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That evening Jacob took me up to my parent's cottage, in the depths of the woods. I opened the door to let us in. As soon as the door closed, he swept me up into his arms and have me a long passionate kiss.
"I'm so glad you've finally let me love you." He looked so happy just gazing into my eyes. I'd never properly looked at his face before. His eyes were a rich, deep, loving brown. His face pointed, and his lips thin and ever smiling.
"I've always let you love me." I said, almost in a whisper.
"Not like this." He said, and kissed me again. Slow and gentle and it felt like it lasted for ever. I can't believe I'd never wanted anyone to see me this way, as a lover, not a girl. "You've only ever let me love you as a girl, never as a woman."
"I've always loved you as a boy, but now I can see you as a man." I signed and stared into the deep pools of joy that were his eyes. "I love you Jake." I said and kissed him. Just a short, light ending piece.
"You need to sleep. Don't collapse while I'm holding you." He was trying to joke but he'd ruined the moment. Boys could be so dumbass sometimes. "Seriously Nessie."
"I want to collapse here, I never want you to leave..." with that I snuggled against him with my arms around his neck, and vampire strength was hard to beat.
And yet as he carried me up the stairs and say on my bed, he let go of me, so I just say on his lap and didn't let go. "If you don't let go I'll have to sleep in your bed with you, and when you're mother walks in to get you up, what will she think of that?" I was lying in my bed, fully clothed, clasp moved from Jacob's neck to the nearest teddy. Who just happened to be the one I've had since birth. (I know it sounds babyish but please consider I'm only seven. And guys that love you think it's cute.) "Must remember your severe dislike of the mention of the S word." He teased.
"What S word?" Maybe I wanted him in my bed tonight.
"The one that means..." then he paused and put his lipsto my ear. "Making love."
"Ew, Jacob. Get out of my room." I got up and walked over to the drawers and took out my PJs. "I still get human time, even if I'm only half." That would probably take me a good hour setting as I was in such a good mood.
"I'm leaving. I can't believe I got you to order me out. It seems seducing beautiful girls is the way to get them to go to sleep."
If he'd said go to bed it would have sounded even more WRONG.
"I need to change." I wanted my pyjamas in front of him.
"Maybe I'll stick around and watch." He said on his way out. "Good night my sweet." He closed the door.
"Right back at ya dog breath." I spotted after him.
"I heard that." He shouted back. That's kinda the point.
After only half an hour of human time, washing mud of my face (no makeup, I'm just to perfect) and taking a shower. Then changing and settling down to try and sleep. I'm a terrible sleeper. According to my parents, I once sleep-walked all the way to uncle Emmett and Rose's room, in the middle of something they were doing. I wonder... I know that's what most of our family does at night, they don't sleep after all.
I could imagine that as Jake and I, together and perfect in so many ways. He's never agree though. At least not for another couple of years. If ask, but he'd say I was to young.
Then I remembered Luke. How was he going to take all this. Not well obviously. Why did this have to be so hard? The first day I've ever properly been in love and I'm facing the life mum had always described. Just at a much faster rate. Mum chose vampire, her heart was there all along. But me, I'm a wolf girl. At least I think so.