Author's Note: So here is the next chapter. This time the Doctor will have a part,too.
And it will be much longer then the last chapter.
And it will become more exciting.
So Allons-y read and hopefully enjoy.;)
Disclaimer: I don't own Doctor who bla,bla bla...
I think everyone know that I don't own Doctor who.
Then I would be very
AND YES I KNOW THERE ARE A LOT OF GRAMMAR MISTAKES IN THE FIRST CHAPTERS BUT IT WILL BECOME MUCH BETTER AFTER CHAPTER 16 SO JUST CONTINUE READING AND YOU WILL SEE. A LOT OF YOU TOLD ME ABOUT THIS IN YOUR REVIEWS, AFTER YOU HAVE READ THE FIRST CHAPTER. BUT BELIEVE ME IT BECOMES BETTER. YOU WILL NOTICE IT.
(We are still two years before when Rose didn't woke up anymore)
(From the last chapter: 2 years before: She felt bad over 2 years now.
Every part of her body hurted everyday more and more. And she missed the doctor so much that her mother Jackie thought she would went mad now. But it was realy her body that made this
problems. Her mother took her to a doctor ( a real one) when she has
screamed in pain all over the night. The doctor couldn't diagnosed one could help Rose.
Then 7 month in horrible pain was the day, when Rose didn't
woke up anymore. Her mum and dad were so sad and hoped
the only one who could know what has happened to her
would come back. But they could not possible believe that
the Doctor would come back. If he could he would do everything
to get her back or? )
Continue: And when Rose has screamed all over the night in pain,
Jackie could swear that she had heard loud noises coming out of the wall from Roses room. Like something would be ripped apart. But when she looked at the wall there was completly nothing. She told Rose about that, too, but Rose hasn't heard anything.
So after Jackie decided the Doctor couldn't come back to help Rose, she and Pete brought her to Torchwood. That was the best thing, what they could do. There, they scanned her with everything they had. Jack, was the one who found out that her human body
changed into a Timelord body. He touched Rose face '' Rose what has this doctor done to you. I can't understand why you trust him so much. I mean he let you down. I know you told me that it wasn't his fault. It were the fault from the Daleks. But if he would really love you he would do everything to come back to you...And now you are not human anymore because of him. And you still search for him.'' Rose laid before him, with her eyes closed .For everyone she seemed half dead but her heart beated that fast,... she normally must be dead right now.
(Not that someone would wished that) Jack called Jackie and Pete. He told them everything Torchwood knew about Rose. Jackie took Rose in her arms '' Oh my sweetheart please don't die...we all need you.'' She started to cry and looked to Pete '' All the wonderful things she could have done with the doctor when she only would life long enough to find a way back!'' Pete took Jackie and Rose into his arms. After a few seconds Jackie added. '' Her happy eyes, always
when she came back from travelling with the Doctor. I will never see my little girl that happy again!'' Fr esh tears rolled down her cheeks. Then Jack put a hand over her mouth. He told her she should stop crying and listen. Rose fast heartbeats has stopped.
Pete and Jackie looked to her. They were all quiet. Jackie put a hand to her mouth '' Oh my god...'' she murmered.
Suddenly Rose opened her eyes and took a deep breath and jumped up to her feets. Everyone was
frozen in shock and stared at first thing that found Rose, were Jackies arms.
In the present again:
Rose tyler the girl that is tired of waiting and searching. Even as a Timelady, she could do nothing. She has seen to much, to go back to her normal life. She loved working at Torchwood. She could help there with her knowledge about aliens. But she hasn't the knowledge of a born Timelord.
Maybe Gallifrey still exist in this universe. She didn't know
and she will never know.
The Doctors part in the past:
When Rose had opened her eyes the first time in the parralel
universe as a Timelady, the Doctor has noticed at this moment that an another Timelord was there. The Tardis has noticed , too. But the signal was not strong enough. The Tardis and the Doctor could get this small signal, because Rose ones has looked into the Tardis heart. The Tardis and Rose were still connected in some way. At this moment the Doctor travelled with Martha Jones. He really liked her. She was a nice companion. After he must left Rose, oh his brilliant Rose Tyler , in the other universe he was heartsbroken. He needed someone. He didn't want to travel alone. But Martha has never replaced Rose in any way. But both mothers had slapped him. ALWAYS THE MOTHERS.
He never had felt that strong for anyone. This regeneration had fit perfect to Rose. When they hugged and hold there hands it had been so normal like breathing. He got out of his thoughts, when the Tardis let out a loud doctor jumped up and ran around the console . ''Whats wrong with you old girl?! What does that signal mean? It's impossible! There are no Timelords left in the whole universe! I would know!''
The Tardis let out an angry sound . He went with his hand through his hair and messed it even more up. ''So it is from the other universe...Roses universe...'' He looked at the jacket from Rose that he still had in his control room. Her clothes,her bedroom and all her things she had left were the only things that remembered him at the person he...He stopped thinking the last would brake his hearts even more. With a sad expression on his face he searched for an answere what this signals meaned. Had Rose said anything about a danger in her world when he last had seen her? ''No, we even hadn't time to say really G oodbye! Why must I lose everything? It's not fair...IT'S
NOT FAIR!'' He kicked against the console. He hasn't notice that Martha stand behind him. She crossed her arms and grinned. ''Did that help?'' The doctor jumped up in shock and banged his head under a console part. '' Oi!'' he screamed and jumped up with one hand on his feet and one hand on his head. Martha couldn't help her and laughed. The Doctor sat down on the control seat ''Aww my head and my feet...but, yes, it helped!'' Martha must laugh even more ''Did it hurt?'' '' Oh YES! I won't be able to dance ever again!'' he made a played sad face. Now it was over Martha bursted out in laughing. '' Oh you will come over it.'' '' But Rose loved dancing with me. H e said to himself. Martha stopped laughing. He was always so serious when he talked about Rose. And he nearly never talk about her. She only know that Rose has loved the doctor but always when they was alone she somehow remember him of Rose and started talking about things he and Rose had done. Martha saw his hurt face and left the control room. '' I will go sleeping again. Night.'' she smiled to turned his face to her and smiled back ''Night.'' When she has left , the doctor looked at the Tardis screen. Oh he hasn't forgotten the signal.
At first I'm sorry again if there should be any grammar mistakes.:o So how was that?
:D I really hope you liked it especially the
doctors part . please review that would
be cool. Allons.y!