Force Development

by Drewstar

Although Star Wars Episode 2 was great imo, I thought that it could of used a little more Character development, one thing I really like is a segment of Anakin getting to know the Force is something greater than what Qui Gon Gin told him, another thing is the father, brother relationship building between Obi-Wan and Anakin.

3. Chapter 3

A reimaging of the Droid Factory scene where Anakin gets his arm stuck and loses his lightsaber

Anakin ducked under the repair hand droids arm slashed another geonosion with his blue lightsaber

Than Anakin turned his head to see another repair hand droid that in a second knocked him on the moving droid part maker and than a stamp punched down a heap of metal concealing his hand in metal and steel and also breaking his lighsaber

As Anakin realised his situation and before he knew it, there was another puncher ahead

Anakin used timed his movements perfectly and was able to miss the puncher

Anakin took a deep breath and then tried to free himself from the metal

Anakin then saw another Puncher making its way closer and closer, and Anakin now felt so nervous he thought this time he could not dodge it

The puncher moved closer and closer and now Anakin was right underneath it's metal making stamp flat. Anakin closed his eyes and prepared himself for the embeddable end, all Anakin could think of was Padme, his mother and Qui Gon saying "The force is strong with him"

Anakin suddenly opened his eyes to witness the puncher coming down

But then it stopped

And suddenly the platform moved away but before it moved fully away Anakin closed his eyes and the puncher came down on the metal of Anakin's concealing hand, Anakin was free and safe from being flatten

"Thank you Qui Gon" Anakin said with a breath

Anakin than realised himself the concealing metal and then went to save his friends.