CH3: "Chapter to the rose of a Heroin"

I will be leaving some of the typos in for your amusement!

Thank you for the support asofar!

Chapter two, the rise of a heroin (addiction?)

(Okay Jazzie-kun please don't get mad at me because you're not in it yet. You'll appear soon don't worry.)

Starkit woke up and sunlight was in the branches. She closed her eyes again, still tired. Butter mom wouldn't let her (eat saturated fats!) sleep: not today.

"Sweety its time to get up" said Dawnsparkle, her eyes shining. "Today is important today." (much department of redundancy department, much?)

"What is it mom," said Starkit, awake right away. Then the she-cat remembered what today was.

"Ohmigosh its my ceremony today!" she squealed excitedly. Today was the day she was an apprentice!

She flicked outside not even waiting for her Mom. But her Mom caught up to her quick.

"Sweety, you know the clans don't accept cats like us sometimes" she said.

Starkit glared. She didn't like being told that. Just because her Mom was a used-to-be Shadowclan cat and her dad was Jayfeather the medicine cat didn't mean she was different!(Um, yes sweetie, it does)

"Starpaw come here." said Firestar from the leg. He jumped down. (leg = ledge, or leg = log? You decide!)

"Starkit, it's time for you to become an apprentice" he said. "You're a strong brave cat and because of that I will mentor with you."

Everybody gasped. Starkit did too. She heard her mother say "Wow!"

Fireheart (what happened to being leader? Has Starkit taken over already? *gets up and leaves*) licked her shoulder. He whispered in her ear "You'll be the best there ever was Starpaw, I know it."

Surprised she walked away when they were done howling for her. (o-kay?) Then she went over to Jayfeather and Dawnsparkle who were very proud (I love how everyone in xdarkrosesx's ThunderClan is totally passive to the idea of the medicine cat having a mate, when they apparently banished Leafpool to the elders den).

"Daughter we're very happy but we have to say something," said Jayfeather, his chest puffed out. "You see there is this prophecy Starclan gave me it said 'Out of the darkness, stars will come and get rid of the evil tiger and holly." (obvious prophecy is obvious)

Starpaw gasped. What did it mean?

Lol, I update fast, don't I. REVIEW or I'll hit (you) over the head with a frying pan! XDD jk

You've been warned. It only gets worse from here.