IMPORANT READ THIS! Hi guys, I just noticed that I made Gazzy and Max the same age, even though Max called him her little bro. So let's make Gazzy 15 and Nudge and Ella 14 okay? I hope you all enjoy this chapter. I already have the next 9 chapters planned out. The story is starting to unfold. They are going to have and open mike soon. Get this, all that has happen so far and that will happen in the next 3 chapters (including open mike) are all in one day! Don't give up on my story.

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Camp Disaster Chapter 4-Taking in the sights

Fangster's POV

We grabbed some Sloppy Joes' to go with multiple thanks to Cheryl. The rest of 'The Flock' as I have come to call us went to their separate rooms to do some last minute unpacking. Max started walking with me to my convertible.

"Race ya!" I screamed… WTF? Fang Griffiths screamed? Oh the world is coming to an end. I just know it. Curse you 2012. I took of at a jog, thinking she wouldn't be very fast. I was giving her a bit of an advantage, the gentleman as always. I guess Max isn't because she flashed past me without a glance, laughing her head off. Wow, guess I misjudged her. I started sprinting as fast as I could and caught up to her, barely. Geez, she runs as fast as I do. In the end, it was a tie. Why? Well because I tripped over my feet (I know, lame) and I brought her down with me. And that's how we both ended up, lying on the dusty gravel, laughing our asses off. I know pathetic, but I had fun.

We got up and dusted our selves off. Then calmly, with grins plastered across our faces I might add, we walked to my Camaro. Max's jaw dropped. Yup, my ride's pretty sick, if I do say so myself. I think it was just the shock of all the money I had. Hmm, guess Max didn't expect me to be a rich boy, huh? Then why do I need the money for University, you ask? Well because I want to go to University, knowing I did some of the work to get to where I am. I don't want to live the rest of my life thinking that I didn't spend any effort in getting the money, so many desperately need. Anyway.

"Woah! Sweet car. Can I go in?" she complimented.

"Knock yourself out." I clicked the automatic car door opener's little button. Click.

She opened the passenger seat and sat down. I went around to the driver's side and got in too. She looked at me questioningly, eyebrows raised. I shrugged and put on some music. When I'm With You by Faber Drive came on. Hmmm, how suitable. Woah, I just noticed how frickin' romantic this is. Oops, did not plan it this way. Max started humming along to the tune. Woah! Her voice is AMAZING! She made Faber Drive sound like a dying monkey and she was only HUMMING! I started singing along to her humming. She looked at me with a shocked and impressed expression. Guess she never figured the 'Emotionless Rock' could sing.

Saw you walk in to the room
Thought I'd try to talk to you
Babe, am I ever glad you wanted me to
Its been two years to the day
half the time I've been away
I know I'm not there enough
but that's gonna change
cause I'm coming back
to show you that
I'm keeping the promise that I made

When I'm with you
I'll make every second count
cause I miss you, whenever you're not around
when I kiss you

I still get butterflies
years from now,
I'll make every second count
when I'm with you…

I trailed off. I reached forward and turned the knob to shut the radio off. I felt really self-conscious because Max was still staring at me.

"So are you gonna help me unpack or are you just gonna sit there all day and ogle at my amazingly good looks?" Boy, that got her attention. She smacked my arm. Mental 'OWW!"

"Come on, I'll help you get your stuff from the trunk." She said. Then she leant in to whisper in my ear "You have a really nice voice." It made me shiver. She smirked.

I popped the trunk open and started grabbing 2 of the 3 luggage cases in my trunk. Max grabbed the third, but I stopped her. She glared daggers at me.

"What? Are you trying to imply that I'm weak? And don't give me any of that crap about how girls shouldn't have to carry stuff, cause that's just sexist and-" She started rambling and raging, but I cut her off.

"No, Max it's not like that. I know you are perfectly capable of carrying my luggage. Why would I want you to come in the first place, if I though you were going to be dead weight? I know you're tough, really tough, and that you could probably box me out. All I wanted to say is that, that is my acoustic guitar and it's really precious to me, so please be CAREFUL." I explained.

"Oh…" was all she said. she looked kinda thoughtful as if something was really bugging her. Wow reading her is easy for me. We grabbed the suitcases and I locked my car. As Max was guiding me to the cabins, I looked around. The camp was beautiful. It was right by Lake Starlight, so you could take a dip on your breaks. I saw tons of teen counselors enjoying the free time they had before the campers got here. The cafeteria was located in the center of the camp with the Director's cabin next to it. The 'classrooms were random places around the camp. There was the music room, the dance studio, the auditorium, the gym, the crafts room, and the recording studio. In each of these places counselors taught kids different lessons on music, as well as sports and art. There was a big field near the beach where the kids were brought to play sports. The place itself was beautiful, with the sun reflecting of the dew and the giant fir trees looming over some of the cabins at the edge of the camp. Man, gotta love this place. Max led us towards the 1 joined cabin I really liked. Whoever got this cabin was lucky. It was right by the lake and the cafeteria. You could step out, walk like 5 steps and you'd be on the beach. The field was right next to it and all the class rooms were only a five minute walk away. Some of the other cabins got really unlucky, they had to walk like 15 minutes to get to the cafeteria. And get this, she started walking towards it.

"Here we are, cabin 12 and 13. I'll help you get your stuff in." she said. "Umm, Fang I'm really sorry about jumping to conclusions earlier." She looked really upset.

"Don't sweat. And ...woah! Max! This is like one of the best cabins in the camp!" I exclaimedwhen I realized that she gestured had to the really nice cabin. My cabin's the be-est, my cabin's the be-est. Wait, forget you saw that. See? This is why I don't talk much. I always manage to sound really stupid.

"Yah, well being the camp owner's daughter has its perks. This cabin has some history for me. It was the first cabin ever built at this camp. My dad and I helped the construction workers build it. We all pitched in. It has the best view in the entire camp. Even better than my dad's cabin." She said taking the cabin key from y full hands. She stuck it in (the keyhole, for all you pervs out there) and turned with ease. The door clicked open. She stepped into the dark room, the light from the radio clock read 11:30am. She flicked on the light switch and I gasped at the sight of my room.


Iggy: So it's just me here today, raiding Aqua's kitchen. She left me a note saying 'don't eat anything, find your own food. also could you read this: 'R&R? Common everybody, I'm doing this for the readers! What's the point if I don't get peoples opinions? I swear I will stop writing. Please?' So technically by reading her note, I read the R&R thing.

Iggy: I realize that Aqua has ended off on a cliffy,, I don't think she even noticed or intended to. She was just tired of typing 5 pages straight , but she didn't want to dissapoint her readers so she cut the chapter off.