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FINALLY FIXED THE BUTTON, THE STORY DOES NOT SAY COMPLETE ANYMORE! :D
To explain a bit- As you can tell by the last chapter, it was completely rushed. I've actually had most of it done for about a month now except the last part. So, I quickly rushed and finished it in order to put it up finally.
Don't worry- This chapter won't be as rushed and will actually be long enough to get something real into it. ;P Also to add- I never re-read over the stories I type or anything like that, I just type the chapter and post it. So, in advance, sorry for all of the grammar problems and such! I'm just way to lazy to actually re-read every problem and fix! I also know that if I did that I would just freak out about the whole chapter and delete it. :P
Thank you to all the reviews! You guys have no idea what they mean to me! Your reviews help me to go along with the story and keep me confident in typing. I really, REALLY love your reviews; I love them more than bacon! */Just kidding, I'mma marry bacon/* If I could I would message every single one of you to tell you how much your favorites/reviews mean to me! I never thought that I was going to continue this story- I was just going to leave it at the first chapter and let you guys decide how it was going to end. I guess that's not the way it's going to go though. ;D
Note to Dark-Rose-Maria: I keep using the yellow-eyed drone more than I thought I was going to, sorry! I only thought she was going to be a one time thing! I hope I haven't added any personality traits or anything like that to her that may ruin her character idea that you had for her! She's still all yours if I haven't messed up her character idea to much! :D
Note to BugGeeRee: I wish I could do fan art/small comics for this, but sadly my hands were not made to be an artist, only to type stories up. D; You can do fan art if you want though, anyone can! It would be an honor for someone to do fan art! :D I'm not doing any for this story though, so sorry!
Here's a bit to explain the dialogue in this chapter-
'This.'- 'Normal' side of Tallest Purple.
'This.'- 'The Other' side of Tallest Purple
"-This.-"- The Control Brains
Oh, jeez- Longest author's response I've ever had. Sorry guys. D;
So, let me begin chapter five!
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Let Me Help You
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(A Couple Of Hours Later, In The Control Room On The Massive, Tallest Purple)
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Before he even hovered into the room he knew something was wrong.
As the metallic doors slid open the pair of purple eyes glanced around the room, trying his best to keep the dull look on is face. All eyes were now gazing towards him, some staring in fear, others in worry, but all were looking at him. The room was thick with a nervous emotion, the feeling making Purple sick to his squeedily spooch. The drones saluted mindlessly but Tallest Purple paid no mind to them for the fact that his eyes caught the sight of something more important.
Tallest Red had his head tilted sideways, mouth in a straight line and eyes glaring directly into the pair of purple across the room. It was like his best friend was trying to pull him apart piece by piece, like he could see every single problem Purple had with just blink of his eyes. Tallest Purple kept his back straight though, letting his eyes narrow to see the Irken before Red. She was rather tall, eyes a rich shade of lime green and antennas curled behind her head. She was good looking, especially with her perfect body clad in a white uniform with red and purple stitching.
Wait- White uniform with red and purple stitching? The white uniform only belongs to the-
Tallest Purple accidentally let a growl slip from deep within his throat.
"Where is Advisor Vix, Red?"
"Who?"
"Vix- You know him. Pink eyes, kinda looked stupid when he had to recite Irken Coding, and the one who wore a white uniform exactly like the one she's wearing. Vix had also been the one who had been our advisor for the longest time and our friend. That guy."
"Oh! Vix! Yeah, he had to go- Didn't take the job seriously and apparently he's been slipping through the coding files and been stealing from the Empire. Can you believe the nerve of that guy? This is Gig, our new advisor; she will be the one handling everything now. We discussed changing advisors a while back, Pur, or did you forget?"
It was only Purple who caught through the innocent smile Red gave off, trying his hardest to not let a snarl take over his features. Tallest Purple gave a smile and a small wave at Gig, who nervously was glancing from between her Tallests. It seemed she was the only one who caught the tension between the Tallests, both of their bodies slightly flexed and jaws locked. Something was going on here that was just between the Tallests and Gig was going to help out in any way she could.
"Good day to you, Tallest Purple, you are looking as charming as always. May I present you with the galaxy sightings and schedule today, my Tallest?"
"Yeah, that'd be great. Can someone message my Personal Servant and tell her to get me some soda? She already knows what to get me."
"I will, my Tallest."
With a simple nod, Tallest Purple hovered towards the platform where Red and Gig were at, making sure to not make eye contact with his best friend. He was raging on the inside, how dare Red change their advisor without his permission and then act like they had already discussed the topic! Their new advisor instantly waved her hand in the air, a holographic screen appearing before them with many different charts and the view of the galaxy around them.
"There have been no sightings of asteroids heading towards the Massive, no threats of the sort. We have passed by Planetary Sector 3 approximately 38 units ago- Each planet is clearly marked with the Irken symbol still and the Resisty has not touched any of these planets that belong to Irk. We should be passing planet Mortika in about 64 units. And-"
"Wait- What? Planet Mortika? That is that dumb planet filled with those stoopid people that orbit around Irk! Why are we passing by them? That's the complete opposite of where we are going!"
"I beg your pardon, my Tallest? That is the direction we are going. We are heading off to Irk."
"What? Why?!"
"Tallest Red has to meet with Commander Sic about the twenty seven different Battle Optics that he plans on doing. After that then Tallest Red must meet with the smeet facility to see if there are any issues dealing with the birthing of the smeets."
"What am I doing then?"
"It seems you have an important meeting with the Control Brains as soon as we reach Irk, my Tallest."
The sound of doors swooshing open caught Purple's attention, the Tallest whipping his head around to see who it was. There was another attractive female Irken who gave a salute with one hand, her other hand holding a cup of soda. She was only a few inches smaller than their new advisor Gig, but her upper body seemed to have been filled in more places than their advisor. That's when Tallest Purple finally caught the uniform she was wearing and her eye color.
She had a pair of pink eyes and was wearing the Tallest Personal Service Drone uniform.
She was wearing his Personal Service Drone uniform and did not have the yellow eyes of his Personal Service Drone.
Tallest Purple felt a shock of pain jolt through his body, head twitching sideways, mood instantly switching.
"Red- You have a lot of explaining to do!"
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(In Zim's Voot Cruiser, One Hour Later)
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"She smelt of old socks and tacos!"
"I think that's why Gir liked her so much. It was perfect when she ran out of school screaming when Gir tried to pull her arm off! Muhahaha!"
"Don't forget that other new kid with the big eye! Remember when you sent that flock of liver-eating ducks to get him because he tried to bully me? Classic!"
"Do not forget the time when you pushed some stupid human down a flight of stairs because he threatened to kill the almighty Zim! And you were all like- "Zim is my enemy, not yours! Go get your own! Zim is my enemy even though I, the pitiful Dib-Stink, will never compare to Zim and will never defeat him!" And then you cried like a smeet."
"I did not! You're making that up!"
The two laughed full heartedly as Dib tossed some chips directly at Zim's face, the two munching away at all the food around them. After the two had been silent for a few hours Zim had said something to himself out loud, which in return Dib had to make a sarcastic reply back. And a hour later they ended up with like, leisurely talking away as the ship was set to Auto Pilot.
"So, how far are we from Irk?"
"Eh? Probably an hour or so, not to far now. We're passing planet Mortika now."
"Oh, wow!"
A breathless gasp escaped Dib's lips, the human pressing himself up against the side of the ship's window as close as he could. Floating about three hundred feet from the ship was planet Mortika, the coloring of the planet a mixture of white and blue. The rings around the planet were a pale gray, a light tint of white over the rim of the rings; it was clearly ice marking the rings. That planet must have been some sort of ice planet like Pluto, it didn't matter what type of planet this was though. Dib was just excited to see it!
The teenager took a few pictures of the planet with his camera, grinning from ear to ear.
"This is so cool!"
"You think that's cool? Pfft- Pathetic human. You need to see planet Mortika when it is orbiting between planet Irk and Sector's 1 Main Star."
"Main star? Sector 1? Orbiting between? And why?"
"Too many questions, Meatbag! One thing at a time! Now… The planets Irk has taken over are in Sectors, Sector 1 is directly where Irk is located. A main star is like what you Earthlings call your Sun; it is our source of heat and other useless essentials, blahblah. When planet Mortika passes between planet Irk and the Main Star it actually changes temperature. The ice around the planet actually melts and you are able to see the planet's true coloring."
"Really?! What color is it really? What happens to the citizens when the temperature changes like that? When the planet orbits in your area does that make it nighttime for you guys? What-"
"DIB!"
"Ehh- Sorry. I'm excited is all. Continue."
"NOW- Mortika's true color is a mixture between orange and lilac; it really is a nice planet. It is still nothing compared to Irk though! The Mortikans are perfectly fine about the change in temperature, it is only for a few hours and they are use to such change. Because of the planet's tiny size it only darkens certain parts of Irk and because of our atmosphere is does not really become night time on our planet like it does on Earth. It just becomes slightly purple at night, not dark enough to actually be night, more like a dark sunset. But, eh- We count it as night."
"Wow! This is all so cool! I can't believe you are letting me see this with you!"
"It's not like Zim really had a choice in this, you are the one who snuck onto the ship and messed with the controls."
The Irken's eyes narrowed though, a smug look crossing his lips as he tilted his head to the side towards Dib.
"Zim would never admit that he ever said this, hyu-man- But your plan was ingenious. Taking out the buttons so Zim could now throw you out of his ship and then you show yourself when we're so close to Irk. Very impressive, well, very impressive for a DISGUSTING human that is."
"…Thanks, Zim. I would never admit this to anyone and I would cut my own foot off before I admitted to this- But you did a great job improving your Voot Cruiser. I think your empire would be proud to see how much you have improved this ship."
"Zim already knows that he's amazing, you don't need to praise."
The two smirked at one another before turning their attention away from each other, eyes looking in opposite directions. They stayed in silence for a few moments until the teenager let his mouth fall open, letting the words slip from his lips before he could stop them…
"So, can you tell me a bit about Irk since I'm going to see it anyway?"
"Ehh- Fine. Since we have many much hours before we reach Irk. Let us-"
"Many much?"
"Yes, Dibling, many much hours. If you make Zim repeat himself one more time he's turning this ship around!"
"Fine, fine, I'm sorry. You were saying?"
"Excellent. Let us begin with the beginning of Irk…"
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(One Hour Later, On The Massive, Tallest Purple's Chamber)
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"By the past Tallest Miyuki… Why are you doing this, Red? Why?!"
"Why?!"
Red hissed back, ignoring the fact that his best friend was throwing his arms up in the air like a smeet have a tempter tantrum. The red eyed Tallest was sitting on the edge of Purple's bed as the purple eyed Irken was hovering back and forth before him in rage. Purple whipped his head around at Red's own cry, growling back at his co-partner with a sneer crossing his face.
"I am asking why, not you! Why is Vix no longer our Advisor? And where is my 'lil Personal Service Drone? Why are you doing this?!"
"For you, Purple!"
The chamber instantly went silent after his roar.
One Tallest stopped hovering around, turning his head to look directly at the face of his partner. Both eyes met each other, one of pair of eyes raging and the other pair filled with misery. Rage quickly died down in the purple eyes when he noticed the sadness on his best friend's face. Red leaned down on his hands to tilt his head upwards; making sure that he was looking up into the face of Tallest Purple.
"You haven't been yourself for months and I'm tired of it. You're always in pain, Purple, and that twitch is kinda freaking me out. You get these mood swings constantly; no one has any idea how to act around you anymore. You don't get to hear the questions I am asked about you from the workers! "If I wave at Tallest Purple will he wave back or throw me out of an air lock?" and "Should I bow my head when he calls me or should I verbally respond to him?"… "Is there anything I can do that won't make Tallest Purple angry like he had been lately? I'm worried, Tallest Red. Scared, my Tallest."
"I-"
"No! I'm not done yet! And that stupid Personal Service Drone of yours! She didn't even closely reach the high requirement to even have the position! You haven't been following any of the height requirement rules lately! That night at the party you changed for some reason and Vix was behind it, he had to go. I don't care what you say either, Vix isn't coming back. I sent him away to watch over planet Utmion with General Hid."
"That planet is across the galaxy!"
"Exactly! He needs to be that far away from you! He some how did this to you, I don't know what he did to you the night of the party, but it changed something. It changed you. You can't keep acting like this anymore, Purple, these mood swings need to go. You're scaring everyone! You're scaring me! You don't joke anymore, you don't laugh anymore, and you don't even smile anymore! I- I don't even remember what your real smile looks like anymore, Pur."
"Red…"
"I got in contact with the Control Brains when you were in your chamber. They asked a few questions and then I explained to them what was happening with you. I let them go through my memories of the past few months to see through my eyes about how you have been acting. They don't like it, Purple, nobody likes the way you have been.
"The Control Brains? No, no, no… Red- You don't understand-"
"You told me that you would talk to me about what's wrong with you one day and help me understand. You never gave me that one day. So now I'm making today that one day. As soon as are transported on Irk you will immediately go and see the Control Brains. They seem to know what your problem is and want to help you out. We all want to help you. This topic is not up for discussion."
Red pushed himself off the bed and hovered to the metallic door, not sparing a single look at his best friend. Tallest Purple let himself slowly slip into the spot that Red had just been in at the edge of the bed, a look of devastation crossing his face. This wasn't happening, this wasn't actually happening right here, not right now. Tallest Red paused right before the door, letting his hand slip on the code pad as he turned his head over his shoulder to look at Purple.
"This isn't you, Purple. It seems like you're becoming a… A defect. I will help you through this, whether you like it or not."
Then he was out of the door.
Purple cradled his face within his two fingered hands, hunching over the side of the bed, feeling himself becoming sick. This was too much to take in at one. Too much information, too many words, too many emotions… Oh, by the Past Tallest Miyuki, the Control Brains wanted to see him… There was nothing he could do about this. Yet, there was still that part of his brain that was screaming at him, begging him to not go see the Control Brains. And then there was that word all over again.
Defect.
Defect.
'Am I becoming a defect?'
'Who says you weren't one already?'
And the normal side of Purple had nothing to say to that, because there was no true answer.
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(Two Hours Later, Back In Zim's Voot Cruiser)
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"-And now we're here and this is how Irk became the greatest planet in the entire universe."
"Wow. You guys really are great. Your achievements are… Breathtaking. Not better than Earth, of course, but still great."
"Ah, Dib, Zim will only ignore that comment because he can hear the jealously in your voice."
"Yeah, yeah, whatever."
Dib stopped talking for a moment, turning his entire body around so he can have his attention directed towards Zim. The Irken lifted one eye higher than the other, shifting in his seat at the uncomfortable feeling of being watched so intensely. Zim put his hands on the wheel as he took the Voot Cruiser out of Auto Pilot, knowing that they were going to get to Irk's surface soon.
"You don't have to tell me-"
"What do you want, Dib-Stink?"
"But your Tallest… Is he alright?"
"Dib, how dare such a disgusting human like you ask about-"
"Are you alright? I'm worried about you is all, Zim. You haven't been yourself lately; you no longer do any of your evil plans or anything like that. You've been this way for months… You don't hear the rumors going around the entire high school. It's more than just me that's worried about you, Zim; a lot of people are worried. Our teachers, our classmates- Even Gaz made a comment that you were acting different. I just…"
The human paused for a moment, looking hesitant before he quietly added…
"Want to see you smile. I just want to help you out in any way that I can. You're my friend, Zim, whether you like it or not."
Zim's magenta eyes stared forward through the window, shoulders stiff and body arched. Dib frowned deeply, turning back into his seat properly, also staring forward. Of course, when he tried to finally help Zim out he was given the cold shoulder. Why did he have to be so stubborn? Even if they were enemies they were the closest of enemies- Closest of friends. If Dib could trust him then why could Zim not trust-
"Tallest Purple has not been acting like himself these past few months, Dib-Worm. He has been having strange mood swings lately; this is not like a Tallest to do. This is not something that Tallest Purple would do. He also made contact with Zim months ago, said something about a… Stand. A stand against what I am not sure, but a stand against something. He has not been himself ever since that transmission and Zim plans on finding out what has happened with him, Earthling. I am- Concerned."
Dib gave a slow blink, taking in all of what Zim had said.
"Oh… Oh, well; yeah, okay. So, you're going to meet up with your Tallest then in some building on Irk?"
"Nope."
"Uhh- Okay, so you're meeting your Tallest not in a building on Irk?"
"Nu-uh."
"Then where exactly are you meeting up with him on Irk?!"
"Silly Dibling, I am not meeting up with Tallest Purple on Irk, I am going to Irk just to get the coordinates of where the Massive is from the computer system! Zim lost the coordinates a year back and has not gotten then recently, so he must obtain them once more!"
"But… You told me the Massive is the largest and faster ship around, they could be months away from us, Zim!"
"Ah- Yes, yes they could, Dib. This is what an invader does for his Tallest though; they will go to the end of the universe just for their Tallest."
"My dad is going to kill me."
The teenager moaned, placing his face within his hands for middle finger and index finger on both hands could rub against his temples. This was senior year, both Dib and Zim needed to be back to school by Monday, they already missed Thursday and Friday. Today should still be Friday night- Or was it Saturday? Oh God, he was going to get in so much trouble for missing this much school in his last year of school…
All worries were instantly gone when Dib caught the sight before his eyes.
His eyes widened at the sight of the very large planet they were coming up to, not even noticing anything else around him. The planet's coloring was a deep magenta, the color standing out against the dark abyss of space. The closer they got the easier it was to see that the planet was nearly covered with buildings on every inch, each lighting up with many colors. Their buildings were more high tech and seemed to nearly loom over Irk's surface. Every twist of his head he caught the image of the Irken symbol plastered some where on the buildings.
Mortika must have been orbiting passed Irk at this time for the fact that the sky was a deep purple, night time on Irk. With all of the lights and moving action going on it was almost impossible to tell that it was night time! Ships were zooming all over the area; the human watching in utter excitement when he saw Irkens doing tricks with their spider legs from their Paks. Zim turned the wheel as the zipped over the tops of the building, the dark purple coloring of the atmosphere reflecting off the metallic of the building walls.
Everything was so lively here! There were aliens every where! Irkens of all shapes, heights, and different eye colors! Dib was so awed by this entire planet that he didn't even reach for his camera once, knowing this was going to be an image he never forgot. No city on Earth could ever compare to the city they were in now- Nothing on Earth itself could compare to what he was seeing on Irk!
Irk was everything Dib thought of and so much more.
It was perfect.
"Welcome to Irk, Dib. Zim believes the welcoming went rather well?"
"Yeah… Yeah, it did. Really well."
Zim smirked at the amazed look on Dib's face, finally being able to prove that Irk was far more superior to Earth. This all was just so…
Perfect.
Just perfect.
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(On Irk, Control Brains' Headquarters, Tallest Purple)
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Perfect.
Just perfect.
Purple slowly hovered through the corridors of the headquarters, making sure to not make eye contact with any Irken who passed who. He ignored the drones' salutes, the guards' waves, and even the smiles of the pretty female Irkens. None of them matter. No, that wasn't it. The problem was that they all mattered, but he couldn't save every one of them. What was he trying to save them from though? What exactly was his problem with the Control Brains? He was perfectly normal, nothing was wrong with him…
'Yeah, okay, you keep telling yourself that. Just be on the tips of your antenna around the Control Brains though. They are the ones behind this, I know it.'
'By the past Tallest- STOP making it sound like we're two completely different Irkens. We are the same person! We both like snacks, we both are sarcastic, we're both the Tallest, and wanna know why? 'Cuz we're the same Irken! Stop making it sound like we're not the same person!'
'Fine. I'll play this game with you. If we're the same Irken, then you are also the one who is making 'us' split into two different Irkens. You are the one who is always constantly arguing with me- 'Himself'. You are also the one who keeps making us into two different Irkens! Stop arguing with me and just accept your feelings! You know something is going on here!'
'Shut up, shut up, shut up, SHUT UP!'
"Tallest Purple, the Control Brains are ready to see you."
"Thank you."
He responded back mindlessly, hovering towards the pair of large doors that belonged to the very top floor of the enormous building. Jeez- These doors were huge! They were like fifteen feet! There was never going to be a Tallest this tall! Or so Purple hoped. With a shaky breath the Tallest placed his two-fingered hand against the scanner connected to the door, hearing the beeping sound that approved his DNA. The doors slid wide open so Tallest Purple, waiting for him to hover through.
Without a single thought he went through the doors.
He flinched when the doors slammed shut behind him, ignoring the feeling in his squeedily spooch when the platform he was on started to float upwards towards the high ceiling. The large room was covered with eerie light that was a combination of the blue lighting from the thousands of wires to the poles that were twisted with scarlet lights. It was creepy, this place was really creepy. Almost as creepy as when Zim told the Tallest years ago the exact location of the Massive.
Zim might be a little bit creepier than this place though… Maybe.
The platform finally came to a halt about a hundred feet in the air, Tallest Purple keeping his back completely straight at what was before him. The Control Brains were floating before, one large brain in the middle of two smaller brains; all three had scarlet eyes that seemed to have been glaring. Wires were sticking out of every inch of the Control Brains, screens floating around the area around them, each screen covered with some sort of image. Tallest Purple had never seen so much data in his entire existence!
'Think about all the data that they have, all they secrets that they have kept from us…'
'Didn't I tell you earlier to shut up?'
"-Welcome, Tallest Purple, we have been waiting for you.-"
"Hey."
"-Do you know why you are here, Tallest Purple?-"
"I would guess for free donuts, but I don't feel that lucky today."
"-Tallest Red had stated his worry over your welfare, he has said that you have been experiencing extreme mood swings. We have seen through his memories of the crimes you have committed while on board the Massive. Injuries have increased up to 86.7 units and deaths have increased to 76 units on the Massive, all by your hand, Tallest Purple. It has also been reported that you are going through physical harm every time you experience a change in moods. You have been placed down as a dangerous hazard to both the Irken Empire and yourself. You have also not been following height regulations dealing with the workers on the Massive. You have broken many regulations, Tallest Purple. How do you plead to these statements?-"
"Guilty."
'They know something we don't.'
'Didn't I say stop with this 'we' stuff?'
'You say stop to a lot of things.'
"-Very well. Are there any statements you would like to present to us about your condition?-"
'Tell them no- This is a trap.'
"No, there is nothing that I would like to present, Control Brains."
"-No statements at all, Tallest Purple? Are you sure you would like us to record no offical statements from you?-"
'You're right. This is more a trap than the time Red gave me that bag of chips filled with trash pieces shaped like chips... I still haven't forgiven him for that. Took hours to get that trash out of my teeth!'
"I have no statements to make."
"-Indeed. We would like to help you with your problem dealing with the broken chip in your Pak, Tallest Purple. You will not be punished in any way. The Irken Empire just wants to fix the problem you are dealing with and have you go back to normal. We will need you to open your Pak in order to obtain this achievement.-"
"Yeah, okay, here, let me just…"
'Stop and think about what they just said. Broken chip...'
'Broken chip…'
'Broken chip!'
'BROKEN CHIP!'
In an instant something finally clicked inside Tallest Purple's head, the shock he was nor familiar with happening once more.
"How do you know I have a broken chip?"
Purple asked in his shrilly voice, one eye tugging higher than the other when he noticed the Control Brains did not respond automatically.
"-We can not compute what you mean, Tallest Purple.-"
"How do you know I have a broken chip? You saw Red's memories, so yeah- You know about my mood swings and what I've been doing wrong, but there was nothing about a broken chip. Over the past few months nothing was mentioned about there being a problem with a chip. You haven't asked me any questions about my health, haven't even checked up on me in years, and you haven't even looked into my Pak. No certain problem was ever mentioned. So, how do you know about a broken chip?"
"-Tallest Purple, we are all knowing creations. We were created to…-"
"That's not something you would just know and if you knew everything then you would have contacted me and fixed me months ago. This- This is something else. You're behind something; you're doing something to me... You're doing something to the entire Irken Empire. You know something that none of us know. And you know that I know that you know I know something is wrong with the Irken Empire."
"-You are coming to false conclusions. Your facts are nothing but illusions; you are suffering from one of your constant mood swings. You are going into a stage of hysteria. Please, let us help you, Tallest Purple. All you need to do is open your Pak and we will repair the problem.-"
His purple eyes caught the sight of a single wire slowly slithering towards the platform he was on.
"No."
"-Then we shall force your Pak open to fix the issue.-"
And then all at once thousands of wires shot out towards Tallest Purple.
…To Be Continued…
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Hmm- I felt my gay-dar go off a few times during this chapter.
For those who do not like romance in a story- I am not trying to make couples in this story… Right now. No promises, I may change my mind some way through, but unlikely. I want this to be my first story that has not 'set couples/obvious romance'; I may not win this fight though. I'm mushy like that. ;P
For those who do like romance in a story- If you put on your slash goggles and turn your head to the side you can probably find some sort of 'romance' and 'couple' every where. :D
Not as rushed- This story is getting to the acceptable level. ;P We are finally getting some where and don't worry, I promise all the questions you have will be answered when this story is finally finished! Whenever that may be. XD
So, please review! Tell me what was liked/disliked, all that jazz! Have a fantastic day, everyone! :D
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