Hey guys, back with another chapter for Heartbroken.

I don't own Pokemon….if I did I would made a cool plotline and a bunch of explosions for the mystery behind the GS ball…..that just gave me an idea...

Anyways, this story was originally going to be called shattered, but, I found out that another advancshipping story was called that, so I'm gonna make a chapter called Shattered…..please don't sue me…..

Chapter 3: Shattered


"Please don't let go of me….." May softly said as her face was buried in Ash's chest.

"Don't worry…." Ash said as he noticed his chest get wet from May's tears.

Ash was surprised at how sensitive May was about the *almost* event. He figured girls had a different perspective on the subject.

"C'mon May, we better get back. You've got a big day tomorrow." Ash said while getting up.

May was still sitting on the ground obviously a little shaken. "Carry Me." She said while gesturing her arms to pick her up.

"But, we're just a few minutes away from the city." Ash said, while he started to notice her eyes water up.

"Alright fine…." Ash said while he picked her up bridal style.

When May wrapped her arms around Ash's neck, he started to blush.

When May noticed his face suddenly get red she quietly giggled a little.

"You're enjoying this aren't you?" Ash said as he noticed May's weak smile.

"Yup." May said as she snuggled towards Ash's chest.

The walk towards May's hotel wasn't that long but Ash seemed to have enjoyed every second of it. Maybe even more than May.

"Well, here we are." Ash said as he stopped in front of her hotel.

"Take me to my room." May said as she started to yawn.

"May, come on…..you gotta go to your room yourself.

"Alright…." May said as she got out of Ash's arms. "Before I go…..here's a reward." May said.

"May, come one…you don't need to give me any—"

Ash couldn't say anything because he was now kissing May, while her arms went around his neck.

It wasn't a passionate moment but Ash was in heaven for45 seconds.

"Good night…." May said shyly as she ran inside the hotel.

"Go….Good….night." Ash whispered.


The rest of the night went really slowly for Ash. He was in his bed thinking about what had just happened.

"I can't believe I went all hulk on Harley…." Ash thought in his bed while remembering the not-so comforting event. "And whats up May kissed me? It was just…the best moment of my life…..." Ash said out loud.

He quickly got up to see if any of his friends heard it. He was sharing a room with Brock and Drew. It would be way too awkward if of them heard what he just said.

"Wait…..doesn't brock say that when Nurse Joy or Officer Jenny talks to him?" Ash thought. "Aw man, if I fell in love with one of my closest friends...things are gonna really awkward….." Ash whispered to himself.

"But…the only way to make things un-awkward, now, is to confess my feelings towards May. If I do I won't have to hide anything towards her and she'll understand why I've been blushing so much!" Ash said louder and louder.

"If she says no I'm sure we can still be friends and if she says yes than looks like I gotta girlfriend! I'm gonna ask her out after the ceremony!" Ash yelled out.

"Huh….did you say something Ash?" Brock said as he slowly started to get out of bed.

"Oh, um…..no….."

"Alright…..just stop narrating your battles" Brock said sleepily as he thought that Ash was sleep talking again.

"Man….I gotta be a lot more careful next time…" Ash thought. "Good think Brock is way too sleepy at the moment and Drew…..is a heavy sleeper I guess.

After Ash's moment he decided to fall asleep and take care of things tomorrow.

"So, you're gonna confess to May after she gets the ribbon cup, huh?" Drew thought. "If he actually kissed May than he's ahead of me! I'm gonna have to make an early confession..."


Like Ash, May was also having some trouble sleeping.

"I can't believe I just kissed Ash...I'm so naughty!" May thought as she giggled.

"That kiss was nice and everything but…..I didn't feel a spark. Whenever I'm around my secret crush I feel nervous but I also have a sudden jolt…if only he felt the same way." May whispered.

"But, then again…he did save me for Harley….since I have no chance with my secret crush, I guess I'll just go with Ash." May said while turning around in her bed.

"I'll ask Ash after the ceremony." May said while falling asleep.


"May…..May come one get up." Solidad said as she softly nudged May.

It was now morning and Dawn and Solidad were ready for the day. But May still had a hard time getting up.

"Solidad, no offence, but you're never gonna wake May up like that." Dawn said as she noticed Solidad's wake-up method.

"Let me try…..MAY WAKE UPPPPP!" Dawn yelled as loud as she could.

"WAAAAAAAH!" May said as she instantly got up. "What was that for!?" May yelled.

"You should thank me…..we gotta get you ready for when you meet Drew.

"Oh um ok….wait WHAT!" May said as she blushed.

"C'mon it's obvious that you like him May." Solidad stated plainly.

"Yeah! I bet he's gonna ask you out after the ceremony!" Dawn said

"You really think so?!" May said as she started playing along with Dawn's fantasy.

"Of course! Have faith in yourself" Dawn said.

"Alright! Better get ready than!" May said excitedly with fake hope as she ran into the bathroom.


"Brock! Drew! C'MON GET UP!" Ash screamed.

"Alright, alright…." Drew said while getting up.

"Why'd you get up so early Ash?" Brock asked while pulling the sheets over him.

"Um…..there….kinda is um no um reason….." Ash stuttered while blushing.

Brock was too tired to realize Ash's motives, but Drew gave an Ash a glare.

"Sorry Drew…..but today is a really important day for me." Ash said feeling uncomfortable, while noticed his glare.

Drew just pushed Ash aside and walked towards the batheroom.

"There's no way Ash is gonna get May. I have to confess to her ASAP." Drew thought as he closed the door.


Ash, Brock and Drew didn't meet up with the girls until the ceremony due to the large crowd that surrounded May and her friends about her newest victory.

At 7:00 the ceremony finally started.

"Hey guys! Over here!" Dawn called out to the boys.

"Hey Dawn! C'mon guys!" Ash said while he ran towards Dawn.

"Oh…..hey Ash….." Dawn said shyly while blushing.

"Hey Dawn, where's May?"

"She's getting ready to go on the stage." Dawn said as she pointed towards the main attraction.

The stage was huge. About a dozen people were on it including the judges of the contest, which are: Fantina, 4 Nurse Joys, Mr. Contesta and the other guy….

"Without further ado….." Lillian said into the mic

"We present the top coordinator….." Vivian said.

"MAY MAPLE!" They both said in unison.

May quickly walked up the stage and almost tripped causing some snickers among the crowd.

"It's alright May….." Vivian said

"There's not need to be nervous" Lillian finished.

Vivian handed the mic to May.

"Um….hi there everyone…"

The crowd roared with praises trying to boost her self- esteem.

"Just, wanna thank you all for watching me….perform at the grand festival. I wanna thank Har…Harley for giving a tough battle and all the other contestants for doing their best at the Grand Festival." May said while gaining her confidence.

"We would like Harley to come to the stage….." Vivian said

"But he's not here at the moment…" Lillian said.

"So that means….."

Its's time to….

"Present the…

"RIBBON CUP" They said simultaneously

Mr. Contesta got up from his seat and walked towards May with the Ribbon Cup.

"May…..i want to thank you for giving us a wonderful performance at the Grand Festival. And so I humbly give you…..the Ribbon Cup." He said while giving May the cup.

May almost dropped the cup when Mr. Contesta handed it to her.

"It's a little heavy…" May said causing some laughter among the crowd.

The rest of the ceremony wasn't anything special. Vivian and Lillian just talked about remarkable moments in the Grand Festival.

When the 1 hour was finally finished May was drowned by fans and reporters.

Ash noticing the crowd decided that he better get ready.

Ash was about to leave quietly, but Drew had noticed Ash's plan take place.

"Hey, Ash! Where are you going?" Drew said

"Oh…..um you know…just around the place." Ash replied a little mad.

"Oh…..can I join you?" Drew replied smugly.

"Um, I'd prefer to be alone with my buddy Pikachu."

"Pika Pi!" Pikachu said with a thumbs up.

"Oh…well see you later than." Drew said quickly walking away.

"Bye Ash!" Dawn cried out while Ash walked away.

"Later guys!" He said now jogging.

"Whats up with him?" Brock asked to no one in general.

Dawn shrugged, but Solidad had a curious look on her face.


"Well…..what do you think?" Ash asked Pikachu.

He was holding 2 ice cream cones and a single rose. He figured this would be enough to impress May but Pikachu just shook his head.

"Pika Pi, chuchu Pika Chu Pi."

"What do you mean this is too simple."

"Pika chu, pi chuchu pi."

"Just because I'm confessing, dosen't mean I have to get a ring….besides, that's only if I'm marring her…"

"Pika pi…." Pikachu said while shrugging.

"Hey Pikachu there she is!" Ash said while pointing to May who was now away from the crowd.

"C'mon I gotta go to her!" Ash said as he started to run.

But what Ash saw stopped him in his tracks.

He saw May run up to Drew and wrap her arms around his neck.

Drew's hands were on her back and slowly descended down, which for some reason, made Ash irritated.

Their faces were getting closer and closer, until May lunged towards his face and the shared a passionate kiss.

At first it was just a long kiss, but soon it turned into a make out session.

Ash couldn't do anything. He dropped his rose and ice cream on the ground.

All he could do was stand. He didn't have the energy to walk away or stop looking.

A single tear ran down Ash's face...he was shattered.


Well…..I'm almost done the prequel.

I plan on having one more chapter. After that I'm gonna start the revision of "The Trainer Rises."

I was going to delete the story, but I got 23 reviews on it and I don't really have the heart to delete all of them…So I'm gonna change the current title and start a new "The Trainer Rises."

I would replace the chapters in the original TTR…but then the reviews would make no sense.

CaTcH Ya LaTeR! TBC