyons in his system were blocking your psychic powers over him!" Cisco exclaimed.

"And how is that relevant?" Alex asked.

"I don't know, I just thought it would be a nice thing for everything to know." Cisco said. "But I see now that it wasn't a good thing to say."

"We need to find him before he starts to get angry at everything." Kara said.

"I think he's already mad at everything. He just needs something to focus it at." Cisco said. "We need an antidote and fast."

"I'm close to seeing what was used in the substance Barry was injected with, so I'll notify you guys when I've made an antidote." Alex said.

"Cool, I'll help you with that." Cisco said.

"What, you think I can't do it by myself?" Alex suggested.

"No, I just thought that you could use an extra set of hands." Cisco said.

"Cisco! Alex! We have to focus. Let's locate Barry." Kara commanded.

"I don't think that will be hard to do. He'll be in the city." J'onn said.

"So we just knock him out and then what? There's no way for us to isolate him." Cisco said.

"Barry said something about meta cuffs and a boot. It sounds like you can temporarily stop him from using his powers." J'onn said. Cisco nodded.

"Yeah, I can prevent him from using his powers." Cisco said.

"Alex, you're going to have to work alone on the cure while Cisco makes whatever it is to stop Barry." J'onn ordered. "Supergirl, you have to stop Barry. He's far beyond the point of reasoning."

Kara nodded even though she knew that in her heart, she could find a way to be diplomatic and use her words, not her fists.

"I'm gonna bring Winn and James here, because they already know about this." Kara gestured at the whole headquarters. "And they'll be safe here."

"Fine, but nobody else comes in or out until I say so." J'only said. Alex nodded and walked away to her lab, Kara flew off to go to the city, and Cisco just stood in place, intimidated and freaked out from J'onns ability to command.

"Yes, yes sir." Cisco stuttered. J'onn glances at him.

"Well? Get moving!" J'onn yelled. Cisco nodded.

"Yeah, I'm gonna need some more supplies." Cisco stuttered once again. J'onn sighed.

"We don't have an unlimited budget, you know. We still work for the government and they restrict what we get and don't get." J'onn explained.

"Do you want Barry to run around the city, making mini tornados and throwing random lighting bolts?" Cisco asked. J'onn shook his head.

"Just get the minimum." J'onn said, handing over his credit card.

"I thought I wasn't supposed to leave the building." Cisco questioned, taking the card.

"Well, we need those meta cuffs or whatever you can make. Just go." J'onn said.

"Cool, just give me, like, 4 hours and I'll probably be done." Cisco said.

"Make it 3." J'onn ordered.

"Jeez, so pushy." Cisco said. J'onn raised his eyebrows challengingly. "Okay, I'll help Alex with the antidote afterwards."

"Good, now I need to go think what we should do with this, Zoom. He didn't try to inject Kara with the blood for nothing." J'onn said.

"You know, we should really call it something else. Not just the substance or synthesized blood. We had Mirakuru back on our Earth, maybe we can name this something too." Cisco suggested. "I was thinking, we call it: The Raptor."

"And why do you think we should call it that?" J'onn asked.

"Well, back on my Earth, we had a serum called Velocity. There were like, nine versions of it, but the point is that the serum gave a person the abilities of a speedster. And this thing looks like it made Barry faster. Velocity. Velociraptor. Raptor. I'm not a dinosaur geek, but I know what a velociraptor is." Cisco explained. J'onn sighed.

"Fine. Just… get to work." J'onn said.

"Yes sir, Barry won't be running around the city for long." Cisco said. "By the way, do you think Savitar has anything to do with this? It's been on my mind for a bit and I just can't shake the feeling that Savitar is worse than Zoom."

"I don't know. Once we catch Zoom we can ask him questions and finally get some answers." J'onn said. "Now I need a coffee."

I really enjoyed writing the heist at Mercury Labs. I personally loved the interactions between a vigilante, Oliver, and a criminal, Snart. I feel like I didn't really show the wariness that Oliver had around Snart and Mick, but there was some trust issues at first. I feel like Oliver will warm up to the idea of working with Snart and Mick, even now, he's understanding why they're Legends.

I know that there were a lot of short sections and the heist took the majority of the chapter, but I honestly loved it. Please send feedback on the way I wrote the interactions between Snart, Mick, and the other heroes.

Time for another Q&A!

LegancyZ

Question/Comment: So Zoom made Barry faster than himself and still hopes to steal his speed, just make yourself faster, and now that barry is faster, he doesn't stand a chance.

Answer: In my mind, Zoom is obsessed with speed and being the fastest person alive. He needed Barry to cure him and he thought, "why not kill two birds with one stone" and made Barry faster to get cured and get faster. His ego and overconfidence got in the way of his judgement and will eventually [SPOILER!] lead to his downfall.

SpiderSpeedsterZ

Question/Comment: Great story, its been a while since I got invested this much. Also I have one question, did you imply Savitar was Barry? (Because i have read a few stories where they change who he is). Btw, if he is, you should make his reveal more impactful, having more than one character react to his identity.

Answer: Thanks, if you look back at Zoom's reaction to Savitar, you can get a good scope for who he really is, and don't worry. Savitar's reveal to the heroes will be big, maybe as big as Savitar's reveal to Barry on the real tv show.

Chevalier Lecteur

Question/Comment: AWESOME CHAPTER! Also I'm pretty sure the waverider can jump dimensions.

Answer: In Crisis On Earth-X, The Nazis used a huge-ass portal to send the Wave Rider and some Nazis to Earth 1. So the Wave Rider can jump time, but not dimensions.