Hey, this isn't a chapter, but it's something important which you need to read. I got a review a few days ago, and it listed all my mistakes in this story, and it said that it made her sister gag, feel sick, and have indigestion. So, I guess I'm writing this, to see how YOU guys feel about this story. Because, I really don't know, and I'm not saying that lightly. That review really hurt me, and I'm just wondering if I should continue this story?
If you guys don't want me to delete this story, then I'll be happy to carry it on. But, i really want to know if you guys feel sick reading this, because I know I did when I was reading that review. I feel sick writing this right now.
Would you guys like this story to carry on?
Does this story make you feel sick?
I am really sorry to take time out of your day, because you have had to read this, but I really appreciate your positive feedback - in what ever form - it makes me feel better, and helps my low self esteem, and it makes my dream of being a writer even bigger, and makes me think that its even possible.