Just sayin I'm a pewdiepie fan and when I wrote barrels I laughed a lot... So ah.. moving on... If you find my jumping between POV's confusing let me shed a little light. In my own personal opinion I am not good at writing the fight scenes and after awhile of being in the same scene with a constant flow of the same thing I feel it gets boring for any reader.
Thank you LoopyLou1990 you keep me going! And to Endris and Guest, I understand that I have changed a few aspects to the game but if you read the summary I tell you I change a few things. Thank you for all reviews!
Jazz pulled her new Assault weapon and nodded for Kaidan to take cover behind boxes and Liara to run over to the Barrels. Shepard stalked forward and bunched biotic power in her arm ready to fire any second. Her steps echoed around in the silent docking bay as she walked past both Liara and Kaidan. She could hear something rattling over to the right. Her hand was consumed in a blue light as she readied the attack feeling the power build before her body was fully enveloped in the light. As a man stuck his head out and waved his hand the Commander threw the ball to her left shattering a window, "Easy there." Liara spoke with a soft voice that ground on the Commander's nerves. She didn't understand why it did. So far Liara had been nothing but an asset and ally and yet...
"You need to speak with Fai Den up the stairs." the man said walking forward, "He is our leader and will want to speak with you." As Jazz nodded the man opened his eyes wide with mouth agape. A red light enveloped him before he fell to the ground to expose a Geth. Liara put the Geth in stasis before shooting it. Both Kaidan and Shepard shot the next few Geth down though the sound of more was in front of them, "Get them all." Shepard growled between her teeth as the trio went to find Fai Den up the stairs and past the Geth.
Garrus sat at the table watching as an engineer walked over to sit as far away from him as possible. As he tapped an exposed claw he wondered if it was the war or the fact that a true predator sat across from him. Even in the wild lands of Palavon or even Earth a turian could rip a human to shreds with their claws and teeth. Everyone is taught to look for the gun in his hand they forget he had a wicked claw attack as well. Tali walked to the table with some sort of dried fruit on her plate. With two drops of water the fruit bloated to fully ripe whatevers. Not that it did much good. She mashed it up and fed herself with a tube anyway.
"I kinda wanna be out there now, you know?" she started and Garrus nodded his head, "Once you get the taste of gunning things down with our crazy Commander. It is a hard feeling to let go." he agreed and Tali looked up from the pink goo that was a few inches from her tube, "I don't think she trusts us, though." the Quarian said before placing the goo in her tube and ingesting the sweet fruit. Garrus reached over and scooped a little goo onto his tallon and stuck it in his mouth, "Where did you get that?" he asked and went for another bite, "Shepard only has dry dextro food for us." Tali laughed pulling her plate away from the hungry turian, "It is my secret, and she has already told me she will bring me along to get the proper food for all of us." Garrus grumbled and crossed his arms, "Why do you get to go?" he asked and Tali smiled, "Because she likes me." as Tali walked away the words sung true with the turian, "Yeah she likes us, but no trust." Garrus stuck the already clean tallon into his mouth again and savored what was left of the sweet taste while brooding.
Kaidan watched Commander Shepard walk over and turn her charm on. Fai Den was a gentle man who buffered what his companion said to the Commander and yet Kaidan was still amazed. His crazy, geth killing, squad scaring Commander had a smile on her face and was harmless looking. A lion in sheep's clothing using the fact that she was a woman to her advantage. Not in a sexual way mind you, but in the way that seemed foreign in the times they were in now. She looked childlike, almost weak even with a vision fixer visor on her eyes. Liara looked at Kaidan, "You are doing it again." she said and the human looked to the blue asari, "Doing what?" he asked shouldering his gun, "Staring at her." she said matter of factly in an almost jealous tone, "Huh." was Kaiden's only reply as he watched the Commander nod. Her face became hard. Something was wrong.
A bullet whizzed past Kaidan's head and the Commander pointed her gun at the attacker before shooting it down, "Kaidan watch yourself." she hissed pushing past him and to the tunnel in front of her squad mates. He watched the childlike Commander run into a room of Geth as a hard woman. As he ran to protect her flank Kaidan had a small doubt inside about who she really was.
Joker sat in his chair spinning around completely bored out of his mind. For some strange reason he felt the need to look over the Commander's credentials again. Something felt wrong about the War Hero story. That and the fact that Jeff was a total snoop. As Jeff looked deeper he found something odd about Jazz C. Shepard. She didn't exist past the previous two years of being in the Alliance. There was information about her but something was just strange about the history. It didn't sound like her. Jeff looked deeper and deeper but couldn't find much. Something was up with their current Commander, though a strong woman, she seemed to be the ghost on the surface of something bigger.
Shepard looked at Fai Dan with blood on the side of her face. A small scar just above her eyebrow showing that it was healed earlier by Medi-Gel, "Now we have tunnels. I love tunnels... Lets go look into the tunnels..." sarcasm dripped from every word as Kaidan found his newly healed left leg still sore and Liara a little dizzy from her knockout. The team flew through the tunnels as a severely pissed off Commander barrels through to find the Vehicle and make her way to Exo-Gen HQ across the way, "No thank you, just a simple, 'OH you're not done' who does he think I am." Shepard ranted as she lifted her pistol and one shotted a Geth in her way. She walked through the sparking and flinched as one hit her cheek but nothing more. Once they finally made it to the vehicle.
Kaidan took a deep breath and buckled every one he could find. Liara a little weary of the Commander's new mood mirrored Kaidan. Shepard punched the gas and ran through the attacking Geth like butter, "Hate this place." she growled before heading into a tunnel. They picked up a radio signal and talked to employees inside before making it up onto the way again. Liara watched the Commander gas the vehicle again holding on to her surroundings, "Don't you think one of us should drive?" Liara asked and Shepard shook her head, "I don't trust anyone besides myself to drive." she said and Kaidan looked at Liara. There that word was. The word in everybody's mind.
As Joker sat in the cockpit he rubbed his eyes and thought of trust. Did the Commander trust anybody? Was she even worth trusting? As he mused Tali walked to Jeff and noticed his screen, "It's getting to you too, huh?" she asked and he nodded, "Why is it getting to us though? That is the part I don't understand." Joker admitted and Tali smiled behind her mask, "Because we trust her."