CH4: "Chapter three the Battle 4 the caln"
You've been warned.
Chapter three: the battle for the clan
Thanks Jazzie-kun for the good review! (is it just me or is she using the wrong japanese honorific?) And stop flaming the story! I bet you can't write such a good story! (Want to bet?)
Starpaw walked over to the apprentice's den. Inside she saw her sisters Flamepaw and Lakepaw and her friend Jazzpaw(a.n: jazzie-kin ur my bff!)was sleeping on the moss
"Jazzpaw get up." she cried. Jazzpaw opened her brilliant blue eyes and looked at her.
"Do you want to go on patrol with me?" she asked.
"Sure!" said Jazzpaw, getting up from the moss. They left and went too the entrance to camp.
But then, a cat came in through the entrance! It was Blackstar! (omg!)
"Shadowclan are attacking!" she yelled. (Yes, one cat signifies all of ShadowClan is attacking! Good job, Starpaw!) All the cats came out from their dens. She jumped on a cat and clawed him and he ran of (wow, Starpaw! No battle training, and you defeat a cat with one move! You're special!)
"Good job Starpaw!" Firestar called, "The last cat I knew that could fight like that was Sandstorm. You're a good fighter!" (Is Sandstorm deceased?)
Starpaw was happy. She was a good fighter! Maybe this was what the prophecy meant. (We can all hope so)
Thanks and please no more flames.
Boring chapter...for this story at least :-p
Thanks for the reviews!
clearflight